Updated TS: THANK GOD! she is in LOVE - Part-3/pg9

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Hey Peeps,
Hope you all are doig good, I just got thsi idea today so , pushing my others works aside I started this Three shot, please do read, like and let me know your opinions...


Love you all and I am an super awesome optimist so will expect to see DVD again on screen so this is dedicated to all who wish for DVD's come back...love you all Muah

P.S: I didn't get time to Proof-Read, pls plz ignore the mistakes and Typos


THANK GOD!SHE IS IN LOVE

"Ohh My God...Dips...come it's getting late...they are announcing our names.." Madhu was trying to pull Dips from the hug with lot of efforts as she got glued to Sultan and sobbing

"Come on Sullu..leave her...ohh God stop your drama. We are just going for Trishna's marriage for 4 days and u both are behaving as if we are going to come other country but we are just going to Hyderabad from Mumbai" she said getting irritated, Finally Dips started sniffing and Sultan lovingly Held her shoulders and smiled, madhu rolled her eyes and started walking towards the Security entrance, Madhu went ahead as by now she is fed up all that LOVE drama and sat in her place, Dips also came and settled and then started adjusting her Kajal, Madhu simply ignored her

"Hey mads...How am I looking now", madhu gave her a glare

"Come on darls, this thing hurts when u leave ur loved ones I mean you know, kinda can't see and all"said Dips by holding MAdhu's chin in a pleading way. Madhu pushed her hand away and said

"Ohhh I see, I know I havn'e been into any relationship but that doen't mean I don't know anything about it .." said Madhu getting pissed now a days everyone is making fun of my SINGLE status...bloody Hell

Dips smiled at her lovingly and I said "I didn't mean it baba", madhu made a face and took a deep breath

"I know..it hurts...even I feel bad when I leav e you all for atrip or something but you both are behaving as if we won't come back, seriously Dips u and ur Sullu-Ullu" and buried her head in the magazing, Dips smiled at her she is so frustrated, but what can we do me an dTrish always wanted her to get into an affair or soething...she was like, I am not getting such feelings on this guy, that guy not of my types kinda statement whenever they planned and used to send her ona date and now she is getting frustrated..God..please make this gal fall in love, atleast in Hyderabad..plzzz

After like 2 hrs, they landed in Hyderabad airport, Madhu immediately called up Trishna's brother Sikky as discussed earlier. Suddenly they had this announcement

"Passenger of Flight MIG 310, Miss. Madhubala Mallik is requested to report at the Security office at Gate 1" , Madhu tried to ignore but again an announcement, Madhu got furious and said "what now a days in domestic flights also they are having security issues" and Dips gestured her to make it quick. She meanwhile called up Sikky to explain about this security thing.

After some 10 ins Madhu found herself in a room, which is kinda looking more like an interrogation room which she usually observed in movies god..kaha phass gayi yaar

After like 5 mins, an handsome looking man with Navy Blue uniform entered inside Madhu gulped hard what the hell, she was looking all tensed whwn he called her name

"Miss. Madhubala Mallik" ohh my his voice is quite sexy

"Yes" she lifted her head up and then looked at those sexy brown eyes ohh my he has such great sexy voice, eyes, lips..shut up Madhu..Concentrate

" Can you please tell me, where you got his bag from " he showed her one of her luggage bags, she opened her eyes wide

"that..i...that's my bag...I am going for my friend's wedding so all my wedding stuff is in there..." said MAdhu still analyzing why they need those details. He sighed and replied

"Can you please share any information of you that, you are from Mumbai", Madhu gulped hard what's going on

"Sure...wait.." she opened her huge bag and started digging things , the officer looked at her amused this girl looks so petite and her bag is almost 3 times her size...crazy gals

"Look at this officer, it's my college ID and My Dad's Visiting card"

Officer examined her College ID and the her Father's ID card " R u Shamsher Mallik's daughter", madhu who was all sitting quite now got back to her Junglee billi avtar and replied

"YES, IS THERE A PROBLEM" officer looked at her amused and the said \

"Can you just show my any prrofs that you are his daughter " in a serious tone, madhu gasped loudly how dare he..what the hell is his problem,,,wait is he my father's ..ohh shut up Madhu...

"Sorry officer, but can you please explain it to me why am I in here and what for" in a serious tone

"Sorry Miss.Madhubala, we can't at this time please show me the proof" Madhu got irritated and then she was searching for her phone ohh God its with Dips, she closed her eyes by nodding her head

He smirked and said " What happened, you lost your phone" < Madhu looked at him hopefully

"Yes, kinda ..No..I mean its with my friend Dips, Deepali.can I just go out and get it..." he smirked again and said

"do I look like some fool to belive ein ur stories...come on tell me , where dd you get this money and gold from"

"WHAT!!!!" Madhu looked at him baffled

"ENOUGH" roared Rishabh, Madhu got startled and tears started flowing from her eyes

"Stop acting all innocent and tell me..or else..I need to send female security Officer for further investigation" Madhu gulped hard, as images of how female Security officer makes them to strip and all ohh god..save me. Madhu composed herself and said

"Listen to me officer, I am his daughter, I don't have any criminal background, My phone is with my friend, I have come here for my friend's wedding...If y.." she was cut off by Officer again

"Enough Miss...I am telling you for the last time...tell me damn it" he hit his fists on the table, madhu startled and looked at him with puppy face and those Doe eyes have tears now

Madhu's pleading and Officer's interrogation went for another 15 mins, when suddenly his walkie talkie buzzed, he went aside and after like some minutes, to Madhu's surprise m he smiled at her

Iohh my he so cute..he has dimples...wait Madhu..he is jerk , he tortured you and made you cry, don't treat him like that.

She was still gaping at him , when he with polite voice said "Sorry for the trouble Miss.Mallik, we have got the write person, there was some miscommunication regarding the name..act.." before he could finish Madhu stood up on her

"You..Mr.What's your name.." he adjusted his throat and said

"Rishabh Kundra" nice name

" what so ever..you will pay for this..even after knowing I am the only daughter of the Lieutenant . Commander . Shamsher Mallik, you treated me like that..." she roared, Rishabh though found her quite cute and beautiful form his first sight, eventually his started beating fast , so he behaved quite rudely with her as he dismissed his dumb thoughts of being falling for a criminal, but at last his heart was right, she is innocent, he came back to realty with her last word

"I will see to that, you will losse this JOB...bloody hell" she took her things and left from there by giving him death glare, he gulped hard feisty beauty..deadly...ufff

Throughout the journey Madhu cursed Rishabh and she was about to call her Dad when Dips stopped her

"Ohh Come on madhuif you inform this to Uncle, he will get back to his usual lecture, who asked you to go and all..." Madhu suddenly got this "Your write this, if I inform Dad, he will start his lecture and at the sane time he will make sure that bloody jerk looses his job...but I don't know how much is he in need of this Job ..I mean he doent look like a normal man but still..I am not like HIM after all..bloody hell" Sikky smiled to her , as Trishna always told him though Madhu looks and talks like an angry woman but at heart she is a sweetheart.

Trishna hugged her frineds and all the three friends enjoyed the pre-weddign ceremonies . Some aunties asked for Madhu's Parents details from Trishna's mother Roma, she politely refused saying she will first talk to Mallik's and then will share the details.

"Ufff this Dips, where the hell are you...help me with this knot...DIPS..." screamed Madhu, she is applying mascara, she got that someone is passig by, as she know dips just went out to talk to Sultan for the 10th time since morning

"Come here and tie this " she ordered, she didn't get any response

"if you don't come now, I will make sure that you will pay for this immediately...GOT IT", she is still busy with her eye-makeupm suddenly she felt a tingling sensation and a very hot fingers on her back, she stood up but could see only a forehead wait its HE not SHE ..oMG..

Before she could react, she heard the same manly voice "Done", she prayed to GOD it shouldn't be HIM JERK

She turned immediately and her eyes got captivated by those brown eyes,he got shocked to see her my beautiful Madhu is in here...yayayyaa. their eye lock got interrupted by Dips Gasp, Madhu came back to senses and started shouting on Rishabh

"How dare you to touch me...I mean.."

"Chill feisty beauty..its not me...its you who asked me to tie your dori..."

"WHAT THE CRAP..why will I do that, I was telling that to my friend and you over smart took the advantage of it"

"Cool it Madbala" she glared at him, he suppressed his giggle and said "Sorry Madhubala, you didn't mention anyone's name ,,,you asked to come and tie it."

"Shut up, you are always like this, you can't wait for the complete information, Ohh God who gave you that job..ur so DUMB."said Madhu with disgust but found him missing and Dips laughing out loud...

"What's so funny bloody hell Dips"

"the moment you said shut up(imitating Madhu), he closed his ears and left from here...hahahahah", Madhu smacked her face with a pillow , went out of the room victoriously.


Part-2 :

http://www.india-forums.com/edit_post_form.asp?PID=119303159&PN=5

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hurayyy! Me first !! Dinka chika dinka chika.

Wow I guess more than anyone, trish and dips would be very happy, if madhu fall in love with any guy.

So he need proff that she is malik daughter, poor girl sgould have replied "call and ask him better".

Deepali and sullu ullu wil be free from mb blabberings, as rk wil be ther to shut her mouth, waiting eagerly for next update
Edited by uma88 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awsome start.
Madhu is a chatterbox...so cute.
Atlast she got a man whom she can drool.
Looks like RK is a bit stunned with madhu.
Plz continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb start, asha baby...loved it...
hehe...madhu is feisty lol...
well, she gave her phone to dips but dont she know her dad's number? She could have called from rk's mobile or from land phone & proved him that she is malik's daughter? Any way, it was cool encounter...
oh my! I loved the dori knotting scene...
i guess at the end dips will say "thank god, she is in love" & Now she wont disturb me to tie her dori while talking with my ullu sullu lol...
waiting for next part eagerly.
thanks for d pm dear.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great start.
liked Madhu n her self thoughts.
continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome start
madhu in jungli billi avatar
loved it very much
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wonderful story.
awesome blossom.
they are so cute.
update next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely start 😊
but madhu didn't remember her father's no ? lol
waiting for part 2
plz cont soon dear 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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whoaaa!!! really superb nd funny start ashu dear!!! poor madhu... haha... waiting for nxt update soon!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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What a start yaar !! Madhu is continously talking whole update !! Hmm whose relative Rk is ?? Superb patakha update !! Waiting for next part eagerly !! Thanks for pm

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