Illogical story and sequence

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Past one week the story has really become very illogical and sequence and pace all mixed up
First how suddenly without reason Akbar turned so egoistic and haughty
Second how can he accuse man singh of trying to kill him
Akbar was acting like small kids act after that knife incident - it looked funny and embrassing to watch him act like this at his age of 47-48
Man singh in jail and celebrations is another illogical sequence
Jodha instead of putting sense in Akbar making others follow his illogical ideas like jashn etc son and bro In jail how can they enjoy and party is not man singh Akbar nephew by relation too
Imagine a father acting like this at age of 48 what impact on kids - they will be scared shit what happened to dad especially small aram banu
Jodha jealousy and jalpaari another badly executed scene
The worst was yesterday serial - it was like some fantasy program without logic and could not watch it long
The pillar only fell on Akbar what about others nearby like Jodha, hamida and salim who were sitting so nearby
then all standing and watching instead of helping Akbar and gaurds also standing like dolls as pillar fell only on Akbar (the scene could be better execute it looked illogical)
Seriously such bad story and scenes this serial will be in trouble no logic no sequence no execution
And nowadays actors also not acting properly its confusing what they want to convey
Is anarkali happy to dance or sad?
Why Jodha looking at anarkali like that?
Akbar is acting so confusing sometime lunatic somtime crazy some time angry all without any logic
and why salim so sad nowadays because lady love dancing in front of all or she reject him
When shall we get so see a mature Akbar not acting like teenager always romancing and writing love letters to wife at 48 years(if salim is 20 years Akbar was 48) and Jodha acting mature queen than silly wife trying to say yes for all Akbar wrongs and Salim acting like crown prince instead of devdas(actually it must be salim writing love letters at his age to his GFs not Akbar) and anarkali acting like courtesean not attitude princess.
This serial needs a good story writer
The story is all there in history and folk lore(like salim anarkali) why not just follow it instead of writing such illogical mashed up and jumbled confusing story and sequence
Akbar enlightenment in form of a boy(Gods message) could be shown better. Is this track for din e illahi than its not so great
Story is backbone and logical sequence of story pillar of any serial if that is not fine its tough to hold viewer attention
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Posted: 10 years ago
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well said.. prem...we wasted our precious time watching yesterday's episode...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was a comic episode.. highlight was Birbal saying "How can we reach Shehansha in Toofan?" 🤣🤣🤣..

anarkali dances in Toofan.. Jodha, Ammijaan stands still shouting "shehanshah ko bacho" in Toofan.. Birbal and Toddy happily stand and gossip in toofan but no one can move in Toofan for Jalal's rescue.. 🤣🤣🤣..

this Maan singh attack and house arrest track is another comic.. illogical and ridiculous than kids' fantasy tales.. seems along with Shehanshah all the navratans lost their sanity..

Poor Rajat.. he's too confused enacting this track 🤣🤣🤣

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Posted: 10 years ago
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your 100% right... I guess the writers here in Indian forums give better .. infact best story then cvs ... JA serial writers are just out of sense I guess .. writing all crap and random senseless shit
Edited by Acchu02 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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mee tooo disappointd wth the track...came back to JA for this track and this is wat we get...grrr😡
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Posted: 10 years ago
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How come Jo's dream comes true daily. 😕
Totally illogical.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Cvs adapted new idea...
Spoilers in the form Jodha's Dream. 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I too find Akbar's behavior weird and the change in his outlook is so sudden the whole setup seems surreal. This track is confusing and certainly not the kind of thing you want to attract viewers back to your serial, especially those who have come back after a long while.

But, the changed focus to Jodha Akbar is encouraging, even for this track I hope for better things. I will support it for that reason. Hopefully TRP's will rise and more interesting plot lines involving Jodha Akbar will emerge.
Edited by Donjas - 10 years ago

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