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Kanika

@ITV_lover

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

INDEX

CHARACTERS : BELOW

PROLOGUE: BELOW

PROMO CH 1 : PG 1

CHAPTER 1 : PAGE 1

PROMO CH 2.1 : PG 1

CHAPTER 2 : PAGE 2

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Kanika

@ITV_lover

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

CHARACTERS

DEVGARGH FAMILY

1. RAJMATA MERNALNI DEVI :

Rajmata/ Masahab/ Dadisahab/ DS/ Nanisahab/ Mernalni

2. BRIJRAJ SINGH :

Maharaj/ Daatasahab/ Dad/ Mamusahab/ Brijraj/ Brij

3. KOMAL BRIJRAJ SINGH :

Maharani/Masahab/Mom/ Mamisahab/Mamisa/Komal

4. MANAYATA KUMARI BRIJRAJ/UDAY VEER SINGH:

Yuvrani/ Rajkumari/ Princess/ Jiji/ Manayata/ Manaya/ Manu

5. JAINANDINI KUMARI BRIJRAJ SINGH

Rajkumari/ Jainandini/ J

JAIGARGH FAMILY

1. GIRIRAJ SINGH :

Maharaj/ Dad/ Giriraj/ Giri

3. UDAY VEER SINGH :

Yuvraj/ Rajkumar/ Uday Veer/ Uday

4. UNNATI GIRIRAJ/ VIJAY PRATAP SINGH :

Rajkumari/ Choti/ Unnati/ Unzs

PRATAPGARH FAMILY

1. RAGHAV PRATAP SINGH :

Maharaj/ Daatasahab/ Dad/ Phupsahab/ Phuphasa/ Raghav

2. MENIKA RAGHAV PRATAP SINGH :

Maharani/ Masahab/ Mom/ Buasahab/ Buasa/ Menika

3. VIJAY PRATAP SINGH :

Rajkumar/ Bhai/ Dada/ Vijay

1. ARYAN CHODHARY

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Kanika

@ITV_lover

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

Prologue

Manaya sitting in Pune in Rajgarh Mansion crying & remembering the past. In Devgargh Mansion

Flash Back Starts)(Uday say) "PRINCESS (Manaya looks @ Uday running toward him say) I have been calling you why aren't you picking up your phone (Uday ask) what happened (Manaya says) just like that (Uday asks) these pictures you again looking at them (Manaya says) I like them see how nice I am looking (Uday says) Princess you always look (Manaya crossing her says) I wish things always stay like this (Uday takin her hand in his kissing it) it will don't you trust me I with you.

Flash Back Ends(Adi comes there) again you are crying Manu.(Manaya looks & says) Adi when did you come (Adi says) we are going for ice cream (Adi phone's rings he goes out to attend it. Manaya see her & Uday photo & say) Uday you said you love me, why did you not trust me & went with J.

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Alisha Khan

@Twinkle_alisha

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

Awesome CS And Amazing Prologue...Want To Know What Had Happened Btw Them... Why Manyata Is Crying... Want To Read It...Continue It Plzzz.. 😊 And Plzzz Update $oon Next Part The Long One.. 😊 😉 And PM Me.. 😊

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Kanika

@ITV_lover

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

PROMO

CHAPTER 1

PRINCESS (Hugs her tightly & smiles from behind his tears) you scared a hell out of me (Manaya says) Is ever thing fine why are you crying (ignoring what happened to with his support stands up & starts walking towards the door Uday pulls her back to him & says) Princess for a long time I been thinking of telling you this I thought I had lot of time today I realised I might have whole lot of time but there there JAINANDINI WHO CAN DO ANY THING TO SEPARATE EVEN STOOP DOWN TO KILLING ME, don't you dear it wasn't her this is not the first time (Sits on knees taking her hand) YEARS BACK I LOST MY THEN FEW YEARS LATTER I LOST MY MOTHER FOR EVER...(Manaya cuts in) Uday (Uday ignoring adds) if Mom was alive today she would love you as she did before (he takes out from his pocket) RAJKUMARI MANAYATA... (Manaya with fake irritation says) YUVRAJ UDAY VEER... (Uday cuts in) PRINCESS I LOVE YOU MORE THEN MYSELF, MORE THEN MY LIFE, I WILL DIE WITH OUT YOU

CHAPTER WILL BE POSTED ON WEDNESDAY

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Humairaa

@humairaa1

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

Hey, how you?😊

Amazing story👏

It's looks very interesting

Nice character sketch

Love the prologue

It touches the heart

Promo for chapter 1 was nice

Adi looks like a good friend

Thanks for the pm😊

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Kanika

@ITV_lover

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

CHAPTER 1

Rajprohit is crowning the next YUVRANI of DEVGARGH . Manaya is standing there for ceremony smiling @ Uday & Uday is smiling back @ her

Flash Back

(Uday say) "PRINCESS (Manaya looks @ Uday running toward him say) I have been calling you why aren't you picking up your phone (Uday ask) what happened (Manaya says) just like that (Uday asks) these pictures you again looking at them (Manaya says) I like them see how nice I am looking (Uday says) Princess you always look gorgeous (Manaya crossing her fingers says) I wish things always stay like this (Uday takin her hand in his kissing it says) it will don't you trust me I with you

(Flash Back Ends)

J had given Manaya an apple with poison not realising it she has it. She & Uday are walking Manaya faints Uday holding her says) PRINCESS WAKE UP YOU CAN'T LEAVE ALONE FOR EVER (Lifts her in his arms take her to room puts her on the bed calls the doctor. Doctor come & asks) Yuvraj do you know what was the last thing Rajkumari Manayata have (Uday answers) I don't know (Vijay & Unzs come there. Vijay says) Manaya was having an apple the last I saw (Uday worried asks) But why doctor what's wrong why is PRINCESS NOT WAKING UP (Doctor answer) Rajkumari Manayata will wake up soon I have given her ANTI-POSION (Uday Vijay & Unzs together) ANTI POSION (Unzs says) J had given it to Manaya (Uday in rage says) J I WILL KILL HER WHERE THE HELL IS SHE (calls the maids & guards) FIND JAINANDINI RIGHT NOW VIJAY BANNA YOU... (Doctor says) some body needs to be with Rajkumari Manayata (Uday with tears in eyes says) I am here with PRINCESS doctor I not leaving her alone for an second (The doctor leaves Uday not realising Vijay & Unzs are still there) Princess it took 17 years to get my best friend back & now if loose you again I WILL DIE I AM SERIOUS ABOUT THIS I left you alone for few hours so you decided to leave me for ever NO PRINCESS I WILL NOT ALLOW THIS (Vijay & Unzs see Manaya's hand move they go to call the doctor, Uday is crying with his eyes closed holding Manaya's hand. Manaya slightly opens her eyes see Uday, with her free hand wipes her tear, Uday opens his eyes & says) PRINCESS (Hugs her tightly & smiles from behind his tears) you scared a hell out of me (Manaya says) Is ever thing fine why are you crying (ignoring what happened to with his support stands up & starts walking towards the door Uday pulls her back to him & says) Princess for a long time I been thinking of telling you this I thought I had lot of time today I realised I might have whole lot of time but there there J WHO CAN DO ANY THING TO SEPARATE EVEN STOOP DOWN TO KILLING ME, don't you dear it wasn't her this is not the first time (Sits on knees taking her hand) YEARS BACK I LOST MY THEN FEW YEARS LATTER I LOST MY MOTHER FOR EVER...(Manaya cuts in) Uday (Uday ignoring adds) if Mom was alive today she would love you as she did before (he takes out from his pocket) RAJKUMARI MANAYATA... (Manaya with fake irritation says) YUVRAJ UDAY VEER... (Uday cuts in) PRINCESS I LOVE YOU MORE THEN MYSELF, MORE THEN MY LIFE, I WILL DIE WITH OUT YOU WILL YOU MARRY ME

(IN THE BACKGROUND)

(Song : Chhod Naa Mujhe from Pyaar Ka Superhit Formula)

Chhodo na mujhe yuun bekaraar saa. Kar bhi do ijhaar tum apne pyaar kaa
Tumhaare dil ki hai yeh manjil mera deewaana dil, bolo tum bolo
Kar doge inkaar toh jee na paayenge. Jo kar doge ikraar toh mar hee jaayenge. Tumhaare dil ki hai yeh manjil mera deewaana dil, bolo tum bol. Yeah. Itne paraaye jo ho tum, pehale kabhi bhi nahi the. Mere jahaan mein ghamon ki, tum toh vajah hee nahi the. Dil se mere tum khud ko nikaalo, ya phir mujhe hee apnaa bana lo. Bolo tum bol. Khoyee khoyee jindagi ki, raahon mein abb aa bhi jaao. Jo tum nahi aana chaaho mujhako hee paas bulaao. Kab tak jiyenge aise bataao, mujhko nahi tum yu aajmaao, bolo tum.Chhodo na mujhe yuun bekaraar saa. Kar bhi do ijhaar tum apne pyaar kaa.Tumhaare dil ki hai yeh manjil mera deewaana dil, bolo tum bolo

Princess please this silence is killing me (Manaya ask) will you stand up (Uday says) Not until you answer (Manaya says) not until you stand up please (Uday stands up Manaya immitiately hugs him tightly & with happy tears says) YES UDAY I WILL MARRY YOU WHEN & WHERE YOU WANT (He makes her wear a ring. She hids herself in his arm. Vijay & Unzs see all this from outside & are happy. Unzs says) Now dada is not going to spare J at all he is heads over heels for Manayata (Vijay says) I tell you (Flash Back ends) (Raj prohit announces YUVRANI MANAYATA KUMARI KI JI. Ceremonies end Manaya & Uday spend to gether. Uday says) Yuvrani Manayata... .(Manaya cuts in) Uday there when I hated you call me princess but now don't stop I love when call me PRINCESS it makes me fell special (Uday smile & say) I will never stop that Princess (both hug each other. Uday asking adds) Princess I proposed you but you didn't reply (Manaya answers) I said yes didn't I (Uday smiling says) Princess, I said I love you, you didn't answer (Manaya hugs him doesn't say anything. Uday ) Princess will you go for a date with once we are in Mumbai (Manaya says) Yes but where I am...I think it isn't a good idea you know Uday... (Uday cuts in & asks) Princess is it media you talking about (Manaya answers) Yes & you also know...(Uday again cuts in) Princess you handle media brilliant & I am there with as usual so don't worry & Jainandini can't separate us ever let me find her I will kill SHE TRIED TO POSION YOU TO DEATH (Hugs her tightly adds) I CAN'T afford to loose you PRINCESS if I loose you it will be END OF UDAY VEER SINGH I WILL CEASE TO EXIST PRINCESS (Manaya holding his face in her hands says) Uday, I am fine & I am with you I am not going any where (Pulling his lips to hers kiss him. Uday kisses her pulls her even closer)

Pre cap: Back in Mumbai

PROMO CHAPTER WILL BE POSTED ON MODAY & CHAPTER WILL POSTED ON WEDNESDAY

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Kanika

@ITV_lover

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

PROMO

CHAPTER 2

After reaching Mumbai Unnati & Vijay in Vijay's car, Uday & Manaya in Uday's car, Brij, Giri & Raghav in Pratapgarh's car, Mernalni, Komal & Menika in Jaigarh's car & J alone in Devgargh's car. to Devgarh Estate.

CHAPTER WILL POSTED ON WEDNESDAY

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Kanika

@ITV_lover

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

CHAPTER 2.1

Dadisahab taking the opportunity sitting with family announces Vijay & Unnati's engagement after two weeks. Next day they leave for Mumbai. After reaching Mumbai Unnati & Vijay in Vijay's car, Uday & Manaya in Uday's car, Brij, Giri & Raghav in Pratapgarh's car, Mernalni, Komal & Menika in Jaigarh's car & J alone in Devgargh's car. to Devgarh Estate. They reach there & J frustrated & angry goes to her room. Pepreations for Unaati & Vijay's weeding start. Two weeks pass the engagement happens. While the function in on Uday is told to dance he doesn't listen. So Manaya taking the stage starts singing

(Song :Aaj Hai Saggai from Pyaar Toh Hona Hi Tha)

Aaj hai Saggai sun ladki ki Bhai

Humko Dikhaa

Kudi Ki Tarhan Na SharmaaHai Tu Meri Gal Maan JaHaan, Tu Meri Gal Maan Ja

(Uday smiles & adds on)

Sabh Ko Nachaoon Nach Nach Ke DikhoonAa Mujh Ko Gale Se LagaaSabh Ko NachaoonNach Nach Ke Dikhoon Aa

Mujh Ko Gale Se Lagaa Munde Se Zara Aankh Lada Munde Se Zara Aankh LadaHoi, Tu Meri Gal Maan JaHai, Tu Meri Gal Maan JaO Soniyee...

Sar Pe Sajaa Ke Sehraa Baarat Le Ke AaonDulhan Tujhe Bana KeDoli Mein Le Ke Jaoon

(Manaya adds on)

Bholi samajhe ke mughe pe

Daal asie daan

Shaadi nahi karoge