Sandhir OS||the epic proposal

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Heyaa people... This is my first ever attempt in writing. So please do give it a chance.

A SanDhir OS based on current track.

The epic proposal

The whole FITE was in a deep slumber except two souls- Randhir and Sanyukta. Both were unable to sleep because of the incident which happened that evening.

*Flashback-Evening*

Sanyukta had just come from the factory and was heading towards her dormitory when a pair of strong hands pushed her to the nearest wall.

S-Just leave me you damnit!!

R-First answer me why did you insult me in the factory that too infront of everyone??

S-First answer me why were you mishandling the car??

R-I was not mishandling it!!! I was reparing it!!!

S-Oh yeah!! Like I would believe in your words ,u cheater!!

R-And why wouldn't you??

S- So shameless!! I don't have any short term memory loss to just forget what all u have done with me before.

R- So what haan,,, I said na that I am sorry still then!!

S-Yes becoz the little trust which I had in you is also lost now... Now I am over with u...so just stay aloof 4m me.

Her face was drenched with tears by then. Only she knew how she uttered those painful words. She herself felt hurt by hurting her randhir... But she cant just let anyone play with her trust.

She left 4m there without even sparing a look at the person who was standing behind her rooted to the spot with saline drops on his cheek.

Realization dawned upon him. He remembered all the pain he had given to his Sanyukta, his farzi.He felt a heavy abg of guilt on his head. Tears started rolling 4m his eyes as waterfall.

R- sorry sanyu... I m really sry. I have brought such situation in r relationship... now I will nly make vrything ok.

*Flashback ends*

Sandhir were restless in their beds.

R- soch rannu ssoch how will u rectify ur mistake...

Suddenly a splendid idea struk his genius brain.

After 1 hr--------------------

Sanyu received a message 4m randhir which stated-"Sanyukta help me plz... I am in terrace". She just dropped her mob there n within seconds she eas in the terrace. It was all dark there. She was panicstricken. She began calling out randhir's name. Suddenly a strong ray of light entered her eye and she immediately closed her eye(reflex action u know!!). There was randhir sitting with a guitar on a stool and behind him was a lage screen which displayed all the moments they spent together, in each other's arms. Randhir started his song------

"Kabhi jo badal barse main dekhun tujhe aankhein bharke

Tu lage mujhe pehli bearish ki duaa"

The moment they shared on rd's bike on his b'day was displayed on the screen.

"Tere pehlu main rehlun main khudko paagal kehlun

Tu hamdaya khushiyaan sehlun saathiyaa"

Sanyukta was lying on rd while proposing him was being displayed.

"Pehle kabhi na tune mujhe ham diya

To phir tune kyu tanha kardia"

Sanyu was breaking up with rd in the canteen was displayed... On seeing this a lone tear trickled down her eyes.

"Gujare the jo lamhe pyaar ke hamesha tujhe apna maan ke

To phir tune badly kyun ada ye kyun kiyaa"

Screen displayed ...they both were kissing in sanyu's apartment...

Finally rd ended his song and there on the screen flashed---

"I LOVE U SANYU... ALWAYS AND FOREVER, PLEASE FORGIVE ME"

He came forward and sat on his knees in front of her and held out a bunch of pink roses...her fav.

R- I love u farzi... Will u be my gf officially???

Sanyu could not control anymore .She sat on her knees and hugged rd with all her might that they fell on the ground. Both were crying. Rd rolled and now he was on her top. He covered her soft pink lips with his rough ones and kissed her with all his might with all the pent up passion and love. They pulled apart and drowned in each other's love filled orbs.No words was necessary 4 both of them at that time. Suddenly yheir trance was broken by a bunch of claps and whistles .There at the door were standing all their friends- Parth, Vids, yoyo, sahil. All came and hugged Sandhir and congratulated them. After they went, they both spent the whole night in each others arms, under the moonlight celebrating theie oneness.

Thanks

Love,

Vidhi.

Plz do comment whwther u liked it or not.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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resss..
unress ...
...
it was really good yrr ...
keep writing dear..
...
Edited by holysoul - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely os
Loved it
I hope serial me b jaldi rd ko apni mistake realise ho jye

Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: holysoul

resss..
unress ...
...
it was really good yrr ...
keep writing dear..
...


thanks a lot😳
i thought kisi ko pasand nhi ayega...😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Short and sweet *_*
It was lovely
Cvs se to ye bhi nai hone wala -_-
Anyways keep writing dear :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: newmoon18

Lovely os
Loved it
I hope serial me b jaldi rd ko apni mistake realise ho jye

Keep smiling


thankiee😳

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