Randhir Sanyukta a Factory OS

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ok so this was just a random scene i imagined of what will happen in the factory on Sandhir so just thought of penning it down ,please bear with my mistakes if any 😃 this is more on RD and his realization 😃


Randhir was working hard on a machine ,being the genious he was he wanted to prove to Mr aggarwal that besides helping him in breaking his daughters Morale and making her loose ,he can also be a best intern after all he is THE RSS and after Sanyukta sabotaged his revenge plan ,he was all the more upset on her and wanted to prove himself even more ,after all there were marks assigned for the internship and he could not let Sanyukta win not after what she did by foiling his revenge plan

Randhir was sweating profusely ,the factory life was indeed tough and with no AC in here was making it all the more difficult to concentrate ,he takes of his shirt and puts its aside and continues working on the part .

Suddenly Sanyukta walks in ,he sees her and notices something different in her ,she was not the same person he saw when he walked in the factory the first day to take revenge ,she was a lot more calmer ,her hair was left open [and he luved it that way] her face was glowing and she was wearing a yellow kurti and jeans and was not even in the factory uniform


Randhir" whats wrong with this girl ,Seriously Mr Aggarwal was right this girl is not meant to be in this factory ,use toh kisi fashion concert mein hona chaihiye " .

He tries to ignore her but she comes right next to him and Says "Kya kar rahe ho " oh god he was thinking something was even wrong with the way she is speaking now whats with her honey sweet tone ,he decided its enough and shouts back at her " Dikh nahin raha kya kaam kar rahan hoon ,just get lost ,Waise bhi mujhe nahin lagta ki tumhe yahaan is factory mein bhi hona chahiye ,this place is not meant for girls "


"Really Randhir itna Gusaa " is all that she said in ,making him even mad ,why the hell is she not snapping back ,y is she is not showing any anger ,he tells her " Please haan tumhara concern apne paas hi rako ,i dont need it ,infact i dont need any girls concern ,all of you are the same ,first your'l love and emotionally use us and then just throw us away like yourl dont even care " anger and hurt clearly evident his eyes .


"See Randhir i have not come to fight you ,Papa ne kahan tum kisi part pe work kar rahe ho isliye i wanted to learn from you thats y i am here " again her sweet tone was irritating him ,did she not hear what he just said a while ago "Arghhh" he shouts its no point arguing and just continues to work


"All right i think main yahaan par baitke ill just watch what you are doing " she finds a table near and just hops onto it and watches him work hard on that machine.

Randhir continues working ,but she sitting like that on the table was making him Dizzy ,she luked beautiful ,all these days he tried to be rude to her ,ignore her ,Insulted her ,but he could not let go of his feelings for her and today she just walks in luking so Sexy and those lips were like calling him to kiss it ,Randhir had enough ,no he could not let his feelings come between his deal with Mr aggarwal ,he walks over to where sanyukta is sitting and pulls her close and tells her " See i dont know whats your problem and why you are even here when you clearly know we have broken up ,so please stop looking like this at me ,all this fake sweetness and care i cant take it any more ,just do me a favor will you ,apne yeh fake care aur concern nah kisi doosre ko dikao " he tells her pulling her down from the table and pushing her angrily

Sanyukta manages herself from falling down ,she comes to him and stands next to him ,their close proximity was to watch out for ,after a very long time did Randhir see Sanyukta see her standing so close to him " Ok Chali jaati hoon main ,waise bhi i heard that Kunal is also working on a very similar machine ,maybe woh mujhe help karega ,yeah right i think ill go there "

Randhir's Blood boils hearing that name Kunal from Sanyukta;s mouth ,that guy was always showing attitude to sanyu ,always putting her down ,all these things which Randhir used to do to Sanyu in their first year ,its like he saw himself in Kunal .


"Nooo" he runs over to Sanyukta and holds her and pulls her close to him ,their lips almost inches apart from kissing " Dont you dare Sanyukta ,your not going close to that Kunal ,i dont like the way he looks at you and what do you want to learn from him ,he dosent even know anything ,he thinks he is smart but actually his Engineering ideas Suck big time


"Tumne kaafi use observe kiya haan " Said Sanyukta in her wicked smile " But i think philaal he will be able to help me better " she said and tries to walk past Randhir

"Dont you Dare "Randhir Said and hold her even more close " Your not meeting him and thats Final


"Watch me " She says comming close to Randhir putting her hand on his bare chest and whispering in his ear ,she lets go of herself from Randhir;s grasp and walks out smiling Luking at Randhir like in the pic below .



Randhir sees his object of affection leaving him and stands there dumbfounded unable to react



"Ahhh" Randhir screams ,blood oozing from his fingers ,he then realises that it was just a dream ,he was so lost in thoughts that he was dreaming about her and he messes with the machine and hence that Cut on his finger .he shuts the machine and walks out from there ,when he goes out he sees Sanyukta working on a machine ,she had greese on her face and a smile creeps on his face ,he goes from there and says to himself "Thank god it was just a dream "



ok am done hope u liked it ,please leave your comments 😃 Criticizm is highly aappreciated😆






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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey it was awsme yr
Really loved it


Beautifully penned down


Really I so wish sum thing lyk to hppn

I really not liking sanyu running behind him
Caring for him

I mean she needs to be strong
He's the one who cheated on her


She should ignore him
N let him realize her importance


N ur os was just simply perfect loved it


Hoping sum thing lyk dat to hppn


Keep writing
U r fan


Luv u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow...

Clarita. It's really awesome yr... Luv it <3

I want this moment one screen too...

Luved the dream... N the reality which stuck him...

Neatly penned... Keep writing

Nice job!!

Chandu

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing clars!!
Want to see this in epi also...

Brilliantly written...
Superb job...

Love
Harshita

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Res
Unresswa...
Oh wow clars...
Awesome os
Loved it...

Do write more :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey dear.
It was awesome !!
Loved it to d core.
How i wish sumthing of this sort happens in d show too.
Just loved it how a dream was enough to give rd a reality check..
Do write more 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nicely written Clarita
I want Sanyu to give royal ignore in the show and RD realization
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very good! 👍🏼

This was a great OS! I loved the way you displayed RD's jealousy!

I hope something like this happens in the show too. 😊

Fingers crossed!

Good job, Clarita di!

xoxo
Amreen 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh my! How did I miss the exquisite piece of writing?!!
While reading my PMs, which are over 265, this one attracted me... It fascinated me so much. Thank you for sending me the PM wlse I would have definitely missed this magnificent work.
I always knew that you are a good writer but an exceptionally brilliant writer- never knew this side of yours. Ah! You should definitely writer frequently...
My my! You even fooled me into believing that Sanyukta had turned that bold infront of Randhir.😆 How I wish she actually was...*sigh*
Randhir day-dreaming about Sanyukta... Wow!! Why aren't you the script writer of Sadda Haq?? We could have had so many productive things coming from that factory track... Pft!
Haila! That last part was quite funny.😆😆
Grease smudged on face... How symbolic of Sanyukta.😆

I'm waiting impatiently for a fiction from you... Even another OS would work.!
Please!! Please!! Please!! Write another one!!

Regards
Keya
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome os
u penned it very well
sanyus ignorance nd rd realisation
keep writting :)

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