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Posted: 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

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PREVIOUS : CHAPTER 4.2

CHAPTER 5

They leave for Pune the next morning.They are all together except Khush who is London for work but they all FaceTime every day when ever Khush is free. College starts again Manu is in Mumbai and everyone else is Pune except two people Khush & Kartik who are busy with their work. Months pass. One morning Uday is coming from a meeting he is attacked. The shot is taken by Maansi and she dies. The information reach Pune as per address given to company. Aditya & Jagat come down to Mumbai to take care of Manu is broken. Aditya & Jagat leave after a few days. Jainandini & Unnati take care of her after. Manu decided to go back to Pune for ever. Considering it is again April & her birthday is coming.Few days latter Manu is called to the to principles office the whole of Devgargh and Jaigarh families Manu goes. Jainandini and Unnati are outside.

Vijayinder asking

Vijayinder says "J Unzs what are you two doing here."

Unnati answering

Unnati says "Our friend"

Jainandini cutting in

Jainadini says "Manu Jiji is inside."

Inside the room.

Mernalni says "Manasvi we are sorry for your loss"

Komal gives her the cheque.

Manu asking

Manu says "What is this?"

Menika adding

Menika says "Blank cheque."

Manu inquiring

Manu says "For"

Vasundhara answering

Vasundhara says "all your life you sister is dead you will need money to sustain life."

Manu inquiries "This money will bring my sister back."

Komal says "she did for this, you money hungry people"

Manu angry irrited

Manu shout "people call you Rajmata do you even no what MA' how would you."

Menika tries to slap her. Manu stop her. manu takes her hand & gives the cheque given to her back.

Manu say "don't need you sempathy or money."

Komal is angry

Komal says "how dare you"

Manu shouting back

Manu says "how dare I what"

Vasundhara irritated

Vasundhara says "you don't know us, how rich and influencal we are."

Manu angrily smirks

Manu says "Let's see she is Rajmata of Devgarh Rajmata Mirnalni Devi, Maharani of Devgarh Maharani Komal Brijraj Singh, Maharni Menika Pratap Singh & Maharani of Jaigarh Maharani Vasundhara Giriraj Singh, am I right."

The ladies nodded their heads

Manu adding

Manu says "sorry I forgot Maharaj of Devgargh Maharaj Brijraj Singh & Maharaj of Jaigarh Maharaj Giriraj Singh, am I right."

Both the men nodded. Manu with a winning smirk. Manu asking

Manu says "DO YOU KNOW WHO I AM."

They all together says "NO"

Manu says "I come from one of the most influential and richest families of the country."

Manu walk out. Jainandini & Unnati witnessed everything. They come in,

Jainandini says "DS what were you doing, you were trying to buy Manu Jiji, whoes brother is cable of buying the whole university."

Unnati adding

Unnati says "if it left on her brother & his Bua family they can buyout all the university of the country."

Komal asking

Komal says "what are you both saying"

Jainandini asking

Jainandini says "you know what's her brother's name"

Unnati adding

Unnati says "You know Choti Kakisa."

Vasundhara asking

Vasundhara says "what Maharani Neelam Jai Raj Singh has do with this"

Jainandini answering

Jainandini says "her son's brother is her brother"

Unnati adding

Unnati says "her nephew"

Vasundhara asking

Vasundhara says "nephew"

Jainandini answering

Jainandini says "Country's youngest business tycoon"

Unnati adding

Unnati says "YUVRAJ JAGAT SINGH RATHORE"

Every one was shocked. Jainandini & Unnati walked away.

Manasvi had run out of college Jagat heard each word on the phone. She had taken the car raced it of to home. Jaggat was with Uday without saying anything he left.Jagat was countiniously trying to reach Manu.Manu reached home called Aditya from the landline.

Manu asking

Manu says "Are you free?"

Aditya answering

Aditya says "yes for you always"

Manu snobbing

Manu says "can you come here soon I need you"

Aditya worried asking

Aditya says "what is wrong"

Manu says "I have worst choice of friends"

Aditya sad & worring

Aditya says "finally high time you realise J & Unzs are not a right people."

Manu crying & pleading

Manu says "come here"

Aditya says "Sis I am in Pune it takes time to come"

Manu says "I forgot"

Aditya worried

Aditya says "now tell me what happened"

Manu told him everything, Aditya got to his car and started driving.

Aditya says "one thing for sure both the girls are different you didn't make a wrong choice, the situation is wrong good you told them that money & power you have both"

Manu says "Are you driving"

Aditya ignores her

Aditya says "stop crying sis I can hear you snob till here."

Manu says "I wouldn't cry till Jaggi is back I need a hug badly"

Aditya says "good"

Jagat is in car his phone rings he picks it

Jagat says "Manu I am coming on the way"

Khush says "You might be on the way but I am in L.A boy and what happened to Sweetheart Jagat superised."

Jagat says "KHUSH I was not expecting your call"

Khush says "I have been trying Manaya's phone she not picking."

Jagat say "actually, Maansi Di."

Khush worried

Khush says "she is still not over it."

Jagat clearifies "Remember Jainandini & Unnati."

Khush says "Devgarh & Jaigarh go on what happened"

Jagat told him what ever had happened

Kush says "hypocrites, hate it don't worry I will tell Luv, Khushi, Ashwariya & Arjun to reach her now."

Khush asking

Khush says "does Adi know?"

Jagat confused asking

Jagat says "Are they here?"

Jagat answering

Jagat says I don't know."

Khush says "Ya they are there, aren't you, supportely there to be with her MR COUNTRY'S YONGEST BUSINESS TYCOON is doing justice to the title."

Jagat says "Khush you will never understand the pride when topper of the university who is your own sister gives you the award the pride and happiness is a million time more then anything else."

Khush adding

Khush says "Jaggi the proud brother has to to go take care of his sister not as a country youngest business tycoon but as a brother

Jagat realising

Jagat says "I know Khush thanks yaar

Jagat reaches & see Jainandini & Unnati outside, ordering the guards."

Jagat says "don't allow them in

Jagat goes inside asking the maid

Jagat says "where is Manu"

Maid says "Yuvranisa is in her room"

Jagat ordering

Jagat says "get food for both of us."

Jagat goes in her room asking

Jagat says "Manu,why haven't you been picking you phone I have been calling & so has Khush we both are worried & you are relaxing."

Food comes. Jagat adding

Jagat says "have you seen the last out going call on your mobile"

Manu says "No"

she see it & look Jagat.

Jagat says "I know everything"

Jagat takes the food & start feeding to her adding

Jagat says "I can't be Dada but Manu, but starving wouldn't help."

Manu says "voh hum"

They eat Jagat asking

Jagat says "Do you still want to invite Rajkumari Jainandini & Rajkumari Unnati, it means inviting both families?"

Manu simply says "I don't know "

There is a knock on the door. Jagat gets irritated

Jagat says "kon"

Luv, Khushi, Ashwariya, Arjun & Kartik walk in. Manu see Kartik, hugs him tightly

Manu says "Pano"

Kartik says "My rani, know some people are like that."

Manu says "now I understand how DI felt with Mamusa & Mamisa or any one else."

Khush clearifing

Khush says "DI was wrong about it but they were known to be like this for ever"

Luv clearifies further

Luv says "Khush is right they just think they are superme"

Jagat says "For some reason it hard to believe Rajkumari Jainandini & Rajkumari Unnati are like that"

Khushi adding

Khushi says "Ya but what they have done is wrong."

Arjun adding futher

Arjun says "something has to be done

Unnati & Jainandini reach Uday's office. They go directly to Uday's room. Uday is superised to see their state.

Uday asking

Uday says "Choti what happened?"

Jainandini says "Maansi was Manu Jiji's sister."

Uday shocked.

Jainandini asking

Jainandini says "What?"

Unnati strongly asking

Unnati says "why Dada didn't you stop everyone you know DS would have listened to you & agreed."

Jainandini adding

Jainandini says "or you were supporting them like Vijay Bhai."

Uday confused asking

Uday says "In what?"

Jainandini accusingly says "don't act as if you don't know"

Unnati tells him everything. By then Vijay comes there. Uday asking

Uday says "Vijay banna is what Choti is saying is right

Vijayinder stuck says "Uday..."

Uday asking

Uday says "why did no one ask me."

Jainandini superised asking

Jainandini says "You don't know."

Vijayinder says "J, Uday wouldn't have agreed."

Unnati & Jainandini looked at Uday.

Uday say "Princess"

Unnati confused

Unnati says "Manayata..."

Jainandini completes "Jiji"

Vijayinder simply says "Manaya wouldn't have liked this at all."

Jainadini supervised

Jainandini say "DS didn't oppose it at all."

Vijayinder says "Everyone else was in support so Nanisa had to do it."

Uday ask " whoes decision was this"

Vijayinder stuck says "voh..."

Uday angry

Uday says "Let me guess Maharaj Giriraj Singh & Maharaj Brijraj Singh."

Uday mellow down adding

Uday says "Don't worry Choti & J, I will solve this myself I will go meet Manasvi & apology to her myself."

Vijayinder asking

Vijayinder says "J you were saying something about Yuvraj Jagat Singh Rathore"

Uday adds asking

Uday says "Don't tell me Manasvi is same girl who is Jagat's sister?"

Unnati answering

Unnati says "Yes Dada"

Uday calls Jagat it is not picked . They all go home.

In Manu's house,

They all are taking to Khush. Aditya comes shouts with worring

Aditya says "MANAYA"

Manu says "ADI"

They both hug each other. He look arounds. Aditya superised asking

Aditya says "Pando you..."

Kartik answering

Kartik says "I was in Mumbai for work, Sher called so I came here."

Aditya asking

Aditya says "You all here, JAGGI, MANAYA."

Manu says "I don't know myself how all of them are her."

Jagat says "I was coming back from a meeting."

Aditya angrily looks at Jagat

Aditya says "Jaggi meeting, business how could you leave her alone."

Manu calming him down

Manu says "Adi I was in college"

Khush asking

Khush says "Adi you drove here from Pune after Manu's call without a stop at top speed."

Aditya answering

Aditya says "yes so what,why have you told all of them to come here Khush."

Luv asking

Luv says "Khush how did you get to know."

Manu answering

Manu says "Khush called Jaggi, Jaggi though it was me, then Khush asked him so he told him."

Khush conforms "You told Adi from landline"

Manu say "Yes"

Luv confused asking

Luv says "why did Khush call Jaggi not Manu." Manu answers "My phone was on silent?"

Aditya asking

Aditya says "Jaggi how did you get to know."

Jagat answering

Jagat says "By chance she called me & forgot to disconnect"

Uday, Unnati , Jainandini & Vijayinder reach Devgargh mansion.Uday tries to talk to the elders about it but they don't listen

NEXT : CHAPTER 6.1

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sanam2sonya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Mqnyata family Is more powerful than uday family

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sweetmishthi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

PROMO

Chapter 6.1

Manasvi says)I heard you Rajmata Mernalni Devi lost you grand daughter, she was kidnapped, her name was Manayata, good I wish you never find her you don't deserve to a grand daughter she is better dead.(Jagat, Aditya & Uday hear her. Jagat & Uday come there. Uday slaps her he can't bear hear this about HIS PRINCENESS.

thank your stars Dada I mean YUVRAJ ROHAN RAJ SINGH doesn't know yet not us but you all will suffer.(Every one is shocked to gether say)what do you mean. (Before they would answer Manu cut in)Adi(Adi says) Manaya don't worry.(Jaggi walks to Adi & Manu,Jaggi hugs her)Manu.(Manu says)Jaggi(Every one is shocked to know she called Jagat, Jaggi what his close family calls him,Jaggi says)don't worry our families are not in any kind harm from them.(Manu phone was connected to Kushi throughout so Luv, Kushi, Ash, Aru and even Kush heard this. They got to work Manu didn't know, Adi says)Manaya(Jaggi adds)you go to the car now.(Manu softly say so only three could hear)Adi promise.(Adi says) Yes(Manu says) Jaggi(Jaggi repounds says) Yes. (Manu leaves from there,Aditya Raj say)so this what rajwade do slap girl there was a time rajwade were known for being praja palak they treated eveyone equally.(Uday says)I know what the elders did was wrong and unexpectable but you don't know what she said Adi.(Adityaraj & Jagat cut in say)Yuvraj Udayveer Singh it is Rajkumar Aditya Raj Singh and I know what she said extractly (Jagat adds)Manu didn't say anything wrong I would say that you do find Manayata but she hates all of you to extent that she never come back to you (looking @ Uday)and specially you.(Unzs come behind him and stops him. J stops Vijay from reacting. Both the sister know those two are controlling themselves as Manu has told them, Uday says) Jagat(Jagat cuts in looking @ him with boling anger & says) It's not Jagat but Yuvraj Jagat Singh Rathore .(Uday was actually scared & says) Yuvraj Jagat don't say like that please.(Adi looks @ Jaggi & says)Jaggi I am going come fast Manaya is alone, insulted & hurt.

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Kanika

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Posted: 10 years ago

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PREVIOUS : CHAPTER 5

CHAPTER 6.1

Two days letter Manu comes Jainandini's house to meet Jainandini and Unnati. Manu overhears everything. Uday is not there. Jainandini & Unnati are there

Manu says"I heard you Rajmata Mernalni Devi I heard you lost your grand daughter, she was kidnapped, her name was Manayata, good I wish you never find her you don't deserve to a grand daughter she is better dead."

Jagat, Aditya & Uday hear her. Jagat & Uday come there. Uday slaps her he can't bear hear this about HIS PRINCESS. Jagat angrily shouting

Jagat says "YUVRAJ UDAYVEER SINGH."

Uday tries to slap her again but Aditya stops him. All the three men Uday, Jagat & Aditya are angry. Everyone is superised to see both Yuvraj Jagat Singh Rathore & Yuvraj Aditya Raj Singh there in such anger protecting Manu. Aditya hugs her. Aditya whispering.

Aditya says "Manaya I told you it's not worth

Vijay heard him say Manaya he was shocked, Aditya loudly and clearly says "they all are hypocrites as known by everyone."

Mernalni calmly

Mernalni says "Jagat beta, Adi beta please..."

Aditya & Jagat cutting in

They say together "Rajmata Mernalni Devi" Jagat adding

Jagat says "it's Yuvraj Jagat Singh." Rathore not Jagat."

Aditya continuing

Aditya says "Yuvraj Aditya Raj Singh not Adi."

Brijraj shocked

Brijraj says "one small mistake that how you cut out your relation with us."

Giriraj adding on

Giriraj says "You two know your fathers won't like it

Looking Aditya adds on

Giriraj says "specially your brother Rohan"

Komal looking at Jagat

Komal says "your brother in law Surya"

Vasundhara looking at Aditya

Vasundhara says "your brother-in-Law Dharam."

Jagat & Aditya smile

Jagat & Aditya say together "so now you will earn respect from us by scaring us."

Aditya continuing

Aditya says "thank your stars Dada I mean YUVRAJ ROHAN RAJ SINGH doesn't know yet. Not us but you all will suffer."

Everyone is shocked

They together say "what do you mean."

Before they would answer. Manu cuts in

Manu says "Adi"

Aditya says "Manaya don't worry"

Jagat walks to Aditya & Manu. Jagat hugs her

Jagat says "Manu"

Manu says "Jaggi"

Everyone is shocked to know she called Jagat, 'Jaggi' what his close family calls him.

Jagat says "don't worry our families are not in any kind harm from them."

Manu phone was connected to Khushi throughout so Luv, Khushi, Ashwariya, Arjun & even Khush heard this. They got to work Manu didn't know.

Aditya says "Manaya"

Jagat adds "you go to the car now."

Manu softly say so only three could hear

Manu says "Adi promise"

Aditya says "Yes"

Manu says "Jaggi"

Jagat says "Yes"

Manu leaves from there.

Aditya say "so this what rajwade do slap girl there was a time rajwade were known for being praja palak they treated eveyone equally."

Uday says "I know what the elders did was wrong and unexpectable but you don't know what she said Aditya."

Aditya & Jagat cutting in

They together says "Yuvraj Udayveer Singh."

Aditya continuing

Aditya says "it is Yuvraj Aditya Raj Singh and I know what she said extractly."

Jagat adding

Jagat says "Manasvi didn't say anything wrong I would say that you do find Manayata but she hates all of you to extent that she never come back to you."

Looking at Uday

Jagat countinuing "specially you

Unnati come behind him & stops him. Jainandini stops Vijayinder from reacting. Both the sister know those two are controlling themselves as Manu has told them.

Uday says "Jagat Please..."

Jagat cuts in looking at Uday with boling anger

Jagat says "It's not Jagat but Yuvraj Jagat Singh Rathore."

Uday was actually scared

Uday says "Yuvraj Jagat don't say like that please."

Aditya looking at Jagat

Aditya says "Jaggi I am going come fast Manaya is alone, insulted & hurt"

Unnati says softly but clearly

Unnati says "Yuvraj Aditya Raj Singh if it is fine."

Aditya looks at her with all the rage and angry inside him after what happened. Unnati

continuing

Unnati says "can I talk to Manu Jiji."

Jainandini adds "Jiji please."

Jagat & Aditya say together say "No"

Aditya leaves

Jagat says "On Manu's request I had come here to invite you both families to Pune for you information."

Looking at Brijraj

Jagat says "Maharaj Brijraj Singh"

Looking at Giriraj

Jagat says "Maharaj Giriraj Singh you both are going to face the huge losses in near future."

NEXT : CHAPTER 6.2

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Kanika

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Kanika

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Posted: 10 years ago

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PREVIOUS : CHAPTER 6.1

CHAPTER 6.2

Brijraj's phone rings.

Luv says "Maharaj Brijraj Singh."

Brijraj says "Luv beta"

Luv adding

Luv says "Maharaj Brijraj Singh, I was going through the deal & realised the deal is not profitable for me so I am calling of deal and the other three deal along with it."

Brijraj says "Luv beta we will talk about it don't to this I will face a lot of losses & humiliation."

Luv says "I am sorry."

He cuts the phone. Mernalni's phones rings.

Rohan says "Rajmata Mernalni Devi."

Mernalni says "Rohan beta"

Rohan says "I calling to inform I am calling of all the deal with Devgarh and Jaigarh right away they are not profitable for me."

Mernalni says "Rohan beta don't do that we can sit & talk."

Rohan cutting in

Rohan says "Rajmata Mernalni Devi it is Yuvraj Rohan Raj Singh not Rohan"

Rohan cut the phone, Giriraj's phone rings

Arujn says "Maharaj Giriraj Singh."

Giriraj says "Aru Beta."

Arujn says "Maharaj Giriraj I was going through the deals I realised there only losses to me I am calling of all deals with Devgarh & Jaigarh."

Giriraj says "Aru beta we can sit & talk."

Arujn says "I am sorry"

Everyone is worried the youngsters are confused. Jagat was happy, smiling & satisfied. Outside the Devgargh Mansion, Manu is outside crying & hugging some one.

Aditya says "Manaya"

Manu says "Adi"

Aditya superised asking

Aditya says "Pando you here."

Kartik says "My Rani needed me so I came, Manaya I need to leave."

Kartik leaves. Manu hugs Aditya. Aditya tries to console her asking

Manu says "did I do some thing wrong."

Aditya answering

Aditya says "no"

Manu concerningly asking

Manu says "will they harm Daatabhai or Bade Jijuesa or Bhaisa or Luv or Aru"

Aditya with conformity

Aditya says "no they will not be harmed"

Inside the house

Uday concerned asking

Uday says "What happened Dadisahab, Dad, Brij uncle."

Mernalni says "Rohan called he is calling of all deals with Devgarh & Jaigarh right away."

Brijraj adds "Luv called he is also calling of all deals with both Devgargh & Jaigargh."

Giriraj adding on

Giriraj says "Aru called he is also calling of all deals Jaigargh & Devgargh."

Uday & Vijayinder confused asking

Uday says "But why?"

Jainandini & Unnati

They say together "what did we tell you all of you now have fun"

Jagat goes outside

Jagat says "Adi, Manu"

Manu hugs him

Manu ask "Jaggi is every thing fine."

Jagat smile

Jagat says "Better than fine Manu"

Uday, Unnati, Jainandini & Vijayinder come out.

Uday is sad & worried

Uday says "Can I please talk to Manasvi if you both don't mind."

Manu says "Yuvraj Uday Veer Singh what there left to talk now."

Uday aplogyticaly

Uday say "Manasvi I wanted ask for forgiveness from you."

Manu asking

Manu says "For what?"

Uday say "For what happened in college by the elders"

Unnati adding

Unnati says "And what ever happened today"

Aditya cutting in

Aditya says "You get lost nither your elders deserve forgiveness nor do you"

Uday inquiring

Uday says "Jagat Banna as you know Rohan Dada has just called off deals with both Devgargh & Jaigarh, are you also doing it?"

Jagat starts answering, Manu cutting in

Manu say "Jaggi I want to talk to you."

Jagat confused asking

Jagat says "Manu what happened?"

Manu says "This is for you."

Jagat reads the paper: I am proud of you Jagat Singh Rathore the youngest business tycoon of the country I want you richest man in the country soon.Jaggi fold the paper and put in the pocket. By then Uday & Aditya got into a heated argument

Manu says "Adi control your self please."

Jagat responding

Jagat says "I not calling off the deals Yuvraj Uday Veer Singh."

Jagat smiles at Manu adding softly

Jagat says "just for you Manu"

Aditya understands & smiles at Manu too.

Uday say "Thankyou"

Jagat goes and sits in the car.

Jainandini says "Manu Jiji I wanted to talk to you.

Aditya cutting in

Aditya says "Let's go Manaya."

Manu says "Adi please go & sit in the car I want to talk to J & Unzs."

Aditya objecting

Aditya says "But Manaya"

Manu pleads,before he goes asking

Vijayinder says "What did you just call Manasvi."

Uday, Unnati & Jainandini are a little superised by the question,Aditya looks angrily at Vijay

Aditya says "none of your business"

Manu same tone answering

Manu says "Rajkumar Vijayinder Pratap Singh, Adi calls me Manaya as always."

Vijay & Uday were shocked. Aditya goes in the car, Manu apologetic

Manu says "J, I am sorry what I said that all about your sister I was extremely angry"

Jainandini hugs Manu

Jainandini says "It is fine you're forgiven."

Manu says "Unzs & you should come to Pune for the party it will be huge."

Manu is proceeding to the car. Uday involuntary goes and opens the door and holds it for her. Vijay understands Uday reaction & smiles.

Uday says "In between all this I didn't care to observe enough."

Vijayinder understanding

Vijayinder says "it's is fine, you were pre occupied."

Jainandini asking

Jainandini says "what happened?"

Uday says "Princess"

Unnati confusing asking

Unnati says "what about Manayata Jiji."

Vijay answering

Vijayinder says "everyone except Uday called" Uday adds "everyone called Princess, Manaya in the family."

They all turn to go in. All the elders are there

Giriraj say "After all that hatred Jagat didn't call of the deals."

Uday superised

Uday says "Dad you are mistaken inside who was talking to was a brother & who I talk to was a man who at very young age has been given the title of India's youngest business tycoon."

Unnati continuing

Unnati says "And dad Manasvi Jiji told him to do so."

Jainandini adding

Jainandini says "you all of you didn't even have decency to ask forgiveness from her."

Vijayinder adding

Vijayinder says "further Manasvi realised what she did in anger would have hurt J & she asked for forgiveness"

Jainandini concluding

Jainandini says "I understand her situation & feelings I have also lost my sister haven't I

Mernalni says "We all have to go to Pune and talk to every one personal otherwise we will suffer a lot of losses"

Jainadini in disgust adding

Jainandini says "This all matters to you."

The youngster leave from there in anger. Manu reaches home where Luv, Khushi, Ashwariya and Arjun are wating for Aditya, her & Jagat. They all leave for Pune

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CHAPTER 7.1

The Devgargh and Jaigarh families reach Pune. They met both Rathoregarhh and Rajgarhh families.

Prithvi says "Gadhi Kambha Rajmata Mernalni Devi

Jai adding

Jai says "We welcome you Rajmata Mernalni Devi, Maharaj Brijraj Singh & Maharaj Giriraj Singh and their families to our place."

Komal, Vasundhara & Menika come forward to meet Pragya & Neelam. Vasundhara tries to hug Pragya she stop her Komal tries to hug Neelam stops her. Then Menika tries to hug, Neelam stops her.

Neelam says "You all have come from a long journey fell comfortable here."

Laxshmi, Surya, Dharam & Saraswati come there.

All together say "Gadhi Khamba"

Mernalni says "Laxshmi beta and Surya beta come here, I am see..."

Laxshmi cutting in

Lakshmi says "Rajmata Mernalni Devi it's is not Laxshmi it is Yuvrani Laxshmi Surya Bhan Singh"

Surya says "Rajmata Mernalni Devi it's not Surya, it is Yuvraj Surya Bhan Singh."

Menika was close to Neelam & also her kids

Menika says "Sarswati beta Dharam beta come here & sit..."

Saraswati cutting in

Saraswati says "Maharani Menika Raghav Pratap Singh the name is Rajkumari Saraswati Dharam Bhan Singh not Saraswati."

Dharam says "Maharani Menika Raghav Pratap Singh the name is Dharam Bhan Singh not Dharam."

Uday says "Gadhi Khambha Jija, Jijusahab, Chote Jijusahab Jija & Jij..."

Before Laxshmi goes weak Surya stops her. Surya & Dharam cut in laughing.

They both say "JIJUSAHAB, Yuvraj Uday Veer Singh you have lost that right you should have thought before slapping Manu."

Vijayinder says "But you all don't know what all happened"

Sarawati continuing

Saraswati says "Yuvraj Vijayinder Pratap Singh we know everything don't worry."

Jainandini says "Gadhi Khamba Surya Jijusa Laxshmi Jiji"

Laxshmi goes & hugs Jainandini she followed by Surya both loved Jainandini like their younger sister just like Manu.

Laxshmi says "Haven't I told you before to call me Jija like every one else does."

Vijayinder & Uday realised this & saw weakness.

Both them together say "Jija"

Laxshmi looks at them

Laxshmi say "I am talking to only J not you both Yuvraj Uday Veer Singh, Rajkumar Vijayinder Pratap Singh."

Surya adding

Surya says "While you are here J, you should come over to our place it been long."

Jainandini smiles. She looks at Saraswati.

Jainandini says "Ghandi Khamba Saraswati Jiji & Dharam Jijusahab."

Sarawati says "Haven't I told you call me Jijiya before J like everyone."

Dharam adding

Dharam says "J you surely should come over while you are here."

All the four hug her, Jainandini hugging them back.

Jainandini asking

Jainandini says "Can I ask you something."

Kanika says "J since when do you need permission."

Everyone looks at Kanika. Giriraj & Brijraj loved her.

They say together "Kanu Beta"

They come towards her. Kanika looks at Brijraj

Kanika says "Gadhi Khamba Maharaj Brijraj Singh"

Looking at Giriraj

Kanika says "Gadhi Khamba Maharaj Giriraj Singh."

Looking at everyone Kanika continuing

Kanika says "you all are welcome here please have tea & snacks."

Jainandini & Vijay were close to Kanika more then Uday & Unnati.

Vijayinder says "Gadhi Khamba Badi Bhabhi."

Uday also says "Gadhi Khamba Badi Bhabhi."

Both go towards her to hug

Kanika says "Khamba Gadhi Rajkumar Vijayinder Pratap Singh."

Vijayinder is stopped in his tracks. Looking at Uday Kanika adding

Kanika says "Yuvraj Uday Veer Singh"

Uday is stopped in his tracks, everyone is shocked

Kanika continuing

Kanika says "Badi Bhabhi??? you both are mistaken it is Yuvrani Kanika Rohan Raj Singh."

Unnati says "Yuvrani Kanika..."

Rohan cutting in

Rohan says "since when have you started calling Kanika, Yuvrani, Unzs didn't you always call her Badi Bhabhi."

Unnati hesitantly

Unnati says "Rohan Dada"

Rohan walks to Unnati hugs her

Rohan says "How are you Unzs, I heard Bade Jijusahab & Jijusahab invite Jainandini & you over to their place or they forget to invite you & only invited J."

Surya & Dharam

They say "Rohan please we both love them both like our sisters."

Jainandini smiling hugs Rohan

Jainandini says "Anyways I will not go alone so Rohan Dada, your Unzs will go with me anyways."

Jainandini & Unnati both smile hug Rohan

Uday say "Ghandi Khamba Rohan Dada"

Vijay adding

Vijayinder says "Gadhi Khamba Bade Dada"

Rohan looks at them with rage in his eyes.

Looking at Uday

Rohan says "Yuvraj Uday Veer Singh you are mistaken it's not Rohan Dada."

Looking at Vijayinder Rohan continuing

Rohan says "And so are Rajkumar Vijayinder Pratap Singh it's not Bade Dada. Yuvraj Rohan Raj Singh."

Mernalni says "This indifference is because of that Manasvi..."

Kids cutting in.

They all together say "YUVRANI MANASVI."

Menika, Vijay, Uday were superised so we're the Devgargh & Jaigarh elders shocked

They all says "YUVRANI"

Jainandini & Unnati are nither superised nor shocked.

The Rathoregarh & Rajgarh elders

They say "YES YUVRANI MANASVI

Jai & Neelam adding

They say "KUMARI RAJ SINGH."

Jainandini says "Rohan Dada can I meet Manu Jiji"

Unnati adding

Unnati says "She invited us here and she is no where."

Top of the staircase Jagat & Aditya standing taking to a Manu Uday look at the girl from behind Vijay see where Uday looking.

Jagat says "Shameless people."

Aditya laughing

Aditya says "They all came"

Jagat irritating

Jagat says "Obviously they would come"

Aditya adds "Money that all matters to them"

Manu says "Please Jaggi & Adi control."

Looking at Aditya. Manu adds continue asking

Manu says "Adi should I change, you know Momsa."

Looking at Jagat adding

Manu says "Mamisa doesn't like me go like this in front of guests"

Aditya & Jagat say together "No need they not worth it"

The three go down.

Aditya & Jagat say together Gadhi Khamba. Everyone looks at both of them & Manu. Manu look at Rohan, Dharam Kanika, Saraswati, Laxshmi & Surya smiles, they all nod. Jagat & Aditya are totally unaware of the plan.Neelam and Pragya see this smile with pride at their kids. Prithvi & Jai try going to Manasvi they are stopped

Manu says "Ghandi Khamba Rajmata Mernalni Devi."

Goes to her touches her feet taking her blessings. Manu adding

Manu says "Maharaj Brijraj Singh"

Touches his feet taking his blessings. Manu adding

Manu says "Maharani Komal Brijraj Singh."

Touches her feet taking her blessing adding

Manu says "Maharaj Giriraj Singh."

Touches his feet and takes blessings adding

Manu says "Maharani Vasundhara Giriraj Singh"

Touches her feet and takes her blessings. Stops in front of Menika. Neelam goes to her. Neelam whispers in her ears.

Neelam says "work is never left incomplete haven't I teach you that."

Pragya, Prithvi, Jai, Neelam are proud to see that after show so much resentment to Jaigarh and Devgargh Manu still succeeded in repaying them with respect & showing manners don't come with only class, status and cloths. Aditya & Jagat realise the plan and think this is the best way answer these people. But seeing Manu hesitating in front Menika Aditya regrets telling her that Raghav Pratap Singh is Menika's husband and Vijay's father. Manasvi is very close to Raghav.

Manu says "Gadhi Khamba."

Mumbles under her breath adding

Manu say "Kakisa"

Manu loud & clearly adding

Manu says "Maharani Menika Raghav Pratap Singh."

Vijayinder & Uday are left. Manu mumbles under her breath

Manu say "Vijay Bhai...Vijayinder Bhai...Vijay Banna...Vijayinder Banna... Rajkumar Vijay...Rajkumar Vijayinder"

Vijay hears this but is confused. Manu loud and clear

Manu says "Rajkumar Vijayinder Pratap Singh."

Looking at Uday

Manu says "Yuvraj Uday Veer Singh"

Manu hugs Jainandini & Unnati. then goes and stands in between Rohan & Aditya.

Aditya says "Manaya lets go and practice."

Jagat adds "Then we have to go also"

Manu says "Let's go"

The three of them leave. The elder are shocked to know Aditya calls Manasvi, Manaya & not Manu. They all impressed by Manu.The elders leave go to rest & decided to meet at dinner. Komal, Vasundhara & Menika are walking together Komal notice Menika is lost. Komal asking

Komal says "Menika what happened you look lost"

Vasundhara adding

Vasundhara says "Manasvi is impressive" Komal with conformity

Komal says "Yes she is sweet."

Menika says "we all were wrong in judging her."

Vasundhara asking

Vasundhara says "Menika what are you thinking if it's not this?"

Menika says "Bhabhi did you see Manasvi hesitation in front of me she didn't even hesitate in front of Masahab."

Komal superised

Komal says "Neelu Bhabhi had to come there & support her & Prago Bhabhi, Prithvi Bhaisahab & Jai Bhaisa were uncomfortable & worried. All the kids also."

Vasundhara adding

Vasundhara says "Specially Aditya, he had regretting expression."

Menika says "Vasu Bhabhi I didn't notice but I don't think you could hear her when she said KAKISA then she composed herself & said what everyone heard"

Both Komal & Vasundhara are confused.

IN THE PRACTICE ROOM

Jagat asking

Jagat says "When did you all plan this"

Aditya say "Shut up Jaggi"

Looks at Manu

Aditya says "Sis don't fell guilty for what just happened they all deserved it."

Jagat confused

Jagat says "Guilty but why, what did you tell Manu, they all deserve this."

Manu says "Raghav...Pratap...Singh..."

Aditya says "Dad & Mamusa will talk to Raghu Kakasa."

Jagat hugs Manu