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Posted: 10 years ago
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After the shock of seeing her daughter's, Ahemji with another woman, the reality set in, she could not believe that this could happen.

"What world was she living in? " she asked herself

she yearned for Ahem and her two daughters so much she did not think they would never be a part of her life.

Each time she thought about family, but her family was gone living their lives, she just assumed that they would be their for her, missed her just as she missed them .

She closed her eyes, her life flashed before her from living with her Mahma and Mami to marriage everything she dealt with, then she remembered what Kokila told her about what Ahem had said, how he told Gopi not to get involved with others issues , this kept going round and round in her head.

Kokila phones, she answers , she could hear her speaking but she did not listen to her, in a low toned voice she says" marf karna Maji I have lost Ahemji and children, I am tired of listening to everyone, I am tired of having to deal with family issues, I am now going to think of myself, I am going to be selfish for a change". She puts the phone down.

Jigar says "bhabi" she walks out of the room.

In a daze she walks and walks until she reaches Ahem's house, She stands outside looks at the door, Ahem closes the window, he looks up and is shocked seeing Gopi standing there. He comes out both look at each other, Gopi just stares at him, with one hand she breaks her manglesutar, looks at it , grabs his hand, drops it into his hand.

Mansi comes out, Gopi smiles at her "he's yours Mansi, Ahem looks at her confused.

Both girls come out, Gopi looks at them , turns back round , Vidya says "Mum"

Gopi just walks down, Vidya goes running after her "mum" , Gopi turns round "you must be mistaken I don't have any daughters especially ones who get drunk " Vidya shocked.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice one Suk..😊👏
But do u think Gopi will have the guts to leave ? Or being the same doormat she will keep begging infront of ahemji 😕 if Ahem had finally found peace and happiness with Mansi ,and he is not caring about Gopi anymore ...she should really leave him alone ...She can talk to daughters though as they are adults they can have a choice whom they want to live with ..😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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The dignified Gopi that I yearn for. Thank you Suk for penning this. Great start and can't wait to read more.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I wish gopi could do that way what you wrote it,I am very upset of ahem what he think of himself woh men hai to Jo chahe woh kare but gopi Ki koi self respect nahi hai I am sorry If I hurt anyone.plz continue it.
Edited by Miracle_leo - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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such a wanted story this is..
plz continue this..
i want gopi to b selfish for once & leavve everyone so that they wil know hw much hurt she is due to them...

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