Arshi FF : Pyar Ka Intezaar : Thread 2 : Epilogue : Apr4th : Completed

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saschades

@saschades

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#301

beautiful update

thanks for pm x

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canapoem

@canapoem

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#302

K, congrats ont he 50th chapter of the story.👏

Your writing style and skills are improved so much over the last 50 chapters and each time I feel you have grown so much as a story teller.

Nice update.

Finally Nani got to see her grandson Arnav. For someone who carried so much of guilt and grief in her heart, what a relief it must have been.

Loved how you showed Khushi's importance in Arnav's life in every scene and how Nani also recognises this fact.

The final sentence just blew me away. Does Arnav want to give all of this Akash? Even I think it is only fair if it is given to Akash.

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khareshelley

@khareshelley

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#303

wow... beautiful update...!!!!!

their emotions are beautifully describe..!!!!!!

nani can see how khushi is important to arnav..!!!!

hope arnav wants to give everything back to akash.. and nani ..payash to stay with him in Delhi..!!!!

so that he can have his family's love which he is missing form years..!!!!!!

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Kiran

@lovedrops

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#304

Originally posted by: redpetals123
Hi dear, just finished reading this beautiful story, don't have words to express how much I liked it. It was a wonderful experience reading this marvelous piece of writing. You are an amazing writer.
Such an emotional and intense ff, with love fully loaded. Arnav's character is so beautiful as well as khushis, how their pasts are connected and how much they have gone through in their lives specially arnav.

Their college story was wonderful twist and his guilt revelation was so heart touching. His live for khushi is so intense.

I have fallen in love with this ff, pls pm me when u update next.

Thank you so much redpetals for loving PKI. You every word made me so happy and I felt warmth. I know I have lot to learn but still you finding me as a good writer made me feel happy. You are so sweet to feel like that.

I will be more than happy to send you the pms... I am so blessed to get the wonderful readers like you.

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Kiran

@lovedrops

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#305

Originally posted by: madhu1210
awesome update...
CONGRATULATIONS on 50th chapter of the story..👏

the way Arnav fought the past n left the bitter things n ready to move on with his khushi n nani...

like the way he felt the bond with Nani..

i guess he is asking Nani to be with him n giving the property to Payash

Thank you Madhu. Initially I planned for 50 chapters for this story. But I am surprised its going beyond that. I never thought I will be able to pull this far. This is all because of you guys.

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Kiran

@lovedrops

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#306

Originally posted by: ShahSAIR
Unres..

Ok ji comment tym..

Finaly for me the name of the story Pyaa Ka Intezaar reveals today..
Intezar of Arnav... To feel once again mother's affection from her belongings..
Intezaar of Nani... To ask forgivness from her daughter in the form of Arnav..

Intezaar of Aakash.. To fee her mom from ol guilt...

Intezaar of Khushi... To se her love is now changed man who can feel from heart...

Khushi's role was vry less today bt was strong and powerful and yes beautiful also...

Payal role was too strong.. As a wife as a bahu she knws how much it ol means to her family...

Shaadi in sheesh mehal and Suhagraat in Taj Mahal.. Bingo...

Pinky is invited in wedding and i m invited in Taj Mahal for Suhagraat..
Sasumaa u do d honour of decorations and ol.. While no work fro me xcpt drinks n popcorn... *blush*

ok now story khtm..
Hope u r good now.. And hope u have chkd me Whatsapp status.. Lol
lots of love and yes Tu Yaad Na Aaye Aesa Koi Din Hai...
Oye stop smiling otherwise Viju jealous hoga.. Uski biwi ko hasaaney k lye.. Ye haq uska hai..

Me too realized how much I intezaar to read wonderful comments and words from you all who love me. Can you believe I spend more time to read your comment when compared to any other comment. LOL.. you know the reason too. First thing to understand each and every word you wrote and next and most important reason is.. you will always bring smile on my face. Your every word makes me happy and smile.

LOL... ofcourse I will do the decorations... becasue I have to post the pic right.. but before that let's do the shaadi.

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kaprasin

@kaprasin

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#307

The reunion of Arnav and his nani was very emotional. Arnav now understands everything about his past and how he had misunderstood things. In this update, khushi was silent, but her presence was felt all around the chapter. You are going to make their shaadi happen in sheesh mahal. Great. Please give an elaborate wedding and after wedding ceremonies too.😉

I think from Arnav's words to his Nani, he wants to give all the wealth to Akash and he means relationships to be mine.

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Pinky.Raizada

@Pinky.Raizada

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#308

Originally posted by: ShahSAIR

ok done... Bt third seat lega kon...?
K mom nahi lesakti coz wo Maa hai Maaa..

She is maa for you, but she is my sister, So she can sit with us, if you have problem, you can leave...😆

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Kiran

@lovedrops

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#309

Originally posted by: lalarukh
awesome chap...nani and arnav interaction...they in arnav's mom room...khushi being there to support...everything written beautifully...so wow shadi is going to be in sheesh mehal...and seems arnav ready to take control of many pending things...:)...he is going to take important decision for whole family ...lovely chap...hope u r fine k

Thank you so much Di for liking the update. Yes I am fine Di. Completely back to normal.