ArHi SS#3:One Winter.COMPLETED. Replies:Pg 72. 24/3,01/4,22/4, 30/05

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lilakumariacnw

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

congrats on the new thread...waiting for the update..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Congratulations on new thread

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fhussain237

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

congrats on the new thread hun

The story is getting more and more addictive making us impatient and greedy but we all know how busy life gets

Your readers will all wait for you regardless cuz your a superb writer

Looking for to reading the next chapter

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Sj236

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

amazing part! Waiting eagerly! Congrats on the new thread.

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vibha92

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

congo for d new thread dear...

waiting for nxt part...

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Posted: 10 years ago

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RasgullaSP

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Removed.

No, I do not have a blog.

The note in the signature kinda stays true even now.

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Removed.

No, I do not have a blog.

The note in the signature kinda stays true even now.

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SHALINI

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

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I feel like a really really bad, terrible & undeserving person for getting the first spot to res, and then un-res so late. My sincere heartfelt apologies for it..😭But my real life was so demanding that I did not foresee it would take so long to come back

The first thing that caught my eye, was your repeated apologies for increasing the length of you story to 13 chapters, well I don't know whose complaining, I for one am rejoicing... 😆 Its authors like you who keep the magic of IPK and Arhi still alive even after the show has been completed eons ago.. Thanks a lot for it 😊

Coming to the update, i like how the relationship between Payal and Manorama is increasing.. its defo a slow and steady start... Loved the hearty thanks Payal gave Manorama, and the final dialogues that she in turn delivered to Payal... there is definitely soomething likable about even Manorama... ⭐️ Your characters are truly awesome 👏

I love the way you subtly add this instances of some dark areas of our society, the malpractices at marriage, the importance of your color and now the religion factor...
How does it matter, I am not sure... Its about being human, irrespective of anything...

But glad how this situtaion bought the beloved couple together... Nice to see their journey of togetherness to infinity commence.. I did even notice how you hid the reactions of Manorama in all this...

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UV_Arshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#40

Yay...me second!

I loved the update...for obvious reasons...😉😆 Shall write a more elaborate comment later...very sleepy now...Have to be up in 4 hours 🥱

Also, I just found out you live in Mumbai. Nice to know that! There's a strange kind of joy in getting acquainted with fellow citizens here on IF😆

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Sorry I took so long to get back to this...

Anyway...

I like the first part...because it was completely about Payal and Manorama... I'm glad that Payal stands up for herself and is assertive but not disrespectfully so. And I liked what Manorama did and said to her too...it makes me believe that she has accepted Payal truly and completely. Payal's hug and kiss was too adorable 😆

And, I love the comfort level between Akash and Payal...such a cute couple they are.

The second part was quite something. the evil incarnate is here in the form of Dadi 😡 And I'm livid..not so much because of her shouting at Khushi, more so because of her obsolete, repulsive and fanatical opinions. I am aware such people exist still but it doesn't make it any less infuriating.

Bravo, Akash for standing up for Khushi and showing that woman how ridiculous her thoughts are and how inconsequential to anyone present, too. [He's so brave, if this doesn't prove it then kissing his fiance right outside Manorama's room definitely does😆] I am proud of Nani and Mahinder for their support as well.

The best part of the update, obviously😆, was Arnav and Khushi's making up. I am a bit mad at Arnav for nursing his ego even after Khushi's confession but it is sort of understandable and forgivable because he is with her now, when it matters. The kisses were just wow. I loved how both of them admit that nothing is more important than being with each other. Very heartening. And the moment when he puts that infinity bracelet back on her wrist was just dreamy! [Why can't I have this Arnav, dammit 😭]

It's adorably funny how flustered they were when caught post a make-out session in Akash's room by Akash himself 😆 Smart move though by Arnav...to have shut the door earlier. 😉

Waiting now...for more Arnav-Khushi moments...especially a confession of love. 😃

And wonder how Manorama is going to react when she finds out about this new development.

Loved the update...!! Looking forward to the next chapter...

P.S. : We wouldn't mind in the slightest even if you decide to extend the story to 31 chapters, let alone just 13. So please don't hold back 😛😉😆

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