RaRa SS~ Pehli Nazar Chapter 1 Page 2 11/14/15

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Hey Guys, I'm starting a new SS on Ramshrey-Rachita- Pehli Nazar...It's like Ramashrey falls in love fith Rachita at first sight and how he goes mad soon making Rachita mad too!😛
A cute love story...Will put my first update by midnight!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: NiRajCraZey

Hey Guys, I'm starting a new SS on Ramshrey-Rachita- Pehli Nazar...It's like Ramashrey falls in love fith Rachita at first sight and how he goes mad soon making Rachita mad too!😛

A cute love story...Will put my first update by midnight!

Great!!!!l so eagerly waiting for it...😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Will post the prologue by tomorrow :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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congo dear
best of luck for your story and waiting patiently 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 1- Humse Dosti Karengi?

Amaya and Jazz woke up with disturbed minds from last night where Sneha declared them not returning to Mumbai. Rachita seemed to grasp it so she was quite normal with it. Yet, Rachita too wasn't jolly with the fact. She spoke to Amaya and Jazz. They unwillingly listened.

Rachita- Amu and Jazz, Tumhe Samajhna parega ki ab Banaras hi humara future hai. Mujhe pata hai ki tum logo ko mom se naraz ho par tumhe mom ki haalat samajhni padegi. Humara Mumbai me koi nahi. Be happy ki hahahaha pe Sab tumhe itna taunt kar rahe. Aur Mumbai toh bahut influential Jagah hai. Double the pain. Mein bhi naraz hoon par mom ki baat sun kar unhe atleast 2-3 months do na. Uske liye bhi yeh difficult hai. Please.

Amaya- Rachi Di. Aap Itne sweet ho. Hum koshish Karenge ...Hain na Jazzp
Jazz- Yes Amu!
Rachita hugged them both but after they left, Rachita somehow knew it was nearly impossible for those two.
Sneha- Rachu...Neeche Aao
Rachita comes down.
Rachita - Ji Mom...Kya Hua.
Sneha- Amu samjhi.
Rachita- Koshish zaroor kar rahi hai woh...
Lekin it seems difficult.
Sneha- Samay ke saath Sab ho jayega. Mein ek list deti hoon. Dukaan se kuch saman laa do ...
Rachita- Ji Mom... Thodi der me nikaltii hoon

Rachita gets ready and goes to Ramashrey's shop. Luckily, Ramshreys Dad wasn't there.
Rama- Hi Rachitaji. Kaise Ho app ...
Rachita- Mein theek hoon..Actually mujhe kuch saman chahiye tha. Yeh lo list
Rama- woh mein dikhane ko saaf kar raha tha. Yeh Raju bhi naa. Sab Bhiker Diya..
Rachita- Laaon mein madad kar deti hoon...Aaj kal logo ko hygiene ki padi hi nahi..
Rachita ties her hair into a bun as Rama admires her. Rama instructs Rachita as well as he works himself.
Rama- Woh aap, painting koh dust kar denge please? Yeh rahi seedi.
Rachita nods as Rama hand the ladder. He suddenly takes it back and dusts it. Rachita smiles. She stands on the ladder and starts dusting the paintings. She reaches her hand higher to clean a spider web when she slips. Luckily, Ramashrey holds her from falling. They have an intense eye lock. They finally get back to their senses. After a lot of Aachhoos and sneezes, the work gets over. They realise they took 45 minutes just to clean a room.
Rama- Rachita Ji, I am sorry. Woh Humne apko khamakhan wait karwaya
Rachita- Its ok Ramashreyji. And please call me Rachita. No formalities
Ramashrey- Ek sawaal tha Aapse...
Rama scratches his head
Rachita- Kya hua Ramashryji
Rama- umm...kya aap Humari dost banegi..Actually humare saare dost Humse darte hein. Hum Itne saaf sutre hai isiliye.
Rachita- mein bhi yahin pooch ne waali thi. Woh meri behen Amaya, woh toh mera mazaak udaati rehti hai. Toh, friends?
She brings forward her hand.
Rama shakes her hand.
Rama- Friends!

Precap: Coffee pe chale? Why not?

So here's my first chapter of my SS Pehli Nazar...Please comment and tell me how it is..Please...Will try updating soon!

-Anjali

P.s.- Like the next post if you want a pm :)
P.s.s.- My story banner is there in the next post too!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Like this post for a pm..Here's my banner...Pic credits to Alia_Sehgal (Love you Alia!)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful update Anjali!

When two neat freaks meet, saaf safai is bound to happen 😆

And the intense eye lock! Haye!

Keep writing!


Parigya :)

P.S. The banner is really very pretty Alia ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks Parigya...I made the banner but Alia gave me the pics ...She didn't make the banner...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I am in love with this couple...cuteness just oozes from them.
You have given a fitting welcome to the cleanliness freaks...surely we are going to see them one day...in a such a situation.
Waiting for their first date ...(through your words).
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you Cherry! I just love Rama and Rachita's Jodi too much! Their just cuteness simplified. :p...Any suggestions on when should I update?

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