MG FF || MANGALYAM TANTUNANENA || CHAPTER 12 - PG 39- 02May2015 - Page 9

waiting for the next part dear

nice update...so somehow maan gets to see his gudiya or should we say gundi...what a sherni she is...maan cannot believe his gudiya is like this interesting isn't ... for someone who is so possessive of her things, how come geet is letting maan go and getting married to someone else, isn't he her her bunny...waiting to see what happened to make this happen and why is maan angry...no how can maaneet not be together..

very cute part poor maant wanted to see his little gudiya but couldnt geet is really a gundi she is so possisseve about her things she got angry because dev was on maans bed wow maan wished gudiya first very nice part thnx 4 update

hi thanks 4 updating! rocking fab update! Gundi Geet! Who wld have thought? Maam certainly shocked! wt wil happen to him? Gudiya n Maan meet! she thinks he is a thief n screams! Maan quietens her! he gies her a gift! Geet happy! she calls him bunny! update soon! well written!

Originally posted by: DAZZLINDD

PART 2

So Maan at this age itself is in the " Angry young maN " Mode

Poor siblings are scared of their Hitler brother

Geet s fav Cake 😉 so Maans child heart also has the soft corner for Geet

Maan desperate to Meet his Geet 😊

Ps : Is this u r first writing ??

|| Chapter 4 ||

4 years later

Daadima said seriously pointing at yash "Yash bas kehdiya na hum...bas kehdiya. Hum iss baat pe aur behaj nahi karna chahate hain. Maan kahi nahi jaarahey hain."

Yash "Per maa aap samjte q nahi? Hum maan ki papa hain. Uski balahi keliye hi hum hey phaisla liya hain." Yash turned to his father harsh pleading him to make daadi understand.

Yash "Papa please aap tho samjayega na maa ko. Hum chaar(4 years) saal se hey baat taalthey aarahey hain. Hum maan ke balahi keliye hey kehrahey hain. Maan iss ghar ka bada beta hain aur unpey bahut se jimmeydhariya utana parega aur Aagey jaakey maan ko hi ghar company sabb sambal na parega. Hum maan ko boarding school isilye bejna chahate hain q ki use bahar ki jindigi ki esaas karwana chahate hain. Taaki who apna kaam khudhh karsakey aur apne life ke important decisions khud lesakey. Sahi aur galat ka farak samaj sakey. And I know our maan never let us down. I just want him to have best in everything. I too love him papa and I want him to enjoy his freedom before he gets him self tangaled in responsibilities. "

Daadi listened to her son silently and understood his concern for maan's future and love to him. But still daadi couldn't digest the thought of maan going away far from home for studies. Daadi "Per maan abhi 9^th grade main hain. Abhi q ? aur ek saal hain na?"

Yash knew his maa very well. She is alredy half way to agreeing with his decision. He kneeled infornt of his maa where Savitri devi was sitting now on couch. Yash held her hands "Maa mujhe per barosa rakko na please. Hum maan ki balai chahate hain. London ke best school ko hum maan keliye choose kiya hain maa. Aur aapko patha hain..waha maan akela maisoos nahi karega q ki. Jasvindar ka beta Brijendar aur sanjay(sanjay Sharma) ke bacche bhi usi school main padrahey hain. Aur abhi(abhishek) bhi karan ko maan ke saat bejraha hian na. I know you are worried about him but chinta ki kohi baat nahi maa. Maan bahut samajdhar baccha hain Wo apne aap ko sambalega maa. Aap please maan ko samajadon na. He isn't talking to me ever since I told about this boarding school"

Daadi wanted to weep but she has to be strong for her bahu amrutha and pota maan. "hum une mananeki koshish karte hain. Per hum pehale hi kehrahey hain ..hum puri taraha se kush nahi hain iss paisle se"

Yash "Thank you maa. Hum maan ke jaane ki tayyariya karte hain." He looked at her farloon face "And I promise maa sirf kuch saal. I will make sure maan will be here for every single holiday."

Daadi smiled reluctantly at yash. Harsh watched them and sighed "Savitri Yash teek kehraha hain. Une pata hain maan keliye kya accha hain. Let him do best for his son."

Daadi sighed "Aap nahi samjrahey hain. Maan ki gussa bilkul aap ki tarha hain. Abb main usse kaise manaloon?"

Harsh"Meri gussa tumhare samane kabb tak tekegi." Harsh laughed on himself trying to make her mood light.

"Waise hi maan ke gusse ka ilaj kuch thoh hoga"

In maan's bedroom.

Now maan has his own bedroom for himself, bigger than before which he had to share with his siblings but same big bed (winks).

Maan sat at the big window looking out with his guitar in hand practising the chords. He was both angry and upset at the same time. He doesn't want to leave his family and go away for studies. It's not like he is weak in studies or something. He is a very bright and entuasitic student. His is IQ is almost equal to einstaine. He is very good at everything he does; study, sports and extra curricular activities. He is doing everything fine and he even takes care of his siblings exactly how his parents does when they are busy at work. How could he leave everything here and go to boarding school. Dadaji- daadima, maa-papa, dev, vicky, aliya, gudiya...Gudiya..how could he go far away from them. He was little bit more worried for gudiya's reaction to this news. Though they all goes to same National Public school, Delhi as maan does; maan, karan, raj are in higher primary(9^th grade) and dev, pari, vicky, geet, bani, aliya in primary school(7^th, 5^th, 3^rd and 1^st grade) and where as brijendar is already in lodon boarding school.

Maan heard his maa calling his name "Maan aap bhi takk soya nahi?" Amrutha brought a glass of badaam milk for him. She gave him the glass to drink and waited for him to finish in infront of her. "Dhudh peelo maan aur sojav. Kal school hain na aapki?"

Maan drank the milk witout uttering a word. "Maa meri London boarding school jaana zaroori hain ka?"

Amruth wiped his mouth with her sari pallu and brushed his hair back. Amrutha hugged maan close to her heart patting his head. " Maan apke papa jo bhi paisla liya hain..soach samjke hi liye hongey na beta. Ha mujhe aapko London bejna pasand nahi hain per aapko jaana parega beta heyhi apke balahi keliye. I will come to meet you once in a month. And you can come on holidays. And you know whats more difficult for me?"

Maan raised his head and looked at his maa with confusion. "How will I handle dev, Vicky and aliya without you? You know they only listen to you. And how will I make dev understand. You know he could never let you go if he learns this"

Maan hid his face in amrutha's arm thinking dev ko chodo maa, I will manage him but how will I handle gudiya? Woh mujhe jaane nahi degi ..kittna gussa karegi..uff

Amrutha made him to lay down on the bed "Now don't think too much. Abi 2 month's time hain aapko jaanekeliye. Now sleep. I have to check on dev, Vicky and aliya too. Gud night beta" she kissed his forehead before leaving.

Next day in the morning

Everyone sat around the table having breakfast. Harsh, Yash and Amrutha are dressed in formals and ready to leave for office. Daadi served children their breakfast making sure they finish it all. Since abhishek and maya are travelling to abroad for new business venture and expansion. They left kids at Khurana mansion for some time until they are back from the trip.

Daadima "Maan aap q nahi kharahey ho? Jaldi karo school keliye late horahi hain"

Yash looked at sober maan looking grumpy today. He tried to cheer him up "Maan ..after school you come to my office. We will go for a ride."

Maan "Ok Papa" replied without looking at him.

Dev & Vicky both said "Mujhe bhi jaana hain ride per"

Daadima gave a pat on both of their head "Finish your breakfast first. And after school you both have to go for karate class."

Karan "I have dance class later"

Pari " I have to go tution"

Bani "I want to sleep"

Aliya "Maa I want to go zoo"

Amrutha "Zoo ki ka zarurath hain...you live at zoo only with monkeys" said eyeing at dev, Vicky, pari and bani.

All laughs at them and leaves to their respective work.

At school, 10 minutes recess break.

Maan walked to recreation room thinking about his leaving in two months and things he has to do within those two months of time. Maan heard a familer giggle and smiled knowing exactly who that is. He followed the voice and saw a group of five girls. They looked like 3^rd or 4^th grade kids. His eyes fell on gudiya who was stading with those girls witsing her curly hair smiling talking. Maan thought she looked so cute today.

Girl 1 "mere paas ek pink teddy hain ...ek white hain aur ek orange color ki hain"

Girl 2 "Mere paas kitchen set toy hain aur ek Barbie bhi"

Girl 3 "Mere bayya ke paas itte sare video games hain"

Girl 4 "aur geet tumne nahi bataya ..tumhare paas kounse kounse toys hain"

Maan heard that and rolled his "TOYS.." ... "inne kya pata uske paas toy ki factory hain. Aur maine usse har ek birthday per different color ki teddy bears dete aaraha hoon" Maan waited for her to say that but what geet replied him more surprise.

Geet "Mere paas tho mera bunny hain" said cuetly.

Girl 3 "Bunny? Means rabbit?"

Geet "arre nahi re buddu bunny yani maan. Wo na mujhe hamesha naya naya toys aur bahut saare chocolates lakar dete hain. Bunny is best and my favourite too" her eyes were twinkling looking so dreamy to them.

Girl 2 "ohhh boyyy frienddd?"

Geet "wo ka hotha hain?" asked her confused.

Girl 2 hit her head "ka nahi khoun. Meri didi 9^th grade main hain aur uska ek boy friend hain jo hamesha chocolates aur gifts deta rehtha hain"

Geet looked at her more confused bunny tho muhje hamesha gifts, chocolates dete aaye hain per unnhone kabhi nahi kaha ke wo mere boy friend hain..

Girl 1 "yaar(girl 2) tu na hamey confuse matt kar"

Girl 1 "Yaar geet hey tera maan kaise diktha hain aur kaha hain"

Geet "kaise dekte ke ka matlab? Maan tho bunny jaise dekhte hain aur wo isi school main padte hain. Wo bhi 9^th grade main"

Girl 2 "Ohhh mujhe didi se poochna parega. Kahi tumahra bunny ...hi meri didi ka boy friend tho nahi"

Geet frowned at her for a moment to register what she said and when she realized..geet slapped her straight away "bunny sirf mereliye hain. How dare u to call my bunny bunny. Aur wo tumhari didi ka kohi boy friend woy friend nahi hain."

Girl 2 "tumne mujhe tappad mara?" asked her in disbelief.

Geet "ha tho? Sirf main usse bunny kaikey bhula sakthi hun. Kohi aur nahi. Wo sirf mere bunny hain ..samji? aur tum mere bunny ka insult matt karo ...tere didi ka boy firend bolkey"

Girl 4 "stop it both of you. Lets go to class.. our break is over"

Maan watched all this and gulped his saliva looking at gundi geet getting violent with her friend who called him as her sister's boy friend. He smiled himself for some reason. Something within him snapped and got light hearing geet...his gudiya calling his her bunny. He liked that. Some new esaas took over his mind body and soul but he failed to understand what this new feeling is. Gudiya is always special for him so do his siblings and friends in their own spaces but gudiya had touched that special place in his heart where no one can reach it.

Rajveer and karan came to maan to talk about coming exams and their combined studies. They decided to meet in weekends for the game and combined studies. Maan wanted to tell them about his boarding school but the time never seemed right for him to discuss it.

Couple of weeks passed and its kids exam preparation time. Raj has moved in to khurana mansion since they started their combined stuied for exams. So do geet has moved in with pari and bani since she was left alone at home often as her parents always busy at work and has no time to check with her studies. Harsh and savitri devi insisted Jasvindar and gowri to let them to allow kids to stay with them at mansion which will be convenient for both.

Today was geet, dev, vicky , pari and bani's final exam. They all did rocked and done well in exam, of course why wouldn't they? Under maan, karan and raj's hawk watch & tutuion, the effort has paid off. All came home and slept whole afternoon after heavy lunch.

Maan karan and raj got busy at studying for their exams which is due in next week. Maan don't need another revision since he has revised his syllabus 4 times well in advance and it makes 6 times with karan and raj.

Later in the eveing Pari, bani, geet, vicky and dev were watching a movie in which a hero has to go away to aborad for higher studies. And the heroin cries over his departure and hugs him tight crying and begging not to leave her and go. Since heroine's family don't want her to go with him before marriage. Hero coudnlt bear to see her tears and asks her to marry him to become his wife so that they can stay together forever. Heroine smiles at him and says yes for a marriage so that way he can take her with him to aborad.

Pari "Kya bakwas movie hain"

Dev "Q? accha tho tha"

Bani "mujhe uss heroine ki heels pasand aahi. I want it. I will ask mummy"

Pari and dev rolled their eyes at bani.

Vicky was uninterested in their talk or the movie was busy at playing tetris video game.

Geet was brushing her barbie's hair mean while listening to their talks.

Pari " aur nahi tho kya? Marriage ki kya jaroorut thi? Aise hi chalijathi hero ke saat padne keliye. "

Dev "aisa thodi na hota hian? Wo choti hain na aur uske ghar wale pareshan hongey uskeliye. Aur shaadi is the only solution for that problem. Like that way they both can stay together and never ever have to worry of being apart again."

Pari " Phir bhi...I don't undersand all this shaadi waadhi"

Bani "Dev bayya shaadi kaise karte hain? Iss movie main tho nahi dikhaya shaadi kaise hote hain"

Dev chocked on his orange juice and fumbled to answer her question. Dev remembered watching some Hollywood movie where a couple gets married when they kiss each other after exchanging rings.

Dev "Wo when a boy and girl kiss each other and exchange rings. It considered that they are married" he didn't explained where they have to kiss since he didn't considered its important.

Geet listen to them with more concentaration. She sits beside vicky on couch.

Since kids were young and they never attented any marriages or events.

Pari "Whatever I don't understand all this"

Vicky laughed at her comment "you never will be. Because its out of reach to your pea sized brain"

Pari gets irritated and throws a plate full of snacks at vicky. And like this one by one started to throw food on each other creating a mess around them. Gudiya was sitting on vicky's stomach pulling his hair, bani was covered in noodles from top to bottom. Dev is holding a pillow infront of him as a shield by getting poked by pari from fork.

They all stopped at once hearing maan's voice. Maan "Whats going on here? And what has just happened here?" looking at the mess.

Karan held pari to stop her from stabbing dev. Raj pulled geet away from vicky and made her to stand beside him.

Maan helped vicky to stand up picking out the noodles sticked in his hair. "Chote..you better explain this. I know you are the reason for this mess"

Vicky grinned at his bhai and ran off to his room to get into the shower first anyone before.

Maan looked at dev "dev you are in charge of this monkey army..can't u be more responsible?"

Dev was in verge of crying. He felt mesierable for failing at his responsibility and yet disappointing his brother maan.

Karan told pari to get cleaned up before she gets eaten by ants.

Maan searched for his ladli "Where is aliya?"

Dev replies immediately "Aliya went to shopping with daadima bhaaiii. "

Maan tells to dev looking at his scratch wound on his hand "go clean yourself first and then come to me. I will first aid you"

Raj "Gudiya when you are with vicky your mechivious gets to new level. I know you are also equally blamed for this mess. I will tell mamma and papa about this"

Gudiya made a cute pupy face and looked at maan for help. Maan looked at her pupy face and rolled his eyes.

Maan "Fine ..I am lettnin this go this time. No one talks about this to anyone or complaints. I mean no one." Said looking at karan and raj.

Both karan and raj said "fine..fine. I won't now stop looking at us like you will eat us alive"

Before daadima comes back from her shopping maan asked politely to house maids to clean up the mess and asks them to keep quite about it.

Gudiya comes close to maan and tugs at his shirt to bend down since geet is much shorter compared to maan.

Maan bends a little to hear what she has to say.

Gudiya "thank u bunny." And runs to the bedroom which she is shared with pari bani and aliya.

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Author's Note:

Hello

So how is the second update? Let me know what you all think of this update. I have a surprise for you all. hmm I am not reveling what's the surprise is? If I tell you what is it how it will be a surprise? hmm?.

Please press like button and comments must. your suggestions and concerns are always welcome. Take care you all until I get back with surprise.

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Jhaanvi

Next : (Surprise update waiting)

1. Geet is married

2. Geet in maan's shirt

3. Vicky said F word

4. Another Leap

5. Maan's girl friend