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Posted: 10 years ago
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beauiful update imane😳👏
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Wow!! What an amazing update dear!! You have no idea that how much I really miss those couples on screen but all thanks to your FF, it really made my day!! As always, what can I say about this update, you have written each and every parts really well but the star of the day was Sameer😳😳..he was really concerned for Naina, and that's what the relationship between brother and sister is all about , he knows that Naina is in love with Sahil..so in order to make Sahil confess..the friends along with Romilla jee made a plan that Naina is going to get married which made Sahil quite insecure..so haii..they have confessed!! Lol!! Yeh Tashu bhi naa..bilkul naughty hai yaar!!🤣 ..yaar..kuch Sandeep aur Tashu ka bhi scenes dal dena..aur the song kuch iss tarah hona chahiye..hum tum ek kamre mein band ho aur chabhi kho jaye..l🤣..I'm sure these two won't even spare each other and will eat each other's brain..😆.lol..I'm actually imagining them stuck in one room..aur tashu kya karegi..I'm sure she will take a hammer..aur Sandeep ka bhejha fry ho jayega!! 🤣..eagerly waiting for such scenes to happen..Last but not the least..Sameer and Shifali..something is cooking between them😳😳..too good!! But I'm eagerly waiting to know the mystery between Shifali's mom..please continue soon!
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Originally posted by: spvd

part 8
nice...
lovely...
cont soon...

thanks😊
continuing in few minutes...
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Originally posted by: angelsabreenxz

beauiful update imane😳👏

thank u😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sanjana4Rajeev

Wow!! What an amazing update dear!! You have no idea that how much I really miss those couples on screen but all thanks to your FF, it really made my day!! I am also miss the couples onscreen a lot, and i know there are not much FFs on them currently. As always, what can I say about this update, you have written each and every parts really well thank you, really good compliment😎 but the star of the day was Sameer😳😳..he was really concerned for Naina, and that's what the relationship between brother and sister is all about , he knows that Naina is in love with Sahil..so in order to make Sahil confess..the friends along with Romilla jee made a plan that Naina is going to get married which made Sahil quite insecure..so haii..they have confessed!!

Yes both Sahil and Samir are very good brothers..glad you liked their confession, this part was dedicated to them.
Lol!! Yeh Tashu bhi naa..bilkul naughty hai yaar!!🤣 ..yaar..kuch Sandeep aur Tashu ka bhi scenes dal dena..aur the song kuch iss tarah hona chahiye..hum tum ek kamre mein band ho aur chabhi kho jaye..l🤣..I'm sure these two won't even spare each other and will eat each other's brain..😆.lol..I'm actually imagining them stuck in one room..aur tashu kya karegi..I'm sure she will take a hammer..aur Sandeep ka bhejha fry ho jayega!! 🤣..eagerly waiting for such scenes to happen.
as you see i made a developpement in SN(Sahil-Naina) story, the others couples will have their time too, not very soon but still, chalo adding a SN2(Sandeep-Natasha) part for you in next update
.Last but not the least..Sameer and Shifali..something is cooking between them😳😳..too good!! But I'm eagerly waiting to know the mystery between Shifali's mom..please continue soon!
that mystery if far away from being revealed😛 ,

continuing in few minutes and thanks for the lovely comments
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Previously: Naina and Sahil confessed their love to each other, Natasha helped Shifali to solve a problem...

Secrets du coeur part 9:

One Friday, all had finished their class very early arround 3pm...few boys of college along with Sahil and Samir have planned to go out togheter...
Yes even girls have planned that, Naina too convinced by Natasha and her friends decided to enjoy...soon boys left...
Sandeep and Shifali had missed a bus and were waiting for the next one who was in 10mins...10 mins can seems short, but waiting alone in the cold, it isnt, so all the girls stood with them untill their bus come...
Sandeep bring his cycle that day, he went to college in cycle in the morning...so he was cycling arround...
Shifali:seriously girls what are you gonnna do?? Go to your house, you have nothing to do appart from staying on roads whole day!!
Natasha: stop it Shifali, you needs to chill out sometimes...well you know guys are also doing their going out...we are gonna go to the commercial center, its great yaar, its warm and hot, not cold, there is many peaple we can meet and all, and we will buy some sweet, then go to the spa, u know make and all, tum to harr roz karti ho, but we do one day just like that, and click selfies on snap!!
Then, boys will be back and we will go out for dinner, all togheter!!
Shifali: seems fun!! I wish i could come...
Naina: dont worry, next time!!
Natasha noticed Sandeep
Natasha: what is this duffer doing now!!
Shifali: he is just cycling!!
Friend: cycling alone!!
The girls with Natasha ahead, went to Sandeep
Sandeep: what are you doing??
Natasha: please lend me your cycle!!
Sandeep: are you crazy!, mad girl, you dont even know cycling!!
Natasha: please!!
He sigh, get down of his cycle, Natasha sit on the cycle and start cycling too
Sandeep was looking at her,
Sandeep: look carefully, i am sure she will fall!!
Girls started chatting and Sandeep got busy too, about 3mins later, the bus was in the previous street...
Shifali: where is Natasha!!
Naina: I dont know, she must be arround...
Few seconds later Natasha came running casually from behind dome trees...
All started laughing, the scene was so
Shifali: when she went she was on cycle and now no cycle!!
She laughed
Sandeep: where is my cycle???
Naina: what happened??
Natasha: i had a little accident!!
Shifali laughed and Sandeep rushed go see his cycle
Shifali: Tashu if you have damaged his cycle he will kill you!!
Natasha: dont worry, his cycle is ok
Naina: mean u didnt felt?? Why did you left it then?
Natasha: girls have you just seen his face?? (Immitating him) "my cycle!!"
All laughed
Shifali(laughing): you are mad!!
Sandeep was back on his cycle, he passed by Natasha and hit her head
Natasha held his arm and ran beside his cycle
Naina: what is she doing??
Shifali: let her be, she will be hit by a car then will see
Natasha finnally hitted Sandeep back and stopped running as he was quicker by his cycle..
As their bus had came Natasha hugged Shifali and the girls left and so the bus...
After three stop, Shifali saw Samir, Sahil and their friends running oustide the bus...
She smiled
They had probabilly done something bad!! Or went to took money from their friends house who lived nearby!! She toughts...she send him a message on that, But Samir, his phone was in deep of his pocket off out of batterie!!
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The next day:
Naina and Sahil were very close, they used to sit togheter in class and Sahil was one very romantic guy!!
English class:
Sahil: baby love, can you lend me a pen
Naina: shut up Sahil, dont call me that
Sahil: ok darling
Naina: Sahil please naa!,
Sahil held her hand
Sahil: ok sorry
Naina: thats better
Sahil: you are looking very beautifull!!
Naina blushed a little
Naina: thanks...
Shifali smiled as she saw them...
Samir was sitting at the back in a corner with Natasha in front of him and Shifali beside her...
Teacher: Samir Natasha!! You both are laughing and chatting since the start of the classe!! Have you at least written the lecture?? Show me your copy book now!!
The teacher yelled
Natasha: sure mam!!
She took Shifali's copybook without the teacher notice and went to show her
Samir was surprised he hoped the teacher would catch her lie...the whole class were laughing as they knew it was Shifali's copybook
Shifali was suprised too and laughing
Teacher: well done, you can go back to your table...
Natasha smiled and left while the class laughed more...
Samir was shocked
Teacher: Samir!! Your copy book
He has his hand on his head
Samir: but mam!! It wasnt even her copy book mam, she is a liar and a cheater!!
Teacher: no she showed me her sopy book now you will get punishlent for this!!
Natasha smiled to him
Samir: ok now i remember, will surely take revange!!
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In the corridors
Shifali: Natasha you are mad!! Plus the teacher trusted you!!
Shifali giggled
Samir: yeah yeah laugh you too!!
Samir held Natasha by her wrist tight
Natasha: aaahhh stop it you stupid!! Leave me!!
Shifali: Samir leave her common you will twist her weist!!
Sahil came there
Natasha: Sahil bro!! help me!!
Sahil: why should i help you?? He is right can't you work in class!! Always doing stupid things!! I will complain to mom!!
Natasha fried herself from Samir's grip
Natasha: not fair i will tell papa what you both did!!
She left
Shifali: she is upset with you now
Samir: she is never upset with me, she knew i was just teasing her, but Sahil tum to gaye!!
Sahil: i was serious man!! Whose idiot will marry her?
Samir: huh dont talk of marriage or love she doesnt even belive in it!!
Shifali: lets go Samir we are getting late
Samir: do i care??
Shifali glares at him
Samir: ok ok coming...
They left...
Next week wednesday...
Math class
Teacher: Natasha is absent since monday...do anyone has news about her?? Sahil??
Samir: we don't know
Teacher: is it we don't know or we dont want to tell
Sahil: second one...
Teacher: yeah!!
Shifali wondered what Had happened to her...
Sandeep was happy, three day in peace
It was snowing outside, and the wind was also very fast, it was making an horror film sound BG...
Everyone was surprised
Samir: bhoot!!
Shifali: what the hell?? Its just wind Samir
Samir: nnoo... (he acted to get serious and sad) yeh meri Natu ka bhoot hai!!
Everyone got a little bit scared
A friend: Natasha is...no more??
Sahil (also getting in the game): zinda logon ke bhoot nahi hote...
He also acted sad, and acted to cry...
Shifali was shocked...
Shifali (sadly): oh my god...how does...why(she was complitely shocked)
Naina just sigh and concentrate on her exercice
Samir and Sahil bursted out laughing
Shifali looked at them
Samir: if she was dead, aur uska koi bhoot hota to hum to gaye the kaam se!!
Sahil: exactly!,
Shifali: it wasnt funny!!
Samir: it wasnt meant to be
She sat back and complited her work
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The next day
Shifali was walking in the college when she saw Natasha coming
She was smiling and cheerfull as usual but she had crutches and was walking with the help of them...
Samir was walking behind her with her bag in his hands...
Sahil went to leet his friends as usual
Shifali approached them
Shifali: oh my god...what happened to you Natasha? .
Samir: ghiri hui insaan, ghir gaye
He laughed
Natasha hit him with her crutche
Natasha: nothing...you know its snowy outside so during the week end i was running and slipped on the ice and felt, broke my ankle, it pained a lot so i can't walk you know, for one whole week with crutches
Shifali: oh! And your fine now...
Samir: dont worry she is used, yeh choti choti baatein hoti rehti hai Shifali, its not one broken ankle that will spoil her life!!
Natasha: exactly!! Come Samir, we' ll take the lift!!
Samir: see you Shifali!!
Naina joins Shifali and both heads to class from the stairs...
All appart from Samir and Natasha were in class...
The electric system of the college was off...so they could not check the absenses/lates etc by computer...
Teacher told Sandeep to go and give a chit on which she wrote lates/absents etc to CPE...
Sandeep oppened the door of the class to see Samir helping Natasha to climb the stairs and a girl holding her stuff as the lift was HS too
Sandeep: mam, correct the chit, Samir and Natasha are present
Teacher: what?
The teacher kept the chit and asked Sandeep to go and help them
He really didnt wanted to but then was forced to go...
The girl was getting late for her class too so when Sandeep come she gave the stuff to Samir and went to her class after being thanked by Natasha
Samir: Sandeep i'll take her stuff, you help this moti, i am too tired!!
Natasha: Sami go to hell!! I am NOT moti, tumhe to main dekh lounghi
She was about to felt when Sandeep held her by her arm and helped her...
Sandeep disliked her a lot but he felt very good as he got close to her...
Natasha: thanks i am fine!!
She walked to the class with help of her crutches followed by Sandeep and poor Samir who was carrying all her stuff
Samir: what the hell you out in your back so thats its so heavy as you!!
Natasha: shut up!!

All laughed at Samir's condition as they entered the class...
Friend 1: see poor Samir, Tashu ka ghulam!
All laughed
Samir: oh you shut up! Apni girlfiend ke samne to bheegi billi ban jate ho!!
Samir kept her stuff on the nearby table he found and went to his usual place...
Sandeep: this is MY place
He said to Natasha as she sat where Samir kept her bag
Natasha: now its mine!! You please change your place Sand deep!
Sandeep: i am NOT gonna do that, and my name is Sandeep!!
Shifali: Sandeep please change naa, she is weak she cant walk
Natasha: exuse me?? Shifali, I am NOT weak, huh take your seat (she said getting up) I hate sitting ahead anyways
She managed to take her bag and walk to another seat in back...
Shifali: Sandeep not good!!
Sandeep: whatever, i dont know what she think of herself!!
Samir gave a "leave it" look to Shifali
She smiled...
Later
Teacher: miss Natasha, please throw your chewing gum in the bin...
Natasha: mam please, i really can't
Samir sigh and bring the bin to her
Samir: here you go!!
Natasha: where, in the dUstbin??
She said after throwing her gum
Samir: its an expression
He went back to his seat
Celia, a friend of Natasha was sitting behind her
They were chatting quite loudly and Celia was making little part of some random chit given by principal while Natasha was drawing on her copybook...
Teacher: Celia, what the hell is all this mess? Clean all this right now
Celia throwed all her mess in the bin but without noticing on way back she walked on Natasha'feet
Natasha: aaahhh!!!! Fool, dumb cant you look
Celia: i am sorry, very sorry!!
Natasha was still in pain, she held her feet and kept on moaning in pain...and put her head down on her table for a while...
All were concerned about her
Sahil: really Tashu, you are so childish, first who told you to run on iced ground and then cant you be carefull!!
Samir: stop yelling at her!! Its not her fault
Sahil: Samir its all your and your family's fault, stop pampering her!! You roam arround her like a servant, carrying her stuff, dusbin leke ghumna and what not!!
Samir: i did that by care and YOu know it, she is even more than my best friend forever!!
Natasha(still in pain): Sahil i hate you!
Sahil: stop your childishness!!
Naina: chill Sahil...
Sahil just sigh and listened to Naina...
Natasha: mam!! Please can i have some water?.
Teacher: yes!!
Natasha took a bottle of water and some tqblet, she had them and deink water...Feeling a little better
While later Celia bend down to pick her pen up, Natasha pull her and she loose balance and felt...
All laughed at her!!
Natasha: revenge feel good!!
Celia give her a killing look to her, she took her crutches and start acting like an old handicaped person
She was too funny all the class laughed even the teacher
Naina: its not funny to laugh of poor old peaple
Natasha(laughing): ok stop it, i forgive you!!
Cdlia hugged her
Shifali: did you really git hurt or acted Natasha?
Natasha: naa, this time really got hurt!! See after when i felt, they had to do an operation on this part of my feet
She showed her...
Shifali: ooww, must be very Hurting...
Natasha: yeah but chill its ok...
The ring bell and all went out
Samir: Shifali, i have some work, please help madam
Shifali: sure
Natasha: i am not a baby okay, i can manage, Shifali just take my bag, if you dont mind?.
Shifali: sure
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Later at the end of the day, Samir went home, Natasha said she will manage but Shifali insisted on dropping her to Samir's house
The door bell ring
Sharmila went to open
Natasha: hi anty!!
She said hugging her
Sharmila smiled seeing her
Sharmila: a gaye puttar...chalo betho
Shifali: hi mam
Sharmila: mujhe anty bulao naa puttar
Shifali (hesitating): sure...anty...
Yash warmly hugged Natasha and make her sit confortably, they bith started chatting and laughing
Shifali was really surprised, her mother hardly sit with her evdn on dinner, and there, Yash was sitting and talking with Natasha as a friend, he could understand her and they shared a lot of things...he was the elder in the house, but not strict at all, but very understandable and sensible...
Shifali was still standing and watching them
Sharmila cam and serves some biscuits to Natasha
Who thanked her smilingly and continued to chat with Yash...
Sharmila noticed Shifali
Sharmila: aap betho naa puttar, kuch khayghi??
Shifali hesitantly sit on the sofa
Shifali: nahi anty, i am fine...
Yash took the biscuits from Natasha who was eating them non stop and gave them to Shifali
Yash: khale puttar, fikar naa kar moti nahi hone wali tum, isse dekh jitna khati hai utna yahan wahan bhagti hai aur tang tor ke ghar aati
Natasha (giggled): papa!!
Yash pulled her cheeks
Yash: oye bhari hi cute hai tu puttar!!
Natasha: ouch my cheeks
She said giggling
Sharmila: aur kuch lo gi Shifali puttar??
Shifali: no, thanks..
Yash: oye puttat, tu bhi naa yeh kya baat kar rahi, anty hai waitress nahi, itni formal kyun, Sharmila ji, iske liye apni wali special coffee bana ke lao!!
Sharmila: haan ji, Natasha tum bhi chalo, maine tulhari favorite khir banaye hai, chakh lo kaisse bani hai
Natasha: anty aap ne banaye hai to yummy hi hogi, phir bhi chakh leti houn
Sharmila (gigging): haan tumhe to bahana chaiye kuch khane ka!
Shifali was surprised by the homely feeling there,
Yash told her to go in the kitchdn too
Shifali followed Sharmila and Natasha
She could smell the yummy food, she never had this feeling in her home
Sharmila give some khir to Natasha who sat on a chair eating it
Natasha: Shifali come, hhmm lo taste, its sooo yummmyyy!!!
Shifali tasted and was amazied, she never had such a good food,
Natasha: Samir kahan hai??
Sharmila: woh apne friends ke saath foortbalk khelne gaya hai
Natasha: not fair, i cant even play now
Sharmila: dont worry, ek do hafte ki to baat hai
Natasha went to Naina's room followed by Shifali
Natasha: this is Naina's room, always clean, too much girly, and what not
Shifali saw pictures of four, Naina, Sahil, Samir,Natasha, of their childhood, on birthdays, summer camp...
She smiled seeing them...
Naina: Natu whats the problem with my room, dont start again
Natasha: chill
she said sitting on her bed
Naina and Natasha were differant yet very close
They talked and shared a very cute sisters bond
Shifali felt a little appart, she hasnt got any sibbling
But was feeling glad by seeing both's bonding...
Shifali spend some more time there, getting slowly slowly close to Sharmila and Yash...she Had to leave but had one of the best moment of her life...
She really felt the love of a mother and father that day...and saw bonding of sibbling and an homely feeling...
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So here is the next part...very long one
I know it has been ages, but frankly the lack of comments really made me think to close this FF
But i know i have some loyal readers that are attached to my FF and it will be very unfair to them if i let it unfinished...so please everyone tell me if i shuld continue or not, and silent readers please at least hit the like button...
Next part will be updated if i get enough good comments and when i get time...
I maybe sound rude, sorry for that...
Edited by The_Imane - 10 years ago
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amazing part imane...wel scripted👏👏👏👏👏
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Hey Imane!!
First of all sorry for the late comment because I was totally busy with my work but atleast I've managed to read it..and don't worry I didn't forget you!:)
So as far the update is concerned, it was a very hilarious one!! It totally made my day!!😆😆🤣..the star of the show was Natasha indeed!! God..she is so childish!!🤣..Loved the way she irritated Sandeep by imitating him.." Meri cycle!!" God Sandy..please itni over possesive maat bano..yeh sirf ek cycle hi to hai!! But I'm really glad that he has taken good care of her when she couldn't walk properly..I have a feeling that Sandeep has a crush on her , but somehow he is trying to hide his feelings by showing dislike towards her..dekte hai..phir kya hota hai!!...Loved Sahil- Naina scenes as well!!😳😳

Lastly , Shifali went to Samir's place and slowly she has started to bond with their family members as they have greeted her very warmly!! Awwe..it was very nice indeed..chalo..this is a good sign ..that she has started to bond with their family members..and it is very evident that they also like her..so in the long run, she will forget what is missing in her life!!..Please continue soon dear!!
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Days, weeks, months used to pass quickly...
Sahil and Naina were more and more in love, they were like the perfect couple, they used to go everywhere togheter, Shifali and Samir were now very good friends, they shared a very confortable level bond, Shifali was getting homely love by his parents who didnt considered her less than Naina or Natasha, Sandeep and Natasha were still like knowledges only...they knew each others and saw or met each other everyday but still no friendship between them.
An usual Saturday morning, after being waked up by Natasha's phone call as always, Samir irritated went to the living room with his phone, he sat on the sofa
Sharmilla: kya hua puttar?
Samir: kya mamma? Subba subba sunday ko bhi nahi chorti kamini!
Sharmila giggled
Sharmila: iss me naya kya hai? Aab time maat zaya karo, jaa ke breakfast karo, chalo chalo!
While he was having his breakfast Samir'cell rang
He picked up as it was Shifali
Samir: hello
Shifali: hello, Samir, what are you doing this morning, please come with me Naina and Sahil, we are going to shopping!
Samir: shopping?? But i had to go for jogging...emm you know what its okay, i am coming
Shifali: cool!
Samir: meet you in half an hourn at your house!!
Shifali: okay, see you!
Samir saw Naina getting ready in her girly way
Samir: Naina? You are going to shopping?
Naina: yes how to you know?
Samir: Shifali told me, i am coming too!
Naina: great! To saath me nikalte hai naa!
Samir: sure, hurry up then!
Naina: yeah! I am done just five minutes!
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Sahil was getting ready, putting perfume, and choosing cloths, there were cloths everywhere and his room was smelling extreme perfume
Natasha came and started coughting
Natasha: what the hell? What is all this!
Sahil: i am getting ready! Cant you see
Natasha: i can see and smell more than that!
Sahil: i am going out...
Natasha: then whats the need of all this mess!
Sahil: when you go out, you have to look good!
Natasha: whatever, i am what i am, i dont need to get into all this suffocating artifficial stuff and extra stupid cloths!
Sahil: if not for yourself, you have to have a good apparence, so that others appreciate you, not like you, go sometimes out even in pyjamas!
Natasha (getting it): oohh! You are going to meet Naina!! (Exited and teasingly) so what is it, horror film so that she hug you, romantic lunch?
Sahil: shut up Natasha! I go where i want with whom i want!
Natasha: you love her naa, how much?
She teased
Sahil: more that i love you in anyways!
He left saying that
Natasha: not fair!!!
She yelled back
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The gang of four met and soon they went to the shopping mall
Naina: ok so i must go to "...", "...","...","...","...","..." and "..." (imagine shops names)
Samir: could you say were you dont want to go? List will be shorter!!
Sahil: i am going with her!! And you Shifali, you want to buy anything special?
Shifali: umm well, i already have so much cloths...aisse hi time pass ke liye aye, maybe i'll look for some accessories and room decoration!!
Samir: i'll check room decorations too then i will see some cloths also!!
Naina: let's meet here in an hour then!!
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Sandeep was sitting in the park near a lake
He was lost in toughts
He used to go to the park with his mom
Few tears rolled down his cheeks as he remembered her
Her smile, her smell, her voice, her touch, her feeling he missed everything about her so much
Soon the few tears became lots of tears...
Nearby, Natasha was playing basketball in a basket ground
After few goals pissed off she called Samir as she was waiting for him
Samir: hello
Natasha: Samir where the hell are you yaar i am waiting for you since half an hour!!
Samir: oh shit, complitely forgot about you, sorry Tashu, plan changed i am at shopping with my sis and your bro
Natasha: not fair you three, you could tell me before
Samir: i forgot it sorry naa
Natasha: did i ever forgot to call you wake you up?
Samir: how i wished you did, and by the way thats your habbit, its not my habbit to prevent you of my changed plans
Shifali: kya hua? Who is it?
Samir: Natasha!!
Natasha: i know my name, and by the way with whom are you?
Samir: are you my mother? I am with Shifali anyways
Natasha: hhmm chalo its ok, but i remember badla zarur lounghi
Samir: ok bye!!
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Naina was picking like 7 dress out of 10 in the whole shop
Sahil: what about first try these and then pick more
Naina: not a bad idea
Naina tried a long whity skirt with a light blue top
Sahil looked at her mezmerized
Naina: how is it??
Sahil: god you looking gorgeous!!
Naina tried a lot of other dress and Sahil complimented each
Naina: and this one?
Sahil: beautifull!!
Naina: Sahil, tum serious hi nahi le rahe, aisse hi har dress ko beautifull, tell naa what is bad and what good!!
Sahil: main kya karoun baby tum jo bhi pehno ghi tum usme achi hi lagogi!!
Naina: shut up!!
She said as she blushed and went back into the dressing room
After few seconds, Naina was topeless as she was going to try another dress
But that moment Sahil entered the dressing room
She gasped as she saw him and tried to cover herself with whatever cloth come in her hand
Naina: what the hell? Tum...
Sahil: i forgot to say, tum jo bhi pehenti tumpe acha lagta hai, but kuch na pehno to BOHOT acha lagta hai
He said as he held her bare shoulder
Naina just closed her eyes at his touch...it made something to her, something very special
He mover to her face and gave her a small peck on her lips
He then went out...
Naina opened her eyes, and it took her a minute to realise what just happened and she looked at herself in the mirror and blushed furriously
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Samir was trying on some jeans and stuff
Shifali was sometime advising him about colors and things
They were very confortable and shared good laughs between
Samir: so you said in this i look like a pingouin and this like a guru ji, now this
Shifali: this is nice, but take it in blue, it will be better, That suit you very much plus
Samir: well miss, that' s my favorite color!!
Shifali: really??
Samir: yes!!
Shifali: wow i am good at guessing
Samir: your more good in finding coincidence yeah!!
She giggled
Later
Shifali: what is better between this, this, this and this
Shifali said as he showed him 4 pairs of earrings
Samir: which do you like?
Shifali: i like them all cant choose
She said with a confused cute expression
Samir: i prefer this one, but if you like them all, take them all!!
Shifali: i didnt bring enought money!!
He laughed
Samir: its okay, I'll pay them for you
Shifali: no no, please its ok
Samir: come on, between friends!!
Shifali looked at him
She cudnt help but smiled and agreed
Shifali: ok, but i owe you money then!!
Samir: off course you do
Both giggled and after paying the bill head to a house decoration shop
Samir: wow i love this poster!!
He said pointing an urban new york poster
Shifali: yeah its nice!! I like this lamp also!!
Samir: yes thats very original!!
Shifali: you pay you poster, I' look for other things as well
After lot of shopping Shifali jumped and lied on a confortable bed of the deco shop
Shifali: god i am too tired!! My feets are hurting
Samir lied beside her on that bed
Samir: me too!! Really need a break
Shifali: you shopped more than me by the way
Samir: result i have more bags to carry than you!!
Both giggled looking at each other
Samir: very confortable bed by the way!!
Shifali giggled and hitted his arm playfully
Samir: how about an ice cream??
Shifali: sure!! I love ice cream!!
So they both bought an ice cream
And started eating it giggling and playing all the way
Shifali was really feeling good with him and Samir also found a differant person to bound with
They both then head to the point where they were supposed to meet Sahil and Naina
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Natasha still did her sport and jogging her headphones on
She passed in front of the bench where was sitting a lost and teary Sandeep
She realised and stepped back
She saw tears in his eyes and just stared at him removing her headphones
He realised a figure stopped in front of him and looked up
Sandeep: tum!! Why the hell are you everywhere!!!??
He said in an angry rudely tone, as he got up
Natasha: you were crying?
Sandeep: why are you interfering in my life? Did i asked you anything!!?
He said with the same tone
She was taken aback, she never saw him like that
The next minute he broke down and sat back on the bench
Sandeep(crying): sorry...i am sorry
She sat beside him
Natasha: you ok? What happened?
Sandeep: nothing, mom ki yaad aa rahi thi...
Natasha: oohh...umm...sorry everytime i mess up
Sandeep: its ok...not your fault..
Natasha: can i ask...what happened to her...
Sandeep: she...she left the house after a fight with dad...she took all her bags and stuff (tears forming in his eyes) her car had an accident...she cudnt be saved...
He broke in tears...
Natasha: aaww...sorry...i shudnt have asked...i am so stupid...very sorry...
He calmed down a bit...
Natasha: what was her name?
Sandeep: her name was Fedora...her friends used to call her 'Fedu'
Natasha: thats sweet!!
Sandeep: not only her name, she was very sweet...with everyone...
Natasha: aaww, i would have liked to meet her once...
Sandeep looked at her, he sigh
Sandeep: i have to go!! Bye!!
He said as he left quickly
Natasha said an hesitant slow bye as he left
She wawed her hand hesitantly to him...
And then looked down toughtfull
She never felt so ackward or strange before...
**********************************************
Next monday
Samir waw feeling really strange in college
Everyone was giving strange look to him and he felt as peaple were gossiping about him
Shifali came and they both greeted each other
Still everyone was looking at them with strange look
Both felt very ackward
This during the whole day
Samir was fed up so he yelled on a guy
Samir: what' s your problem huh? Stop it!!
Guy: everyone know about you both, so stop acting weirdly
Samir: what about me and Shifali?? Are you out of your mind??
Guy: no you surely are!!
He showed Samir some snaps of them on that shop bed
But from these pics, everyone could missunderstand them
The guy left
Samir: shit yaar!! But who played this dirty game??
Shifali: Samir i swear i will kill that person!! But who would it be? Who would want revenge on you, and who knew we were in that shop? God!!
Samir: off course!! Oh god this girl i will kill her
He said a he left
Shifali had no idea but followed him
Samir held Natasha's arms tightly
Natasha: ouch! what are you doing again!!
Samir: Tashu what was this stupid game?
Natasha: what game?
Samir: dont act smart!! About Shifali and me!!
Natasha: oohh!! Well that was revenge!!
she ran away giggling
But Samir catched her
Samir: now you'll have to pay me and my friends a lunch!!
Natasha pouted in frustration
Samir pinched her nose as she looked cute
Natasha: go to hell!!
She said cutely, little angry at him as she left
He giggled behind
Shifali: how did she??
Samir: only she can know!!
Sahil bring Natasha by holding her
Sahil: so you had done all this!! This is not a joke Natasha!! Get it straight! You have to stop your childishness!! Now ask sorry to them!!
He said yelling at her
Natasha: sorry...
Shifali: its okay!!
Samir: i forgive you, but lunch to karwana hoga
Shifali: i' ll pay the half, waisse bhi i owe you money...
Sahil: never!! She will do it herself
Shifali: why do you always yell at her Sahil
Sahil: because she is stupid and childish!!
Shifali: no she is cute
Natasha: stupid and childish is going!!
She said about to go
Natasha: oh and by the way, you both will make a great couple!!
She ran away saying that
Shifali: god!!
Samir: someone please always remind me to never cancel a plan without telling her
Sahil: sorry from her side Shifali
Shifali: its ok
She said feeling uneasy and a little angry
Sahil: i hope i am part of the "friends" she is gonna pay a meal?
Samir laughed and hitted him playfully
********************************************
Here is next part after long
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Edited by The_Imane - 10 years ago

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