AsYa Os : My Crazy Filmy Family!!

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hello everyone!!
thinking why i reposting this os? this one shot was written an year ago and the topic got closed and i am again posting it here. This one is really special for me bcoz this was my first ever writing...
Happy reading!

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please do comment.. all good bad comments r welcomed even tamatoes and onions welcomed coz they r getting expensive , so i will use it..

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Summary: asad , ayyan n najma are siblings and are in love with zoya, humera n imraan.. they r the best of buddies and are in college

Asad and zoya were sitting in the class and it was their free period. Zoya was doing her project while asad was busy staring her angel..


Asad : mein ye kesa project hu , jis per uski client dhyaan hi nahi deti...

Zoya looks up and reply dramatically..

Zoya: tsk tsk tsk tsk so sad.. do one thing , kisi aur client ko jake dhundlo jo is project par dhyaan de.. n looks down smiling....

Asad : (smirking) are you sure?

Zoya : ( looking down , busy in her project) ha baba sure.. damn sure, river sure, lake sure aur koi sure hona h kya..

Asad: okay fine..

And he goes away from there..


AFTER 15 MINUTES..

Imraan, ayaan n humera came running to zoya..

Imraan, ayaan n humera : zoya !!!

Zoya closes her ears with her hands..

Zoya: what ??

Imraan : have you and asad broke up??

Zoya : what?! Why??

Ayaan : what why? Which type of girlfriend you are ha?

Zoya : matlab?

Humera : vaha tumhara boyfriend is roaming with some one else and you are sitting here doing your project??

Zoya looked shocked and confused bit before she could reply they heard a sound of falling of books and they turn to find najma with her hands on her ears..

Najma : ya allah!! Ye kya keh rahe ho tum sab?? Bhaijan ... bhai.. j..an..esa kar sakte h vo? Vo meri zoya ko kese chod sakta h?

N she ran to zoya and engulfed her in an embrace..

Najma : koi baat nahi zoya hum tumhare sath h... hum tumhare liye ladenge..

Imraan, ayaan n humera : ha zoya , hum tumhare liya ladenge..

Zoya stood up and replied : allahmiya wats wrong with you all? Tum log itna over react kyu kar rahe ho? If he is roaming around with some one so whats the big deal??

Humera : what the big deal?? Zoya tum kesi gf ho , jo apne bf ko kisi k sath bhi ghum ne de rahi ho.. abhi chalo humate sath!!
Abhi!! N she dragged zoya with her..

Zoya jerked her hand. , : ofo guys its his life , vo ghum raha h to ghum ne do but vese ayaan , he really broke up with me?

Ayaan : mona are u serious, you r sounding so casual?? Tum abhi chalo..

N all dragged her towards assembly hall where asad was sitting with nisha,.

Nisha : asad tum iss ZOYA ke piche kyu pade ho.. i mean she is so boring!!

Asad hears sound od footsteps n realised zoya n everyone was here n so he said this to make her jealous:

Asad : kya karu phisal gaya tha par ya she is boring!! Mein to use chodne ki soch raha hu..

There everyone was listening having anger on their faces except zoya..

Zoya : hmm ohhh ( making different expressions listening carefully)

Nisha keeping her hand on his : to chod do na!

Humera , ayaan , imran n najma : BHAIJAN!!

Zoya agn closed her ears..
Asad ( making shocked expression as if he dont know anything) : t.. t..um..tum..l..log..tumlog!!

Everyone except zoya: ha humlog !!

Najma: ha bhaijaan ha! Aap esa karenge, hum ne socha nahi tha!

Ayaan : apko meri mona darling ke sath esa karte hu sharam nahi ayi!

Humera: ab bolte kyu ni kuch?

Asad tries to speak something bit zoya says : ab bolne ko bacha kya h ? Esa karke bolenge lese janab!!

All : haha bolo bhaijaan!!

Zoya : ap esa karenge mujhe nahi pata tha! Apse esi umeed nahi thi mujhe!!
All: ha nahi tha , nahi tha!!

Zoya : apne mujhse bina puche break up kar liya ?Mujhe puchne ki zarurat nahi samjhi??

All : bolo bhaijaan!! Bolo!

Asad murmured: dramebazz n smirked that zoya was reacting..

Zoya : apki himmat kese hui sachme asad !!

All : ha bhaijan!! N they kept blabbering

Meanwhile zoya raised her hand in a position like to slap asad n asad closed his eyes but it was a suprise for everyone when it led to a handshake..

Zoya : congratulation for ur new relation..

All : kya???

Asad was shocked would be an understatement..

Zoya : ye kya baat hui? Tumne treat bhi nahi di , that's not done..

All: zo !!

Ayaan : ye tum kya ke rahi ho mona! Tum tum,.. pagal ho...

Zoya : are asad ki life h , vo decide karega ki use kese rehan h or nisha ( she goes to nisha who was giving her weird looks n tapped her shoulder) kya baat h , tumhara nasha kya chaya h asad par.. keep it up..n yes chalo guys let them have some privacy..


They all started walking suddenly zoya stopped n turned
Zoya : aur ha asad ( smiling ) apni shakal mat dikhana kabhi..
All turned : mat dikhana mat dikhana..
N all of them went home, leaving asad flabbergasted..
Asad abruptly left from there..


AT KHAN VILLA:

Zoya ran happily to the kitchen and hugged dilshad from behind..

Dilshaad : aa gayi meri shona!

Everyone comes inside with sad and angry face..

Dilshaad : are meri phudko gang ko kya hua.. itna sad sad kyu h

Ayaan goes n picks up a photoframe which had photo of asad ..

Ayaan: dhyann se dekhiye iss shaks ko diya isne meri mona ko dhoka..

Humera : sun dekh kar bhi humne apne aap ko ye man ne se roka..

Dilshad : oh to phir kya tumne use kyu nahi toka.?

Najma : unhone pheka apna dil , before zoya nisha ne kia catch

Imraan : nahi kiya unhone humari zoya ki loyality se match

Dilshad : ab lese hoga inka patch?

All : ab bichana padega hume koi trap

By this time zoya was hugging dil from back whereas najma and ayaan kept their head on dilshaad's shoulder n humi n imraan on zoya's shoulder..

Asad : ya allah please cut this crap..

Dilshad : asad tum galti karke in pe hi chilate ho..

Asad : ammi par..

All : kya par..ha kya par?

Zoya was just rubbing her temples..

Zoya : GUYSS! She shouted.. Dinner tak ke liye sabhi apne apne kamre me raho phir milte h okay.. over n out..

All retired to their respective rooms.. murmuring hmph..


AT DINNER TABLE:

All were talking except asad and this made him think of divide and rule..

Asad : najma you know imraan was once in a garden with shalini who was..

Imraan : asad!!! Kya hua achanak se tum ye..

Asad : kyu tum to mujhse baat nahi kar rahe the to phir m kyu tumhari baat suno?

Imraan : nahi nahi m tumhari side hu..

Asad : smirked okay and najma see i bought you a pack of your favourite chocolate ice cream its in the fridge..

Najma : zoya you just bought two packs of ice cream na that too my favourite..

Asad was shocked but then next target : humi u wanted a cat na , i talked to a person he will select the sweetest cat for u..

Humi : sachi !!

Ayaan glared her

Humi : apni ye badi badi ankhe mat dikhao , me nahi darne wali..thank u bhaijaan m apki side..

Asad : welcome sweetie.. ayaan..

But ayaan cut him off : me apni mona ka sath nahi chodunga.

Meanwhile dinner was over n they were sitting down in drawing room and zoya was lost in a dream..

DREAM:

All were dressed in military dress and were wearing cricket helmets with hockey sticks in their hands...

Background music was : bar bar ha , bolo yaar ha.. apni jeet ho , unki haar ha..

Zoya and asad were glaring each other , humera and ayaan were fighting as well as seperating imraan and najma who were holding each others hand and were crying..

DREAM END

She was brought out from her dream when they all shouted her name..

Zoya : huh..

Dilshad : kya hua zoya, thik to hona..

Zoya nodded..

Dilshad : lo tumhare liye mene gajar ka halwa banaya h..

All : kya halwa ..Hume bhi chahiya..

Zoya : tum log to asad k side the na me to sirf najma aur ayaan k sath share karungi..

Humi, imran : nahi nahi zoya hum to tumhare sath h , vo to bas yuhi unki side le rahe the..

Zoya : oh.. thikh he..Ajao

Asad : aur me.. he came and kneeled down in front of them holding his ears..

Zoya : sachi wala sorry ?

Asad: sachi wala

Zoya : maaf kiya jaye ya chod diya jaye??

Ayaan : phir mona ko chodke kisi aur k pass nahi jaoge?

Asad : nahi jaunga..

Imraan : humari gang k alawa kisi k sath masti nahi karoge,.

Asad : nahi karunga

Najma : hum sabse zyaada kisi se pyaar nahi karoge ,

Asad : nahi meri family ke alawa kisi se itna nahi

Humi : humari demands puri karoge??

Asad : karunga baba karunga..

All : yay

N they all hugged each other

Dilshad and rashid : hum bhi join kar sakte h kya ?

Zoya : ye bhi puchne wali baat h?

arz kiya h,

sab sunlo aur janlo ye fact,

apne sathi ke alawa hum nahi honge ke kisi se attract..

They all hugged ..

n again hugged their loves ..
Happy ending..
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!1do leave your reviews!! and if it was not good please remember it was my first writing!!😆
Edited by riddhi1206 - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
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😉
nice os...
crazy 😊
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res 4 me
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amazing
loved it...
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Read this OS before
And read it again
So cute
And adorable
Loved it
Thanks for pm!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Heyy Riddhi... 😃
A Nice and Adorable O.S... ⭐️
It was cute though how all were planning to Mission Boycott Asad...and then how Humi and Immy changed their sides...quite crazy and funny though..
But you know spare me for wondering this ...It was Zoya only who said to Asad to go and find a new client in a teasing way and Asad also teased back...but why was he only at mistake... 😆..
Edited by MayurChan - 10 years ago
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glad to read it again
really its awesome
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awww it s sho cuteee
lvd it
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aww tis is so cute...
wonderfull...
thx fr the pm...
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