Wow!!!! another story of urs ,
I Tottaly agree with u .
Maaneet magic hai hi aisa,
nice prologue and character sketch ,
awsm.part 1 ,
continue soon!!
Wow!!!! another story of urs ,
I Tottaly agree with u .
Maaneet magic hai hi aisa,
nice prologue and character sketch ,
awsm.part 1 ,
continue soon!!
Part 2
Drashti ye kb tak chalenga
Why you tortuting ownself
Drashti : Karan
Am fine
Karan : I know you are not fine
Tum smjhti kyun nhi
I can't see you like that
.
I love you geet
I love you a lot
**********
Drashti : love
Now love not comes in my dictionary karan
Karan : why geet
Drashti : am not geet any more
Geet died long back ago
Ab sirf drashti zinda hai
Aur jiska ek hi maksad hai
Dusro ke liye jinna
Logo ko khayalo ki duniya se bahar nikalna
Kyunki jb khwabo ka mahal tutata hai na
Toh awaaz nhi hoti
Aur chote itni aati hai
Kissi ko dikhayi nhi deti
Par unke zakhm kbhi nhi brte
Karan : drashti relax
Please don't hurt own self
Drashti : hurt
Now feel nothing karan
.
Aaj toh party bnti hai karan
Karan : party
Drashti : humari book ko super opening mili hai
Opps
Ye book toh maine khurana publication ke liye likhi hai
Karan, am so happy
Maan singh khurana ko zukna hi pada
Karan : geet tumhare khud ka kya jwab hai
Kya tum Maan
Drashti : geet mar chuki hai
Toh jwab fir raha hi kaha
********
Next day
Di aage sunayo na
.
Her marriage fixed, her family members praising his family...
Di kya geet khush thi
.
Wo smjh nhi paa rhi thi
Par ha wo khush thi uski family khush thi sayad isliye
.
G1 : di ladka acha nhi tha kya
.
He has no time to meet the girl, he is busy in meetings, his family fixed the marriage...
G2: engagement pe toh mile honge
Drashti : hmm
.
First time she sees him in front of own, really he looking so hot in brown cream servani... both stands together, looking picture perfect together...
Exchange the rings, she is so excited, she want to see same excitement in his eyes, but his eyes have no expression...
G3 : di asa kyun
Wo ye shaadi nhi krna chahte the
.
Drashti : yhi swal wo khud se kr rhi thi us waqt
Ek baar dekha tak nhi mujhe
G4 : aapko kyun di
Drashti : geet ko
.
After engagement, one by one member came & congratulates both. But he is busy on phone... his mom come and scolds him...
Aap apni saghai pe dhyan de
.
Wo toh ho chuki hai na
I want to go
.
Ye kya tarika hai Maan
.
Maine phle hi kaha tha
Court marriage kr lete hai
Time aur money dono save ho jaate
.
Maan stop of this
Aap geet se baat kriye tb tak
Hum aate hai
.
G1 : di mein aapse kuch puchna bhool hi gyi
Drashti : pucho
G1 : di
Aapne jo hume book di hai
Usme toh
Maine character ke names Kalpana & Raj hai
Drashti : naam se kya farq pdta hai
Tum sb bs kahani pe dhayn do
G1 : hmm
.
Then she tries to talk with him...
Geet : suniye maan ji
He turns to see her, first time she sees his little smile to seeing her.
Geet : wo
Mein aapse
Maan : can't you speak properly
Geet : asa nhi hai
Maan : tell fast
Geet : are you happy
Maan : happy for what
Geet : aap is shaadi se khush toh hai na
Maan : isme khush hone wali kya baat hai
My family wants to see me settle
Am ok with this
Geet : mein aapko pasand toh hu na
Maan : my mom select you
If she select you
Am totally fine with this
.
She is so angry to hear his answer, then geet mom make understand her...
.
Maa mujhe nhi krni unse shaadi
.
Geet asa nhi khte
Ache log hai
Ladka well settled hai
Apna ghar hai
Acha khasa business hai unka
Upar se unhone koi demand bhi nhi rakhi hai
Aur kya chaiye
.
Maa
Maine unse pucha
You like me
Aur pata unhone kya kaha
Unki mom ko pasand hu
That's ok
.
.
Ye toh aur bhi achi baat hai
Ladka apne pariwaar ki izzat krta hai
Geet beta ye toh achi baat huyi na
.
Hmm
G1 : di
Aage
Drashti : tum baki ki kahani khud read kr lena
G2 : par kyun di
Drashti : meri tabiyat thik nhi hai
Am going
.
G3 : di jaane se phle aaj kuch kahongi nhi
Drashti
Kyun log pariwaar dekhke apni beti de dete hai
Kyun wo ye smjh nhi paate
Ki zindai bar ke sath ke liye
Ye pariwaar nhi
Ye ghar
Ye business nhi
Balki humsafar kaam aayenga
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Originally posted by: nostalgicmoon
Their engagement happened and maan's reaction towards geet's Question shows his uninterested nature,waiting for next part
very unique them priya really very great..
u potraited it soo greatly..
the feelings and dreams of each girl abt her life patner..
drashti is the girl saying the story to girls..
oh god she is reall very hurt deeply..
karan is supporting her,..
the story is abt geet i think her ownself..
they both got enagaged but maans answer to geets quetions showed his least intrest in maariage..
hmm actually wht is his nature..
and wht happen to drashti..
eagerly waiting to see the story getting unfold..
continue soon dear..
Originally posted by: taahir004
Fabulous Update
Firstly is Geet and Drashti one person or two different people
On engagement day Geet ask Maan if he is happy and he tells her that his mother wants him settled and she also chose the girl so Geet than tells her mother she does not want to marry Maan because he told her that he is just marrying because of his mum while Geet's mum tells her that he must be a good boy as he considers his family honor
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