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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 57




" Aashkon Se Keh Paon Na..."

The reason of his silence, not even his tears can justify, not even his tears can heal those scars on her soul caused by his silence.

There was so many things which were to be said but their were no words which could describe nor were the silences which would explain them.


Kyu na bole mose mohan
Kyu hai roothe roothe mohan yu
Kaise manau haye kaise manau

What mistake had she committed that she got only his silence when she needed his words?

What sin had she committed that, she always found even his shadow, miles away from her?

What wrong did she do that, he never confessed to her about his feelings?

Unn bin kate na raina
Unn bin aave na ik pal chaina
Unn bin jiyu to kaise mai jiyu haye

But still, so much was there love that, nights didn't pass without his dreams, and those dreams always made her pillow get wet with her fiery tears.

So much was her trust in him, that even a second of distance would snatch away her serenity and calm. But the hindrance being that, this cycle was repeated in every passing second.

She knew she had to live without him, but how, not even the destiny had the answer for this.

But what happened at last to all of this?

Her love seemed doomed to her, her trust in him got broken and belief that she had to live without him, grew stronger.

Bahe naina, bhare more naina, jhare more naina
Mohe naina, sune nahi kehna, bhare more naina

She wanted to stop crying for him. But betraying were her tears, which did not hear her and swelled in her eyes. In the eyes of the fire-born, tears of fire were swelling only due to the pain of her love and his silence.

Nainam chhindanti shastrani
Nainam dahati pavakah
Na chainam kledayantapo
Na shoshayati marutah

"How true were Madhav's words?", pondered the great warrior who had the privilege to hear these excerpts from the greatest book of Dharm, Bhagavad Gita from the Bhagwan himself.

Neither can soul be harmed by any weapon, nor can be burnt by fire. Neither can it be wetted by all-cleansing water, nor can it be touched by wind.

But it can be scarred with love.

It can be cut with the dagger made of pain of love.

It can be wet by the tears of blood run due to your beloved's silence.

It can be dried by the solitude which was found in their love, to make the soul lifeless.

Ha naino ke dware aane ke vaade
Bandhe aise bolo kahe
Chaukhat pe dil ki aahat rakhi hai
Tako pe hai tohre saye
Unn bin unhe manaye
Unn bin kabhi jo unko rijhaye
Unn bin chale hai mora ye jiya haye

The seven sacred vows of marriage, were what which bound him to her. But those vows were never fulfilled. Those unfulfilled vows, which made her distance herself from him, who was her soulmate. So much was that distance that, in that course she lost herself and distanced herself from her soul.

Her heart resonated with his silence, which later gave to their parting footsteps.

Only their shadows remained with each other, and that too bound in the dark prisons of their heart, where their beloved's face was envisioned, till the end of the heart itself.


Ha komal badi hai saasan ki dori
Roothe se bhi toot jaye
Bavan tarah se ji ko manaya
Khoje arjun tohri raahe

Now after the distance increased, pain strengthened, Arjun was on the lookout for his beloved.

Her grief-stricken face seemed to break him every second. But alas, that same face came in front of him eyes, every second.

His life had always depended on her. And now without her, the will of being alive seemed to weaken in him.

As his every way to placate Yagya failed, his will further decreased.

But even in such weak will, Arjun was searching for the path to obtain his Yagya's shadow. But what he didn't know was that the path of gaining her was also the way of losing her.

Unn bin unhe na payu
Unn bin unhe mai karva lagau
Unn bin unhe na mora ji lage haye


It was a do or a die situation for Arjun now. He decided that Yagya will either accept her love for him and confess or he will distance himself from her, forever. After all, behind her smile of hers was his smile.

" Subhi, Is it possible for you to make Yagya meet me at the terrace of your house tonight?" asked Arjun, as he took Subhi's help and his Madhav's help in this.

Subhi had reluctantly agreed as she knew Yagya was very much hurt in this process but she knew that her brother, who know everything knew what the right thing was. And will make it happen at all costs.

Will this confrontation bring a change in their equation?

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One more extra tough chapter for me! Meri hi aansu nikal gaye, likhte likhte!

Hope you liked it!

Please comment and like!

P.S: Thanks a lot Angela for suggesting this song! It was challenging for me to write but still when I did it, it was amazing, I guess!







Edited by Yagyaseni - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Now I am going to dance! Because hello? I am first!!!!😎
Now, coming back to the update which I unresed in a matter of what three hours maybe?😉
Sorry, I got carried away in reading an ArShi FF so I couldn't even write the update but tomorrow I'll pakka send it to you!
Anyway, the update was beautifully penned down Yagya! I absolutely loved it!!👏
The song that you chose was amazing! I really like that song and it suited the update perfectly! As if it was meant for this update!
You know, I could feel the pain that they were going through while reading it!
It is not always that you feel it but the update was wonderful and obviously your writing made it even more amazing!
So intense yet powerful and emotional at the same time!😳
Absolutely brilliant update! But I must say it isn't easy for the readers even to forgive Parth's silence throughout their life and I can imagine how difficult it must be for you too!
But the way you described Arjuna's POV in the last update was truly, truly commendable!😃
Waiting for the next update eagerly! Post soon Yagya!
P.S. - I am so happy you posted so fast!!!🥳
Edited by 8520NK - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
RES
My song up here!
Edited by Angela_Grokes - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Aaj main yeh do posts unres hongi, yeh khayal dil se nikaal doongi!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow what a flawless update
U penned it beautifully

I m still in its speelbound yr u nailed it
U truly gave justice to the update

The song added more beauty to the updte



Excited for nxt

Updte soon
Love u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yesterday you made me an emotional mess and today you made me a crying fountain... Things you do to your readers. *sigh*
After a deep insight into Arjun's internal tumult, Yagya's part of the story intensified the remorse of guilt-ridden silent Arjun.
Where silence can sometimes prove a strong pillar, it can fairly lead us to dreading situations. How ironical! Arjun's silence was meant to maintain composure yet it brought turmoils instead.
I've never been in love with anyone, except my family ofcourse! So the far-fetched and intense emotions are beyond my mind to comprehend yet this update made me feel things I've never felt.
I just hope that the immense love veiled under the unyielding pain surfaces to the front and somehow manages to soothe their aching hearts.
I know it's easier said than done but still after so much of pain it is only apt that Yagya choses her life, her heart. She has suffered so much to an extent where her soul is broken beyond repair but then love does miracles. I hope that it happens!!

Meh! I seriously need to consult a dictionary to discover new phrases and words to praise you for every time you render me speechless.
Update the next part pretty soon please!!!

Regards
Keya
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: newmoon18

Wow what a flawless update
U penned it beautifully

I m still in its speelbound yr u nailed it
U truly gave justice to the update

The song added more beauty to the updte



Excited for nxt

Updte soon
Love u
Keep smiling

Thanks a lot, darling! Extremely honored!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -foreverhers-

Yesterday you made me an emotional mess and today you made me a crying fountain... Things you do to your readers. *sigh*
After a deep insight into Arjun's internal tumult, Yagya's part of the story intensified the remorse of guilt-ridden silent Arjun.
Where silence can sometimes prove a strong pillar, it can fairly lead us to dreading situations. How ironical! Arjun's silence was meant to maintain composure yet it brought turmoils instead.
I've never been in love with anyone, except my family ofcourse! So the far-fetched and intense emotions are beyond my mind to comprehend yet this update made me feel things I've never felt.
I just hope that the immense love veiled under the unyielding pain surfaces to the front and somehow manages to soothe their aching hearts.
I know it's easier said than done but still after so much of pain it is only apt that Yagya choses her life, her heart. She has suffered so much to an extent where her soul is broken beyond repair but then love does miracles. I hope that it happens!!

Meh! I seriously need to consult a dictionary to discover new phrases and words to praise you for every time you render me speechless.
Update the next part pretty soon please!!!

Regards
Keya

I am quite a torture as writer!! 😉Not only pain, I will write intense romance also!

Silence can prove to be both boon or bane, depending on the person! And in this case it has been a bane!
I am truly honored, dear! But sometimes even in family there are intense emotions, like I saw in the case of my bestie!
Love cannot be veiled, not even by pain! Yeah, take it as a hint!
Yagya will choose the best, dear! Love can't be hidden! But she has been truly broken by her soulmate beyond any repair!

Can I please get a glass of water to calm my self after such a brilliant comment, which made me feel top of the world? Truly honored, dear!

Thanks a lot, darling! NExt update can come anytime! Depends on how fast I get the comments!
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Posted: 10 years ago
oh sweety what should I say?? I'm speechless once again..
ur updates always touch my heart ..the emotions u put is always flawless... 👍🏼
the update itself is divine.. n as I say always that musical updates r meant for u 👏
waiting for the next part excitedly so better update soon yagya
love u for writing such beautiful updates 🤗
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