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Scene starts in Bhalla house where Ruhi just came home.

Ishita and Mrs Bhalla are busy making preperations for some pooja .While Mrs Bhalla is making list of recquired things and Ishita noting them down.Ruhi tries to speak to Ishita but Ishita was busy and so Ruhi goes to her room little annoyed .Ishita observes this and makes an excuse and goes and meet Ruhi.

Ishita "Kyaa huan.Ruhi itnaa naaraz kyon hain?"

Ruhi "Aap kyaa kar rahee thee?"

Ishita "Kall karvachouth hain naa issliyen main aur mummyji tayyari kar rahen hain?"

Ruhi "Karvachouth kyaa hotha hain?"

Ishita "Pooja hain.Yahan patnee pathee kee lambee aayu key liyen upavaas rakthee hain."

Ruhi "Ishima hindi mey bolo naa." Confused with heavy vocabulary

Ishita smiling "Kyaa bathaun.Kall ladkiyan apnee pathee key liyen full day fasting karegi.Full day kuch nahee kyaayegi no water anything.Aur ladkey unko gifts dethey hain"

Ruhi "Kyon?"

Ishita "Belief hain kee aisey karney sey pathee ka aayu lambheee hothee hain aur health bhee accha hotha hain."

Ruhi "Sachee."

Ishita "Muchee."

Ruhi "Ishimaa aap bhee tomorrow kuch naheen khaogi no drinking water ?"

Ishita "Han."

Ruhi "Papa key liyen?"

Ishita little conscious "papa key liyen nahee tho kiskey liyen rakhoongi."

Ruhi "Ishima kall papa bhee aapko gift deega."

Ishita "Mujhey naheen patha aapka papa key dimaak mey kyaa chal rahan hain bhagawan hee jaaney."

Ruhi "Main papa ko bol doongi kee kall wo aapko big big gift dey."Ruhi with determination.

Ishita smiling at Ruhi .Ishita leaves outside to meet Mrs Bhalla and then they continue preparation.

After few minutes all are busy and Ruhi eagerly waiting outside .

Raman comes back from office seriously pissed.

Ruhi sees Raman and goes to him running with Ruhi Bhalla pose.

Raman understood Ruhi was waiting for him and has a mission to accomplish.

Ruhi "Papa hum bahaar jarahen hain."

Ishita comes there and notices Ruhi's Ruhi Bhalla pose and understood that Raman has to face his genetical feature stubbornness.

Ishita "Ruhi Papa abhee ayen hain pehley unhey ready honey doo baadh mey jaana bahaar."

Raman "Rehney do Ishita." Facing Ruhi "Kahaan jaana hain aapko.?"

Ishita signs Ruhi not now and Ruhi does similarly.

Ruhi "Papa aap ready ho jaon hum bahaar jayengey ."

Raman gets ready and then he gets to know about karwachouth and understood what Ruhi meant.

Then when they were having dinner Raman gets a phone call and Raman attends it.

Ishita observes that Raman was angry on phone .

Raman "Mujhey pehley bathaana chahiyen thaa iss tarah last minute mey bathakar kyaa prove karna chahte hain."

Raman "Mujhey bhee kaam hothey hain main unlogon key liyen apnaa kaam naheen chodunga ."

Raman was very angry by the end of phone call and everyone notices it.

Mr Bhalla "Kyan huan ?"

Raman pissed off "Kall mujhey Mumbai jaana hain."

Everyone are shocked and Ishita became sad immediately.

Raman "Investors ney meeting rakhaa hain mujhey attend karnaa hoga."

Raman was equally disappointed and finishes dinner and goes to his room.

Ishita comes there after few minutes and she is trying to behave normally.Ishita wanted Raman to be with her on that day as it is her first karvachouth.

Next day Raman woke up early and was seeing Ishita doing all rituals happily.But Raman noticed some sadness in her face .

After few minutes Raman gets a chance to speak to Ishita alone.

Raman "Ishita I am sorry .Main bhee jaana naheen chahtha hun lekin"

Ishita "Kaam important hain."

Ishita "Main janthee hun Raman issliyen main aapsey kuch nahee kehrahen hun.I am ok main manage karloongi."

Ishita "Flight kitnee bhajey hain?"

Raman " shaam saadey chaar bajey."

Ishita "Theek hain aapkey bag pack kardethee hun."

She goes and packs his luggage.Raman goes to his office still disappointed over the meeting.

Raman reaches home and then takes his luggage and leaves .He was very sad as he is missing the Ishita's first Karwachouth.

It is around seven thity every one ready to go to terrace as it was for moon to show his face.Romi was busy taking the video of the pooja as Raman told him to do so atleast he can watch Ishita doing rituals later.

Romi then gets a call and he gets tensed and shocked and he immediately switches TV on.

In Tv their was a news that Mumbai flight was crashed and most of the passengers died.

Ishita listens this and was shattered by listening this .

Ishita was broken listening that Raman's flight got crashed .All are shocked and they are trying to confirm the news from their known contacts.

Ishita was not speaking anything and she was crying and Ruhi was crying heavily listening her father met with such serious accident.

Mr Bhalla confirms that Raman has taken boarding pass means he would have boarded.

Ishita could'nt see anything as tears filled her eyes and Iyer's also get sad listening this .

Ruhi who was near door gets shocked seeing something.

She gets up and rushes to that side .

Ruhi "Papa." Raman was coming their carrying his bag and gift.

Everyone hears Ruhi calling Papa and sees outside Ishita was still in shock.

Ruhi "Papa aapko kuch naheen huan.Aap theek hon."

Raman "Mujhey kyaa hoga .Main tho tumhaarey saaamna khada hun."

Romi "Bhai aap thek hain.Bhai aapney flight board naheeb kiyaa."

Raman "Naheen.Tum sab log ko kyaa ho gaya.Mujhey kyaa hooga."

Mr Bhalla "Tumhaara flight crash huyee thee.Humey laga kee tum bhee flight mey thaa."

Raman gets shocked listening this feels sighed that he was safe now.

Raman goes inside immediately to tell everyone that he is safe .

Ishita sees Raman standing before her and rushes to him and hugs him still crying.

Raman dint stop her and let her cry till she comes back to senses.

Then he stops Ishita and clears her tears and calms her down.

Ishita "Aap flight pey naheen they."

Raman "Han naheen thaa.Mujhey boarding pass leney key baad patha chala kee aaj sirf get to gether hain aur meeting kall dopahar hain."

Raman "Fir mainey socha kee main yaheen rahun.Ishita ka pehlaa karwachouth hain tho fir yeh kabhee naheen aayegi na."

Raman "Fir mainey decide kiyaa ke meeting kall hain tho kall he jaaonga uss get to gether mujhey naya kyaa sab loh ko tho bahuth baar mil chukka hun."

Raman "Accha huan main waapas aaney ke liyen decide kiya."

Mrs Bhalla "Toh ab thak kaha rehgaya that thu."

Raman"Main Ishita key liyen gift khareedney gaya tha."

Everyone becomes happy and Ishita was still holding Raman's hand more tightly don't want to loose him again and then Romi reminds them about breaking the fast and all leave to terrace.

Ishita completes the rituals and then Raman breaks her fast making her to drink water.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Scene starts in terrace with Ishita completing her fast as Raman is making her eat some sweet but she is completely restless.She still is in shockk of listening Raman's death news.

While all are doing their pooja.Ishita is still holding Raman's handly as tight as possible.Ruhi came out of it quickly as she don't know what really death is and fear of loosing someone near by.Raman is Ruhi's father and she have a mother too who will take care of her .

Ruhi was playing happily down side .Ishita is not out of it.Her mind is preoccupied by voices of news that plane is crashed.

Raman was lucky today .He wanted so deeply to be with Ishita in her first karwachouth.He took the smallest chance to avoid meeting and came back for Ishita and now it is what saved his life.

Raman and Ishita were standing in terrace waiting for others to complete their pooja.Ishita suddenly faints and falls down.Raman who was beside her catches her immediately and rushes downside carrying her in his arms.

Ishita still is holding Raman's hand even in unconsciouss state.Raman takes her to their room.Everyone gathers around and were tensed for Ishita.

Mr Bhalla "Humey bahar jaana chahiyen.Naheen tho Ishita ko saas lena mushily ho jaayega.Raman hain naa yaha khyal rakhney.Romi tum doctor ko phone karna"

Mrs Bhalla "Raman Ishita ka khyal rakhna .Koi jaroori ho tho humey batha dena."

Iyers also agree for this all go outside.

Mr Bhalla "Bichaari ka kyaa haalath ho gayee hogi.Subaha sey kuch khaaya bhee nahee ."

Mrs Bhalla "Ishita uskey wajaha sey nahee .Uss accident key wajaha se behosh huin."

Mihika "Ek hee pal mey sab kuch khatam ho gaya hotha .Jeeju uss flight mey sach mey hoyhey tho.I cant even imagine"

Mihir "Bhool jaa uss baath ko.Abh sab kuch theek hain naa."

Mrs Bhalla "Sab kuch kaha theek hain?Abh Ishita yeh baath kabhee naheen bhool payegi.Ussney Raman ka mouth ka news suna .Yeh itnaa asaan sey naheen bhool payegi."

Mihika "Jeeju usskey saath hain naa.Jaldhee sab normal ho jaayega."

Mihir "Bhai ko kall meeting hain unhey jaana padega."

All are tensed again.They don't want to take risk again by sending Raman .

Raman was in his room he is tensed for Ishita and he is sitting beside her and Ishita is still holding his hand.She don't want to loose him.

After few minutes doctor comes there .

She checks Ishita .

Doctor "BP bahuth low hain.Shaayd vrath key wajaha sey ho saktha hain.Lekin itnaa jyaada."

Raman "Ussney mera death news suna hain."

Doctor "What ?"

Raman "Mumbai ka flight crash huan na.Ussmey mujhey bhee hona tha main last minute mey plan badala.Yaha sab log ko yeh laga kee main bhee flight mey thaa."

Doctor "Shock lagee hogi.Theek hain main kuch tablets suggest karthee hun.Aap khyaal rakhiyega."

Doctor leaves.

Raman know one thing about death for sure.Death is not a trouble for dead person or person going to die.But it is hell for the living person who lost some one.

Mrs Bhalla have three more kids along Raman.She may be sad but it will reduce as she have there more.Same for Mr Bhalla.Ruhi has Ishita to take care of her in Raman's absence.Romi and others have two more siblings.

But for Ishita Raman is her husband.Their is no relation beside husband and wife where there is uniqueness.No one can take his place and it is beauty of that relation and a bain if it is to loose some one.

Raman gets a call from Tandon.

Mr Tandon "Thabk god tum theek hOn."

Raman "Main Ishita key liyen rukha tha.Usska pehla karwachouth thaa.Soch kee seedha kall he aonga"

Tandon "Bhabhi ka vrath ney tumhey bachadiya."

Tandon "Bhabhi ko phone dena "

Raman "Who so raheen hain.Shock mey hain.Sab ko laga kee main flight mey thaa aur main mar gaya thaa."

Raman "Abh thak shock mey hain."

Tandon "I can understand.Tum kall meeting key liyen aa rahe ho?"

Raman "Ishita ka haalath kharaab hain.Main shaayad naheen aa paonga."

Tandon "Tum waheen rahna .Meeting main handle karloonga.Bahbhi ko tumhaari jaroori hain.Good night."

After few minutes Ishita opens her eyes and sees Raman is sleeping beside her as she held his hand tightly and releases it.But again immediately holds it back.

Raman wakes up after this.

Raman "Tum theek hon ?"

Ishita "Aap theek hain?"

Raman "Main yaheen hum tum so jao main kahee naheen ja rahan hun."

Ishita sleeps but she has no intention of leaving Raman's hand.

She don't even want to leave Raman for a minute.She need Raman to be befor her every moment.

Ishita "Raman aaj main bhee yaheen soungee aap bhee yahee sojaon."

Raman sleeps after few minutes but Ishita was wide awke looking at Raman .She kept her looks on Raman steady and silent and for sure as if she is guarding Raman.

After few minutes Ishita also slips to sleep.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice post ... pkz continue soon ... and pm me plz ... :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice continue soon..waiting for next...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nyc.. 👏
hey i've readed 1st prt earlier also.. 😕
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice update...pm me fr nxt...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww...
Awesome. Good one.
Raman's dialogue was cool - usne mera death news suna hoga...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: vidya_prasad

Aww...

Awesome. Good one.
Raman's dialogue was cool - usne mera death news suna hoga...

seriously you are reading all my stories.
Buddy.
There are lot better ones .
thanks for selecting mine.

If you want to read .
READ SWSY it is the best in forum.

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