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Hmph Di. 😡 😆











Edited by chotidesi - 9 years ago

Res :)

Edited by Arshi67 - 9 years ago

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Yes Mira, glacier it is. A glacier that gushes water, green the mountains and valleys, rebuilds our dreams, rekindles our imagination, and offer us a landscape that never tires the view. When you have so much going for you, I think the slower pace is more of a feature than a liability.  As long as you don't change a thing, nothing else matters.  

Getting back to the story, the opening statements that I was missing in the last few chapters, are back in all their glory. Loved every word of that. 

The nani talk reminded me of my own grandma's talk and it is kind of ironic that you can never get too old to talk to old people especially with the ones who added wisdom to their resume along with their age. Manorama's family moment goes to show that no matter how busy and bustling the pace around us, there is always time for a family hug. 

Khushi's childhood seems to be so varied from Meera's. Khushi's questions about her childhood and Meera's questions about the nuances of adulthood make a very interesting comparison. Meera for me was the highlight of this chapter and she seems to be the bridge that is connecting Arnav and Khushi. I really hope that they stop strolling at the opposite ends of the bridge and start walking towards each other soon.     

I really enjoyed the texts and they are finally getting a little more personal and I am glad to know that like the last word bug connects us to something in past. The texts are making Khushi's heart race but I am sure that a heart never misses a beat without a reason.       

I like your realistic depiction of Khushi's viewpoint of Meera and Arnav relationship. A child always has the most honest outlook and I am sure with Meera's smarts, it will be only be a matter of time before she bonds that relationship with that new guy in her life.

An awesome update overall and as always eagerly waiting for the next.
Edited by bhavali4RR - 9 years ago

MB, another super update. Its like a broken record technique now for me, you give us these amazing updates every week and then I come back telling you how awesome, super, amazing it was.














Edited by canapoem - 9 years ago

Beautiful, while you have brought so much melancholy in this update - true that the last few has brought so much of tears from Khushi's past.  Edited by inamajar - 9 years ago

Someone once told me they didn't know what to say about something I had written. I cannot tell you how much I wondered about that. And yet today after this update I can say nothing at all. I cannot marvel the beauty of your language and the errant symphony that your words are. I can't comment on you ability to write both adults and children with such clever observation and perfected detail. I cannot begin to compliment you on your ability to weave hope and faith into the fabric of the story. I really cannot say anything because none of my words will do you justice.

You are a natural story teller my friend. And every chapter I read just makes me so glad that you decided to share your story with me!

i love the pace, the story telling, the emotions everything about this story

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Firstly ,I appreciate your punctuality in updating. .thank you very much for that.

Another beautiful update! Absolutely loving the bonding between Arnav and meera. Meera is craving for a male figure since her dad is no more.