ARHI TS: Pretense (Second Shot - Part A)-24/2-Pg 15

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I am sorry you guys..I know I have 3 ff's waiting to be completed ..but what can I do asli duniya is really taking a toll on me..but then when I finally had the time to write, my brains is just not functioning. ..And that's because I have this concept running in my head..this is a TS.. and maybe my way of asking an apology from you all for not updating my works..So Please enjoy this at the moment. I will update my FF'S by this week..And here's the catch, I have completed this but I will only post the remaining parts if I receive good response from you guys. And Good response means comments and likes..


Prologue

"Baby, wake up..I am leaving to work.." she shaked him and walked to the dresser to continue getting ready.

Arnav stretched himself as he open his eyes and watched his acquaintance of 6 months and girlfriend of 3 months adjust her hair in the vanity mirror.

"so early?" he sat up the headboard revealing his upper torso

"um um..I have an early meeting today" she turned fully to him. She eyed his upper torso, the washboard abs, the way his arm flexes when he stretches and how she wanted to run her hands and lips all over him, he looked so delicious in the morning.. "god this guy would be the death of me" she thought to herself mentally smacking her head just to see him smirk at her. .

Damn, he caught her staring at him. She blushed profusely and turned away immediately, pretending to find her heels.

Suddenly she felt the hair of the back of her neck stand feeling his proximity very close to her. She felt very conscious as he grabbed her waist and pulled her towards him. Her back rubbing his naked front. She gasped as she felt his palms on her top rubbing over her waist, gliding up to her breast, where it lingered a little bit longer as he caressed her hardened peaks and slowly to her button which was right on top of her cleavage. He buttoned it up and slowly whispered to her ears "only mine to see"

She suddenly felt the lost of warmth when he pulled back and walked to the hall in all glory with just his boxers leaving her in the bedroom to adjust herself. She felt her whole body heat up with what happen a while ago. How can he do that? He always do that? Damn! She was clothed all the while he touched her but then he had left her wanting for more.

She looked up the mirror and adjusted herself again. Releasing a deep breath, she grabbed her kitty heels and handbag and went to the hall. She saw him preparing breakfast for her. Nothing much but a bowl of cereal and orange juice. Somehow she was content seeing him do this for her but at the same time she was not happy that he was doing all this for her.

"Baby, you don't have to do this" she said as she tried prying away the orange juice carton from him.

"Its ok honey, I don't mind!" he smiled at her and made her sit down and put the first spoon of cereal to her mouth. She grabbed the spoon away from him and started stuffing herself a bit angrily.

He took her water tumbler from her bag and went to the sink, she was about to stop him, but he silent her one more time by giving her a nod.

She watched him as he washed her tumbler and filled it with water and closed it and put it in her bag.

She felt so guilty seeing him do all this. "Arnav you don't have to do all this, I mean I don't think it's nice. I mean it is so sweet of you but u make me feel really feel guilty"

"Khushi, its ok. Plus I have nothing to do. At least let me help you. I am staying at your place for free this is the least I could do right. ."

"Baby, don't ever say that! I know you will get a job real soon ok. Plus you know I could have not rented this place without you? Who gets to rent a luxury condo for just 5000 rupees in the upper side of Mumbai.." Suddenly something strike her mind " hey you know what? Why don't you be real estate agent? I think you will make a great real estate agent, and this house is the proof, I was paying the same amount for some shabby one room flat for the same amount until you came.. Why don't you..." She saw his face turned away looking at the window outside thinking something. She assumed he might be angry for advising him regarding his job. Feeling she crossed the line, she walked over to him and faced him, she continued "anyways leave all that.. are you going back to your parents place today"

"erm yeah..I have a meeting today.." he bit his tongue

"what?" Khushi looked at him confusedly

" I mean I am meeting up with my parents today.. so I wont be coming back today.. Will you be alright?"

He saw her face drop but she quickly masked it up " Of course I will be alright. I have been living alone before you came in my life naa.. " she gave him a genuine smile

" ok honey.. you are getting late.. lets get you moving.. I will see you tomorrow or day after? Ok?" in reply she just nod her head.

He hugged her tightly and closed his eyes absorbing her scent. " I am sorry" he whispered without realizing that it was out of his mouth.

"Huh?" she looked at him with a lot of questions. He bit his tongue and quickly racked his brain for an answer.

"Nothing.. I just felt I am leaving you alone"

"Arnav.. you know you are mad right.." she giggled as he smiled sheepishly.

"Acha baba, I am getting late.. ermm don't mind me asking do you have cash? I mean you need to take a cab right..yeah.." she looked at his face fearing that she might have offended him but all he could see was love that shone out of his eyes..

" Baby I am fine..i have cash..you please don't worry" he smiled as he hugged her..

"You sure?" still unconvinced...

"yes I am ...now go! You are tempting me to do something that might make you late for work.."he eyed her figure

"Chi..besharam" she quickly pecked his lips and left through the door. As he heard the door slammed, he sighed out of relieve and slumped on the sofa.

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Link:

1) FIRST SHOT-PART A

2)FIRST SHOT - PART B

3) Second Shot: Part A

Love you all..😊

Edited by forfunlanya - 10 years ago

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xBabyAngelx thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
Nice story
Loved it
Hope it's not going to be sad ending
basriya thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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does arnav pretends to be a poor guy?? continue soon,
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice story.
looks like she is living in arnav's condo. n just to test her he us pretending to be like this. m i right?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Boy was arnav. Bt dat grl was khushi, right?
piaviviandsena thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Y i hv dis feeling dat arnav was lieing to d grl.?
chavvi16 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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What is he hiding
Something for sure
Hmmm so arhi are couple
And arnav is outta job
Or is he I wonder
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Posted: 10 years ago
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That was wonderful start...

Does Arnav going to leave kushi? Is he feeling guilty for living in kushi place and without paying or doing any job..

I really hope he didnt do such stupid things that can lead their seperation.. plz do continue soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice start n sounds really interesting
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It's really nice..
It's different to c arnav jobless
Can't wait for the next update

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