Aaj jane ki zidd na karo :')

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aaj Jane ki zidd na Karo
Yun hi pahlu me baithe raho
Aaj Jane Ji zidd na Karo

When her hand touched his hand, it did feel like melting, something did start to melt for the warmth she is.
When he didn't take away his hand for the 3-4 seconds, it did feel like building up, something did start to build for absolute he is.

When she said he is the only one who can stop her, something did arise for the hope she is.
When he asked what she wants, something did answer for the the question he is..

Haye mar jayenge, hum toh lut jayenge
Aisi baatein kiya na Karo..
When she sought forgiveness , something did embrace the innocent she is..
When he told he can't, something did get the hurt he is..

Tum hi bolo kyun na roke tumhe
Jaan jaati hai jab uth ke jate ho tum

When he pushed her away, something did tell for the pull he is..
When she still sat next to him, something did speak up for the firm she is..

Waqt ki kaid me zindagi h magar
Chand ghadiya yahi hai jo aazad hai
Inko kho ke meri Jane e jaan
Umar bhar na taraste raho..

When she talked about the memories they share, something did strengthen for the believer she is..
When he turned his back on her, something did say for the listener he is..
When she asked if memories would last a lifetime, something did tell about how well she knows him.. Something did say for need he is in..
When he looked back at her with so much in eyes, something did answer for the pleed he made..
When she asked if he would be able to forget her, something did mark for concern she is in..
When she advanced to lock his lips, something did set free the captive he is..
When he stopped her from doing so, something did explain about mortgage he is in..
When he answered that he would forget her, something did get back the slave he is..
When she said she has a lot to say, something did walk towards the cage he is in..
When he listened what she murmered, something did look at the coming she..walking her..towards him..

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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
Adiii..
You are amazing and my jaan.
Beautiful...Beautiful..❤️
Write more...please
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aditi, that is so beautiful, wow!

I second Disha, plz write more

🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing... N I just love the song :) the different feeling I m having right now, just wondering y am I so bothered fr a fictional love story... God help me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#5
This is very beautiful post
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Posted: 10 years ago
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yesterday khamoshiyan aaj yeh...
bas bhi karo yaar rulake he manoge kya... 😭😃

ps... once again beautiful post... ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aditi your post just made me realise I want Nandini singing this version for the classical fusion concert
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m3ZyU98N3Fk
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nxt_rockstar

Aaj Jane ki zidd na Karo
Yun hi pahlu me baithe raho
Aaj Jane Ji zidd na Karo

When her hand touched his hand, it did feel like melting, something did start to melt for the warmth she is.
When he didn't take away his hand for the 3-4 seconds, it did feel like building up, something did start to build for absolute he is.

When she said he is the only one who can stop her, something did arise for the hope she is.
When he asked what she wants, something did answer for the the question he is..

Haye mar jayenge, hum toh lut jayenge
Aisi baatein kiya na Karo..
When she sought forgiveness , something did embrace the innocent she is..
When he told he can't, something did get the hurt he is..

Tum hi bolo kyun na roke tumhe
Jaan jaati hai jab uth ke jate ho tum

When he pushed her away, something did tell for the pull he is..
When she still sat next to him, something did speak up for the firm she is..

Waqt ki kaid me zindagi h magar
Chand ghadiya yahi hai jo aazad hai
Inko kho ke meri Jane e jaan
Umar bhar na taraste raho..

When she talked about the memories they share, something did strengthen for the believer she is..
When he turned his back on her, something did say for the listener he is..
When she asked if memories would last a lifetime, something did tell about how well she knows him.. Something did say for need he is in..
When he looked back at her with so much in eyes, something did answer for the pleed he made..
When she asked if he would be able to forget her, something did mark for concern she is in..
When she advanced to lock his lips, something did set free the captive he is..
When he stopped her from doing so, something did explain about mortgage he is in..
When he answered that he would forget her, something did get back the slave he is..
When she said she has a lot to say, something did walk towards the cage he is in..
When he listened what she murmered, something did look at the coming she..walking her..towards him..



Wow !! Beautifully expressed 👏
Edited by manya_189 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful Adi 🤗 truly write more..
Its just reminded me about 'shaam...bi koyi' during store room days.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnomanderRake

Aditi your post just made me realise I want Nandini singing this version for the classical fusion concert

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m3ZyU98N3Fk

It will be perfect!!

CVs sunn lo

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