Neira FF: Gunshot

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Sakshithegreat

@Sakshithegreat

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hi guys I am just a silent reader and a huge fan of Neil and
Ragini. Please comment whether I should continue and like.

Goon: Leave or I will shoot her
Ragini steps back.Neil came by then.
Goon: Wow look even D.Neil came. Remember you didn't do my
wife's operation. I wont spare her now.
Ragini sees a rock and quickly throws it at the goon. The goon
gets injured and Ragini runs to Suhani
Suhani:Mom
The goon gets up and shoots for Suhani
A gunshot fires
Neil:Ragini

Ragini comes in the way and the bullet hits her. Police and Dr.Aman
come and arrest the goon. Neil rushes to Ragini
Neil:Ragini, Ragini. Wake up. Ragini please.
Dr.Aman gets an ambuleance and they go to the hospital

That's all for no0w. Tell me if you like it and should I continue

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Surbhi Sethia

@Surbhi_123

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Posted: 10 years ago

Wow!!! I so wish that it was Ragini who was shoot and not Suhani!!! The story would have been brilliant then and Neil would have been reminded of his lost love... Yeah Ragini should have been shot!

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roneeta

@ronitfan

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

Hey!!

Please continue this :D

Sounds interesting!

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Sakshithegreat

@Sakshithegreat

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

Thank you guys for your comments and your likes. Here goes

part 2

At Hospital

Neil: Doctor, Doctor

Neil rushes with Ragini in a stretcher

Neil:Nurse She got shot We need the doctor immediatly

Nurse: But Sir, the Doctor is on leave for a few days

Neil: I am a doctor. I'll do her operation

Nurse: But sir

Neil: If anything happens to her I'll sue your hospital

Nurse: Ok sir, Here are some document you need to sign

After Neil does all the paperwork, he starts doing Ragini's operation

After a few minutes he comes out. Ragini's family is there.

Nishi: Papa Papa. Is mom ok? Papa answer me

Ragini's mom: Nachiket answer me. Is Ragini okay?

Neil: Ma, Ragini is okay but,

Nishi: But what papa? What happened?

Neil: Because of the bullet, Ragini

Aman: Ragini what

Neil: Ragini's legs got paralyzed. She can't walk

Everyone: WhAT

Aarav: Can we see her

Neil: Not know. She's resting, She'll wake up in a little bit

After a while, Neil and the family go to see Ragini

Ragini: Aman sir, how is that girl

Aman: She's perfectly fine. She wants to thank you

Neil: Not now, Ragini is weak

Ragini tries to get up but she can't

Ragini: Why can't I get up?

Her Mom: Ragini um u see the thing is

Ragini: What happened Ma. Answer me

Aman: Ragini, um, because of the bullet, ur feet are paralyzed

Ragini: What! Ma please leave me alone for a little bit.

Everyone gets out of the room

Ragini's POV

When everyone told me about my legs, I couldn't break down

in front of them. I told them to leave and then I started crying. I

can't feel my legs.

Outside the ICU

Aman: Dr. Neil, how's ur daughter Suhani

Neil: How did you know that she's my daughter

Aman: The way you were worried for her, only a father could show

that

Neil: In that case, you know about Suhani and Ragini

Aman: Yes Dr. Neil and I know you're wondering why she saved

Suhani

Neil: Yes

Aman: You see doctor Ragini is not a person who is after revenge.

I'm going to tell you something that me and Ragini hid from you

Neil: What

Aman: Ragini and I are not married

Sorry if it's too short. Comment and like. Will update soon. Friend me

for PM

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poetic

@poetic

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

This is going on nice. Poor Ragini.

Please update the 3rd part.

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roneeta

@ronitfan

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

Really nice continuation, Sakshi!

Waiting to read what happens next post this tragedy and both of them knowing about it..

Please continue! :)

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