SaAz FF: A JOURNEY OF LOVE CHAPTER 8 PG 26

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Hello everyone! I am going to start a FF on the journey of SaAz after they leave Niyamat House .I am not a professional writer but I cant take SaAz out of my mind. I really want to be connected with them and that is why I am writing this.

I would really like to thank Suvika di , her FF has inspired me to write something of my own .I know that I cant even come anywhere closer to her but I would thank her heartily for inspiring me . And I thank the readers for spending their time to go through this.

Here you go!!!


Ch 2 -Pg 3

Ch3-Pg 6

Ch 4 -Pg 9

Ch 5 - Pg 14

Ch 6- Pg 19

Ch 7- PG 24

Ch 8-Pg 26

A JOURNEY OF LOVE

CHAPTER 1

Sahir and Arzoo were walking hand in hand with Ashrafi

still perched on his shoulder. None of them spoke a single word to

each other after they had left Niyamat House.They were in their own

world of thoughts. But their hearts were heavy with various

emotions. Arzoo had mixed emotions.She was happy that finally

Sahir has freed himself from all his promises and took the first step

for living a life of his own and to pursue his dreams. At the same time

she had an unexplainable sad feeling hovering around her . Ashrafi

gave a small peck on her ear bringing her back to the

senses.Darkness has started to spread but she could see ray of light

in it - Yes . We had done it .We are finally together . There is nobody

in between us . My Valentine's Day wish has come true . Ya khuda !

Aap ki lakh lakh shukriya!! Humari mohabbat hume vapas dene ki

liye!

Meanwhile Sahir was in a reverie

.We had walked out of Niyamat House.There will be lot of

satisfaction and happiness in our life ahead.I have no doubt in it.But

will there be any comfort? I had seen the adversity of life. I had coped

up with it. I know that even Arzoo has experienced the lower extreme

of life. But this one?Will she be able to make it?The context is

entirely different now . We don't have any job right now. What are we

going to do for living? I was the one who taught her that talent alone

is not sufficient to succeed .It requires Marketing and Brand name

too.What should I do now?Should I start a business? No.Right now I

don't have enough resources for it.Maybe for time being I should

look out for a job.Yes .That would be the better case in given

circumstances.


Ammi! I never thought she would do something like this . I

managed not to show any sorrow or hurt infront of Arzoo . But can I

pull it off?Oh! Come on Sahir! You can do it!.You had done this on

that night too when she was worried about your safety and woke up

screaming your name. Yes .I am brave enough to do this. After all

this is for MY Arzoo.

Arzoo turned her head to look at Sahir . Right hand was

in his pocket and the other hand was clasped with hers .Ashrafi was

perched on his left shoulder.His face was calm but grim . She could

see the boiling emotions behind his calm facade.He was walking on

the side of traffic-protecting her. I will not let him go through this

alone. 7 years back I was not with him but now -His Humsafar is

right here. I will heal all his wounds! She didn't know how to break

the silence brewing in between them.


"Mirchi!Mirchi!Mirchi!".Ashrafi was screeching.Sahir

plunged out of his thoughts and saw Ashrafi .Thank you Ashrafi she

thought to herself."Mohtarma ! Are you hungry?" .Sahir asked

Ashrafi with a wide grin on his face.He noticed Arzoo staring at him

and asked her " Are you hungry too? ". Arzoo didn't know what to

say.She was really hungry but didn't have the urge to eat .In that

moment she heard a prayer from some dargah nearby. "Sa.."

"Suno!" interrupted his voice."Ji?"."Shall we go to dargah and

offer prayer before we have our dinner?Are you alright with

it?".Arzoo was more than happy."Ji!.Koi baath nahin"

Sahir and Arzoo entered the dargah.Arzoo had a

flashback running through her mind .It was the same dargah she had

gone to when he-The Shark had insulted her for requesting a day-off

for Linda. The meeting with Maulvi flashed."Tumari humsafar tumse

zyada dardh apne andhar chupaya hain" He was right afterall!.Even

after they came out of Niyamat house he still has traces of

pain,unsaid stories of his past, traumas of childhood ,an orphan tag

that haunted him-Maybe does it still haunt him?. "Wu-du karo!"

came his soft voice .It sounded like a different person was standing

beside her. She did her washing. Sahir tied a hand kerchief around

his head and Arzoo draped the duppata around her for praying.They

freed down Ashrafi in the courtyard and fed some grains. Both of

them entered the Prayer hall. Sahir knelt in the Men's row and Arzoo

in Women's row which was at a distance behind Men's row. She

closed her eyes and started praying. Meanwhile Sahir too started

praying .

Sahir and Arzoo came out of the Hall after their prayer and

took Ashrafi."Mirchi!Mirchi!Mirchi!".Ashrafi screeched into Arzoo's

ears."Now only you had grains and you started to ..."."Mohtarma!"

Sahir's voice cut hers."You need Mirchi?" asked Sahir with a

naughty smile."Arzoo aur Sahir ke liye paratha bhi".For a moment all

the stress flied out into air and he laughed . Arzoo too started

laughing heartily and he gave a peck in Ashrafi's beak.The Prayer,

divine aura around them and Ashrafi's antics gave them the much

needed sukoon.


"Beti!".Both of them turned towards the direction from

which the voice came.It was the same maulvi ."Salam walaikkum"

said SaAz in unison.

"Allah Tala aap dono ko salamat rakhega!.

Beti tume tumhara humsafar milgaya.

Meine kahata na dardh ki pukar mein dardh aaya hain.

Tum dono ki mohabbat ka safar aaj shuru ho raha hain.

Yeh safar bahut lambha hain.

Aur is safar mein Khuda aap ke saath dhega.

Har safar mein mushkilon hote hain.

Aur mushkilon ke baad chane aata hain.

Aap dono ki yeh safar me bhi mushkilon rasthe ki beech me aa jate hain.

Lekin aap dono ko un mushkilon se ladna hoga.

Yeh safar itne aasaan nahi hota.

Lekin aap ki mohabbat ke sahare usse ladna hoga.

Yeh aap ki pyaar ki imtehaan hain.

Jao! jaake yeh saabit karo ki aap dono ek dusra ke liye sachi humsafar hain ."

Sahir and Arzoo came out of the mosque with a fresh

lease of thoughts and purified souls.They had a silent dinner in a

nearby dhaba.They clasped their hands together even more tightly

than before and started to walk towards the railway staton."Two

tickets for Lucknow " asked Sahir in the counter with a newly found

determination and Arzoo admired him.Yes she could feel it-

The Shark is back!!


Guys please leave a comment below on how was it!

Forgive me for any error in the Hindi part because I know hindi only to an extent.😊


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow its nice for a start. Do continue and I really want to know what happens to saiyara and saaz.
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perfect starting!! They went to dargah to pray for their future and asharfi becoming cupid!!c,i just loved this!! Do continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow I love the way you started the story! Can't wait to see Shark back in action! I also loved the way you described Sahir's emotions and feelings after he left Niyamat House. As well as the way SaAz were worrying about each other and supporting each other! Please do continue! Great job yaar! 👏 ❤️
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Great update... really nice to read.. Please continue soon..
loved the way you bought back the dargha scene.. Defford the shark is back...

Loved the way you added the blessings of the mualvi saab... while reading you could feel there tension... yet you could feel there love overcoming there worry.. hope asharfi always brings the much needed family unity always ...😊
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Great and Awesome start towards a new beginning .
Thank You so much for starting a story as I was missing SaAz a lot .
Keep it going .👍🏼


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Brilliant idea! Season 2 mil hi gaya :D
Please continue.
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wow !!! loved it
please do continue
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awsome👍🏼
please continue...
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It was really nice...I loved how you incorporated dargah in the story.eager to read more...

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