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Amna

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Posted: 10 years ago

HEYYY ITS MEE AMNA...I AM BACK WITH A NEW STORY...HOPE U WILL LIKE IT TOOO 😊

Mujhe apna bana lo

what if u love the person very much...and u r ready to do anything for this person...even ready to destroy ur life for his happiness...

to know more...read this FF

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Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

Part 4
Part 5

Part 6

Part 7

Part 8

Part 9

Part10 n 11

Part 12 - Last Part 20

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

Super awesome concept Amna

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Posted: 10 years ago

PART 1

the house was beautifully decorated...just perfect for an engagement...just like in a dream of every girl...but the situation was quite different here...the girl was not at all happy because of the engagement but she has no other option...the girl is non other than riddhima gupta

riddhima who lost her mother at a very young age and her father was not really a person who she can lend on...her father was an alcoholic...lekin kismat bhi kya khel khelti hai...riddhima ko laga ke isse buri uski kismat ho hi nahi sakti...but again she was wrong...kismat ne aisa muh phera ke riddhima khud kuch nahi pata ke wo kya kar rahi hai...she is left as only a body without soul...bachpan se hi itni buri kismat thi to wo itni jaldi kaise peecha chod sakti hai

she was sitting infront of the mirrow and was looking at her reflection infront of her...she looked at her face...which was very very pale...she lost all the color from her face...she was sitting like a doll with no emotion...suddenly the door opened and a girl with currly hair came in...

G: are wah hone wali bhabi jaan...u r looking extremly marvelous...i am sure apko dekhte hi bhai behoosh ho jayenge...
R: are nahi muskaan aisi koi baat nahi hai...tu bata tu yaha kyu aayi hai
M: haa bhabi me aapko yeh batane aayi hu ke armaan bhai jaa rahe hai...wo to engagement ke liye bhi rukna nahi chahte...aur jab sid bhai ko yeh baat pata chali to wo chahte the ke aap hi armaan ko roko...
R: armaan jaa raha hai...
M: jee bhabi...aur sid bhai ko lagta hai ke sirf aap hi unko rok sakti ho...aur koi bhi nahi...mene bhi try ki lekin armaan bhai to kisi ki baat tak sunne ko tayar nahi hai...plzzz dooo something...
R: me kuch karti hu muski...tum neeche jao...me armaan se baat karti hu...wo apne room me hi hai na...
M: jee bhabi...bhai apne room me hi hai...okee aap phir unke saath hi neecha aa jayega...love u bhabi...u r looking just like an angel...

riddhima saw muskaan leaving the room...as soon as the door closed...tear started to flow down from riddhimas eyes...

riddhimas pov:

armaan tum saach me jaa rahe ho...mujhe yaha akela chod ke...me jaanti hu ke mene tumhe bohot takleef di...but trust me mere pas or koi option nahi tha...plzz armaan dont hate me...tum aise nahi jaa sakte...yaha pe sabko tumhari zaroorat hai...plzz armaan...agar tum meri aankho se dur ho jaoge to me chain se kaise reh paungi...agar tum yaha pe rahoge to mujhe kam se kam yeh yakeen to hoga ke tum salamat ho aur bilkul theek thaak...armaan plzzz mujhe maaf kar dena...plzzz

riddhima wished her tears and stood up and left for armaans room...there she saw that his bags were almost packed...he just came out of the washroom...wooow was the first word which came in his mind as he saw riddhima...she was looking like an angel on earth...but then he saw her eyes which where red due to crying...it hurted him in his heart...he wanted to run to her and hug her...sho that she will forget all her worries...but then again the words came in his mind which she said...and he tried to controll his anger...

A: tum yaha kya kar rahi ho...tumhe to apne hone wale pati ke liye tayar hona chahiye na...tum...
R: tum jaa rahe ho armaan... (plzzz mat jao armaan...me tumhare bina kaise jee paungi)

goood her voice sounded so broken armaan thought... but he had taken the decesion and he wont back out...he turned around so that he wont have to face her anymore...

R: mat jao armaan...(me nahi seh paungi is duniya ke zulm agar tum mere saath na rahe...yeh duniya bohot buri hai armaan...aur agar tum bhi mujhe chod ke chale gaye to me to jeete jee hi mar jaungi)

it was just a whisper but still he heard it...it touched his heart...he turned around and walked to her...she looked so pale...he knew that something is distrubing her...but why is she not telling him anything...he touched her face with his both hands...

A: bas ek bar riddhima...plzzz ek bar kehdo ke yeh sab kuch jhoot hai...aur tum yeh sab nahi chahti...kehdo ke tumne mujhse jo kuch bhi kaha wo sab jhoot tha...i promise ke me sab kuch theek kar dunga...phir koi problem nahi hogi...hum dono yaha se kahi dur chale jayenge...aur apni choti si duniya banayenge...sirf me tum aur hamara pyaar...plzzz riddhima ek bar kehdo...plzzz

armaan touched his forehead with hers...riddhima touched his hands over her face...she knew that he loves her beyond limits...she also do the same...thats the reason why she is doing all these things here...just for a mere second she thought about his suggestion...but then suddenly a voice in her head brought her back...

"agar tumhe armaan ki zara si bhi parwah hai...agar tumne usse kabhi bhi ek second ke liye hi sahi pyaar kiya hai to tumhe yeh sab kuch karna padega...warna uski halat ki zimedaar tum banogi...and u know me jo kehta hu wo kar ke hi rehta hu...so be carefull...hahahahhaha"

riddhima took armaans hands away from her hands and took few steps back...

R: tum mujhe galat samajh rahe ho armaan...me to bas chahti hu ke sid ko bura na lage ke uski engagement me hi uska bhai nahi hai...aur muski ho bhi bura lage ga...plzzz mat jao... ( mujhe is sab ki koi parwah nahi armaan...me to bas chahti hu ke tum meri aankho ke samne hi raho...)
A: Ohhh to the great riddhima guppta isliye aayi hai yaha pe...

armaan turned around...he got again hurted by his feeling...he had promised that he wont fall in her treachery but he again did...and at the end he again got hurted...he went to his bed and grabbed his bag...riddhima moved to his bed and tried to take the bag but he stoped her...

R: aaj meri engagement hai...tum ruko ge nahi? (i am sorry armaan...i really am)
A: I am sorry lekin mera pyaar itna mahan bhi nahi hai ke me apne Pyaar ko apni aankho ke samne kisi aur ka hote dekh saku...

with that he turned around and tears fell out of his eyes...even the Riddhima started crying...she wanted to stop him and wanted to tell him that she is nothing without him...but she couldnt...she just couldnt...

both went seperate ways...with broken hearts...bleeding hearts...no one knows what destiny has planned for them...armaan just reached the door as is suddenly got opened and sid was standing there...he looked at first at armaan then at riddhima...both brushed their tears away...

S: armaan plzzz yr...mere liye aaj bohot hi khushi ka din hai...tu mat jaa yr...tu apne bhai ke liye itna bhi nahi kar sakta kya...
A: sid tu janta hai ke me tere liye apni jaan bhi de sakta hu...lekin jo tu mujhse karne ko keh raha hai...wo me nahi kar sakta...
S: nahi armaan me nahi chahta ke tu jaye...tujhe papa ki kasam...tu aaj kahi nahi jaayega...plzzz
A: sid lekin...
S: nahi me kuch nahi sun raha...riddhima baby...tum mere saath chalo gi...
R: hmmm

riddhima walked past armaan to sid...he put his hand on her waist...armaan saw that and got angry...so he turned around...

S: chal jaldi se tayar hoke aaja neeche...hum tera intezaar kar rahe hai...

sid left with riddhima...and armaan was again left alone in his room...now he cant even leave...he has to be here...he washed his face and then changed...he left for the hall where the engagement party was helt...armaan greated his stepmom cum mom...she hugged him and said...

Ananya: Armaan aaj to bohot aacha din hai...kyu na tum koi aacha sa gana sunao...plzzz bohot time ho gaya hai tumhari awaz sune...aaur aaj to bohot aacha mauka bhi hai...plzzz mana mat karna...plzzz...aur waise bhi mene tumhare liye ek ladki pasand ki hai...wo bhi yahi pe hai...ha wo rahi akshita...akshita sharotry...she is sooo beautifull...me chahti hu ke tum usko aache se jaano...okee beta...
A: jee mom zarur...

armaan moved to the stage and took a guitar...he knew his mom also wished him to get married...but what can he do...he already lost his heart to riddhima...now he dont have a heart anymore...he is sorry for akshita but he cant get married to her...and he will tell her that as soon as possible...he stared playing the guitar...( i think this song suits very well here...soo plzzz listen to it - Tu Pyaar Hai Kisi Aur Ka)

La lala lalala lalala hm hm hmm hmm
ohhh lala lala la la hmm hmm hm hmm

(Armaan started singing and looked directly in riddhimas eyes)

Tu pyaar hai kisi aur ka
Tujhe chaahtaa koi aur hai
tu pyaar hai kisi aur ka
tujhe chahta koi aur hai

( he played with his guitar and took round on the stage)

Tu pasand hai kisi aur ki
tu pasand hai kisi aur ki
Tuzhe maangtaa koi aur hai

tu pyaar hai kisi aur ka
tujhe chahta koi aur hai

( armaan left the stage still looking at riddhima and moved to akshita and started dancing with her)

Kaun apna hai
Kya begaanaa hai
Kya hakeekat hai
Kya fasaanaa hai

(he tried to smile but he wasnt able to do it...even akshita saw that but she stayed quit)

kaun apna hai
kya begaana hai
kya haqeeqat hai
kya fasaana hai

(riddhma felt so much pain...seen him in pain...she tried to controll but a tear dropped out of her eyes)

Ye jamaane mein Kisne jaanaa hai
yeh zamane me kisne jaana hai

(armaan again looked at riddhima and saw the tears in her eyes...seeing that he got tears in his eyes too...riddhima saw that and she grabbed sids arm so that armaan wouldnt doubt and smiled to him)

Tu najar mein hai kisi aur ki
Tuzhe dekhtaa koi aur hai
tu nazar me kisi aur ki
tujhe dekhta koi aur hai

(sid took riddhima also to the dance floor and started dancing with her...armaan looked at her and then at sid...then again at her...obiously akshita was seeing that all)

tu pasand hai kisi aur ki
tujhe maangta koi aur hai
tu pyaar hai kisi aur ka
tujhe chahta koi aur hai

(armaan tried to concentrate on akshita and danced with her...but he couldnt get riddhimas face out of his mind)

Pyaar mein aksar
Aisa hota hai
Koi hanstaa hai
Koi rotaa hai

(armaan moved to his mom and asked her for a dance...they both danced...he saw riddhima smiling and that hurted him again)

Pyaar mein aksar
Aisa hota hai
Koi hanstaa hai
Koi rotaa hai

Koi paataa hai
Koi khotaa hai
Koi paataa hai
Koi khotaa hai

(sid excanged riddhima with his mom...so now riddhima was dancing with armaan...she tried to not to look into his eyes...but she couldnt manage it...his word where affecting her tooo much)

Tu jaan hai kisi aur ki
Tujhe jaantaa koi aur hai
Tu jaan hai kisi aur ki
Tujhe jaantaa koi aur hai

(armaan tightned his grip on her waist so that she couldnt try to move away from him...but again sid came and took her away from him)

tu pasand hai kisi aur ki
tujhe maangta koi aur hai

tu pyaar hai kisi aur ka
tujhe chahta koi aur hai

(riddhima got again in sids arms and started singing...she couldnt held herself back...Armaan also started dancing with akshita)

hmmm hmmm ahhh ahhh
hmmm aahhh laa lala la la

Sochti hoon main
Chup rahoon kaise
Dard dil kaa yeh
Main sahoon kaise

Sochti hoon main
Chup rahoon kaise
Dard dil kaa yeh
Main sahoon kaise

Kashmakash mein hoon
Ye kahoon kaise
Kashmakash mein hoon
Ye kahoon kaise

(she looked deep into his eyes and then sung further...her next words were just for him...but she couldnt say it to him...so she again looked at sid and then looked at the floor)

Mera humsafar bas ek tu
Nahin doosraa koi aur hai
Mera humsafar bas ek tu
Nahin doosraa koi aur hai

(armaan starts to sing again)

tu pasand hai kisi aur ki
tujhe maangta koi aur hai

tu pyaar hai kisi aur ka
tujhe chahata koi aur hai

lala al al la la
lal lala la ala

the song ended and everyone clapped...because armaan had such a soulful voice...now it was time for the engagement...riddhima and sid excanged the rings...armaan was looking all the time at riddhima...hoping that she will back out...but she didnt...as the engagement was over he left to the garden and akshita followed her...riddhima saw that but kept quit...

in the garden armaan was looking at the sky when akshita tapped him from behind...
A: ohhh tum...tum yaha...
AK: haa armaan...mene tumse baat karni hai...
A: haa kaho na...
AK: hamare rishte ke bare me...aunty chahti hai ke...
A: i know akshita...but i am sorry me yeh shaadi nahi kar sakta...me kisi aur se pyaar karta hu...
AK: aur wo tumhari nahi ban payi...right...
A: tumhe kaise pata...
AK: armaan jis tarha se tum gaa rahe the...use to kisi ko bhi pata chal jayega...wese wo ladki bohot lucky hai jisse tum pyaar karte ho...actually me tumhe yehi kehne aayi thi...ke me tumhare aur us ladki ke beech me nahi aana chahte...me tumse shaadi nahi karna chahti...
A: thanks for understanding akshtia...tum ne to meri tension hi dur kar di...
AK: nothing to thank armaan...me duaa karungi ke tumhe tumhara pyaar zaruur mile...

akshita left from there and she also denied the marriage proposal of armaan...here armaan was standing in the garden and was thinking what he could do next...he new he cant stay here anymore...riddhima had sayed her decision...now he wont interfere here life anymore...he could all his life with the memories which they spend together...she just wished her all the happines in this world...

on the other sight...riddhiam wasnt feeling at all better...she was feeling like she is the worst person in this world...armaan loved her soo much...it was visible throughout his performance...

sooo here is the first part...really hope that u all liked it...waiting for ur comments and likes...

with loads of love AMNA ❤️

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nilusoni

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Posted: 10 years ago

thats awesome part

very emotional for ar

i hope ar come together soon

thanx for pm

plz pm me for next part

continue soon

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Amna

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nilusoni
thats awesome part
very emotional for ar
i hope ar come together soon
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next part
continue soon

heheheh i am glad that u liked it yr...means a lot to me

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palak sharma

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Posted: 10 years ago

hmm awesome starting but little bit emotional
poor armaan he is so upset with all this
hmm but ridhz is doing all this
but i m sure there is a reason behind it nd she still love armaan
interesting nd fab start
loved to read more