SwaRon FF: #Friendzoned# ??!!

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Chitra.

@..MiStLeToE..

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#341

Unreserved on Page 47 :)

Loads of Love to you girl:)

This just gave me such a happy feeling :)

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Ayushi.

@-.wanderlust.-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#342

As I had promised to re-read this FF all over again & post, here I am.
Honestly, I am teary eyed. Your version of SwaRon will remain close to my heart for years to come. How beautifully you had sketched each character, how beautifuly you have penned each word expressing the rolar coaster ride in Swayam & Sharon's life- Incredible!

Pre-Last update (as you said you may write one more chapter to it) couldn't have been much better. The proposal, the fire-brigade part & Shaon's reaction- Perfect pre-ending! Not forgetting Srishti's crucial part in the play.

Every character of this story has its important since beginning to the end. Myra, undoubtedly my special character
Aditi & Arjun, too.

Can I ask for a little favor?
Please update links of every chapter on the Index page. It would be easy for us readers to go through each chapter whenever we wish to go back & cherish Friendzoned.

Err, I hope its not too much to ask for.

Keep writing.

-Ayushi

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athi_vrushan

@athi_vrushan

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#343

friendzoned

updated?!!!!!!!!

lemme come out of the shock...

very nice update..

phew...finally swayam proposed...

a unique and swayamish style of proposal...

freindzoned has been a unique

reading experience up to date..

got to see a diffrent swayam..

myra...gee..im gonna miss her soo much...

she's been a part of swaron all the while...

and aditi and arjun...a happy ending for them...

swayam's photography skills..is really commendable... and the way you write abt him...a perfect misfit...

a casanova..yet likeable...we never hated him...

and the woman of the 'match' srishti...

well she had to smack him...to propose sharon..i loved it...

.keep wriitng more will be

waiting eagerly for your upcoming stories

and yeah for the epilogue too..

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mahak_28

@mahak_28

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#344

Okay so I am a new fan of yours shristi. Ayushi made me read this and ayushi i love you for doing this girl :D i ak reading this since 10 and its 2 in the morning. This makes you understand how much I liked it. The way yiu have written the story is so beautiful. From the time they lived in to the proposal all of it is beautifully portrayed. commendable job done here girl :) and like ayushi i am also teary eyed and also sad that it ended :( I wish it to go on forver. The tale of frndshp and love is wow :)

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VReSh

@VReSH

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#345

Whow!!! I realized i had last read this till Chap 10 n today i read it till the end... n man i loved it to the core... it all seems so realistic so true... n ur Writing seriously brought it to life... the story, the presentation Everything was so damn good... i loved each n every part of it... i hope u Update that last chap, perhaps epilogue like as we... cant wait to read more from u... Loved it all... :)

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ujwal

@ujwal_v

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#346

just love this ff...

read it again..😊

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CoffeeandInk

@CoffeeandInk

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#347

Friendzoned was the only story I've actually ever found by myself and looked forward to the updates. Srishti, your plot and characterization is honestly fantastic.

It was the story as much as the characters you wrote (Character Development!) that had me totally hooked. It's not a completely fluffy story (to which I may or may not be partial to), but it was absolutely brilliant. I love it.

And though I kinda sorta didn't want it to end, I thought the ending was absolutely perfect. Swayam (at least this one) is the kind of idiot who needs to be hit on head for him to look at what is staring him in the face. You didn't deviate from the character's personality at all.

And it was so cute(!) when he proposed to her and just every other interaction that they had. Oh, so ingenious. A firetruck of all things.

Myra and Sharon: All about that Sass xD

And just, this has been a brilliant story. One that I am really happy to have followed from (somewhere along) the start :)

Love,

Riddhi.

Edited by AzureLicht - 10 years ago