Keys to the heart ! On behalf of SAC

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I bought her a bouquet of roses, a thorn was all I got
I was blind and foolish in love,so I locked it in my heart

I merrily strolled to the seashore, and threw the keys away
Little did I realise,the pricking was here to stay

It was a small prick then,but it began to grow
It tore away my heart,there was just a void now.

Years after, you came by ,and refused to go away
I had no heart now ,where would you stay ?

I went back to the seashore, but the keys were now lost
I had bound my future,to chains of my past

I felt I had lost it all,but you opened the lock
You took away the thorn, and healed my ailing heart

A miracle had happened,my pain you could share
You could lift my burdens,my cross you could bear

I noticed though, that those were not my keys
How did my heart then open with such ease ?

Why hadn't I known,that what I locked away in pain
Can only be opened , by your love again ?


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Posted: 10 years ago
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This was sooo...beautiful...😳 wish i could like this a 100 times...😃 There are no words that would give justice to the brilliance of this piece..😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is too good pearly and so apt.. As if it's written for SAC... Loved it. May be u shd share the link on Twitter for broader audience to read.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Pearly still Wriiitng from work 😭

Omfg if this ain't beautiful I don't know wht is 😳

Sahir fell in love with the wrong person , it Hapoens , shit Happens 😭

But when a gem of a person comes by we Know whose right n whose not 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Perfect for SAC...lovely poem👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely poem ... suits SAC so much 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: tweetie19

This was sooo...beautiful...😳 wish i could like this a 100 times...😃 There are no words that would give justice to the brilliance of this piece..😳


Thankyou tweetie 😃 So glad you liked it !
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: humsafarsclub

This is too good pearly and so apt.. As if it's written for SAC... Loved it. May be u shd share the link on Twitter for broader audience to read.


Thank you ! Glad you liked it ! Will share on twitter 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ecrivain



Pearly still Wriiitng from work 😭

Omfg if this ain't beautiful I don't know wht is 😳

Sahir fell in love with the wrong person , it Hapoens , shit Happens 😭

But when a gem of a person comes by we Know whose right n whose not 😆


Thanks Ecri ! Glad you liked it 😃
Yes, you are right ! Bad things happen , we make wrong choices especially when we are young and naive.

Think about it , Sahir would have been just 22 when he married Zeenath , may be he was in love with her before that , and she turned out to be the wrong person for him and he suffered for so many years , poor thing. At least now he has made a right choice !
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Posted: 10 years ago
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pearly this is just awesome

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