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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
I ws getting so pissd by seeing mukti and alya's shit in the show thtsy decided to make them positive here..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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ty evryone and il update part b 2mrw...hope u guys lik it too..
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Guys,here comes part B..

Chapter 4B

Manik is driving the car and Nandini is continuously asking questions to him.

Nandini:Manik mei kabse tumse puch rahi hu tht where are we going...so y ur not telling me...bolo na kaha ja rahe hai hum..

Manik gets irritated with her constant questioning and yells at her.

Manik:Oh god...Nandini..will u jst shut up for somtime and let me drive peacefully..i said na wen we'l reach the spot then u'l know it urself..so till the time pls dnt ask anymore questions..i request u pls..

Nandini makes a angry face and looks away from him.Suddenly Manik stops the car and says.

Manik:See we have reached..nw u can guess from the view tht where are we..

Listening to Manik,she suddenly peeps out from the window and sees shining blue sea underneath the ever beautiful full of star sky.

Nandini:Beach...Manik..we have come to the beach..

Manik:Ummm..ya as u can see we have actually come to beach..so nw lets get out of car and go there.

Both Manik and Nandini comes out of car and start walking towards the beach.

Nandini:Manik...nw will u do the honours of telling me tht y we have came here.

Manik:Nandini..har cheez ka koi reason nai hota..muje ab bas tumhare sath time spend karna tha to mai bas aise hi tumhe yaha le aya.

Nandini:vo to theek hai..bt y did u brought me here...I mean ghar par bhi to sirf hum dono hi the na to ham time vaha bhi spend kar sakte the na..

Manik:Kar to sakte the bt vaha sirf ham dono akele hote bt mai chahta tha ke puri duniya ke samne mai tumhe hold karu,tumse baate karu and tumhe vo sara attention aur pamper du jo hamari secret relationship ke vajah se nai de pata hu...so isse better place muje aur koi nai laga..as I can have u in arms infront of the whole world and without caring about anyone...

Nandini gets overwhelmed by listening his such caring words.She jst runs towards him and hugs him tightly warapping her both short arms around Manik's huge muscular shoulders.Manik jst smiles seeing her behave this way and they both get lost in their romantic hug when suddenly they hear some whispers nearby.They broke the hug and look around and find an old couple staring them lovingly.The couple comes towards them.

Old man:Sorry to disturb u both bt we jst cudnt stop ourselves from staring you both.

Manik and Nandini both gets confused.

Old woman:Actually..my husband meant to say...tht u both reminded us of our youth days wen we both used to be like u guys.

Manan starts blushing.Old man says to Manik

Old man:Ha..sachme tumhe pata hai jab mai tumhari umar ka tha to mai bhi inhe isi tarah is beach par rat mai le ata tha jab bhi ye mujse naraz ho jati thi..Par yaha ane ke baad vo hamesha man jati thi..

Old woman:Maanti kaise nai thi..aap yaha aake itne romantic jo ban jate the ki gussa rehne ka man hi nai karta tha..

Manan stats smiling listening to the old romance story of this adorable couple.Nandini sudddenly says in between

Nandini:Aunty..pehle ka to pata nai bt uncle to abhi bhi kafi romantic lagte hai..

Evryone starts laughing and Manik says.

Manik:Agar aunty jaisi beautiful wife hogi to konsa husband romantic nai hoga..hai na uncle.

Old woman playfully hits Manik and says.

Old man:You know beta..you both remind so much of our love as we can see the same undying and innocent love in both of ur eyes..

Old woman: Really..u both make a very good couple together..god bless u..and always stay together..and love each other always this way only..

The couple wave them a goodbye after saying and leaves from there.

Nandini:They were so cute na..manik..Wen we'l get old then we'l also love each other like them only na..

Manik:No way..we are not gona be like them..

Nandini gets sad listening to it.Manik continues.

Manik:Infact we'l be in more love than them..U knw mai tabhi bhi tumse aise hi flirt karunga jaise ab karta hu aur tumbhi tabhi bhi aise hi blush karogi jaise ab karti ho..so we'l gona be more romantic couple than them.

Nandini smiles gets widened while listening Manik speak.Then Manik takes Nandini's hand in his own and they both start walking on the beach.After walking few steps they come a bit crowed spot decorated with beautiful lights .They look around and find people dancing or singing and enjoying themselves.Nandini spots some bunch of kids playing something so runs towards them and watch them playing and suddenly a lil gal comes towards Nandini and pulls her to join them.She happily goes and plays with them.Manik jst stands there and watches Nandini lovingly playing with the kids admiring her beauty,grace and innocence.Getting lost in her charm,he suddenly starts singing.

Aa raat bhar, aa raat bhar

Jaaye na ghar, jaaye na ghar

(Nandini turns back back and finds Manik singing.)

Aa raat bhar, aa raat bhar

Jaaye na ghar, jaaye na ghar

(Manik comes near Nandini.)

Hai saath tu, kya hai fikar

Jaaye na ghar, aa raat bhar

(He takes her hands in his and twirls her around.)

Jaaye jahaan jahaan jahaan dil kare

Jaane kahan kahan kahan fir mile

Iss raat mein, beete umar saari umar

Aa raat bhar, aa raat bhar

Jaaye na ghar, jaaye na ghar

(Seeing Manik singing so happily,Nandini too joins him and starts singing along with him)

Ho.. raat mujhe kyun, jaane lage yun

Kehti hai khud ko badal de tu

(She moves ahead and start dancing with a kid.)

Chand ko chakh le, taaro ko pee le

Aaj zara thoda sa jee le tu

(Manik grabs her hand and pulls her towards him and sings)

Toh chal chale, gire, pade, uthe, udhe

Aa tujh ko laga dun mein mere par

Iss raat mein beete umar, saari umar

Aa raat bhar, aa raat bhar

Jaaye na ghar, aa raat bhar

(Nandini encicles her hands around Manik's neck and continue singing.)

Haan.. namkiniyaan hai, nazdeekiyaan hai

Rang hi rang hai nazaron mein

(She brings her face closer to Manik's face and sings smilingly)

Hasne lagi hun, fasne lagi hun

Armaan dil mein hazaron hain

(Manik gets a bit flirty and pulls her waist tightly and winks at her and starts singing.)

Toh paar de, sabhi hadein

Gale lage kabhi nahi hone de seher

Iss raat mein beete umar, saari umar

(Both start singing together)

Aa raat bhar, aa raat bhar

Jaaye na ghar, aa raat bhar.

They finish singing bt stil stay there holding each other both lost in each other's eyes.But their trance gets broken by listening to the claps of people standing around them and kids whistling in excitement after listening to their romantic song.

They both gets a bit embarassed and smile shyly.Nandini then pulls Manik's hands and take him to the waters.She playfully sprinkle water on Manik and Manik too gets in his childish mode and both start playing with water untill they both get wet.Manik then shouts Nandini to stop it now and get out of water as she might get sick due to the cold water.But Nandini doesn't listen to him and continues playing.Manik finding no other way to stop her jst goes and suddenly lifts her in his muscular arms as he wont allow Nandini getting sick at any cost even if he had to go against her wish.He picks her up and starts moving towards his car.Nandini gets stunned by Manik's sudden behaviour ,she tries to get out of his arms but Manik turns out be stronger than her.She starts shouting at him.

Nandini:Manik..what are u doing...jst put down..

Manik:No I wont..since u are not listening to me..so I had to use this method.

Nandini sees people staring at them and feels embarassed and again start pleading to Manik.

Nandini:Arey..jst put me down na..everyone is staring at us..what will they think about us..ok ok fine..i'l listen to u nw and I'l walk myself till the car ok..so pls nw put me down.

Manik too sees people staring at them but he doesn't give damn about it and continues walking the same way carrying nandu.He then turns naughty and teases Nandini saying

Manik:I dnt care what they'l think..bt I knw wat they will think.Majority of gals will think this tht u are so lucky to be in the arms of such an hot guy..and would wish to swap place with u.And guys would jst envy looking at my strong and muscular body.

Nandini looks at him disbelievingly and gives him a sarcastic look.Manik then changes into soft tone and says

Manik:But the most important and first thought that will cross their minds after looking at us will be tht this guy loves her sweetheart immensely.

Nandini cudnt help herself aftr listening Manik saying this and tilts her head a lil up and places a soft kiss on Manik's cheeks.Manik smiles looking at her and till then they both reaches the car.Manik pulls open the passenger door for Nandini and places her gently on the seat.He then swiftly moves and sits in the driver's seat and starts the engines and droves away.

After a few minutes they reach home and he turns towards Nandini to say tht they have reach and get out of the car but instead he finds her sleeping peacefully with her head supported by the window pane.Manik couldn't do anything except to adore her beauty.So he gets out of the car and goes to Nandini's side.He carefully opens the door making sure tht he doesn't disturb her sleep.He again carries her in her arms and goes inside the house and takes her to her bedroom and places her gently on her bed.He looks at her cute sleeping baby face and places a soft kiss on her forehead and whispers "Good night baby.." to her.He too then joins her in her bed and lies adjacent to her facing to her.He closes his eyes to cherish each moment tht thy they have spent together whole day.By remembering them,a sweet smile crepts on his face and then he too falls asleep..

So thts it guys..again ended up in a long chapter bt hope u all enjoy it...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
wow beautiful chapter
loved it
very nicely written
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Wow
This ws soo beautiful😃😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Awesome...u r actually giving peace to our busted minds
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
actually..tht is only my real objectiv for writing this ff...to get out of this depression created by the show..and aftr lookin at ur alls comments I think I hav achievd my aim..so ty alot
Edited by LoveAngelsimmy - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Awww.. such a cute chapter. Loved it 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
so sweetly written... plz pdate soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
really a beautiful chapter...loved old couple and manan scenes...pls continue soon...take care😊

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