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Read all parts in one go
Superb story line
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Part 54

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Geet : maan

Dinner thanda ho raha hai

Maan : geet why you doing this

Geet come near to him, closed his files & held his hand & take to couch...

Geet : now sit

Maan : geet tumne jwab nhi diya

Jo maine kiya tumhare sath

Geet : mujhe bhook lagi hai

Ek toh khud ghar nhi aate

Jb mein dinner leke yaha ayu hu

Toh khana na khake

Swal pe swal puch rhe hai

Maan : geet tumhe dinner kr lena chaiye tha

Itni takleef uthani ki kya jaroorat thi

Tiffin driver ke sath bejwa deti

Aur waise bhi mujhe bhook nhi hai

Geet : chup chap khayo

He obeyed her words, start eating...

Geet (think) : maan is baar sath donge na mera

He feels her gaze upon him...

Maan : geet tum kuch kyun nhi kha rhi ho

Tumhe bhook lagi thin a

Geet : hmm

Maan : fir kya huya

Geet : maan i want to say something to you

Maan : kaho geet

Jo tum kahungi

Jo tum chahongi whi honga

Geet : maan I want

Maan : yes geet

Geet : maan I want

I want,

.

Never

.

Never leave me again maan

Geet placed her head on his chest & encircled her hand around his waist...

Geet : maan don't do that again same with me

.

Maan you take your time

Soch lijiye ke baar

Maan placed his hand around her shoulder...

Maan : geet

I know a sorry word is so sort...

Ab mein kuch galat nhi karunga

Tumahri khushi sbse phle hongi geet

.

Chalo dinenr krle

Geet : hmm

*******

Geet : now let's go home

Maan : geet tum jaayo

Mein baad mein aata hu

Geet : you have watch

Maan : ha

Tum kyun puch rhi ho

Geet : dekhni aati hai

Ya bs yuhi pheni huyi hai

Maan : geet

Bs half an hour ka kaam hai

Geet : ok

Fir hum sath jaayenge

Maan : tumhe yaha rukne ki jaroorat nhi hai

Geet : main ek baar kh diya na

********

Geet sat on couch comfortably, not know, when she fall in sleep.

Maan : geet jo couch ke side table pe file rakhi hai

Zara dena mujhe

He get no response, he sees, she sleeping peacefully but her head moving again and again... he pick laptop & come sat beside her & placed her head on his shoulder & lost in work...

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After two hours, he also feeling sleepy, he placed laptop on table & covered her with shirt & slept...

********

She woke and sees own in his embrace, small smile touch her lips. She always dream togetherness... after facing so up & down , she get today this day..

Kitna ajeeb hai na

Jisne itna dard diya

Vishwaas nhi kiya

Uska sath hi

Schi khushi deta hai

Kya pyaar asa hota hai

Jaha insaan khud ko is tarah bhool jaata hai

.

She placed her hand on his cheek, her touch break his sleep...he opened the eyes, seeing her smiley face.

She takes her hand back & came out from his grip...

Geet : sorry

Pata nhi kaise neend aa gyi

Meri wajh se aapko kitni pareshaani huyi

He wear shirt & come close to her...

Maan : geet

Mujhe koi pareshani nhi huyi

Sorry toh mujhe khehna chaiye

Tumhe nhi

.

Let's go home

*******

One week passed out peacefully, both start opening & caring each other.

At other side, in Mumbai , madhu & rishab coming to close each other...

Madhu always try to call geet , she dial her number & cut instantly.

.

Payal try to make geet understood, but fails.

Payal : tu na bilkul nhi smjhti

He loves your sister madhu nor you

.

Bina pyaar ke kaise

.

Sweetheart shaadi usse krne chaiye

Jo tumhe pyaar krta ho

Na ki jisse tum pyaar krti ho

.

You only get pain, hurt in this relation.

Geet : I want to hurt again

Payal

.

Chahe ye khushi thode pal ki hi kyun na ho

I want him

Payal : fir whi baat

But I don't see you in pain

Aur mein tujhe ye sb nhi krne de sakti

Geet : please payal

Don't interfere in my personal matter

Payal : good

Ab bs yhi sunane ke liye rh gya tha

Geet : payal wo

Payal : bs ab tu rhehne de

Jb wo tere sath nhi tha

Mein thi geet

Jb tu kissi se apna dard nhi kh sakti thi

Mein thi us waqt

Wo nhi

Usne sirf tujhe dard diya hai

Geet : pain is also part of love

.

Pyaar ka dusra phlu sayad dard hi hai

Payal : you gone totally mad

Geet : tujhe ye lagta hai

Toh ye hi shi payal

Pr mein khud ko ek mauka dena chahti hu

Kal khi mujhe aage jaake ye na lage

Kash maine wo mauka diya hota

Toh meri zindagi kuch aur hoti

Payal : aur mauka deke bhi tujhe whi mila toh

Geet : toh sayad mere pyaar mein hi kuch kmi thi

Payal : you know geet

Pyaar mein log sch mein pagal ho jaate hai

Khud ka acha bura dekh hi nhi sakta

.

.

Ydi tu aaj khud ko rok leti

Smbhal leti hai

Toh ho sakta hai tujhe 3 mahine baad itna dard na ho

Kyun ki tu phle se jaanti hai

.

Ydi teen mahine ki baad tera ye sapna tuta na

Toh tujhe jyada dard honga

Aur mein tujhe ussi dard se bachana chahti hu

Geet : ho sakta hai na payal

Asa kuch ho ...hi na

Jo tu kh rhi hai

Payal : thik hai

Jo tujhe krna hai kr

Geet : sweetheart

Ek smile toh dede

Payal : ab mska mt laga

Mein gussa hu

Geet : chl aaj pizza party krte hai

Payal : mujhe nhi khana

Geet : tu soch le

Payal : geet kbhi tu us insaan se mujhe mila to shi

Mein teri shaadi mein toh aa nhi paayi thi

Geet : ok

Mein puchti hu

Wo kb free hai

Payal : hmm

************

How I say to geet

Pata nhi wo mere sath aayengi ya nhi

.

He sits on dining table for breakfast...

Geet : maan

Maan : hmm

Geet : nasta acha nhi bna hai

Maan : acha hai

Geet : fir khayo na

Maan : ha

Kha raha hu

Geet : koi pareshani hai

Maan : nhi geet

Geet : fir baat kya hai

Maan : geet wo

Her phone buzzed

Geet : maan ek minute

Maan : hmm

Geet : hello sir

Good morning

.

.

Ok

Harshad

Ab thik hai

.

.

Evening mein

.

Yes I am free

.

Party mein jana hai

.

.

Par

.

.

Ok

Am coming with you

Maan (think) she said yes to harshad

Geet : ha maan

Aap kuch kh rhe the

Maan : bs ase hi geet

Kuch khas nhi tha

Geet : ok

Maan : waise tum kis party mein jaa rhi ho

Geet : oh ha maan

Wo koi event hai

All business man's of different field, attending this event.

Mein toh mna kr rhi thi

Par harshad sir ne

Insist kiya

So I said yes

Are you ok with this?

Maan : of course

***********

Edited by priya_21 - 10 years ago
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Geet is trying her best loving it and her dominance over Maan that is too adorable...I hate people who try to divert minds especially related to Geet .. what that stupid lady is trying to say Geet's decision is not rite..Huh... Dinner scene at office and then how they slept loved it...She is going to party and Maan said yes looking for that ...
Edited by Sonia.KN - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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maan & geet are coming close to each-other but still there is some hesitance b/w them. I can understand payal but she interfering too much in geet's life
awesome part
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice update
waiting for next update
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It's amazing. Finally maneet are coming close to each other. They are spending time together and geet also started to believe on Maan again. That office incident was beautiful. Maan's care for geet and geet's stubbornness for staying with him till he finish his work. Thank god geet is ignoring Payal's suggestion. I think maan was also going to ask geet about the party but before that her boss called her n asked her to go with him. Waiting for next dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting update! well written! Maaneet get closer! Payal is too interfering! Geet doesn't listen 2 her! Maan wants 2 ask Geet 2 go with him 2 the party bt hesitant! Madhi wants 2 call Geet! Harshad calls! Geet tells him yes! she explains 2 Maan! update soon!
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Nice part ,
maan and geet spending time together,,
aww her jhootha gussa and hukum jatana is so adoreble,,
both are opening and caring eachother is good,,
iss payal ko geet ki happiness se kya problem hai,,
waiting for next ,
Edited by mskfan - 10 years ago
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geet is so much in love with maan
she forgave him n gave a chance to him
payal trying to manuplate her when maan is getting closer
maan wants her to ask for party
but harshad took the chance
whats in store for them in party
no mu pls..hope maan intro her as his wife to all
nice part

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