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Posted: 10 years ago


Part 53:

" Hum Kyun Na Ban Paaye Hum?"

Time is a great healer say many. But even the time fails to heal, when the wounds were caused by love. Love destroys us beyond repair. Love demands immense sacrifice and pieces of your heart. But love also unites those broken pieces of heart, to make them get a reason to love.

But the reason of their lives was just something which would make love lose. They won every battle of their life just to lose the most important one, the battle of love.

Pain makes one stronger but here it made them so strong that their hearts became brittle. Pain, which killed them every second, pain which made them shed the tears of blood, pain which stole the sleep and pain which made them win, every pain had only one reason, their forbidden love.

Tere Liye Hum Hain Jiyeh, Honthon Ko Siye
Tere Liye Hum Hain Jiyeh, Har Aansoo Piye
Dil Mein Magar Jalte Rahe, Chaahat Ke Diye
Tere Liye, Tere Liye
Tere Liye Hum Hain Jiye, Har Aansoo Piye
Tere Liyeh Hum Hain Jiye, Honthon Ko Siye
Dil Mein Magar Jalte Rahe, Chahat Ke Diye
Tere Liye, Tere Liye

Someone's silence broke all the rules, while someone's tears changed the history. Someone's tears wrenched his heart while someone's silence broke her heart. Someone's silence became a fuel to her tears, while someone's tears made his silence, doomed. In this story where silence speaks more than words and tears, which express the reasons of silence, the fire of love, which burnt them, never subsided.


Zindagi Le Ke Aayehe Hai Beete Din Ki Kitaab
Ghere Hain Ab Humein Yaadein Be-Hisab
Bin Poochhe Mile Mujhe Kitne Sare Jawab
Chaha Tha Kya, Paya Hai Kya, Humne Dekhiye
Dil Mein Magar Jalte Rahe, Chaahat Ke Diye
Tere Liye, Tere Liye

Expected each other's company for life, to find doomed distances between them. Asked many questions to find only silence as answers. The memories of the past, which haunt her, asking for the never asked answers, which broke him. The one who got colored in his colors, now colored him in the color of pain of love.


Kya Kahoon Duniyaa Ne Kiya, Mujh Se Kaisa Bair
Hukm Tha..? Main Jiyun Lekin Tere Baghair
Naadaan Hai Woh Kahte Hain Jo Mere Liyeh Tum Ho Ghair
Kitne Sitam Humpe Sanam Logon Ne Kiye
Dil Mein Magar Jalte Rahe, Chahat Ke Diye
Tere Liye, Tere Liye

Their names were never taken together in the last birth, such was the pain in their love. Such was the solitude in their proximity. So forbidden were their feelings. But what was the point of feelings when the basis of them was not trust?

She trusted only to find it broken. The times when she needed him the most, he was not there with her. The times when she craved for his company, he was with someone else. The times when she required his words, she got only silences. His every breath had her name and every heartbeat had her shadows on it, but the silences which existed never represented those unexpressed feelings.

Will Arjun ever be able to sweep Yagya off her feet?

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TBC

Thanks a lot, Mamta for the song suggestion!

Hope you liked it!

Please comment and like!!
Edited by Yagyaseni - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
This was so poignant Devranijee no 2day I wont call u Devranijee u r firey Yagyaseni today darlingg!! Very well said someones silence, someones tears, someones secrets, someones oath, someones helplessness bound to the society changed the history nd all had to suffer... I cannt say anything more...I m no in state to!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautifully penned Yagya
So much love, so much anguish expressed so heartbreakingly😭
The words suit the song so well.
Loved the phrase "solitude in their proximity"
Hope they can overcome this... i guess it will all depend on how far Arjun is willing to go for her this time😡
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Posted: 10 years ago
So nice... Do write more..and also pm me..All the best..👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
beautifully written 👏 👏
i don't have words 4 this update dear..
no one can describe pain more beautifully then u.. hats off yagya 👏
i had tears in my eyes reading this update... the one n only word suit u n ur updates is "Wow"
keep writing, continue soon n thanks 4 the pm... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
So touching...you crafted the words so well I think it's giving some of us tears possibly👏
And to answer that last question: "Will Arjun be able to sweep Yagya off her feet?"
Make it so that she realizes that they took this birth to'fix everything' and then we get Ardi after that🤣
But tbh your writing is so touching and I really love how you portray the story
but make the updates a little longer next time!!!😆
BTW: Thank you so much for the PM!!!⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
u know what u should publish your own book... its such a delight to read it... eventhough its painful... you pour out your heart dear... and its really really beautiful... its beyond words...


its like you are hit by a soft breeze... its simply awesome... keep writing... never stop it dear...




now get the story moving... i want to see some "a/c switch on action"
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful written nice update 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing Dear
Can feel the pain through Your writing
Thanks for your pm dear
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: .Sanskruti

This was so poignant Devranijee no 2day I wont call u Devranijee u r firey Yagyaseni today darlingg!! Very well said someones silence, someones tears, someones secrets, someones oath, someones helplessness bound to the society changed the history nd all had to suffer... I cannt say anything more...I m no in state to!!

Thanks a lot, jethanijee! That's exactly what I wanted to say!

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