Arshi FF: Fighting Fate (TVK 2) Thread 6 - COMPLETED

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Titaliya1234

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Posted: 10 years ago

#881

nice update...👍🏼

thnx fr pm...

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Cutiepie_sanaya

@Cutiepie_sanaya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#882

i just started reading this ff n read it in a week n This is

only ff that affected me so much dont know whether in good way or bad way but this ff shook me d core some parts r very shocking for me but i love ur writing... do pm me when u update n i just hope to see soon happiness in their life n forget d past.

Edited by deepika09 - 10 years ago

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sneharjun92

@sneharjun92

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Posted: 10 years ago

#883

chapter 28

loved d update.

arnavs feelings, his way of explaining it to khushi was awesome...

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ArShiua

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Posted: 10 years ago

#884

enjoy reading the sequel! thanks a lot

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arnaushi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#885

i m kinda back after a long time!! you have completed this FF and now i m commenting...😭

really sorry for being this late!!!

CHAPTER 24

it rejuvenated me...reading your FF after so long made me feel fab...

really awesome chappy

arnav's apprehension about khushi going to the court was justifiable as according to him she might be uncomfortable there. but she has come a long way yet standing there!

arnav's small small teasing and his flirty comments are somehow bringing them together...

arnav copy writing that restaurants name and gifting it to khushi was so sweet...him trying to make up for all the times was 👍🏼

they both are fabulous in talking everything out...which is most needed..

khushi was superb in taking in hicks in her food court after all he was fired because of her..

she is definitely is better half she corrects every mistake of his...

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arnaushi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#886

CHAPTER 25

part1

NK's condition was very hilarious...poor guys was damn scared and nervous for meeting arnav

the way arnav showed his protectiveness for payal was sweet.

but meeting went well and the convo between them was fab

arnav matters lot to all of them...payal's reaction to his approval shows that..

whatever arnav is doing is nice as it is working up khushi to a whole new level..

her reactions are one step further than what she could!

he is riling her up to get some reactions..

part2

the way they both now want to stay alone for few months just so they could be back to and mend the things to get back to normal was superb..they absolutely deserve that much space at least now..

the new home under constructions seems a big home to me!! 11 bedrooms...quite a big one..😆

the convo between arnav and anjali was nice...them talking about aman's as* was damn funny..😃

god now aman's dick is under consideration...truly very hilarious!!

the last part was fab!! so khushi wants to add arnav in her name to show whom she belongs to..that was sweet...

part3

the diary part was nice...she is unsure about the upcoming events..

her wishing the baby was emotional..

the gift thing has surely got khushi riled up to another level..

the diwali scene was blissful..all of them having a gala time...

they both were checking each other out..that was cool!!

part4

now they are alone

ohmygod..they kissed...

khushi definitely passed another milestone..as this was the first step towards intimacy..

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arnaushi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#887

Chapter 26

fabulous chapter

i really liked the way arnav is trying to tread khushi on a path which will make her comfortable with intimacy. the way they both were caring about each other was so sweet. i loved how khushi had decorated a room for arnav keeping mind his preferences, wants and desires and arnav had designed the master bedroom to please his wife with romance!!

the bathroom scene was really funny..the way arnav has put up a scanner to enter to this room shows how much they are insecure about someone else entering this room like the other time!!

arnav solved khushi's dilemma about how to tell him to share the bed with her!

i loved how arnav made her understand her unspoken words and the need for pillows sorry the great wall of china!

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arnaushi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#888

CHAPTER 27

really an amazing update..

khushi feeling low about those damn pillows or the great wall china was justified as it shows the distance between them and how she is uncomfortable with her sharing space with arnav

arnav's reaction on not finding the pillows were damn cute.

khushi not using the loo was funny too

i liked how arnav was teasing khushi with her chillar party, trying to maintain a balance between their lives!

the best part was aman n anjali with khushi scene. the way khushi explained them about their next meet and how aman answered her question was really nice.

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arnaushi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#889

CHAPTER 28

fabulous update.

the way you have portrayed their emotions was superb..

hats off to you, the way you have wrote about their convo which was too emotional and sentimental.

khushi's monologue about her sufferings of the rape, how she reacted to that news and how she became what she is now. also the way she wanted to know how did that vile creature die and being relieved that arnav had killed him shows how much she is still scared of that incident and how badly it has affected her.

arnav's consolation was nice too. he too has suffered nearly same as khushi. his pain, watching his love of the life in so much pain and suffering shows how badly he is trying to mend her.

good that they are slowly moving on with their lives..slowly but steadily hitting home!!