TaaRey FF- Away from you updt 29/4 - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago
superb concept
just today read every parts all were awesome
it was so emotional and i was crying when reading it
update soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
Suprb update dear...
Loved it...
Plz update soon...
Thanks 4 PM...
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi everyone, thnks for likes replies and views...sorry for not being able to reply individually.

and for those of you who r upset tr arent fine, talking ...well its a break up story so i would say pl do read only after another 2 parts atleast...i wudnt want anyone to feel extraa bad.😊
thanks..here its

part 4

recap- tr not talking as rey asked taani to stay away from him..taani moved to a new place

And the girl went on and on ...itne mahino se saath the taani! Aur dekho ab usko

lagtha hain hum compatible nahin hain! And whys that? Why?( taani shook her head in a i dont know)

Kyunki main apne kaam pe zyaada concentrate karthi hoon uspein nahin..is that

wrong? ( taani shook her head saying no )


she stopped talking ,eating still and then shaking her head continued

actually hes right...main hoon workoholic ...so what right! I mean is that a sin?

( taani shook her head in a no) oh u dont know how i m feeling right now...and

upar se this article! she put the last piece of whatever was on the plate into her

mouth and fell on the laptop face down

Taani felt a ache in her heart returning and then feeling sorry for anjali said

sympathetically , " im sorry ...i know matlab ...i can understand kaisa lagtha hain.

I know ki abhi aapko lagrahaan hoga ki theres nothing important in the world for

you anymore...i know how it feels... Itna pain hotha hain ki aapko realise ho

jaatha hain ki dil kahaan hain !

Anjali had lifted her head up and stared at taani s soft voice by now her face

running from surprise to shock...realising taani was speaking more to herself

Yeh samaj aajaatha hain ki its possible to carry on with a routine without feeling

your heartbeat even once in a day...jaise dil ki aur dimaakh ki connection toot

chukaa hain. Ek ajeeb sa emptiness hotha hain...Aap yahin sochthe rehjaaoge ki

kya hua, kyun hua...kiski galthi thi.. (shaking her head still in her own world)

but aisa koi reason nahin hotha bas its just destiny.Agar krishnaji nahin chahthe

ki koi saath rahein tho hamare chahna... its useless" with a mental glimpse of

rey s broken face as he said for the last time i love you taani before NDC finals.

she suddenly caught sight of anjali staring at her ,her mouth wide open with the

piece of snack still in her mouth. Taani s face turned red with embarrassment

as she came back to earth and then becoming her own blundering self said

" mera matlab ...it ll be fine..." and picking up the empty plates started to walk

away towards the kitchen hitting her leg on a chair

Anjali swallowed the snack, looked at taani shrewdly as taani hid her face for

a few seconds trying to hide her sudden rush of feelings and embarassment

that she was talking so much to someone she didnt really know.

Taani ho kya jaatha hain tumhe! You know her for 4 days!

taani brought two cups of tea and anjali picked up the glass of tea and sipping it

" recent breakup?" taani didnt respond as she sat on the small chair opposite to

the sofa anjali occupied " first breakup?" no response except for taani flinching.

Anjali gave a knowing look and continued," dont worry the first is the worst,

baad mein becomes better. And you start realising ki that guys are generally not

worth bothering about. They are selfish **** "


taani s frown showed how uncomfortable she was becoming with the

conversation but anjali continued ," they use you , they say they love you and

after a while take you for granted and on top of all this they always think they

are right..."

Taani blurted out defensively ,"sab log ek jaise nahin hothe "

Anjali looked at her and nodded slowly understandingly," tum abhi bhi us ladke

ke baare mein serious ho? " no response...she smiled and shaking her head said

" his loss my dear.. tumhaari jaisi sweet ladki ko koi kaise ditch karsaktha hain?

Kya hua tha? "

Taani blushed and said ," sorry aapki baat chal rahin thi aur main..."

Anjali a small smile on her face easily said ," oh actually im glad im out of it ...

aur complain karna bhi nahin chahiye...kyunki ( grin beginning on her face)

break up maine kiya ... .i was quite bored of him "


taani looked a little surprisedand anjali laughed.Taani smiled inspite of herself

at anjali s change in mood and while anjali grin now on her face, finished the

tea in a gulp and said," well i cant think...chodo wo sab...is baar article copy

paste karnewaali hoon" and collecting her stuff walked to door taani muttering sorry i couldnt help stood at the door

Anjali smiled fondly," no no , waise bhi thanks for the food. I owe you and dont

let me become a nuisance for you"

taani smiled and closed the door saying take care , sab kuch teek hojaayega

Anjali stopped the closing door and smiling broadly you dont worry mere baare

mein, yeh mera fourth break up tha is saal ka...and laughing walked away

leaving taani smiling a little in surprise.

She closed the door and sat on the sofa wondering how people could get over

so easily. Mujhe itna difficulty horahin hain ...shayad sab serious nahin hothe...

shayad sab rey nahin hothe... but Rey jaisa tho koi nahin world mein. Bhai bhi nahin. Wo kabhi bhi selfish

nahin hue hain- breakup ke liye bhi nahin and felt a tenderness for him instead

of the recent confusing feelings she used to have where she tried to pretend

he didnt matter and hide behind a mask.

How she missed him! And he wasnt even interested in talking to her... I guess

unki naarazgi jaayaz hain but ...her eyes stung and she sighed ...shayad mujhe

normally baat karlena chahiye...

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College - Boys locker room few days later

Guys doing usual masti entered the locker room smiling - chalo sabko ek junior

buddy milgaya but new girls ko checkout hi nahin kiya humne etc., etc., but wo

jo swayam ki peeche thi wo acchi thi...etc., etc., this s actually nice idea taani ka

And they heard someone mention Taani...they stopped all together to overhear

one guy say "tum kya sach mein taani ko propose karne waale ho?" and they all

except rey moved a little closer

"of course not, matlab abhi nahin. Im just going to ask her if she has a date for

the freshers party bas... and ..." dhruv the sports guy was talking to one of the

other guys and they stopped as they spotted d3 guys staring at them..

dhruv chap looked once at rey and then at swayam and said," umm...i was ..."

"dhruv see, i dont think its a good idea..." swayam s tone final

"but kyun? U know me, achhe se" swayam gave his tough look but the guy

continued sincerely," ive always thoughts shes sweet and now that..."

swayam hesitated slightly looked at rey, rey stared his face showing no emotion

though his hands were in tight fists and he kept them in his pockets to prevent

the urge he was getting of smashing something like dhruv s face right on...

but dhruv looked only at the expressionless face and ," now that ..."


And rey walked right thro the group and to his locker, opened it with unnecessary

force and tried putting his head inside the locker as if the locker would save him

from acting on his urge to hit something.

" tumhe itni possesive nahin hona chahiye apni sister ke liye. Warna wo life mein

move on kaise karegi swayam " dhruv was saying.

The guys looked at one another and vicky said,"right...but dhruv taani ka date

hain freshers party ke liye...as everyone turned to him ) wo mere saath hain...so

better luck next time" sneeringly

Dhruv looked at vicky like he was mad ,then at rey and then at swayam and

then at the other two guys standing next to him confused with their equation and then back at vicky and said smiling

" nice try vicky! But i think i ll just ask her myself" and went out of the locker room with his friends.

Swayam turned to vicky and vicky immediately said " i was lying yaar "and

moved behind nil to save himself from swayam s stern look

"pata hain but ...bohot kharab jhoot tha "

"arre i was trying to see that yeh dhruv ka bachha taani ko na pooche...i mean rey..."

"its not necessary vicky" rey closed the locker with a huge bang thankfully

pulling his head out before closing and turned to them.

"cmon rey. Tum upset ho wo bhi upset hain but kyuch din baad aisa nahin rahega

" vicky its over.. Final. So really... Mujhe koi interest nahin hain..." and started

moving to the door.

The guys looked from one to the other as vicky s more than usually serious voice

continued, "tu kisse jhoot bolrahaan hain rey...humse ya khudh se...interest

nahin hain!"

rey continued to move to the door pretending like he was least concerned

while vicky insisted as swayam stared making stop it faces to vicky ,"

"agar tum dono ke beech sach mein sab kuch over hain tho prove karo...tu..."

"vickynot interested " rey said in a final sort of a voice and walked out of locker room.

The guys giving each other looks of what do we do now? Nothing ...kaise nothing.

..look at him hes so not himself... following him after a moment.

Corridor just outside locker room

Rey had moved a few steps when he banged into someone - he held the person

by the arms and stopped from falling and then looked - hi, U ok? Whats the hurry?

kahaan jaana hain?

The guys out of the locker room stood a few feet away and looked curiously

the girl hesitated," actually ...tumse milne" eyebrow raise questioningly , the girl

looked back at two girls who were standing a little away and trying to act like

they didnt exist and then turning to rey said hurriedly ," wo...i wanted to ask you

if you ...tum mere date banoge freshers party ke liye? "

"sorry sonali, im not..." and then stopped as he saw the guys standing and

giving him challenging looks - he understood they were waiting for him to refuse

so that they could push him towards taani - they smiled all together and he

smiled at the girl in front of him and said " ok... i can ..but only as friends"

he added

Sonali s face broke into a huge smile as she replied," no problem rey...its fine.

I understand. So see you" and he nodded and she nodded and moved to the

other side letting her pass to the two girls who grinned from ear to ear at her

and all three went running away.

He turned to look at the guys , they stared at him shock written clearly on their

faces and he walked away without talking.

"happy? Aur karo challenge!" swayam shot to vicky as poor vicky looked very

upset swayam went after rey , reached him, placed a hand on his shoulder and

for a second they stared at each other - rey daring swayam to say something but

then swayam removing his hand said, " class ke liye late horahaan hain. Chal"

Both walked to class without talking anything further but rey suddenly had a

guilty look on his face.

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Classroom

Taani in the classroom alone- Was it just yesterday that she had felt like thinking

about the whole relationshipbreak up status in a different light? Kal hi tho laga

tha ki shayad sab kuch different hosaktha tha- ki shayad mujhe normal...

.aur aaj...rey how can you?

By then girls ( minus sharon) walked in quickly worried and talking- i hope taani

hasnt heard...hain kahaan wo? haan pata nahin kaise react karegi...itni jaldi !

All guys are the same ...and stopped as they spotted taani sitting in her seat ,

her hands clenched on the desk looking lost...she must ve heard from someone!

The girls looked at each other, went and stood around her.


She looked up at them, at all of them and found them giving her worried

sympathetic looks and felt her eyes sting uncontrollably .

"taani u ok?" rinni

Taani attempted to smile and said blundering," haan haan.. mujhe kya hua hain?

... Main tho bilkul..."

" taani, its okay . We know tum upset..." simmi began while Aashi sat next to

her and placed a hand on taani . Taani avoiding eyecontact with all of them

suddenly got up , she didnt want anyones sympathy, picked her bag and saying

" main... Mujhe...VP sir haan VP sir..." and started walking to the door, hitting

her leg on the desks and chairs and muttering sorry sorry to nothing in particular

kept moving and banged into...rey at the classroom door.

He instinctively held her arm , she said thanks by habit and then met his eyes,

standing close to him as he held her by the arm and steadied her- he saw a flash

of hurt expressions , the questions in her eyes familiar to him by now but she

pushed his hand away harshly angrily almost immediately making the guilt in

his eyes change to sudden anger and without another word or look walked out

ignoring swayam standing next to rey and not even seeing the guys who had

come in then.

There was silence for amoment and then just as rey started walking in , sharons

loud voice came in from behind them " REY! R U MAD?" the guys visibly flinched

and literally ran inside , the girls gave looks of good ! swayam attempted to stop

her while rey turned to her and his voice stern said," no sharon im not and im

sure you dont want to be as well, so STOP SCREAMING " she stopped shocked

at his unusually stern tone.

Swayam stared at him his heart sinking at the realisation that rey s bitterness

was only increasing.

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btw that extra girl or guys not really imp...dont throw insults 😊 please

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Edited by prtn - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update taani talk about breakup was nice and she thinking talk to rey normaly rey feeling jealous i miss jealousy rey and next rey going to party with sonali taani patha chalatho kya feel karege and rey taani clash wow plz thoda tho taarey ka part desakthe huna plz and thanks for the update
Edited by R.sailaja - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update dear...
Loved it...
Plz update soon...
n pm me...
Thanks 4 PM...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh wow
am liking this plot
it is more realistic
then those ususal mushy mushy things
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update!!!
Loved it!!
Rey jz agreed so that he can show ppl that their break up doesn't matter to him anymore!
Aww... Taani feeling bad!!!
I hope TaaRey will be back soon ..!! If not into a relationship, they get close ..!
Update asap
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update

but i dint feel connected to the update
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
rey is so much irritated
egarly waiting for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update commenting nothing in particular
coz trying to understand the equation and story

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