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THANKU FRIENDS FOR UR LOVE COMMENTS AND LIKES..LOVE U ALL


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I LOVE TIS SONG..ITS ADIESAYAMEA FROM JEANS , 7 WONDERS OF EARTH..IN HINDI AJOOBA..WEN EVER I HEARD TIS SONG I FEEL TIS WAS WRITTEN FOR MY MAANEET AND THEY LOVE WHICH WAS 8TH WONDER OF TIS WORLD..







WITH OUT PRIYAA DII TIS UPDATE IS NOTHING..LOVE U PRIYAA DII FOR MAKING TIS UPDATE WONDERFUL LIKE TE SONG..AND FOR TS BG SONG..MUAH




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( THANKU SHUTHE DII FOR UR LOVELY

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They reached te destination , te driver announce thru te intercom that they reached,

Geet twisted her lips : wow Maan intercom, great

Maan : Geet can we go out

Geet : hmm

Maaneet came out of te car, Geet felt shiver feeling te cold breeze..she hugged herself rubbing her arms

Geet : Maan what place is tis, its very chill

Maan suddenly closed her eyes making her startled, she hold his hands

Geet : Maan

Maan , came near her ear , kissing it and whispher : shhu, no more questions, just cum with me, sending goosebumps all over her body

Geet : Maan

Maan guided her and they moved for some distance..Geet felt chill but she was walking holding Maan...Maan stopped , Geet felt some kind of feeling inside her,he slowly removed his hands,

Maan : now open ur eyes

Geet slowly open her eyes , rubbing her eyes and look at Maan, Maan smile, he turn her towards te front and pointing to her to see te place they came.. Geet gaze move to his finger where its pointing, at once she saw her eyes widen to big, her mouth hang open, she can't believe she is standing in front of one of te world's wonders


Poovukkul Olinthirukkum Kanikkoottam Adhisayam

The fruits that are hidden amongst the flowers are a wonder

Vannaththu Poochchigalinmael Oaviyangal Adhisayam

The colors that are on the butterflies are a wonder

Thulaisellum Kaatru Mellisaiyaadhal Adhisayam

The wind that flows through a hole and creates slow music is a wonder

Gurunaadhar Illaadha Kuyil Paattu Adhisayam

The cuckoo's song that was not taught by a composer is a wonder

Adhisayamae Asandhupoagum Neeyendhan Adhisayam

A wonder to amaze all the other wonders, you are my wonder


Yes they were standing in front of TajMahal..te world's most beautiful palace which spread love thru its elegant look..te way it standing with so much pride showing tis world tat love is the beautiful thing

Geet look at taj mahal and then MAAN, Maan smiled at her expression..Geet rush near to it, she stood watching te wonder of earth and felt blissed to see Taj mahal, yes her wish to see taj mahal came true..she still cant believe she is standing in front of TajMahal, she was gapping at te TM,tat too on full moon night


Kalthoandri Manthoandri Kadal thoandrum Munnaalae
Undaana Kaadhal Adhisayam

Before te rocks, earth and the oceans exist , the wonder of love was in existence


Padhinaaru Vayadhaana Paruvaththil Elloarkkum
Padarginra Kaadhal Adhisayam

At 16 years old, everyone has inside of them, that love that springs up, that is a wonder


Maan came and stood behind her, Geet look at him, Maan was startled to see her eyes welled up, he touch her shoulder, Geet at once hugged him,

Maan : Geet

Geet kissed his heart : thanku so much, tis is one of my wish to see Tm,

Maan kissed her hair and smile at her, he broke te hug and showed her to see something, Geet saw it, its was full moon day and Moon was placed above TM, like its kala tikka on TM ki head, suddenly crackers bursted showing happy new year above te TM,

Geet : wow , her eyes was twinkling seeing it, she look at Maan and kissed his cheeks and again both stood watching te wonderful blissed scene


Poovukkul Olinthirukkum Kanikkoottam Adhisayam

The fruits that are hidden amongst the flowers are a wonder

Vannaththu Poochchigalinmael Oaviyangal Adhisayam

The colors that are on the butterflies are a wonder

Thulaisellum Kaatru Mellisaiyaadhal Adhisayam

The wind that flows through a hole and creates slow music is a wonder

Gurunaadhar Illaadha Kuyil Paattu Adhisayam

The cuckoo's song that was not taught by a composer is a wonder

Adhisayamae Asandhupoagum Neeyendhan Adhisayam

A wonder to amaze all the other wonders, you are my wonder


Geet : thanku Maan for bringing me here

Maan stare at her eyes which oozes so much love for him cupped her face and rest his forehead on hers

Maan : thanku for giving tis night

Both don't have words to describe wat they feeling at present..they were standing in front of te love symbol and feeling they love..it was really very beautiful feeling..Maan was lost in his Geet who was just lost in TM..she don't have words to express her feelings..Maan can sense her turmoil, he just cupped her face and saw her happiness..

She saw his eyes which was intense, His breath was fanning all over her face sending jolt , he blow his breath on her face..she blushed,he try to close te distance between them, she just pushed him and run away. Maan frown and followed her ..Geet saw a garden with so many different varieties of flowers..she felt awe seeing te garden and she was standing in te middle..she hold te flower in her hands and caress its soft petals..

Oru Vaasamillaak Kilaiyin Mael Naruvaasamulla Poovaippaar

Poovaasam Adhisayamae

On the branches without scent, see the fragrant flowers, that flower's fragrance is a wonder


Maan saw her Misty glowing under te moon light, she too look like a beautiful flower among te all te flowers,his legs slowly carried him towards her..Her duppatta was flowing in te air, it rest on Maan's face,he felt her scent in her duppatta,he inhale her scent, Geet felt a tug in her duppatta, she turn and saw Maan was holding her duppatta, she pulled her duppatta

Geet : Maan see tis flowers naa.its very beautiful

Maan came behind her and hugged her, pulling her more to him..Geet felt jolt with his proximity..Geet hold his hands over her waist..te cold wind was blowing making them freeze


Alaikkadal Thandha Maegaththil Oru Thulikkooda Uppillai
Mazhai Neerum Adhisayamae

The cloud that comes from the wave-ocean, in not even one drop of rain is there salt, that rain water is a wonder


Maan placed his chin on her shoulder : really but i cant see any beautiful things, coz im holding te world's most beautiful flower in my arms

Geet didt get his words, wen it click her, she smile : ohh so Mr.Romantic Singh Khurana is in action

Maan : wat to do, romantic place, with my beautiful misty ,how cum i don't get romantic

Geet turned and placed her both hands on his either shoulders: oyiee hello stop with tis much romance, don't try to became naughty naughty naa

Maan hold her waist and pulled her towards him: so u imagining abt my naughtiness, then have to fulfil my misty's desire,with a naughty smirk

Geet : then be ready for ur vasectomy dear

Maan frown : why u always threatening me with tat

Geet : u feeling bad haan, Maan node his head like a small baby, for tat only..Maan frown,Geet giggle to see his face,

Geet saw so many twinkle stars flying all over te flowers which trying to suck te nectar from te flowers.. Geet gapping seeing all tis, she was so happy and excited to feel tis moment..Maan saw her excitement,he thought some thing

Maan : Geet

Geet : hmm

Maan extend his hand to Geet, Geet raised her eyebrows like asking wat..Maan smile and gesture her for dance..Geet shaked her thumb like saying no music..Maan pretend like thinking, suddenly te twinkle insects started to make sound making Maaneet to giggle,


Minsaaram Illaamal Midhakkinra Dheebampol Maeni Konda
Minminigal Adhisayamae

Without any electricity, like a twinkling light, the fireflies light up, that is a wonder

Maan asked her hand , Geet slowly placed her hand on his..Maan hold her waist,Geet placed her hands on his shoulder..Both were dancing don't know for wat steps as they both drown in each other's eyes..Their legs were moving according to their heart beats

He twirl her and hugged her from behind,his hands where rubbing her parts making her feel like current passing thru her body..her whole sense was blocked by Maan ki sensual touches..he was hugging her back and pulling her more to him,his front was rubbing her back sending ripples of pleasure..she felt crackers bursting inside her

He was pulling her and making her to dance for his tunes..Geet just staring at him, who was domainatng her..they moving they body softly feeling each other..

Geet broke and turn to see him who eyes were ready to burn her soul with his intense gaze..she placed her palm on his face, he just kissed her palm..They were staring at each other eyes which pulling them like a magnet..


Udalukkul Engae Uyirulladhenbadhum Uyirukkul Kaadhal Engulladhenbadhum

Where is the soul inside the body? and where is the love inside the soul?

Ninaiththaal Ninaiththaal Adhisayamae

Thinking and thinking about it, I think it must be a wonder!

Geet slowly lean on Maan's chest like a delicate flower, Maan hugged her hiding her inside him like a flower hiding nectar inside it..They both searching where they souls present in their bodies..

They both moving slowly Maan hands started to trace her arms sending shivers down her spine, Geet broke te hug and stare at his mischief naughty eyes,she pinched his nose..Maan frown rubbing his nose

Geet giggle seeing his nautanki, suddenly saw a group of twinkle stars flying around them .Geet eyes twinkle to see te stars, she try to catch them,but it flew away, Geet chased them.. Maan heard te clinging sound of her payal and felt tis is te world's best music he ever heard which sooth his heart


Penpaal Konda Sirutheevu Kaal kondu Nadamaadum
Needhaan En Adhisayamae

The girl who is like an island, walking past me on legs, you are my wonder


She hold te flies with her both hands, Maan too bend and cupped her hands, Geet blow it to make it fly..Geet giggled in excitement seeing are flying surrounding them like dancing around them..All te flowers were glowing in moon light, like it gleaming in happiness seeing Maaneet and they love

Ulagil Aezhalla Adhisayangal Vaaypaesum Poove Needhaan


Ettaavadhadhisayamae

In this world there are not seven wonders, but you my talking flower are the eighth wonder


Geet : Maan tis flowers, tis whole place is very beautiful,spreading her hands in air expressing her happiness.. no wonder TajMahal is one of 7 wonders of world

Maan cupped her face : no Geet there is 8 wonder

Geet : 8 wonders , there have added one more, omg i don't know tat ,with a baby face

Maan : hmm

Geet : which is te 8th wonder Maan

Maan : its first and best wonder in te earth created by god

Geet : Maan wat is tat which i don't know,with curious face

Maan pointed to her face : u ,

Geet : me

Maan : haan u te 1st wonder of tis earth,

Geet blushed : Maan


Vaan Midhakkum Un Kangal Thaen Therikkum Kannangal
Paal Kudikkum Adharangal Adhisayamae


The sky sparkles in you eyes, your cheeks are splashed with honey, you lips that drink milk, they are all wonders

Maan point to her eyes one by one : ur eyes which twinkle with so much naughtiness along with ur innocence,which convey ur love for me..i can see my world in ur eyes

Geet was staring at him,her cheeks slowly turning into scarlet red with his stare and words

Maan caresses her cheeks with his thumb: u r sweet apple cheeks which make me to have a bite, and make me feel happy tat it blushes becoz of me

Geet blushing with his each words: Maan, came as whisper

Maan stare at her lips, his thumb started to rub it, making her shudder

Geet moan : Maan



Nangaikonda Viralgal Adhisayamae Nagam Enra Kireedamum Adhisayamae


The girl's fingers are a wonder, her nails that are like crowns are a wonder


Asaiyum Valaivugal Adhisayamae

Her sensual movements of twisting and turning all are wonders


Maan : ur lips which dipped in honey milk, inviting me to suck all ur nectar

Geet cant bear his intensity..she placed her fingers on his lips to stop him..Maan hold her hand and stared to kiss her fingers one by one,

Maan : u r soft finger,and tis nails look like a crown to tis fingers,

Geet was totally lost her senses with his words,her whole body was shuddering with Maan's sensual touches ..Maan hands slowly slide down to her neck

Maan : u r soft skin, then further moving down, and hold her waist, tracing her curves over her dress,ur each and every curves which was making me anxious to research it

Geet : Maan pls

Maan : now u say Geet, u r also one of te earth's wonder and god's most beautiful creation



Kalthoandri Manthoandri Kadal thoandrum Munnaalae
Undaana Kaadhal Adhisayam

Before te rocks, earth and the oceans exist , the wonder of love was in existence


Padhinaaru Vayadhaana Paruvaththil Elloarkkum
Padarginra Kaadhal Adhisayam

At 16 years old, everyone has inside of them, that love that springs up, that is a wonder

Geet just staring at him, Maan saw her face was flushed with his love, his thumb slowly trace her cheeks making her shudder..she just hugged him to calm her nervous..Maan smile and kissed her head..They both stood watching te TM,no nights will be more beautiful than tis, watching TM in full moon day night, in te arms of their love..


After some time Geet broke te silence : how u got tis idea to bring me here

Maan : u only said tat i didt show u delhi so i thought to bring u here

Geet : not bad MSK,a Romantic singh is hiding inside tis boring singh khurana,hmm,

Maan : Geet i have to prove u naa tat im not tat much boring

Geet : where u were hiding all tis lovely side, if some one sees u they will say some booth went inside u

Maan smile : yes Geet ki booth

Geet : wat im looking like a booth to u haan, dd

Maan : Geet wen i was small i often cum with family, but in my teens,wen i came to know te real meaning of Tm, wat it hold, i had a wish to cum here with my girl, feeling te love of tis place..but i didt get tat chance, i thought im unlucky to wish for tat, Geet glare at him, but i was wrong Geet, im te most luckiest person in te world got an angel who brought me from my white and black life, shaded my life with so many colours..

Geet kissed his heart

Maan : today i know te real meaning of tis love symbol Geet, holding my love in my hands and watching tis love symbol, tis is really a blissed moment..i really bow my head in front of shah jahan's unconditional love for his wife mumtaj..as an architecture im so impressed with his taste , how much he love his wife , he would have build tis palace for her to show his love, really he is a great lover

Geet smile : yes Maan seeing tis palace im feeling goose bumps, its very beautiful creation made by him, but i cant accept its love is te best

Maan confused : Geet te whole world know tat no men can love his girl like shah jahan love his wife mumtaj

Geet : who said tat, then they didt see my shah jahan, pinching his cheeks, who love his Geet more than anything else in tis world, nothing can compare with his love for his Geet, if his Geet ask he even bring stars under her feet..

Maan felt overwhelmed with her trust on hm : Geet, kissed her forehead

Geet smile : My Maan is one woman man, not like shah jahan, who capture another man's wife , if he love her more , why he married her sister, he didt stop with tat, after them he married five girls, in all his wives he only love mumtaj and build TM for her, then wat abt others ,they all only to warm his bed..so i don't accept his love for mumtaj..

Maan smile , thinking abt her pov, te whole world praising te man who build tis love symbol but she will be te first person to say shah jahan's love is fake..

Geet : but i love taj mahal, i hats off to him for his taste..tis te best thing which each Indian citizen felt proud to have tis as one of world's 7 wonders..mughals are te one who brought tis type of arc style to india naa

Maan smile : ok baby now stop ur history class

Geet : hello i saying abt te story of TM, u have to know naa

Mana :wat i know is enough for me

Geet : shuss don't disturb me , she started her blah blah ,

Maan was just listening to her, he was staring at her hair strands which was teasing her cheeks due to wind blow..his hands was itching to push her hair and capture her non stop chattering lips and drink all her words inside his mouth..

Without wasting a sec he capture her lips , kissing..Geet startled thinking why he always have to kiss her suddenly, but all her thoughts was capture by his kiss, which made her for get te whole world..te kiss was so sensual making both bodies to feel jolt with their sensual touches..

Maan was fulfilling his thirst by drinking her sweet honey..Geet was lost in his kiss. Maan was kissing,nibbling her lips,his hands were playing on her arms making her vunerable

Maan was drinking all her moans inside his mouth, making her mouth dry..they broke after some time..Maan rubbed her lips wiping his saliva..Geet turned and close her face..Maan hugged her behind and kissed her cheeks..


Poovukkul Olinthirukkum Kanikkoottam Adhisayam

The fruits that are hidden amongst the flowers are a wonder

Vannaththu Poochchigalinmael Oaviyangal Adhisayam

The colors that are on the butterflies are a wonder

Thulaisellum Kaatru Mellisaiyaadhal Adhisayam

The wind that flows through a hole and creates slow music is a wonder

Gurunaadhar Illaadha Kuyil Paattu Adhisayam

The cuckoo's song that was not taught by a composer is a wonder

Adhisayamae Asandhupoagum Neeyendhan Adhisayam

A wonder to amaze all the other wonders, you are my wonder

Both stood and watching te TM..they don't know how long they stood, Maan felt Geet ki shiver and saw her who was shivering due to cold breeze..he just scooped her and carried her to nearby chair..he placed her on te chair and sat beside her..one of his men came and gave coffee for them, and shawl for them

Maan : have it, u will feel better

Geet felt touched with his care,she just kissed his cheeks: thanku Maan for all tis

Maan :wat Geet today u wetting my cheeks with so many kisses

Geet : for making my heart garden garden with ur surprises ,with a wide smile

Maan : then i have to give so many surprises to get tis many kisses

Geet : u don't have to do all tis MAAN, ur one smile is enough for me

Maan kissed her forehead : now have it

Geet lean on Maan's shoulder and both sat watching te TM, Maan suddenly laid on her lap, Geet look at him..Maan smile at her, she bend and kissed his hair..he pulled her before she move and peck her lips making her blush

Geet caress his hair and soon Maan slept feeling peace in her arms..she felt blissed to have Maan in her life..she look up and thanked her babaji, for sending Maan for her who made her life upside down..

Geet thought abt his words wen he said abt his wish to see TM with his girl..he hold so much in his heart, she caresses his heart, but hiding all his desire and living like a robotics life..Showing to tis world tat he is emotionless man whose heart is made up of hard like stone without any sentiments,but in real he is very soft,having so many wishes and yearning for love..

He did so many surprises with in few days,which was beyond her imagination..He changed her life upside down,she was a carefree girl , but his love made her to feel like mature woman..now she can't even think a sec without him

She caress his face , chuckling thinking how she fall for herkallulimangan..she thought his gussa, his attitude,his naughtiness, thinking abt his naughtiness, she blushed how he never leave a chance to claim her lips and show his love..but at te same time she was nervous now itself he is tis much naughty,wat he will do after they marriage,will she match his level

She have knowledge abt all tis thing as theory level, she is not te girl who don't know abt intimacy but her knowledge only based on her studies , talking with her friends, and some from ffs..but wen it cums to Practical, will she fulfil all his desires..she frown thinking now only she learning a kiss, wat abt other things..wat if she disappoint him

Geet pout her lips, how to know,but how to differentiate between theory and practical, wat i read in ffs abt kiss was not like wat i feel in real wen ever he kiss me, for kiss itself tis much wat abt other things..hmm wat to do whom to ask how to satisfy a man, no no MY MAAN , he is different from other mens..pinching his nose..

Suddenly a idea click inside her pea size mind: wow how i forgot my GURU Shaina, when Shaina is there why to fear..i will take coaching classes from her before our wedding and will became expect in all things ..wat Mr..Rsk ,pinching his nose,i will show wat is GeetAnjali Pandiyan is..with a attitude smile..






( love u so much for making tis update a wonderful with u editing dii..no words for ur love..love u muah.. )

( today memorable day priyaa dii talked to me..wow, 🤗 🥳

( THANKU SUHANA FOR GIVING TIS IDEA,NEW YEAR IN TM..LOVE U DEAR 🤗)


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Hayeee meee first...
Such a romantic part...
Omg felt goosebumps di...
Thanks a ton for lovely part...
Congo di...
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beautiful update.. waiting for next
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Amazing update
so romantic
new year celebration in Taj Mahal
fantastically written
the edits were beautiful
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aweee wat a lovelllyyy update;) ;)

it was so vry romantic ;) ;)
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specialll claps gr such awesomeee edits :)

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