Tale of Impossibility: Acceptance [DISCONTINUED]

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rani214

@rani214

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#441

Both updates r amazing

Ragna enjoying der day out was lovely

Both having fun n teasing eachothr was cute n raghav making her smile wen she was scared was nice

Oh our bublee n naughty kalpi blushing haayeee😳😉

Lik vitthal here he knows kalpi is lying but he still trust her n w8ng for her to tell him truth by herself

Kalpi avoiding her best frnd Myra is nt good but den everythng is fair in love n war 😉...jus hope kalpi make up by giving her nice suprise bday party😃

Ragna boding togerthr n spending more tim is lovely😳

hope raghav is fine after d fall...n m doubting is he slowly turning to human

Exited to read next upd ...cont soon😊

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Ushoshi

@_TheBlackRose_

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#442

My mind suddenly started thinking in this direction n I couldn't help but ponder over it...

What if, instead of one long FF with all the tracks, I break ToI into 3 SSs? Make it a sort of trilogy?

This way sounds somewhat better to me 😳 never been too fond of stories that drag on and on with a lot of twists n not too appreciable ending (exceptions are always there) plus, I can add more such short sequels later on without making it look too asymmetric...

So what do you guys think abt it? Shud I rename it to ToI: Acceptance (name for part 1)?

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Ushoshi

@_TheBlackRose_

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#443

No one's interested, I guess... 😔 Forget it then... bye till I decide to drop in again...

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Burns n Trolls

@shahsb_26

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 10 years ago

#444

I love all the stories you have written, and i have read..!! I would have commented here on the note too.. but the fact that, I haven't read this one yet, would make it bit unfair..!! Will read this whole thing soon, while travelling... and then let ya know..!!

But mostly I love when stories are long and long and covers various tracks..!!! rather then shorter ones... for some reason, one being that we get WHOLISTIC picture and we can have relations from past and new part.. even if it's not obvious... our sympathy/ love is more.. considering this to be same person who had done xyz things for kalpi in past or vice versa rather then whole new..!!!.. Like till date... :'(
I haven't read any Story, which went beyond either confession, if they start with something like love story.. and I feel sad... as we want to read more and more.,.. but it ENDS..!!... or we do not know what went on in the past if they start from marriage... it is often unrelated.. I soo always wanted to read some story, where Raghav is taking care of Kalpi during her pregnancy or something, but it's never there.. just cuz story ends.. with something or the other... !!! it won't be wrong, if you continue it here..!!

Mostly when we don't comment it's often like saying we are fine with anything and keep on waiting for reading someone else ka comment and then reply..!!!!