manans new journey ff...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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manans new journey:::: part 1:: so d epi starts as...fab5 dancng n enjoyng...manik takes a water pipe n starts sprayng water on nandini...nandini on hr way to escape throws him into d water...fab5 n abhi jumps into d pool as well...by d tym nandini escapes frm dere...nandini is sitting alone in a corner n manik is searchng fr her...pandit sees hr n sits nxt to hr...she thought its manik so she startd shouting dat i dnt want to play any more manik n turns hr head n sees pandit n she ws lyk shockd...she says sorry to him n he says if u dnt want to play holi den no one cn force u nt evn manik...she strts to defend manik sayng dat its nt lyk dat sir...n he changes d topic n asks about hr fusion concrt preparation...n manik cms n saw dem togethr n he was damn jealous...he went to d bhang counter n had 2 glasses of bhang...the music strts "do me a favour lets play holi"...manik brings nandini dere n strts dancing wid hr...she felt weird n awkward...she wantd to go bt den he saw pandit again n startd to drag hr here n dere...she strtd cryng...evrybody ws lyk wat happnd n dey were shockd...pandit comes n shouts at him makng manik more angry...he also leaves d place...party got over... nandini is cryng at home thinkng abt watevr happnd n d way manik misbehaved...so she decides its enough fr me nw i cnt bear dis torture anymre...i tried evrythng to bring him back... i ll let him go nw...manik is still under bhangs effct...he is thinkng dat i cnt let hr go nw n remembrs hr proximity towards pandit... Next day in colg...nandini is in music rum wid hr veena...she ws playng veena n pandit is starng at her...manik cms n saw pandit starng at nandini n he becms angry...he cms inside n sits nxt to hr...nandini's eyes r still closed she didnt realised dat manik is sittng nxt to hr...she ws thinkng hw manik misbehaved wid hr infront of evryone n tears fell down frm hr eyes...she cuts hr hand while playng veena...she opens hr eyes n says ouch n both of dem noticed blood cmng out of hr fingr...manik wantd to see hr cut bt pandit takes hr hand n says see wat u did to ur hand...n he asked manik to go n bring first aid box...manik ws lyk wat d hell u go bring d box n i ll remain here wid hr...pandit went to bring d box...manik wanted to see hr wound bt she didnt let him touch hr hand n she leaves d rum...manik panicked n didnt realise the reason behind dis weird behaviour..,so he goes aftr hr...she was sittng on d stairs wid head bowed down n ws cryng...he came n sat nxt to hr n asked y u r behavng so weird to which she replied u r askng dis manik aftr doing all dis...manik ws oblivious of wat she ws sayng...she says to him u always used to say na i hate u nandini...so nw m sayng i hate u manik malhotra...manik ws shocked...he asks hr wat happnd to u suddnly...she replies dnt u remebr wat u did yestrday n leaves d place...manik ws sittng dere shockd n ws tryng to remembr abt yest event bt he didnt remembr anythng aftr dat bhang part...cabir ws crossng frm dere n he saw cabir.. manik calls him n asks abt yest incident...cabir ws lyk u didnt remembr anythng to which he replies nandini said d same thing...wat hd happnd yest plz tell me...cabir tells him evrythng n he ws shocked...he ws thinkinghw cn he do dis to nandini...insult hr infront of evryone...he ws searchng fr hr n came to music rum bt she ws nt dere so he asked pandit abt hr n he replied she went home as she ws nt feelng well...n manik leaves...manik cms outside hr house n he is luking at d window bt she didnt came...he waitd dere fr 3 hrs bt she didnt came...he tried callng hr bt phone ws switched off...so he decides to leave...manik is thinkng of wat cabir said to him n ws angry on himself...nandini is cryng in her rum n she decides to leave mumbai aftr d fusion concert gets over...nxt day in colg nandini is practicng wid pandit n manik cms...she saw him bt ignored.,.manik wanted to talk to hr bt she didnt listen to him...pandit asks manik to cm n sing wid nandu as they hv nly 1 day left...manik asks nandu abt hr hand bt she doesnt replies to any of his ques...manik is hurt nw...both hv tears in deir eyes...they startd singing n d song is "zindagi me kavi koi aaye na rabba"...both gets emotional while singing...manik luks at nandini bt she turns hr face...song gets over...pandit claps n says gud work...n she leaves d rum...manik is hurt...its nx t nw manik is tryng hr number bt its off...so he calls at landline n chachi recieves d call..he greets hr n asks abt nandini...Chachi tells him she is in hr rum...dnt knw wat hd happnd to hr she is nt takng care of hr properly...manik cuts d call n is tensed...he takes his car keys n goes to meet nandu...he z lukng at d window bt she didnt came he waitd in his car for d whole nyt...nw its mrng chacha is goin fr joggng n he saw manik sleepng in his car..he came n wakes him up...an asks wat is he doin here to which he replyng i ws jst passng frm here n my car broke down...so chacha asks him to cm inside bt he hesitates n finally cms inside...chachi asks him to get freshen up n go to nandinis rum till den mechanic ll cm n repair his car...n he is standng outside nandinis rum...he knocks d rum n she thinks chachi hai so she opens d door without noticng dat it ws manik...she is in towel...manik luks at hr n is mesmerized...he cms close to hr n holds hr...she z lyk hw cm u r here...he replies he ws waitn outside hr home fr d whole nyt bt she didnt came...she replies y wud i...there is nthng btwn us nw evrythng is over...he is standing still dere n she gets ready n cms down...manik also cms down n dey r hvng brkfst...manik is sittng nxt to nandini bt nandini ignores him...she tells to chachi dat she z leavng fr d colg nw n maniks says he is also goin to d colg so she cn cm wid me...nandini didnt listens to him n she leaves...manik also leaves...pandit is waitng fr dem n dey cms...pandit tells dem today is d big day of deir lyf...n wishes dem all d best...nw its tym fr d cncrt...Manik is gettng ready n is lost in his thought...cabir cms deir n asks him r u fine...to which he replies i cnt live without nandini n i want hr back in my lyf...cabir tells him do wat ur heart says n he leaves...manik is smilng nw as he knew wat he has to do nw...concrt strts...they both hv been called to d stage...concrt begins...manik is lukng at nandini bt she ignores...he came close to hr n wishes hr gud luck..she said d same...song strts "main tenu samjhawan"..his eyes r at nandini n she is in tears...nw anothr song "tujhme rab dikhta hai"...audience wer shoutng once mre..manik asks dem guys do u want more...evryone ws lyk yes dnt let d concert get ovr...dey r abt to sing bt den manik stops n says m dedicating dis song to d person who is my lyf n evrythng...nandini glares at him...n he starts singng "kaise bataun tujhe ki dil mera kya keh raha"... concert gets over nandini is abt to leave d stage bt den manik calls hr name in mike n she turns to see him...he is lukng at nandini n says to hr i m sorry nandini fr evrythng..i knw i get lousy at times bt all i did ws becoz i ws hurt..n ws in pain coz u didnt trust me...so i wanted to make u feel d same...bt i forgot one thng i ws hurtng u bt indirctly ws hurtng myslf... i cnt bear dis pain anymre nw...i need u nandini...u r my shining star i cnt live widout u plz dnt leave me nandini...she hs tears in hr eyes...he finally said i love u nandini n she cms running to him n they both hugged each othr... .she also replies i love u too manik...evryone present dere clapped...nyonika is angry n shocked...pandit is also nt happy...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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YAYYY ...i get be the 1st one to respond to ur FF! 🥳

but seriously ...what a beautiful journey...and beautifully written 👏 by someone with a beautiful name - PARI 😊

how i wish aisa hi kuch ho Fusion concert mei ..but unfortunately the CVs are not as sweet as u to give us MANAN together so soon 😕

but thank u PARI for bringing a smile to my face 🤗..as that was my reaction by the time i read the last part

-Mini
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh...so sweet and amazing FF...really beautiful written...
Please Continue Soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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it was beautiful....
just awesome

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