MG Time pass teen age love story Note on page 35 -16 may - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
#71
Very emotional update!!!😭😭Poor Maaneet both of them suffering a lot🄺...now they are one but after that Geet left him...what will he do now???šŸ˜•Loved it so much...waitig eagerly for the next.update soon dear😊Thanks for the PM dear😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72
amazingly awesome update. loved it.
feeling bad for both of them.
they love each other so much but bcoz of someone else mistake they are paying.
geet wanted to feel maan as husband for just one night atleast.
maaneet bacame one.
morning, after maan wake up... so emotional on not finding geet...
where is geet? hoping that she has not left...
waiting for next part...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73
awesome update loved their lovely moments geet only once want feel maan like husband 4 her life time maan also cant resist they love each other & become one in morning maan didn't find geet beside him he thing she again left hope she didn't left maan
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
Mahi šŸ¤—...thank u for the awesome update and pm...plz reply to my pm...very emotional update...poor Maaneet...so much pain because of one person...both are suffering for others fault...glad they became one but worried where Geet went...Maan is in pain again thinking she left him...hope it is not true...plz continue 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
geet kissing him madly
pleading him to give her the right to be his wifeatleast for a night
she will die with those memories
maan couldnt hear more
he loved her
its not fully her fault too
both have sufferred so much
he marked her his
omg
did geet really left him
nice part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76

WOW!! Superb u

sorry for disappearing ...the reason is very personal...sorry once againpdate...loved it dear

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Posted: 10 years ago
#77

part 26

Maan once again look to stain blood stain and lost in their moment ,both kissing and pouring their pain thru kiss maan hand reach to dress of geet and geet gasp in kiss her heart stop for while ,is he giving a right of wife and when his long finger touch her back when with one force he open her dress her zip she shake like dry leafe in his hug ,his hand start to make pattern on her back and geet more push herself in him

Maan pull her dress little down from her shoulder and kiss her shoulder geet closed her eyes , a tear fail from her eyes for one day but she is geeting her maan sirf uska maan her hand clutch maan shirt when maan schoop her and start to walk to bed with slow step

He know how much dream she look for their marriage from band to SR like film but today they going to become one like this apne app se ladte hui fight karte hui

Like she asking with her eys how our relation our love become stranger like this that love which is our life how he kiss that both eyes who talking all their pain their love

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DDmmqZsLEIY

please lesion this song

Maze tuze nate havese tula

Anolakhi zale re kase te tula

Te ohtanwar mohranare

Nazretun sare kalnare

Te sparshamadhale shuk sare mala punha de na

Relation of your and mine which u want

How its turn stranger to you

Which blossom on lips

And get with only gaze of eyes

That happiness of touch just give me again

That love which blossom in our lips our eyes just give me back with that maan softly pick her rosy lips which r waiting for his touch his attention ,our eyes know about our love , our touch all give me back

Romaromatun fulnaare

Mann aatur aatur karnaare

Te reshim reshim shan sare mala punha de na

Love that blossom in each part of body

Which making me restless

That soft soft moment all give me again

Love which reach to our soul also ,which making us restless that moment we cherished in our past just give me back ,maan get her unspoken word and he again took her lips for soulful kiss which make them cried for more

Nako na re abola ha

Tu ekada mala

Samazun gashila na

Partun yeshil na

Don't want this aloofness

U just once

Can u understand me

Can u come back

When maan feel her breathless he stop for while and look to her eyes which saying , bas bahot ho gaya ye aloofness , ye narazgi ,ye baate na karna ,can u not just once understand me and come back to me just once again some tear fall from her eys and maan drink thant imm...

Tuzyvina re jagu mee kashi te saang na

Samazun gashila na

Partun yeshil na

How I live without u just tale me

Can u understand me

Can u come back

Her unspoken question that how I live without u and maan hug her tight and pull out her top from her body geet feel shy and nervous he going to see her like this without any barrier she closed her eyes tightly and other side maan lost in her beuty he first time watching her like this ,she is so beautiful and perfect

boy

Ka feeru sang mange

Sang ya guntanyala konte naav devu

Ka feeru sang mange

Sang ya guntanyala konte naav devu

Why I come back

What is in between us which bounded us

Its so hard to control him ,he so much want to touch her love her ,cherished her but their past , how he going to come back to her how what is this bounding between then jo na toot rahi hai na alag ho rahi ye kya hai jo itne bure waqt main bhi unko baande rakha hai

Bachain jeevala karnaar

Ekaki kan kan zuranaare

Tu sang havese shan (pal ) saare tula

Punha te ka

Which make restless to soul

Which turn aloffness slowly slowly

U tale me do u want that all moment again

His heart crying and asking her ye bounding hamari bitch main Which killing us slowly because of pain of love , its realy u want our all happy moment back ,can its come back

Nako na re abola ha

Tu ekada mala

Samazun gashila na

Partun yeshil na

Tuzyvina re jagu mee kashi te saang na

Don't want this aloofness

U just once

Can u understand me

Can u come back

When geet don't feel maan touch on her which she expecting she open her eyes and watch maan painful eyes she get he again lost in past she went near him and kiss his eyes and pull out his shirt and just hug him , both nude body touch each other and they forget all pain and all , they become only maan and geet and maan come out from hug and slowly with shaking hand he touch her feminists beauty her blossom ,its so soft like silk and maan cup that in his plam and start worship her beuty and geet don't get when he thro out her small cloth which hiding her beauty

He make her lay on back and start to kiss her , cup her his lips ,plam ,finger ,mouth all doing magic on her virgin body when his mouth worship her she shake like leaf which is only his , maan ki geet his hand reach each part of her and at last all clothe come out from their body and maan ask her thru his eyes can she ready for become maaneet in all sense and she nodded in yes , first he adjust her and put himself near her and with small push he broke her virginity and entered in her ,she hissed in pain ,but a soft , smile with happiness come on her face that she become maan ki geet ...

Samazun gashila na

Partun yeshil na

Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
Ohh Wow Finally they bcom maneet
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
That was a Magical Update

It is really not easy to forget their painful past but together they can
overcome the pain , for Maan he lost his family members and this is the saddest part yet it was not entirely Geet's fault as she only wanted Maan to be safe from her father but in humiliating him his father too was humiliated and taking his life that even now the pain is so fresh .
Geet understands that Maan loves but the past pain is so overwhelming that she has to take imitative too for Maan to come out from the past pain .
finally Maan and Geet become one , their love was and is always there
its just that now both have work hard to overcome the pains and certainly will not be easy .

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Posted: 10 years ago
#80
Uhho... Babaji bataya b nahi ki update aa gaya!!!

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