MaNan OSish - Giving Up.

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Yen idhayam udaithaai norungavey
en maruidhayam tharuven nee udaikave

You broke my heart to pieces
So I will give you another heart...just to break.


"Why are you even here Manik?" She was glaring at him and rightly so. He had been a complete jerk to her, wanting her to feel as much pain as he did.


She braced her hands against his chest and pushed hard. He barely stumbled.

"Why can't you just leave me alone? Why?" She spewed venom. He pushed too hard and now she was pushing back. Another hard shove and it was his turn to snap.

He grabbed her hands in his and twisted them behind her. She was pushed against him and he looked down at her, barely containing his anger.

"Enough"

"Enough?" she scoffed out. She struggled against his hold and dug her nails sharply into his palm causing him to wince.

"Manik, let me go. Leave me alone." She moved her eyes away from his smoldering, simmering gaze. Like hell he'd let her escape. He dropped his forehead so that it was barely above hers, forcing her to focus back on him.

His eyes roamed across her face and he saw the puff under her eyes. His hold flattered at the tell tale signs of her tears. The truth was that the more pain he caused her, the more he hated himself. Her eyes, always so expressive, were dimmed and it made him sick. It made him sick that he could break her so completely.

His hold complete lost it's vigor and instead his fingers were loosely entwined in hers.

"I love you."

The words slipped. He didn't even think them. They just fell out, completely against any rational thought. She was standing so close to him and there was no going back now.

"I hate that even though you broke my heart, I want you to have it again and again and again and it doesn't matter if you break it because..because I love you."

His entire form resigned, caving into her and pulling her close, like he physically did not have any more strength to fight. He was giving up.

A/n - It's not really an OS :'D It's a drabble. A scene I see happening sometime in the near future. Bachhi I finally wrote something. Now love me.
Do like/leave a comment. It makes me feel loved :')
PS- Who knows that song? ;)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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its good ...
don't know what CV's had for us.. but its nice ... something similar will definitely gona happen in the future...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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vinne thandi varuvaya😳..
I can totally see this happening..As usual awesome os bolt!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Reserved😒

editing.

OMG so many feelings i can't even. :'))

the words be so beautiful and babies be so beautiful and bolts be writing. i just get feels okay? The i love you and the last sentenced just killed me, the forehead touches, the need so palpable. BABIES BE SO BEAUTIFUL SIGHS!!

the pain. PAIN. PAIN. And so much love. How even?

i love this.
write more okay?
RIDA <33
Edited by MaybeSomeday... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Forever19

vinne thandi varuvaya😳..

I can totally see this happening..As usual awesome os bolt!


That song is so much love right? <3 ARR <3 Muhaa. ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sana_07

its good ...

don't know what CV's had for us.. but its nice ... something similar will definitely gona happen in the future...


I wanna see Manik break
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Now that I read it, I want to see it happening in the show. I really do.

It's all sorts of perfection. My feels. Sigh.
Edited by .Kiran. - 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: MaybeSomeday...

Reserved😒

editing.

OMG so many feelings i can't even. :'))

the words be so beautiful and babies be so beautiful and bolts be writing. i just get feels okay? The i love you and the last sentenced just killed me, the forehead touches, the need so palpable. BABIES BE SO BEAUTIFUL SIGHS!!

the pain. PAIN. PAIN. And so much love. How even?

i love this.
write more okay?
RIDA <33


#twirlhug4eve

RIDA IT WILL HAPPEN KAY?

BAES BE TOO PERF FOR IT NOT TO HAPPEN.

Today he was so scared of breaking that he broke the damn door. Soon love, soon he'll break and it'll be beautiful <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Kiran.

Now that I read it, I want to see it happening in the show. I really do.


It's all sorts of perfection. My feels. Sigh.


Muhhaaa thanks love.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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HOSANNA... <3

I didnt like the movie in tamil, but the songs are pure Love..<3

I loved your drabble, but too short.. I see this happening too...


I am anyway missing Manik trying to kiss nandini and then being cockblocked. Its been long... </3

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