FF Beintehaa Ishq [Zaya story with a twist]Thread 1 completed - Page 68

Originally posted by: katmaan

I loved it sim ...yes it did give tingling sensation lol ...u know ur updates are cute I m loving it

Originally posted by: katmaan

I don't y it wasn't emotional but I cried the poem I mean so true so awesome it was and yes I agree with the words simg tusi great ho ...I am in love put this poem my red line compilation samjhi I need it ...

Originally posted by: StarsOnEarth

👏Super se uparrr walaa update👏

Okay,finally I am writing this after deleting my comment atleast 10 times...

...I have no words to describe that fantastic poem of urs!!!

Keep writing and sharing such wonderful poems with us...

Continue soon...

Originally posted by: HARSHTA

"Saaya kahu ...ya teri parchaye hu mai ...

...Joh bhi hu ...tujme basa hu mai ...

Mera haath nahi chodna kabhi ...kisi bhi mod par ...

Saaye nahi chal paate apne ...jism koh chodkar" ...
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THESE LINES LEFT ME SPELLBOUNDED! I M AWSTRUCK RITE NOW BY THIS POEM OF YOURS THAT I AM GOING SHORT OF WORDS TO WRITE IN THE COMMENT! I JUST CANT TELL U HOW THIS WONDERFUL POEM HAS TOUCHED MY HEART... IT WAS TRULY A MASTERPIECE! SIMPLE YET FILLED WITH TREASURES OF EMOTIONS!!! U REALLY DESERVE AN APPLAUSE👏!! N THE LAST WAS TOO GOOD WHERE ZAIN APPRECIATED UH! THAT WAS A NICE ONE!😉 THANX FOR SHARING SUCH A WONDERFUL POEM! DO UPDATE SOON DEAR!:):)

Originally posted by: Crazy4HarshIka

Again u nailed it.When I started reading the shayari it was like normal one like your other ones but the last line u were just amazing.

Thanku Sim For the beautiful chapter n for the PM.😊

Originally posted by: zayacrazy

Sim! Wow! Abb intezaar nahi hota! Ab toh usse yaad dilado na!

Originally posted by: zayalove

Ok 2 chaps mera toh din ban gaya .
Doing bhangra ...n gidda
Ok the first one is really emotional n touchy
Idk y but ur poem made me emotional jst loved it

Running to read the next update

Originally posted by: zayalove

Ok now coming to chapter 38
What to say yar i can feel them around me
It seems so realistic
Rhea applied mehndi zainu feeding her
I jst loved it
Plzz usse yaad dila do
Loved it
Update asap
Thanks for the pm

Alina

Originally posted by: StarsOnEarth

Zain learnt many things in this one year...

Both the updates were amazingly written...

Well,ur precap...yeah!!! Thode time mein Aaliya wapas aa jayegi...

I really cant predict how Aaliya will react!!

Too eager to know

Cont soon