my story on rishbala .... rishbala's day out :D

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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi guys... im a bit busy. but still, when ever i think about rishbala i dont know from where i'm getting all those ideas 😆. it's just pouring from my mind. i cant keep quiet without sharing it to you all 😳. ok, this is my very short and cute imagination on rk and madhu...
do read and share your comments if you get time 😊.

ps... i want to share one more thing. i like to use all these emoticons. when ever i use this 😊 smiley. i feel, 'anyways i'm smiling, why restriction in that. bada wala smiley use kardho'. then i use this 😃... ... 😆 ... smile karne me kiya limitation , hai na ??!!!

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in rk mansion...
radhaji ... '' madhu, kal tumara janam din hai na?! tum maike jaana jathi ho beta. waise rishu bi yaha nahi hai. agar woh yaha hotha toh tume achcha lagega''
madhu...''nahi ma. me nahi jarahi hoon. koyi baat nahi hum dhono kal mandir jaathe hai''
radhaji...''teek hai. tum jake sojaavo. bahut dher hogayi''

madhu goes to their room and looks at rk's picture on the wall. remembers the convo between them.
madhu...''kiya sooch rahe ho??''
rk...'' muje ek hafthe keliye out door shooting jaana hai''
madhu...''ha, film me kaam karthe ho. out door toh jaanahi hai. isme naya kiya hai??!!''
rk...''nahi madhu. agar me out door keliye chal gaya toh tumara b'day ka din me yaha nahi rahoonga''
madhu...''phewww...ithnisi baat. koyi baat hahi, tum jaavo. tum wapas aane ke baat hum saath me manayenge. teek hai ?!''
rk...''par madhu ...''
madhu...'' shhh... ab koyi argument nahi.''

that time she only convinced rk and sent him for shooting. now she feels slightly low. she misses him on this special day. but what to do. she goes to bed.

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at mid night, madhu is sleeping on the bed ...
one shadow approaches her and kisses on her hand madhu opens her eyes slowly... after seeing that shadow she shouts ... '' rk ... ''
rk... closes her mouth with his hand and says ...''madhu, chillavo mat. mehi hoon''
madhu calms down ...''rk, tum yaha kiya kar rahe ho??!! tum toh shooting pe gaye the na??!!...''... hits him playfully ...''tum muje aisa hamasha darathe ho''
rk by sitting on the bad by her side...''janam din mubarak ho ...biwi''
madhu...'' 😳... thank you pati''... puts her hands around his neck... ''toh iskeliye tum aisa aadhi raath waha se yaha aaye ho...mmm. waise tum andhar aaye kaise ho 😲?! mansion ka pura door band hai 😕''
rk...''rk waha bhi chala jaatha hai jaha hawa bhi nahi jaa saktha. ye toh mera ghar hai''...''ok chalo''... removes her quilt.
madhu ...''kaha ??!!''
rk...''koyi sawal nahi... koyi jawab nahi. chalo''
madhu...''par rk...''
rk...''toh...tum aisa nahi manogi''... lifts her from the bed
madhu...''rk... rk chodo muje''
rk...''chup. nahi toh patti bandhoonga. chup''
madhu keeps quiet.
madhu...''rk, atleast muje kapde change karne dho''
rk...''uskeliye zaroorath nahi hai'' ... goes out taking her in his arms

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in the car, rk driving and madhu beside him
madhu...''tum koyi bhi chees ko normalsa kiyu nahi hone thethe ho??!! suhag raat keliye bhi utake gaye aur ab bhi 😡''
rk smiles at her...''biwi, aksar ye booljathi ho ki me rk hoon. rk kabhi bhi normalsa nahi rehtha ...''
madhu...''ya toh bahut kamina ya bahut badiya... hai na?!!
rk...😊
madhu...''waise ithni raat ko hum jaa kaha rahe hai??!!''
rk...drives without replying her

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madhu...''rk, tume toh abi out door shooting pe hona chagiye na?! phir ab muje kaha leke jaarahe ho?''
rk...''tumara janam din manane keliye. aaj pura din me tumara saath rahoonga''
madhu...''phir tumara shooting ?!''
rk...''meri biwi ki janam dinse zyadha muje koyi kaam imporant nahi hai''
madhu...''so tum shooting chodke yaha aaye ho. waha tumara kaam koun karega??!!''
rk...''datto mat. sirf ek hi din hai. mene zare inthazam kariliya. director aaj baki artist ka shot lenge. me kal un sab se join karoonga. so dont worry''
madhu...''aaj bagar bithane ki plan hai toh muje dress kiyu change karne nahi diya?! aur ab mere paas doosra kapda bhi nahi hai ''
rk...''dress ki kiya zaroorath hai biwi. wiase aaj tuumara jaanam din hai. 😳😉''
madhu...''shut up ☺️''...''ha ithna bolthe ho, mera b'day gift kaha hai?!"
rk...''biwi, madhu keliye is dhuniya me sabse bada kushi uska 'rk'. ab toh me uski bahut paas hoon. toh isse zyadha kiya chagiye''
madhu... '' 😳 ''

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rk brings her to a village where they came after padmini malik wedding and goes to the same house where they stayed before.
kaka...''aavo rishab. kaise ho madhubala?''
both...'' achche hai 😃''
kaka ...''teek hai. me chaltha hoon. aap log aram karo. me sube aatha hoon''... leaves the place.
madhu...''rk 😲😃 ... ye gaav, ye kaka ??!! inko ab tak tume yaad hai?! aur is bar kaka bhi tumara naam teek se bola''
rk...''andhar chalo''

both goes inside.
rk... gives a sari to madhu...''change karlo''
madhu...'' 😲 fully prepared?!''... goes in and comes after changing.
rk is struggling to wear dhothi ... madhu laughs at him.
madhu...'' 😆 ab bhi tumne nahi seeka''
rk...''tum toh ho na, phir muje kiyu seekna hai''... she helps him to wear.
madhu...''rk, the super star ko toh ye sab... gaav, dhothi, achcha nahi laktha hai. phir ye sab kiya hai??! kiya plan hai mr.rishab kundra 😳''
rk...''rk jo bhi kartha kai uski andhaas me kartha hai. aaj ek din, me tumare saath is gaav me aam insan bankar rahoonga. hum dhono ek sadha pati patni ki thara jeeyenge. jaisa tum chathi thi, jaise mane tumse ek bar wadha kiya. pura zindhagi aisa nahi ho saktha, par ek din toh karsaktha hoon. tumareliye... ye mera b'day gift hai''...''no shooting, no super star, no rk, ... sirf tum aur me''
madhu...'' sach 😃?!!''
rk...''ha biwi.''
madhu...''pura din ?! ''
rk...''ha, pura din.''... ''tum kush ho?''
madhu...''bahut kush. pehli bar hum yaha aaye the na, jab bhi muje bahut pasand aaya. ab phir se hum dhono yaha. bahut achcha laktha hai''
rk...''tab muje bhi achcha laga.''
madhu...''joot mat bolo. tum bahut nakre karrahe the na?!''
rk...''woh bhi hai. lekin tumare saath aisa rehna achcha laktha tha. tumara woh sadi gaav wali style me. tum usme bahut hot lag rahi thi, teek aaj ki thara''...pulls her towards him by her waist
madhu just listens him with a smile on her face.
rk...''tume us raat yaad hai?!! ''... his face changed slightly as he remembered something. she notices that and knows the reason also. but doesnt ask anything. he controls himself and continues
''us raat, woh song ... 😳😊''
madhu...'' 😳 😳''...
rk... ''mene bahut koshish ki apne aapko control karneki. par nahi karpaya. 😳. tab hamare beech sab kuch honewala tha, par achanak muje aisas huvaa ki 'ye sab teek nahi hai saah phere se pehle. toh rokdhiya''...''par madhu jo bhi mene us raath kaha woh sach hi hai. mera prem game nahi tha madhu''
madhu...''ab ye sab kiyu batharahe ho. ab hum bahut kush hai na. muje aur kiya chagiye''
rk...''aisahi...bathana chathatha''
madhu...''oh sab bool jaavo. me is din, pura enjoy karna chathi hoon. ek minute bhi waste nahi karna chathi hoon''
rk...''me bhi waste nahi karna chatha hoon 😉''... pulls her again
madhu...''😳... rk, chodo muje''
rk... ''nahi''
madhu...''ok, ruthambar , chodo muje''
rk...''kiya ?!!''
madhu...''ha, tumine toh kaha aaj tum rk nahi ho. aam insaan ho. toh isi naam se hi bulaavoongi na. 😃''
rk...''stop it biwi. 😡''
madhu...''ok, rithvik, rupesh, nelesh... isme koun sa naam tume pasand hai bolo. wahi naam se tume bulathi hoon.''
rk...''ruko bathatha hoon'' tries to catch her. she escapes and runs. rk stops her. both lose their balance and fall on the cot over there.

'dat...'... cot breaks and both fall down

both...''😆 😆''
rk...''ye palang abi bi aisa hi hai 😆''

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i just started to write. wanted to touch village episodes of the show. tried little bit.
hope you enjoy. 😃
tell me you like it or nor


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bevi-najim thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
awesome os
this is perfect birthday gift for madhu
ya i am laughing like mad now 😆😆😆
😆😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Bindhiya chamke hi...lol...we do remember the song...their hot village night...
Beautiful imagination kaju...
Loved it...
I felt like watch meiej...
Its really nice to relish the old golden moments...
U have written nice...rk's dialogue r awesome ...it has his attitude & style...
Haha...they didnt change d cot still lol...
Hope atleast this time they go beyond a limit after d song lol...
Thanks for sharing this story with us kaju...its lovely...

Btw...how r u?? do u remember me?? Missed u but glad u r back now...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: bevi-najim

awesome os

this is perfect birthday gift for madhu
ya i am laughing like mad now 😆😆😆
😆😆😆



😆
thanks 😃
i know you will like this 😳

Edited by kajal99 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: madhurish

Bindhiya chamke hi...lol...we do remember the song...their hot village night...

Beautiful imagination kaju...
Loved it...
I felt like watch meiej...
Its really nice to relish the old golden moments...
U have written nice...rk's dialogue r awesome ...it has his attitude & style...
Haha...they didnt change d cot still lol...
Hope atleast this time they go beyond a limit after d song lol...
Thanks for sharing this story with us kaju...its lovely...

Btw...how r u?? do u remember me?? Missed u but glad u r back now...



thanks sudha 😃 (got your answer 😉)
im fine dear.
i'm sharing my stories since last Saturday. but not fully active in the forum.
i'm happy too to here form you
thanks dear

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Posted: 10 years ago
#6

Originally posted by: kajal99



thanks sudha 😃 (got your answer 😉)
im fine dear.
i'm sharing my stories since last Saturday. but not fully active in the forum.
i'm happy too to here form you
thanks dear


Yeah ...got my answer...
Oh well...i saw but i was buzy then so cohldnt interact with u much...
Thats nice...
Welcome
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Posted: 10 years ago
#7
Simply superb...Your dialogues for RK are so super ...puri ki puri RK
ki atma is in you...lol...Can picture DVD/Rishbala in this entire
scenario...very nice...Please continue..😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: anitarani

Simply superb...Your dialogues for RK are so super ...puri ki puri RK

ki atma is in you...lol...Can picture DVD/Rishbala in this entire
scenario...very nice...Please continue..😊



😆 😆 😆... thanks dear 😃
i'm glad you liked it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome story Kajal!
RK's surprise gift for madhu, RK aur Madhu ka simple si zindgi gujarne ka sapna!😊
I loved that village episode! Rishbala turned into Mr. & Mrs. Ghorpade😃 Its funniest episode in MB! Kaka ne jaanbujh kar RK ko kitne sare naam diye the.. rakesh, rajesh, rupesh, ritambar, ramrao😆 RK ki to puri band baj gayi thi!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: PRATHA1

Awesome story Kajal!
RK's surprise gift for madhu, RK aur Madhu ka simple si zindgi gujarne ka sapna!😊
I loved that village episode! Rishbala turned into Mr. & Mrs. Ghorpade😃 Its funniest episode in MB! Kaka ne jaanbujh kar RK ko kitne sare naam diye the.. rakesh, rajesh, rupesh, ritambar, ramrao😆 RK ki to puri band baj gayi thi!😃



thanks dear 😃
actually i was waiting for your reply and reaction.
i love to read your and few more friends replies 😃
im so happy that you liked
thank you
Edited by kajal99 - 10 years ago

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