Mohan-Nanhi OS part 2 on pg 3

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MsChanadlerBong

@MsChanadlerBong

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

This was just wonderful. Too emotional u made me cry. Mohan also suffered alot 😭 he wishing chawani was just too good hats off to u 👏
u know i always wanted to find something like this in the show and u pen it down in such a beatiful way . Too good 👏 👏
continue soon and thanks for the pm 😃

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abhi_arshilover

@abhi_arshilover

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Texie-Shady
This was just wonderful. Too emotional u made me cry. Mohan also suffered alot 😭 he wishing chawani was just too good hats off to u 👏
u know i always wanted to find something like this in the show and u pen it down in such a beatiful way . Too good 👏 👏
continue soon and thanks for the pm 😃

Thank u so much commenting and all ur appreciating words. Yes, mohan too suffered a lot. It was obvious. But i thought to give it another dimension and showed mohan's guilt too. I'm glad u guys liked it. And sorry to say, but this is a os. I wanted to write nanhi's pov. But i wrote mohan's pov too as u guys wanted it. But i'll surely pm u, if i wrote any other nbt work. Thanks again.😊

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dinazz

@dinazz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

this was wonderful .😃

ya , a little bit long but nice , cute and emotional .😃

thanks for the pm .

and sorry for late comment . i was off IF for a long time so did not see your pm.

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AK3

@Amanat

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Nice piece of writing yet again. Thanks for the pm. :)

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abhi_arshilover

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: dinazz
this was wonderful .😃
ya , a little bit long but nice , cute and emotional .😃
thanks for the pm .
and sorry for late comment . i was off IF for a long time so did not see your pm.

oh, don't be sorry. It's completely fine and thank you so much for commenting. I'm glad u liked it😊