Originally posted by: sdlife19
Your copied update and here 's the orginal Part tat belongs to me...
Maan was lying on his bed in outhouse but sleep was far away from him. He knew tat he had very less time with Geet now. He tossed in his bed from right to left and left to right. He moved out of his bed and slowly made his way towards the mansion. He took the spare key which was kept in the outhouse and slowly opened the door. With slow steps he climbed the steps and reached Geet's room. His hands shivered to open the door but he had to do. He could not be at peace without seeing her. he slowly opened the door without making noise and the sight in front of him brought tears in his eyes.
Maan saw geet slowly patting her stomach and murmuring to herself. He moved closer to her and saw her in deep sleep but it looked like she was all awake and talking to her baby.
Geet: baby aap humse gussa tho nahi hain na. Hum janthe hain ki hum aapko woh sab khushi nahi de sakenge jo aapke dada de sakthe hain par hum kya karthe baby. Aapke dada humse bahut naraaz hain. janthe hain aaap hum apke dada se bahut bahut pyar karthe hain aur humesha karthe rahege. Aap please aapke dada ko kabhi galat mat samjhana. Jab unka gussa thanda hoga na tab aapke dada hume yaha se leke jayenge. Tab tak hum aur aap unka intezaar karte rahege aur unhe der saara pyar karte rahege.
( baby u r not angry on me na. I know tat I cant give u all the happiness tat ur dada can give but wat could I do baby. Ur dada is very angry on me. U know I love ur dada very very much and will always love. Never think tat ur dada was wrong baby. When his anger will go na he will come here to take us. Till than we will wait and will keep loving him more)
Maan could not control his tears. He slowly bent down and caressed her face and hair an placed a soft kiss on her forehead and said " M sorry Mishti" and touched her belly saying " M sorry baby, aapke dada bahut bure hain. aap na unhe kabhi maaf mat karna, kabhi mat karna. Aapke dada ne aapki mama ko bahut dukh diya. Aapko bhi ish duniya mein aane se pelhe hi'.. main bahut bura hoon baby, par aapne meri sazza apni mama kyu di. Aap janthe the na ki aapki mama apko bahut pyar karthi phir aap kyu chod ke chale gaye mama ko, aapne unhe itni badi sazza kyu di. Sazza tho sirf hume milni chahiye phir kyu aap apni mama ko chod ke gaye.
Aap janthe hain aapki mama aapke ish gunegaar dada se bahut pyar karthi hain, itna pyar ki woh hosh mein na hokar bhi hume apna gunegaar nahi manthi. Main kaise kahu aapki mama se ki woh humse itna pyar na kare, na kare itna pyar ki hum ushe jhel nap aye. Dhumb jaanthe hain hum, yeh jaankar ki aapki mama humse kabhi nafrat nahi kar sakthi, yeh jaankar bhi ki hume unhe sirf dard aur dukh ke alva kuch nahi diya. Baby aap tho bhagwan ke paas ho na tho unhe kahu ki aapki mama ko jaldi theek kare taki hum unhe khush dekh kar hamesha ke liye aapki mama se dur chale jaye."
( m sorry baby. Ur dada is very bad. Never forgive ur dada. Never. Ur dada gave lots of pain to ur mama. I did not let u also to come in this world' I m very bad baby but why did u punish ur mom for it. U know na tat ur mama loves u very much and why did u leave her and go, why did u give her so big punishment. I deserve punishment not ur mama, why did u leave her and go baby.
U know tat ur mama loves criminal dada very much, so much tat she never think tat m wrong. How can I tell ur mama not to love me so much, don't love me so much tat I cant take it. I will break by knowing tat ur mama can never hate me for my sinsven after giving her so much pain. Baby u r with god na tell him to make ur mama well soon so tat I can see her happy and can go away from her)
Maan stopped caressing her stomach . he felt tat he missed the most beautiful moment of his life. He was such a unlucky father who himself killed his child. Maan slowly put his hand on geet forehead and caressed it and said
" Geet don't love me so much tat I wont be able to see in ur eyes. Hate me geet so tat I will be able to go away from you. Hate me geet for the pain I gave you. Hate me for killing our child geet, hate me for loving you, hate me for marrying you and hate me so tat I die each second thinking about you. I know geet tat my sins are not forgivable but please geet don't punish urself by doing all this. some out of this geet come out so tat ur Maan can die a peaceful death by staying away from you. Come out of ur dark life geet so tat u can punish me with ur own hands. Do you know geet tat dadima told me tat u were dead and I did not even think once tat how can Geet die when her Maan was alive but see Geet once again I failed ur love. Once again I gave u pain by believing tat u were far away. But its strange na Geet tat even after failing I n love for so many time s u still love me. Don't geet don't love me, m not capable of it."
Maan placed soft peck on her forehead for the last time before going out and turned to leave when he felt Geet holding him and saying.
" Maan aap janthe hain yeh aapka baby bilkul aap hi ki tarah hain. din baar hume pareshan kartha hain Maan. Maan aap jaldi aajayenge na hume lene, hum dono bahut akele hain Maan aur hume darr lag raha hain Maan ki humara baby hume kahi chod ken a jaaye. Please Maan jaldi aaye aur hume aapke saath lejaye. I love You Maan".
( Maan do u know tat ur baby is like u. he just likes me to trouble like u do. Maa come fast maan we both miss u maan. m sacred maan tat our baby will leave us and go maan. please come fast maan and take us with u back. I love u maan)
Maan could not bear it any more and placed her hand on the bed and left the room. He cursed himself for loving this angel. He cursed his own life for killing his innocent angel.
Dadima who had come to see geet for the last time was shocked to see Maan sitting near Geet and talking. She once was angry as he did not come for the whole day but listening to his words made her to stop in her track. Unknowingly there were tears in her eyes seeing Maan breaking down like tat. Though she knew tat he had done sins but she knew tat Geet always loved him.
" Nahi Maan aap yu thoot nahi sakthe. Abhi tho yeh sirf shuruvaat hui hain Maan aur abhi bahut kuch dekhna baaki hain. hum janthe hain ki aap ne hume wada kiya hain par hum yeh bhi janthe hain ki aap Geet se ab aur dur nahi reh payenge aur aapko humari har kausauti pe khara utarana hoga Maan. hume Yakeen ho juka hain ki jo faisla humne liya hain woh galat nahi hain ab aapko apne aap ko sambhit karna hoga. Sambhit karna hoga jo galati aapse huyi hain aap uski sazza pane ke liye tayar hain. aur aapki sazza yeh hain ki aap khud geet ko tadapte dekhe aur ushe ishe bahar nikale."
( no maan u cant break like this maan. this is just the start maan and there is lots to see and bear. I know tat u promised me but I also know tat u will not be able to stay away from her and u will cross all obstacles for her. I now have full faith maan tat my decision was not wrong and u will prove urself now. U will prove tat u r ready fro taking the punishment for ur sins from geet and u will bring geet out of this darkness Maan)
Cheapest way to be WRITER by copying someone else who has put her life in giving them... and you people are here supporting such copycats who dont have a bit of shame in doing such cheap copying
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