After Moh Moh Ke Dhaage

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After the brilliant performance and her new found status as an outstanding singer Nandini still seems to be lost. The endless round of congratulations and good wishes doesn't seem to cheer her. She is sitting alone in the music room lost in her trance. When her thoughts are interrupted by a tight hug from Navya

Navya (in her super excited mode) - wah wah Nandu tumne toh chakke chuda diye sabke. Kya gana gaya tumne, hamen toh pata hi nahi tha k hamari friend itni superb singer hai. Kahan chupake k rakha tha itna sara talent.

Nandini (with a forced smile) - Thanx Navya

Navya - Bas itna sa reaction arey tumhari jagah hum hote na toh khusi ke mare pagal hi ho jate

Suddenly peeche se some1 says "uske k liye tumhe khush hone ki bhi zaroorat nahi hai tum waise hi pagal ho... pure college ko pata hai

Both of them look at that direction to find Cabir standing infront of them

Navya (with an irritated expression)- tumse kisine kuch poocha

Cabir - nahi nahi aaise gyan toh main free fund mein baanta hun..bahut hai mere paas

Navya - tumhe toh main

Even Cabir braces himself for the fight

Nandini - Guys please stop it ..kya kar rahe ho tum dono..Navya (tries to control her)

Cabir - SORRY atleast I should behave myself (with a naughty smile) Newyz Nandini I was looking for u only

Nandini - Kyun kya hua?

Cabir - Kya hua pure SPACE mein tsunami laake u r actually asking.. kya hua. Nandini main toh tumhara fan ban gaya...what a performance really

Nandini - Thanx

Cabir - Hmm itna thanda thanx matlab Manik ko tumhara hint samajh mein nahi aaya dat u wer singing for him ..Ye Manik bhi na kabhi kabhi sabse zyada obvious baatein bhi nahi samajhta ..abhi bhi gussa hai tumse.

Nandini - Gussa?... he hates me..he will never forgive me

Navya tries to console her

Cabir - Dekho Nandini I know Manik thoda tedha hai (admits helplessly )I mean u know. But I can say one thing for sure He doesn't hate you... He can never

Nandini - Woh karta hai ..he said it on my face..

Cabir - and don't tell me k u believe him on that.. Nandini .. Manik abhi bhi tumhare bahut care karta hai.

Nandini nods in disbelief..

Wat u don't trust me..I can prove my point

Nandini and Navya both look at him with suspicion

Haan but on one condition agar main jeet gaya toh tumhe waise hi karna hoga jaisa ki hum dono kahenge (indicating himself and Navya)

Navya is a little taken a bac by the hum dono phrase but decides to go with the flow.

Cabir - 10 min mein 2nd floor ke stairs ke paas pahuncho I wil meet u der (saying this he rushes out of the room)

Cut to Canteen

FAB 4 is sitting together. Alya and Mukti venting der anger on Nandini for trying to take der place. Dhruv trying to defend Nandini but failing and Manik in his famous silent mode. Dhruv finally tries to divert the topic

Dhruv - Arey ye Cabir kahan gaya maine use bola toh tha k hum canteen ja rahe hain.

Den suddenly Cabir comes running

(panting frantically)Guys guys ..who Nandini .. who stairs se.. 2nd floor..

And before he could finish panting and complete his sentence Manik pushes him aside and runs out of the canteen. Dhruv also gets up to go but is stopped by Alya.. Manik runs through stairs and corridors as if he knew his stupid and dumb Nandini has again managed to get herself hurt or land up in sum new trouble. He reaches the spot and sees 10-15 students surrounding sumthing. He immediately pushes them to get in ..only to find a girl sitting in between holding her ankle and crying in pain. But she z not his Nandini. He suddenly glances Cabir standing beside him. He catches hold of him and comes out.

Manik - (his eyes filled with anger as if he would tear him apart den n der)- Jhooth kyun bola tune..Kahan hai Nandini

Cabir- (stammering and also trying to save himself)- Jjjhoooth kahan bola ..ye toh rahi Nandini (pointing to the same girl) listen (to the girl who is now standing with sum1 z help) zara batao isse tumhara naam kya hai

Girl - Nandini

Manik looks at Cabir angrily

Cabir - Arey Ye Nandini hai Nandini Awasthi 1st year new in college hai na

The girl nods in agreement and then goes from there, the crowd also gets dispersed. Manik realizes he has fallen in Cabir's trap and looks here and there to avoid Cabir's eye contact.

Cabir - (very innocently)Kyun tujhe kya laga ki kaun hai.

Manik - Saale tune jaan bujh kar ye kia tha na

Cabir - Arey kia kya maine tune meri puri baat nahi suni Nandini sunte hi u tuk off like a rocket. Hadh hai Nandini kya sirf Moorty hi ho sakti hai Awasti,Tiwari, Saxena, Singh der r endless possibilities.

Manik knowing dat he has taken the bait and it is pointless to defend himself leaves from der. While Nandini and Navya standing is one corner have witnessed the whole event. Cabir comes to dem

Cabir - So I think I have proved my point

Nandini althoh happy but is still trying to hide it. Sumhw her deepest fear hasn't cum true he still feels for her, cares for her even if he wouldn't admit

Cabir (driving Nandini out of her thoughts) - So ab its ur turn.. remember wahi karna hoga jo hum kahenge..Ready

Nandini looks at Navya who is equally cluless but Cabir gestures Navya to relax and trust him.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow...second part...loved it yaar...cabir...and his dialogues...amazing...pls continue soon...take care😊
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This was superb...Cabira is mind blowing plz update soon...want to see what Cabira will do
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wow.. awesome post yar.. update soon :)
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Good pls update soon as possible
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wow awsm part loved it
cont soon
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Awesome yaar pls update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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You wrote it so well, it was like seeing it in the mind's eye! Oh! How i wish this was what was on the screen! Would be so lovely to watch! The icing on the cake!!!

Please, please, please - continue! It would be totally unfair to leave it hanging there!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: serenam

You wrote it so well, it was like seeing it in the mind's eye! Oh! How i wish this was what was on the screen! Would be so lovely to watch! The icing on the cake!!!

Please, please, please - continue! It would be totally unfair to leave it hanging there!

Thanx for d appreciation it makes my writing worth it😊

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