FF: The Horizon Ch 55(a) ,55 (b) & Epilogue-page 144 updated 5th J - Page 28

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Leelalore thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks a ton Divya 😊
Hope you will continue to enjoy it.
Edited by LoneSoldier - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: awida

Awsome update Leela.👍🏼

Loved how Anu started to loose control. Now she is more human. She made a mistake..felt guilt..and couldn't focus on her work too. This shows how deeply she feels for Rajat. Unknowingly she is falling in love with him. And if she didn't admit it..Mrs Akhter is there to make sure she realizes her feelings.

Coming to Mrs Rai. Poor woman although living in a rich family..she leads a not happy life..and her son is really a nightmare. So he is going to Anu's collage? I hate this..but I know our Anu will show him his place.

And I completed reading this update with a grin. Yes ..Anu ..Rajat can't escape from you.😉😃

Thank you so much awida! 😊
You are right , Mrs Rai has such an unhappy life-her case is not too far from the reality
of many women😭
As for Rajat, yes, he has no escape. Then again , does he want to escape?😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey Leela,
Another brilliant update. Oh Anu you should have not called Rajat arrogant. sure he can a bit over confident and a tad bit annoying but he never wanted to hurt your feelings. But it seems that Rajat has been deeply hurt by her words hence the avoidance

As for Shaurya this guy is clearly emitting bad vibes. I cannot decide whether he is genuinely intrigued by Anu since she is the first girl who was not impressed by his looks and social status, or its simply a case of wanting what he can't have although deep down I feel the latter is the case.

Leela please please update as soon as you can. 😊😊 I can't wait to see what happens next😃

Oh And the heart shaped padlock is perfect. What a wonderful way to depict the current situation.

I am loving it!!!!❤️




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Posted: 10 years ago
she lashes out and then she feels guilty..and now rajat hasnt shown his handsome face , she starts worrying and missing him and is undergoing feelings of guilt
now the dimmag is batti of anushka shastri has lit and she is going to catch him , doing what she did all these days... ghar ke peeche ke patli gali se nikalna
lovely update
loved shaurya's mom's musings...gave an insightful perspective regarding their way of living , outlook of life...
overall an amazing update
thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey leela hows u?🤗 u know it very well but i will keep on saying it again and again that your words are so expressive, your language is just commendable! coming to the story it was as usual so captivating the way anu and rajat behaved is normal human psychology and no melodrama and that is the beauty your words possess. Mrs. Akhtar seems to me a really experienced woman and i like her this quality, you have made anushka and rajat mature. the way they are is the way they should be. anu was welcoming rajat was thankful, rajat was self assured and anu became self conscious and when rajat approached her in an overconfident manner she behaved like any normal young girl who does not like getting attention but guilt finally made home in her heart and rajat is again trying to give her the taste of her own medicine making her feel the way he did, smart! but the guilt in anu's heart is so acceptable. this to me seems a story of everyday life which can happen around to anybody in the neighborhood, its simple and easy to relate with and this is the best part of it, your such simplicity in your so attractive words is the beauty of your story, fallen for it again after reading this update and it really worked as a stress buster for me so thank u😊
Edited by poorva22 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
two updates and that too so amazing ones!!👍🏼
love u ❤️
plzz continue soon 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RUQAIYA10

Hey Leela,
Another brilliant update. Oh Anu you should have not called Rajat arrogant. sure he can a bit over confident and a tad bit annoying but he never wanted to hurt your feelings. But it seems that Rajat has been deeply hurt by her words hence the avoidance

As for Shaurya this guy is clearly emitting bad vibes. I cannot decide whether he is genuinely intrigued by Anu since she is the first girl who was not impressed by his looks and social status, or its simply a case of wanting what he can't have although deep down I feel the latter is the case.

Leela please please update as soon as you can. 😊😊 I can't wait to see what happens next😃

Oh And the heart shaped padlock is perfect. What a wonderful way to depict the current situation.

I am loving it!!!!❤️




Hi Ruqs!
Thank you so much for reading and replying. 😊
I enjoyed reading your comments-especially regarding Shaurya.
Yes, indeed, he is one of those people-the sort you've described.
Unfortunately, there's no avoiding such people sometimes!
It's nice to know that you are enjoying the pictures! It's sometimes hard to
find what I exactly want- but when I do get it- it seems worthwhile. But it is
really worth it if you enjoy it!
Thanks for the kind comments❤️
Leela.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nanor

she lashes out and then she feels guilty..and now rajat hasnt shown his handsome face , she starts worrying and missing him and is undergoing feelings of guilt
now the dimmag is batti of anushka shastri has lit and she is going to catch him , doing what she did all these days... ghar ke peeche ke patli gali se nikalna
lovely update
loved shaurya's mom's musings...gave an insightful perspective regarding their way of living , outlook of life...
overall an amazing update
thanks

Thank you nanor😊
I am glad to know that you found the part about Sharya's mother interesting.
This lady's life is not far removed from the lives of many women in the real world.
Sadly for them they know what's wrong-but don't know how to correct it.
Thank you for reading and replying.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: poorva22

hey leela hows u?🤗 u know it very well but i will keep on saying it again and again that your words are so expressive, your language is just commendable! coming to the story it was as usual so captivating the way anu and rajat behaved is normal human psychology and no melodrama and that is the beauty your words possess. Mrs. Akhtar seems to me a really experienced woman and i like her this quality, you have made anushka and rajat mature. the way they are is the way they should be. anu was welcoming rajat was thankful, rajat was self assured and anu became self conscious and when rajat approached her in an overconfident manner she behaved like any normal young girl who does not like getting attention but guilt finally made home in her heart and rajat is again trying to give her the taste of her own medicine making her feel the way he did, smart! but the guilt in anu's heart is so acceptable. this to me seems a story of everyday life which can happen around to anybody in the neighborhood, its simple and easy to relate with and this is the best part of it, your such simplicity in your so attractive words is the beauty of your story, fallen for it again after reading this update and it really worked as a stress buster for me so thank u😊

Hi Poorva,
I am fine and how are you?
Hope you are feeling better.
Many, many thanks for all the lovely comments and compliments🤗
Yes, I know what you mean about the characters being realistic and open to identification.
To be honest, I have always liked to write characters who are real rather than those
that are larger than life. I am so glad that you are enjoying the story and I can't say
how pleased I was to know that it acted as a stress buster for you- especially because
I am aware that you are not keeping well.
I hope you continue to enjoy the story. Get well soon!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: manishasatpathy

two updates and that too so amazing ones!!👍🏼
love u ❤️
plzz continue soon 😳

Thank you Manisha ! 😊
I am so glad you are enjoying it! I shall try & update as soon as I can
❤️
Leela

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