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Kanika

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Posted: 10 years ago

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PREVIOUS : CHAPTER 2.2

CHAPTER 2.3

Uday says "Jagat congratulations for the new contract."

Jagat says "Thanks"

Maansi walks in

Maansi says "Sir here is the file."

Uday says "you wanted to go you can go."

Maansi says "Thankyou."

Uday asking

Uday says "I will like to meet your sister. Which college is she in?"

Maansi answering

Maansi "Mansa is in Mumbai University doing MBA."

Uday says "ok J and Choti are also there"

Jagat message Maansi to go in the car right away

Jagat asking

Jagat says "So it is Rajkumari Unnati's & Rajkumari Jainandini's first day in college?"

Uday says "Ya but how do you know."

Jagat answering

Jagat says "My sister is also there."

Uday asking

Uday says "What her name, younger then you Jagat answers Not younger, Manasvi."

Jagat's phone rings.

Guard informing

Guard says "Sir, Maansi Ma'am is here in the car"

Jagat says "ok, Uday I will take a leave now."

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Kanika

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Posted: 10 years ago

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CHAPTER 2.4

Guard in disguise says "Manasviji these are for you."

Before any of them can say anything Manu's phone rings she picks it up.

Manu says "DAATABHAI"

Rohan asking

Manu says "Manu you are fine?"

Manu complaining

Manu says "Daatabhia, Adi."

Rohan asking

Rohan says "where are you."

Manu answering

Manu says "In college with friends.

Kanika says "when you reach home call."

Manu says "Bhabhima, take care of my Daatabhia."

Unnati's phone rings picks it up

Unnati says "Dada"

Uday asking

Uday says "How was you first day are you home."

Unnati answering

Unnati says "Dada day was good I am going to a friends house."

Uday says "be safe & take care of J."

Unnati says "ok"

Unnati keeps the phone. Walking towards the college door.

Manu asks "you two will help me."

Jainandini & Unnati together say "yes"

Manu points out to Aditya and tells them to throw the flowers on him the guards start laughing. The three walk to him.

Aditya asking

Aditya says "Manu what is this I have been waiting."

Manu answering

Manu says "so I was in college."

Aditya shows fake anger."

Aditya says "college got over two hours ago, if I had come in you know what would have happened you want have liked it."

Manu hugs Aditya."

Manu says "I am sorry I will take care any ways Jaggi is not home he had some work"

NEXT : CHAPTER 3

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Kanika

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Posted: 10 years ago

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PREVIOUS : CHAPTER 2.4

CHAPTER 3

Jainandini asking

Jainandini says "Manasvi can you introduce us or should we do it our self"

Aditya looked at them

Aditya says "Manu new friends"

Jainandini says "Hi"

Devgargh & Jaigarh guard come there.

Aditya says "Hi, you must Rajkumari of Devgarh's Rajkumari Jainandini & you are Jaigarh's Rajkumari Unnati right.

Jainandini & Unnati asking together

They say together "Ya how do you know?"

Manu adding

Manu says "they are coming with us."

Aditya asking

Aditya says "what about Jaggi?"

Manu answering

Manu says "I told Jaggi he knows

Aditya says "Let's go then, please tell you guards to go we already have guards."

Manu says "Adi let it be"

They drive towards home.

Aditya says "So Rajkumari Unnati you are Maharaja Giriraj Singh and Maharani Vasundhara Giriraj Singh's Daughter & Yuvraj Uday Veer Singh's younger sister."

Unnati answering

Unnati says "Yes"

Unnati is superised adds asking

Unnati says "how do you know?"

Aditya ignores adding

Aditya says "You Rajkumari Jainandini you are Rajmata Mernalni Devi's grand daughter, Maharaj Brijraj Singh & Komal Brijraj Singh's daughter, Maharani Menika Pratap Singh's niece and Yuvraj Ajay Pratap Singh's, Rajkumar Vijayinder Pratap Singh's & Rajkumari Mira Pratap Singh's cousin"

Jainandini answering

Jainandini "yes"

Jainandini supriesed asking

Jainandini says "how do you know?"

Manu says "are you done with your gk now answer me did you talk to di."

Aditya smiles

Aditya says "someone is jealous of my knowledge, there is superise for you at home."

Jainandini asks "Adi will you tell us who you are"

Aditya sternly

Aditya says "Rajkumari Jainandini my name is Aditya Raj..."

Manu cutting in

Manu says "Aditya"

Aditya completing

Aditya says "not Adi"

Jainandini says "Aditya it is Jainandini or just J not Rajkumari Jainandini please."

Unnati adding

Unnati says "Same goes for me it is just Unnati or Unzs not Rajkumari Unnati."

Manu asking

Manu says "Adi why are you angry."

Aditya surprised asking

Aditya says "you don't know"

Manu says "just for today please"

she pulls the the hand breaks. Hugs him

Manu adding

Manu says "I am sorry."

Aditya whispering in her ear

Aditya says "Manaya it is fine

Manu says "seriously, saach"

Aditya smiles

Aditya says "Yes Manaya"

They move on. Both Jainandini & Unnati are witnessing this they have never known two people having such good understanding. They reach home. Manasi welcomes them. Unnati &

Jainandini are superised to lavish house. Manu

hugs Maansi

Manu says "DI"

looking at Aditya. Manu adding

Manu says "thanks & thank Jaggi from my side."

Maansi asking

Maansi says "Mansa who are they?"

Manu says "That is Unnati & Jainandini."

Jainandini looks at Manu

Jainandini asking

Jainandini says "Manaya, Manu, Mansa how many names do you have Manu."

Manu answering "at home everyone calls me Manu, di likes calling me Mansa otherwise, Adi & few close people call me Manaya my name is Manasvi."

Jainandini & Unnati leave by the night.Maansi leaves in the morning for work. Few days pass by Aditya and Jaggat leave back for Pune. Life goes on college year is coming to end it is April going on a month before final exams

NEXT : CHAPTER 4,1

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sanam2sonya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Will be update 2,update or one
N no promo

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Kanika

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Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: sanam2sonya
Will be update 2,update or one
N no promo

UPDATED ALREADY...PROMO ON WENESDAY...CHARACTER INTRODUCTION FOR NEW CHARACTERS ON SATURDAY...UPDATE ON SUNDAY

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Humairaa

@humairaa1

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Hey, how you?

Sorry for late reply

All updates were very nicely written😊

Love how everyone is so sweet and understanding

Thanks for the pm 😊

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Kanika

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Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

INTRO NEW CHARACTER

CHARACTERS INTRO 2

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Humairaa

@humairaa1

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Wow, this is getting more and more interesting😃

So many new characters, just hope the are not evil

Can't wait for the next update

Thanks for the pm🤗

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Kanika

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Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

PREVIOUS : CHAPTER 3

CHAPTER 4.1

25th April there is party in Devgargh Mansion as it is Manayata's birthday. In Manu house, Maansi, her best friend Khushi, Adi are there with Manu celebrating,Seeing that Manu has not coming Jainandini & Unnati leave the mansion to go to Manu house

Uday asking

Uday says "Jagat are you enjoying?"

Jagat answering

Jagat says "I have to leave"

Uday inquiring

Uday says "everything fine?"

Jagat says "will meet you later."

Jagat leaves. By then Jainandini & Unnati reach there. They are stopped there & told Manasvi Ma'am has said not to allow anyone without permission. A group of guards enter. Aditya, Khushi & Maansi come there. Aditya hugs Jagat

Aditya says "God, bhai you're here. Manaya has been waiting."

Jagat asking

Jagat says "where is Manu."

Manu is wearing a beautiful pink gown, runs & hugs Jagat.

Manu says "Jaggi finally you are here"

Jagat smiles

Jagat says "hey beautiful, close your eyes."

He makes her wear a necklace. She see in mirror she hugs him.

Manu say "Thankyou Jaggi it is gorgeous. "

They walk inside

Khushi says "Let's cut the cake

Jainandini & Unnati confused

They both say 'cake'

Then Unnati sees

Unnati says "J it is Yuvraj Jagat Singh Rathore."

Jainandini is superised

Janandini inquiring

Jainandini says "what is he doing here?"

Unnati adding

Unnati says "Aditya called him brother."

Jainandini adding

Jainandini says "Manu Jiji called him Jaggi."

Unnati adding

Unnati says "And he called Manasvi, Manu"

Maansi, Khushi, Aditya, Manu & Jagat go in. A maid coming in.

Maid says "Hokum Jainandini Ma'am & Unnati Ma'am have come to meet Yuvranisa"

Maansi says "They have been waiting for long time."

Khushi adding

Khushi say "Let them come they are your friend

Aditya gets call. He goes from there, meets some and get him in.

Arjun says "Manu darling where are you"

Manu is happy to see Arjun

Manu says "Aru"

Both hug each other

Arjun says "why these tears no need when Aru is here."

wiping her tears

Arjun adding

Arjun says this is for you."

Aditya asking

Aditya says "who's gift is, me or Jaggi?"

Manu smiles adding

Manu says "Daatabhia & Bhabhimaa

Arjun says "Manu knows Dada & Bhabhi have send me not you both."

Aditya adding

Aditya says "I have got Khushi here then"

Manu says "Jija & Jijya have send her here."

Everyone is laughing. Manu asking

Manu says "Jaggi, Adi what should I do should I call J and Unzs in?"

Arjun say "J in the sense Rajkumari Jainandini?"

Khushi adding

Khushi says "Unzs is Unnati."

Arjun adds asking

Arjun says "Unnati in the sense Rajkumari Unnati? do they know anything about ???"

Jagat says "But they have a party going on in their house."

Aditya adding

Aditya says "They don't know anything , it will be fun to see how the react."

Manu smiles adding

Manu says "actually right"

Khushi & Maansi go to get them in. They come in.

Jainandini says "Manu Jiji why didn't you come to the party we invited you?"

Arjun says "Hi J"

Jainandini looks at Arjun in superise.

Jainadini says "Yuvraj Arjun Singh, you here?"

Manu says "J you know Aru good then no need of introduction."

Unnati adding

Unnati says "He is my cousin."

Unnati looks at Manu

Unnati adding

Unnati says "Manu Jiji you call Arjun Dada, Aru

Manu repling

Manu says "I always called him Aru"

Arjun smiles adding

Arjun says "See Manu girls know me."

Manu laughs."

Manu says "you are one of eligible bachelor in the country after all."

All laugh. Unnati asking

Unnati says "Jaggi Dada you here how come"

Jagat answering

Jagat says "Unzs don't stress your brain, Adi is my Bua's son"

Jainandini says "Aditya is Kakisa's son"

Aditya answering

Aditya says "yes"

Unnati adding

Unnati says "So you are Yuvraj Aditya Raj Singh"

Aditya answer "yes"

Manu smiles

Manu says "Jaggi this is interesting."

Jagat smiles back adding

Jagat says "Manu seriously"

Jainandini blushing a bit inquiring

Jainandinadini says "Manu Jiji did you call Yuvraj Jagat Singh Rathore, Jaggi"

Jagat irrited answering

Jagat says "Manu calls me Jaggi."

Manu informing

Manu says "He is my brother, Adi is my best friend & brother, Aru and I are close friends from school since start, Khushi aka Rajkumari Khushi Rai Singh younger sister of Yuvraj Luv Rai Singh of Riagargh."

Khushi adding

Khushi says "They are good friends since school & my brother Rajkumar Khush Rai Singh & Manu are best friends"

Unnati says "You should've come the party with Jaggi Dada, Aditya Dada & Aru Dada. Yuvraj Luv & Yuvrani Ashwariya were also there too."

Khushi smiling adding

Khushi says "Dada & Ash had to go there they will come in while"

Arjun asking

Arjun says "Luv is coming here but why Adi didn't tell me."

Manu answering

Manu says "Aru, Momsa & Dadsa told them to come here

Arjun says "I was asked by Dada & Bhabhi, Khushi by Jija, Bade Jijusa, Jijiya, Jijusa, Luv was told by Kakasa & Kakisa, Jaggi & Adi arranged everything."

Maansi question "Arjunji what are you asking."

Manu ignores Maansi question & look at Arjun

Manu says "Look behind you Aru"

Walks in Ashwariya.

Arjun says "Ash"

Ashwariya sad

Ashwariya says "Manu you forgot me if Khushi wouldn't have called I wouldn't come to know you are here"

Ashwariya hugs all of them one by one & countinuing adds

Ashwariya got bored in that stupid party of "YUVRAJ UDAYVEER SINGH"

Arjun says "being his cousin I also agree that party was ..."

Luv enters & adding

Luv says "Grandly Boring typically royal."

Manu smiles adding

Manu says "Luv missed you a lot, Luv & Ash you were not there when I came here."

Luv & Ashwariya together adding

They say togather "Manu, this is for you & sorry for not being there for you farewell."

Ashwariya adding "at lest Khushi was there?"

Manu smiles

Manu says "You both are forgiven & Thanks"

Luv looks at Jainandini & Unnati.

Luv inquiring

Luv says "what are you doing here?"

Ashwariya ignoring what Luv just said to whom.

Ashwariya asking

Ashwariya says "Manu what you're phone number, is it the same"

Manu smiles

Manu says "Same"

Her mobile rings she picks it

Khush says "Sweetheart many many happy returns of day HAPPY BIRTHDAY Sweetheart"

Manu smiles

Manu says "Thanks Sweetheart, are you here too"

Khush says "I am occupied in Dubai for work when I will back I will come & meet you soon."

Luv puts the phone on speaker."

Manu sadly

Manu says "ok"

Khush says "Don't be sad sweetheart."

Luv adding

Luv says "Now lets cut the cake"

Khush says "I will call back in a minute."

Khushi ipad rings. Khush is on FaceTime so is Jaggi's family & Adi's family on respective FaceTime.Cake cutting happens. Jainadini & Unnati realise it is Manu's birthday. After that Manu picks up her iPad goes in and talks to Rohan alone,Kush is talking to everyone except Manu.

Kush asking

Khush says "where is Manu is she talking to Jijusa."

They all go there & join.

Khush says "Hey, Jijusa, Jiji."

Kanika asking

Kanika says "Khush are you there also."

Khush answering

Khush says "Virtually yes practically no."

Rohan asking

Rohan says "whoes iPad"

Khush answering

Khush says "Khushi"

Kanika says "why don't you guys connect it to bigger screen talk to Khush."

Rohan says "Bye.."

Aditya sadly

Adidya says "I come & bye"

Kanika says "we are busy"

Rohan adding

Rohan says "You know Adi, you're are worthless and Manu is..."

Everyone says together "PRICELESS"

Kanika adding

Kanika says "you see Adi everyone knows." They all talk to Khush

Arjun asking

Arjun says "where were we."

Khush says "Sweet heart you look gorgeous."

Arjun asking

Arjun says "so how did you get to know"

Khush confused

Khush says "MANAYA'S BIRTHDAY

Manu clearifies

Manu says "Khush, that Khushi & Ash are going to be here"

Khush says "My sisters I talk to them Aru."

Arjun adding

Arjun says "so I was asking, I was asked by Dada & Bhabhi, Khushi by Jija, Bade Jijusa, Jijya, Jijusa, Luv was told by Kakasa & Kakisa, Jaggi & Adi arranged everything, looks around."

Luv adding

Luv says "don't worry Maansi Di is not there."

Khush adding

Khush says "Use your brain a bit Aru, sorry I forgot you don't have one"

Arjun complains

Arjun says "Manu see him tell him some thing."

Manu walks out confusing Arjun."

Arjun asking

Arjun says "What happened?"

Aditya, Khush & Jagat together say "Don't worry she just gone to see Maansi Di."

NEXT : CHAPTER 4.2

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