OS- The Unexpressed Love -Rajveer -Naina LRL

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The unexpressed love..

5 years later...

" KMA...naam sun ke aab sab ko bohot hi familiar ho Gaya hai naa...Yeh KMA meri zindagi main bohot hi khaas hogi..kyunki iss academy main bohot saari yaadein joori hui hai..haan KMA main aane mein kuch aur maksaat tha..sab logo ne mera Bhai Naveen Singh Ahluwalia par ilzaam lagaya tha..ki voh ek deshdrohi tha..lekin ek insaan ne mere sachai jaan ne par mujhe bohot hi support kiya tha..aur voh aur koi nahin...the most special person in my life..that is none other than my mentor, bhaiya's best friend aur..mera..mera pyaar...Capt. Rajveer Singh Shikhawat...without the support of Rajveer sir..shayaad aaj main iss academy main nahin hoti..aur shayad..main best cadet ka award bhi nahin milta..aur mujhe aaj bohot hi garv hai..ki main Naveen Singh Alhuwalia ki behen hoon...sab ko Pata chal chuka hai ki mera bhai ek deshdrohi nahin hai..aur main aaj bhi bohot khush hoon kyunki hum sab yaani ki mere doston ke madaad se..Yudi,Alekh,Pooja,Ali ,Huda and most of all ..Capt. Abhimanyu ke madat se maine un culprit ko sazaa dilwaya tha..uss gunegaar ke vajase maine apna bhai..aur pyaar ko hamesha ki liye kho diya..lekin main yeh keh sakti hoon..ki wherever the places that they're in..voh log mujhe dekh ke khush aur garv honge..Aaj 5 saal baad is academy main waapis aaye hoon..not as a cadet..but as a faculty member..yaani ki Capt. Naina Singh Alhuwalia..pataa nahin main sab ki umeed main khaadi utar paungi yaa nahin..but I will fulfil everybody's expectation.."

Naina enters in the academy, and where all of the cadets were welcoming her with warmth because they have known everything about her..her bravery..and they have greeted her with friendly way..And Naina surely feels very nostalgic because it has given her lots and lots of memory..the memory where she has spent with her cadet friends..the freshers ball..and most of all she also remembers where she has wore the red saree where Huda has placed the bet..and she has closed her eyes..and recalling Rajveer was admiring her..and he recalls her moments...

Rajveer" Just believe in yourself cause I believe in you Naina Ahh Singh.."...she has also recalling the moments where she has spent at the point 1857 with Rajveer..where these two were praying at the wishing pillar..and the two shout at each other's name..

Rajveer" Nainaaa

Naina:" RAJVEER...,

She is smiling by recalling the beautiful moments, and it has been said that somebody was patting in her back...and it was none other than Dr. Shalini and Major Abhimanyu..

Dr. Shalini: " Welcome Capt. Naina Singh Alhuwalia"

Naina: Thank you ma'am..

Major: Ah..welcome back Naina..my favorite cadet...so good to have you back.."

Naina" thank you so much sir!! KMA main waapis aana aacha lag raha hai..par mujhe bohot kaami mehsoos ho rahi hai...( Shalini and Abhimanyu has guessed that she is missing Capt. Rajveer and they look at each other and showing her the support)( wiping her tears) I'm sorry..main bohot hi emotional ho gayi hoon!!

Major Abhimanyu" Main samajh sakta hoon Naina...I understand your emotion..Maine bhi mera dost ko khoya hai..but..naina tum apne aapko akela bilkul mehsoos maat karna..hum sab tumhare saath hai..

Shalini: Major sahi kehra hai Naina..tum apne aap ko akela maat samajh naa..hum sab tumhare saath hai!! ( Naina smiles and nods, while Abhimanyu and Shalini were feeling bad about Naina that it's been five years since Rajveer's demise and she still missing him)

Naina" Excuse me sir..excuse me Ma'am ..I will be right back.."

Abhi and Shalini smiles and nod..

Shalini" Bechari Naina..voh Capt. Rajveer ko bohot hi miss kar rahi hai..you know something..zindagi bhi bohot hi ajeeb hai..hum kab kissi se itna kareeb aa jaate hai..kabhi pata nahin chalta.."

Abhimanyu" Aap sahi keh rahi ho Dr..Rajveer aur Naina ne ek doosre se bohot pyaar karte the..Maine inn dono ki aankhon main dekha hai..the love..par afsoos..inn dono ne ek doosre se nahin keh paaye..Naina ki dil main aaj Raj ke liye pyaar hai..aur Shayad Capt. Rajveer ke jagaah ko bhi nahin le sakta.."

Shalini: I agree with you Major..

It has been said that the ex-cadets has joined KMA and posted in Ambala where they have been also hired as a faculty member i.e Yudi, Alekh, Huda,Ali and Pooja..hence they have also recalled their memory how they have spent with each other..and most of all they have also recalled their time that they have spent with their favorite mentor i.e Capt. Rajveer..as a result they were all in tears..and now moving on..it has been said that Yudi and Huda has been flirting with girls ( junior female cadets) where as Pooja, Ali and Alekh has also joined them..and they were enjoying their stupidity..

Pooja:" Oyye khotiyo..sudhar Jaa..koi ladki tum logo se nahin pat ne wali hai..grow up.."

Ali:" Kya kar rahe hai aap log..voh sab hamare juniors hai guys..kuch to sharam ki jiye.."

Yudi" Dude..juniors hai to kya hua..un sab ko pata to chale ki main Kitna smart,handsome hoon..aur sab Yudi par marte hai!! Aur gaise bhi I'm the most eligible bachelor in KMA!!

They all were busting laughing because of yudi's comment..

Huda" Ai hai??mere Madonna...kya main in jananiyon ko bol doon...tumhare Madonna waali baat?!

Yudi" Huda...what did you just said?!...Just shut up!!..Saale main tujhe nahin chorunga..!! Tu jaake aapne bhains ke saath romance kar lena.."

Huda was chasing Yudi and he ran and almost felling down in the stairs..while other cadets were laughing very hard..

Alekh" Yeh log nahin sudrenge...Nautanki ko Nautanki hi thik kar sakta hai!!..

Ali" EK dum sahin kaha!!

Pooja" Jo kuch bhi kaho..par mere Shah Rukh ki jagaa koi bhi nahin le sakta..un ke baat hi kuch hai!! Main unhe bohot hi miss kar rahi hoon!!

Alekh" Vaise..Naina kahaan hai?!..

Huda" Main janta hoon ki meri phoolan kahaan hai...chal...

Ali" Vaise..aap Naina ko propose kab kar rahe ho ?!

Pooja" Tu Naina ko kab propose kar raha hai?!

Yudi" Yeah dude...when are you proposing her..5 Saal ho Gaye hai..propose nahin karega kya?!

Huda" Guys..main Phoolan ko pyaar zaroor karta hoon..lekin main janta hoon..5 saal ho Gaye hai..lekin aaj bhi voh Capt. Rajveer se bohot hi pyaar Karta hai..aur Maine seekh liya hai..ki pyaar sirf sacrifice hai..aur mere liye Phoolan ki khushi bohot hi maaye ne rakte hai..Maine Phoolan ko bohot dukh dekh liya..main use hurt nahin kar na chahta..I don't want to force her..main use shaadi ke liye tayaar hoon..I will wait for her..

Pooja" Par Huda..5 saal ho Gaye..Rajveer sir ke jaane ko..tu kab tak intezaar kar Dega..voh janti hai ki tu use bohot hi pyaar Karta hai..

Alekh" apun ko bhi lagta hai ki Naina ko zindagi main Aage bar na chahiye...

Huda" Dekho..Maine faisla kar liya hai..if Naina is ready for marriage then I'll ask her..varna.Main intezaar karunga..

Huda left and perhaps everybody agrees with Huda's point of view..Similarly,The friends has surprised Naina and they have all hugged each other as it been ages that they have all seeing each other for so long..They have advised her that Huda is waiting for her , as Naina clearly knows that Huda is going to propose to her..she somehow respects Huda's decision but it is better if she talks with him..And Huda is standing in the garden, and he somehow knew that Naina is not going to get married to him..they smiled and gave each other a warm hug..

Huda" Kaise hai meri Phoolan"

Naina" Main thik hoon..tu Kaisa hai Huda?!"

Huda" First class...dekh Phoolan...main tujhe kuch Kehna...

Naina ( cuts) " Huda..boora maat maan na..main janti hoon ki tu mujhe bohot pyaar Karta hai..aur main respect karti hoon tumhare decision..I think..tum kissi aur se shaadi karo..kyunki main tumhare liye bilkul bhi sahin nahin hoon..tu zindagi main Aage baar..mujhe Bhool Jaa..

Huda" Dekh Phoolan..main janta hoon ki tu mujhe shaadi nahin karega..aur main tumhare decision ko respect Karta hoon..lekin mere ek baat sun..Tu aaj bhi Rajveer sir se pyaar karti hai..aur yeh tere liye bilkul aasan nahin hai..Main tujhe zor zabardaasti nahin karunga..Mere liye tere khushiyaan bohot hi maaye ne rakte hai..Hum shaadi nahi karenge to kya hua..hum aaj bhi dost hai!!

Naina" Thanks Huda!!..I'm lucky to have a friend like you"

It has been said that a man just stepped out of the car with the wheelchair,and with a stubble on, and it's none other than everybody whom he considered as dead..Capt.Rajveer Singh Shikhawat. He was entering the KMA, everybody was shocked to see him alive, and they were in tears, and at first Abhi has hugged his friend very tightly,and the friends were also thrilled to see his mentor alive and hugged them very tightly!! He has also met BC, Shalini, and Huda, and somehow Huda was also feeling happy that his mentor came back alive, and they have smiled at each other..He has been very proud that his ex-cadets has achieved and became a successful in their field. As a result, he is searching for someone special..someone whom he is waiting to expressing his love, his favourite student, his love..his Naina Ah Singh. Huda smiles and took Rajveer and most of the people in KMA were following him..and he shows that Naina is still there..Rajveer was in tears ..and he slowly went to see his love..he has been recalling his beautiful moments that he has been spent with her..the moments he has seen her in the red saree..and his most memorable date at the point 1857..suddenly Naina turns back,and her eyes were moist and shocked that she is unable to express herself..whether she is going to shout at him, yell at him, hug him, ..they have also recalled their final hug before the tragic blast..she has been broke down, and Rajveer came in front of her..and wiped her tears...

Naina( hits him) " Kahaan the aap...where were you?!..Aap ko pata hai..ki main aap ko bohot hi miss kiya hai..aap jante hai ki main kiss Hal main thi...

Rajveer" Naina..main samajh sakta hoon tumhare..

Naina" Chup..bilkul chup..kuch nahin kahenge aap..kuch bhi nahin kahenge..aap mere Rajveer sir nahin ho sakte..kyunki mere Rajveer sir bohot hi ache hai..

Rajveer" Naina..tum nahi jante..ki main kis daur main guzaar raha tha..5 saal ho Gaye..in 5 salon main ..main coma main thi..jab main hosh aaya tha..Maine sab se pehle tumhare ghar gaya tha..( All were listening to. Rajveer's story)'..par maine tumhare ghar main khidki ke samne...tumhe aur cadet Huda ko EK saath hug karte hue dekha tha..( Naina and Huda was shocked to hear this as they have realized that Rajveer has sacrificed and decided not to tell that he is alive only for HN's happiness)..aur Shayad..tum dono zindagi main aage bar chuke ho..iss liye main tum dono ke beech main nahin aana chahta tha..

Huda" Sir..yakeen maniye...Naina sirf aap se pyaar karte hai...hum dono ke beech main aisa kuch nahin hai..haan yeh saach hai ki main Phoolan se pyaar Karta hoon..lekin voh sirf aap se pyaar karti hai!!

Naina" Aap ne kaise soch liya ki main kissi aur se pyaar karti hoon...aap ne mujhe Huda ke bahon main dekh liya..kya aap ne EK baar samne nahin aaye...How could you sir?!..How could you?!...Main aap se baat hi nahin karungi...

Rajveer approach to her...and shuts her mouth..while everybody was smiling..and they both going to express their love..

Rajveer" Shhh...bohot hi bolti ho..aur tum aabhi bhi ziddi ho..( everybody smiles as finally they're going to express their feelings)..Aaj main tumse Kehna chahta hoon...I love you!!..I love you...Captain. Naina Ahh..Singh...

Naina is in tears and smiles at him...and he has been also waiting to hear the magical words from her lips..

Naina" I love you too Rajveer sir...I love you!!

Rajveer:" Sir nahin...Rajveer bolo..."

Naina" Sir...main kaise aap ko aapke naam pukaroon..."

Rajveer" I won't hear the word..it's an order..."

Naina" I love you...Rajveer!!

Rajveer( looks romantically into Naina's eyes and smiles): " Phir se kaho..."

Naina( blushes)" Rajveer..."

Rajveer and Naina looks into each other's eyes and hugs each other very passionately..where everybody has been very touched and claps for them!! Soon they went inside so, and Huda also smiled and leaves..."

Rajveer" Vaise Naina???boora maat manna...kaafi moti ho gayi ho..."

Naina" koi baat nahin Rajveer...aap aa Gaye naa..dobara aap ke saath training karenge.."

Rajveer" Soch lo...bohot hi difficult hoga Captain.. Naina..Ah..Singh..

Naina" koi baat nahin??jab aap mere saath hote ho...koi bhi difficult nahin hoga!!..

Rajveer" Just believe in your self cause I believe in you Capt. Naina Ahh..Singh..I love you Naina!!..( Kissed her forehead)..

They have been extremely happy to see each other after the gap of five years..and the rain has dropped in the field..and they both smiled each other and held each other's hand..and they passionately hugged each other..
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Since Left Right Left has re-run on Sony Pal, so I have thought to write an OS on them, hence I would appreciate if you all kindly read and leave your comments!!
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naujoker thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was like the scenes were in front of my eyes like real
It was fabulous!!!
The cute fight between yudi and huda
The way pooja said shahrukh to rajveer
The friends reunion!!
Shalini and Abhi scene with naina
Loved the way naina expressed her feelings while walking towards KMA
Loved Raj and Naina scenes till the end
Thanks for the lovely os on Raj and Naina
Thanks for the pm
👏 ⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wowww awsmmm OS dear totally loved it thanx for wonder full OS if possible write more
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks a lot Surya for the lovely comments!! I really appreciate it!!😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: nilusoni

It's awesome

Thanks for pm


Thank you so much Nilusoni..I'm sorry I don't even know your name..but I will like to thank you from the bottom of my heart for taking your time to read this OS😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rkchandni

Wowww awsmmm OS dear totally loved it thanx for wonder full OS if possible write more


Thank you so much Chandni for taking your time to read this OS!! It really means a lot!! I will write more OS on Rajeev Khandelwal but unfortunately there's less reader on this forum since many people are inclined to other jodi..but I promise that I will continue to write more OS..and always be a proud Rajeevian!!😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: naujoker

It was like the scenes were in front of my eyes like real
It was fabulous!!!
The cute fight between yudi and huda
The way pooja said shahrukh to rajveer
The friends reunion!!
Shalini and Abhi scene with naina
Loved the way naina expressed her feelings while walking towards KMA
Loved Raj and Naina scenes till the end
Thanks for the lovely os on Raj and Naina
Thanks for the pm
👏 ⭐️


Thank you so much Naujoker for taking your time to write your comments..I really enjoyed reading them, and still glad to know that there's still more people who are interested and loyal to LRL and it is possibly the best tv show ever produced on tv!! And I'm glad that through this OS it brings the smile on your face!! So I'm really glad that I did the justice!! So keep smiling and love Raj Naina and LRL always!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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omg what a tremendous os dear. u hv tied our tongue by ur os. awesome amazing marvelous piece of writing dear. standing ovation for this os dear. keep writing dear. n thanks for d pm dear.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi
the os is good😃
so u have really recreated the special moments 👏👏
though lrl has started again but the os u wrote was a dream comes true to us😳😳
it expresses our dream what we wanted at the end😃
thanks for a beautiful os

Edited by ronojoy_ria - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Finally I am super happy to see LRL's rerun on Sony Pal and when u wrote an OS this is amazing gift to our all time the most favorite couple RN!!!!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏

Awesome OS!!!!!!! 👍🏼
👍🏼 👍🏼

Just the way I wanted it to happen in the show!!!!!!!
I wish it would have been happened there!!!!!!!!

Rajveer returned after a long five years when Naina has joined the KMA as a faculty member and she got the gift immediately!!!!!!!! 😉 😉 😉

How could she not miss him as each and every part of the place is full with memories of him (not only for him, for us as well) 😳 😳 😳

Huda has become a bit sensible now as he now has totally understand that Naina is only for Raj and she can't love anyone else!!!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊

Now Naina's anger on Raj is justified but no one can be angry with Raj for long as he is the sweetheart!!!!!!! ❤️

You have done a nice job by writing this OS!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏

Keep on writing more OS or FF as u wish!!!!!!!!!
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