secrets of life ...new dark ff

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Posted: 10 years ago
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hello guys ..am back !!!! happy valentine month yeah i know am late buh celebrate it for the whole month ...heheh
now i am gonna write a new ff

do tell me if i wanna continue or not ?

secrets of life

"Sam " his voice echoed and it was terrible to hear his voice so frightened and loud.

While he was running toward her he took the gun from his left boot and aimed at the

guy who shot her.

He don't know how many bullet pierced into the mans body but he could hear a blood curling moan from the mans lip

He collapsed near her and took her hand in his and started rubbing it

"Sam ,please open your eyes ,please" he said while his eyes was dwelling up with tears

Sam opened her eyes and saw him

seeing him made her lips go up and she smiled softly at him but it was soon rep

aced with a groan

"Randhir "she called out to him with great difficulty

"Randhir ,I am sure that I am going to die so,pleae promise me that you will leave this city an will start off better .

but Randhir kept quiet because he was burning for the revenge ,at present he was even able to tear the head of the man behind this chaos

"rd you cannot give fake promises to a dyeing person,so tell me "-she asked and felt her eyelids fluttering

"Sam I assure you that "but his voice trailed off as Sam 's hand was quite cold under his hand

He shook her many times but she lay there still ,accepting what the Earth has choosen for her

He was too shocked to react to the situation the his tears started to pater on her face like a heavy rain...He was again alone in this crooked world ..all alone staring at the void for the response for his many questions

he took her arms in which she had his name tattoed and had a cupid at the end

he kissed it frequently and hold on to her neck and cried,wailed and sobbed


guys do tell me whether i have to continue or not


love ya

take care

with hopes and love

gowri😳

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Rashi98 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Prologue seems awesome...but who is Sam??
N rd killed someone?? Ohh emm gg :o
Moreover a dark ff...what else I need xP
Cont. soon n pm me if possible :)

Keep writing. Stay blessed.

Regards.
Rashi 'D
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey.. the prologue seems vry intresting.
Eagerly waiting for d story to unfold.
Update soon. .
Love shweta😛😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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the prologue seems very interesting

very well written

continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sounds intrstng
Loved the proloug

Continue soon
Wtng

Pm me for sure

Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Seems interesting ... Plz continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome prologue...
continue soon and pm me...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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prologue seems intresting.
awesome start dear.
rd has killed someone n who is Sam.
plz update asap.
do pm me whenever u update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rashi98

Prologue seems awesome...but who is Sam??

N rd killed someone?? Ohh emm gg :o
Moreover a dark ff...what else I need xP
Cont. soon n pm me if possible :)

Keep writing. Stay blessed.

Regards.
Rashi 'D


thank you
sam????who is she???
next part i will reveal her identity..heheheh
but thank you for commenting😃

with hopes
gowri
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sarim.fatmi

prologue seems intresting.
awesome start dear.
rd has killed someone n who is Sam.
plz update asap.
do pm me whenever u update.


thank you 😆
but there will be a delay ..exam times😡
but soon after the exams i will update

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