*A Tale of Two Brothers*by Aditi & Jhanvi *Stopped* - Page 4

Imp. Note :
We are going to update this story alternately, though we are writing it together. We will send out PMs too. To make this easier, please Buddy BOTH me and Jhanvi.123. Whoever updates will send a PM! :)

Am I lost in this crowd.. :( I read character sketch awesome
Jhanvu di adidi do plz send PM's plz I Il be off from next week until 20th plz pm me o dont wanna miss anything

Originally posted by: bhagya25

Oh I think I need to throw a bucket of water on myself..
Uff wake up girl..
Two amazing writers together wooow I cant wait
Amazing really waiting ahead to see how it grows!
All the best jhanvi di n aditi 😊

Originally posted by: jhanvi.123

Thank You so much Bhagya😊Will look forward to your feedback :)

Thanks again :D Either I or Aditi will be sending out pms :)

Oh welcome 😊 umm for some seconds I thought I was invisible:p
Thank u will definitely leave my feedback! Even though its not that important 😆 I wud luv to 😃

Amazing!!!
Cs was just awesome...
Please PM me when you update...

Just saw your FF. Best of luck to this collaborative effort. But weekly updates are a bit too far. If possible try updating a bit sooner. But I know how difficult it is to manage your schedules in a college or university.

Originally posted by: shailusri1983

Just saw your FF. Best of luck to this collaborative effort. But weekly updates are a bit too far. If possible try updating a bit sooner. But I know how difficult it is to manage your schedules in a college or university.

Drawing heavily from Shakespeare I see. But who doesn't love the master of drama. If you are planning to go along the lines of some of Shakespeare's famous plays, it would be awesome. I loved all the character sketches you gave. Do think of the works of Jane Austen, the Bronte sisters, George Eliot, and Thomas Hardy also if you are planning to take inspiration from the Classics of English literature.

If you are thinking in terms of a triangle between Viraj, Kabir, and Nisha at some point or the other in your FF, do read The Trumpet Major by Thomas Hardy. It is also the story of two brothers who are in love with the same girl. I remember crying after I read the novel. So all the very best for your creative attempt. Will eagerly look forward for it.

Thank you so much for those references! We will read them whenever possible :)
Actually, we want to write it together and yet, we never have much time.
And now that you've expressed so many expectations, we'll have to keep up the standard as well ;)
Truthfully, I don't think think we will be able to draw so much from any English Author, because there is absolutely no time to read anything now. But, I'll keep those references in mind for my next story. :)
About the triangle...I'm not so sure :P
But I will most definitely read The Trumpet Major.
Thank you! :)

Amazing prologue and character sketch Jhanvi and Aditi Di...

Originally posted by: Nuha09

Amazing!!!
Cs was just awesome...
Please PM me when you update...

Thank you! :)
Send Send a request to Jhanvi Di too, if you already haven't! ;)

Originally posted by: bhagya25

Oh welcome 😊 umm for some seconds I thought I was invisible:p
Thank u will definitely leave my feedback! Even though its not that important 😆 I wud luv to 😃

Sorry, I missed you out :P
And, your feedback is as important as everyone else's is ;)