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Posted: 9 years ago
Ok, review se pehle thank you for the dedication! β˜ΊοΈ  πŸ˜†
Now, Feedback:

Fantastic Update! Kuddos to you! πŸ‘ πŸ‘
And then you say you can't write love wala part! Liar Liar Pants on fire! πŸ˜›
This was so wonderfully written. Slow burn! Loved it! ❀️ 
Thank you for such a beautiful story... just like shivi's story made you join i-f, this was the first story I read here and after a while came out of the silent reader zone to comment upon!  πŸ˜Š 
And remember later on while waiting for you to update I had thought of writing too? so, your late-latifness led to my first fanfic πŸ˜†  
And this story of yours is even more special to me coz I got to know you because of it! πŸ€—

Coming back to the story, the way Nisha explained everything was perfect... And Viraj was a darling! Meko bhi chahiye Viru! πŸ˜ƒ
Aur tumne meri bezzati bhi maar di story ke ek part me, I'll tell you how alag se... secret joke :P πŸ€£ 

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Epilogue
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2 weeks
later :


        It was the day of the State
championships. Nisha was nervous as she would be called to perform in the Semi
Finals in a few minutes. Viraj stood next to her and talked to her in a soft
voice. He encouraged her, motivated her. Soft word of faith and confidence that
made all the difference. The Ganghwal cousins, Ramesh, Laxmi and Dadaji were
all watching from the stands. They could see Viraj whispering in Nisha'e ear
and Nisha nodding softly. Ramesh did feel a slight irritation, but looking at
the change in Nisha's demeanor after Viraj began talking to her he kept silent.
Whatever she wanted...


      Finally her name was called out. Nisha
walked up to her shooting gear and took her stance. The excitement was
palpable. On the command, she fired. And where else would the bullet go, if not
right on target? A huge cheer rose up in the air, mainly from her cousins. Nisha
went on firing and hit the bull's eye every time. Viraj, who had also cheered
loudly when she hit her first bull's eye, knew that he couldn't expect anything
less from his best student. The competition went on and Nisha propelled herself
in the Finals, with a score higher than that of any other participant.


    When it was Viraj's turn to shoot, he was
confident. Deja vu flooding his senses, he picked up the rifle with a slight
smile playing on his lips. No one but Nisha could decipher the meaning of his
enigmatic smile. They had discussed the joy that shooting gave them, when Viraj
told her that he felt on top of the world when he stood in front of the target
with a rifle on his shoulder. His single minded focus was seen in the frown
lines on his temple and his squinting eyes. Nisha loved to watch him shoot. It
gave her immense inspiration. In the past 2 weeks, after all the
misunderstandings were cleared, Nisha and Viraj had begun to enjoy each other's
company evermore. The stolen moments of staring in each other's eyes, the
slight smiles when lost in thoughts, the new energy and enthusiasm towards life
were noted by the world. Nisha had sensed the change. She needed a conformation
though. What if he doesn't love me? Once burnt, twice shy, she wouldn't dare
to believe now, except without solid proof.




     Viraj glided through the Semifinals and
Finals with ease. His name alone made the other participants nervous. His
confident presence made them loose all confidence. It was Nisha's Final round
going on, when Saurav sneaked behind Viraj in the participant stand with a
tetrapack of an energy drink. The complete focus with which Viraj looked at
Nisha delighted Saurav. He said slowly, "She is waiting for you to accept your
feelings, you know."


     Viraj was startled. He hadn't noticed Saurav
coming up to him. He knew what Saurav was talking about, but felt embarrassed
to discuss his love life with him. Saurav tried again. "Girls are weird that
way. They need to be told that you love them ten times a day. Around hundred
times a week." Saurav made a face. Viraj
couldn't help but grin. "So Ms.
Maheshwari keeps you on your toes?"


    Saurav blushed at that. He turned the
conversation to Viraj again. "Forget Sneha. You'll need to be even more careful
with Nisha. You guys have a past history -"


     Saurav was interrupted by another cheer,
which came from the whole stadium. All the cousins were running towards the
ground, shouting with joy. Nisha had won the gold. Two golds meant the academy
could function again.


    Nisha felt as if the seventh cloud wouldn't
be able accommodate her happiness that day. She had proven herself, she had
achieved what she wanted for now. Her cousins rushed towards her, hugged her,
but her eyes searched for someone else...


    Viraj met Nisha's eyes and he they felt the
world disappear. Saurav had provided the necessary stimulus. Ms. Nisha still loves me...He resolved
to ask her out whenever he got the chance. But for now,


All was
well.

Edited by Aditi_28 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Another brilliant one... You are rocking Aditi :) :) 
This is one of the besttt fanfic i have read in this forum.. Many Many Thanks for writing such nice chapters!

A beautiful story :)
Edited by smileeee - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow!! ... this deserves a standing ovation!!!! πŸ‘
you are an amazing writer...great job!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yay! 
Bada aaya tha Sourav Viru ko relationship advice dene.🀣

I can't tell you how perfect this is Aditi! 

πŸ€—

*sigh*

I love you so much. πŸ˜” 
Will miss you. Thanks for putting this up today. 😊
Rock your exams! 

XOXO
Shivi
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Posted: 9 years ago
 I'm mooning over it. This was perfection!
I loved it πŸ€— itna saara!
I can't tell you how i'm feeling right now... So many feelings... πŸ‘ . πŸ˜³ . πŸ˜† . πŸ˜­ . 
Not capable of thinking beyond the word Perfect for this story as of now, and I've already said that! πŸ˜†
It is such a nostalgic moment when stories come to an end... 
Liked the HP touch in the end "All was well"... Indeed, it was... a perfect happy ending and the prospect of a happy new beginning, what could be better!  :*

Edited by jhanvi.123 - 9 years ago
Fariba100 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
What do i say? You are amazinggg. Your writing is amazing. πŸ‘
Loved it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow...superb dear...awesome
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Posted: 9 years ago
Epilogue? woho didn't except this
anyways it was good ! Brilliant indeed.
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Posted: 9 years ago
sad its completed... nice one...πŸ‘