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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: StarsOnEarth

100 pages!!!

Congratulations!!
Yeah!! Thanks for the treat!!
Needless to say,all the chapters were amazing!!
And I loved that blue-lined part in the 47th chapter..
It was light hearted though heart wrenching !!
Haha...I was just imagining Zain's expressions when he entered Rehmaan's room forcibly and those silly questions...if something like that was there for us to see,the directors might have added that background music to make it funnier. I am glad that I can read something like this.
And your precap..
Continue soon
Congrats once again!!


Thank you so much
I wish I could have seen him saying these dialogues in actual BI ...
Stay tuned
Love
Sim
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ZayaILoveU

First of all, congratulations for ur 100 pages!

I m sry i have not commented in a long time but i can assure u that i have been reading each and every chapter of yours with equal excitement and anticipation...
I cnt comment, its just that i have my board exams lingering on my head starting from march 7 so i cnt come on this forum often...
But amazing chapters...
Love them all...
The brave zain is back...
Awesome...
Pls continue soon...

Thank youuu
No problem...I know exams are more imp...All the best ...and dont worry about comments ...just press like button that too will suffice for me...
Good luck
n read the story during ur break time
Love
Sim
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Meghapaim

Congratulations for 100th page🥳

Story really interesting🤓
Do continue soon👍🏼

Thank you so much
Keep reading
Sim
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Priya_arora

loved all d 3 chapters
beautifully written
eager to know abt next
do cont soon..

Thank you so much Priya
Keep reading

Sim
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Tom-and-Jerry

hey sim, congratulation for completing 100 pages🥳...sorry for commenting late ..exams are approaching ..finally got time to read . ..really luv the way u are carrying this ff..its exceptionally outstanding👏...and I can't thank u enough for writing this ff as for me its like beintehaa season 2 ... beintehaa ishq is as dear to me as beintehaa 😳...ur writing have that magic that awesomeness when I read ur update I feel like i'm watching beintehaa ..it is as as exquisite and perfect that we can actually imagine it ...zain's redemption,his pain, love for aliya, rehman as rhea's guardian..suri's anger..and ofcourse rhea's character i can feel dat connection with her..even she wasnt there in beintehaa ...their whole trip to bangalore,theatre,hotel ,mall scene,everything was so so beautiful😊..and i loved that shayri too😛...jus luv this ff in short Happiness is reading ur ff😃...eagerly waiting for the next update...thanx for d pm...😊

pls -plzz plzz plz don't end it soon..😭

Thank you so much ...
One such comment that makes me want to write more ...touched
Its an honor to read these words ...Happiness is what you gave me priceless...
Keep reading
nd good luck for ur exams
Love
Sim
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Deepika_Zaya

wow all d 3 chap were amazing..beautifully written..waiting for d next part..thx for d pm..

Thank you so much
Stay tuned
Sim
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Posted: 10 years ago

Sometimes I feel you all are tired of this story and then I read your wonderful comments to realize ...no you still love it as much as I do ...

Thank you for all the love ...

I am doing a short update right now and maybe multiple ones later...

Feeling too sleepy so cant vouch for the updates ...

This weekend will be a bit caught up so ..the long 50th chapter with three parts should suffice across the weekend ...

Love you all😛



Chapter 49

Zidd...

Rhea went to her room ...blushing so hard that her whole cheeks had turned bright pink ...Why was she always harassing him, she had no clue...but she liked to do wicked things with him ...he was so docile...extra nice ...too good to be true ...and she just wanted to have fun ...

She had no clue that Zain had actually spoken to Rehman about their marriage ...

Giggling to herself and getting excited for tomorrow she pulled the big comforter on her head and slept ...peacefully

Zain was pacing in his room...he had accepted the challenge, but he himself had no clue how he was going to make her talk to him ...

wish she had not threatened with the fasting part...the mere thought that she won't eat frightened him ...but then accepting his other punishment was equally painful too...Her proximity and silence were a killer combination ...even though it was just 24hrs ...he knew he won't be able to control his emotions ...

Walking towards the cupboard he opened Aliya's box...starring at her earing ...looking at the dried rose petals his first confession of love ...and her pictures ...he was smiling ...

He walked back to her room ...it was 12:00 she would have slept ...peeking through the door ...he saw her restlessly shuffling through the bed.

He gently closed the door and walked near her ...The head and feet were unrecognizable ...her habit of asphyxiating herself to death below this blanket amazed him ...he gently pulled the blanket down ...

She was wide awake ...but acted as though she was snoring ...the game had just started ...

He gave her a forehead kissy ...

And in a very low tone ..muttered ...

Pata nahi kal subhah done dogi ya nahi ..abhi se hi de raha hu...advance mei

He kept his chin on the bed ...

Kaise rahunga tumahre khamoshi ke saath ...bereham ho na tum ...

Khair sirf 24 ghante ki baat hai ...phir toh tumhari bakbak humehsa ki tarah peecha karegi ...

Aree tumhare mami ka birthday bhi aa raha hai ...tumhe shopping bhi toh le jaana tha kal ...

Par tum kaise aaogi ...jab tak apni chabar chabar nahi sunogi tab tak gift lene ka mazaa kaha hai ...

She could barely control her giggle ...she so wanted to reply him back...

Koi baat nahi ...meri secretary hai Tisha ...uske saath chale jaunga ...

bahut cute hai woh ...aur mujhse baatein bhi karegi ...aur ignore bhi nahi karegi ...he laughed ...

Da...kitna tang karti ho mujhe ...

Par aainda kabhi bhooke rehne ki baat nahi kehna ...nahi jaanti kaisa lagta hai ...

Pata hai ...nikaah ke baad mujhe tumse abhi se darr lag raha hai ...

Tum toh mera jeena haram kar dogi ...aise hi har baat par agar dhamki deti rahi toh ...

She bit her tongue ...he was thinking about their marriage ...

Mai nahi jaanta kal kaise rahunga ...par haa ...baat toh tumse karke hi dum lunga...

Zain Abdullaha kisi se bhi nahi darta ...tayaar rehna ...Aa rah ahu ...tang karne ...

He kissed her again and she acted as though she was bitten by a mosquito ...irritated ...

While walking out he spoke loudly ...Mujhe pata hai ..tum soyi nahi ho ...I love you ...

Rhea pulled her face out of the blanket ...smiling shy ...

Zindagi behad khoobsurat hai... tere daman ke chaav mai ...

Haskar bhool jayenge ,,,,,agar kaate bhi chube in paavo mei...

SIM

Pre-cap : Will Zain patofy Rhea ...or will Rheas Vishvamitra be too much to handle ...stay tuned


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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry all tried hard to stay awake ...but very very sleepy ...will update tomm night or if I wake at mid night ...
Byee
Love you all
Sim
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was so damn cute..you know it actually reminded me of the naughty Zain Abdullah..and Sim,we do love Beintehaa Ishq as much as we love beintehaa..because it has become our lifeline :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was awesome some tears appeared in my eyes while zain was speaking but when aaloya peeked out I blushed red ...
I love u for writing this and hate you for sleeping I wanted more ...neways ...continue soon

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