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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: VishakaGal12

Hey Imane!!

What a wonderful update ..it is very well written!!.Thanks...i am glad u liked.So first Sandeep and Shifali were discussing about Natasha and he got surprised that it was her who sent her to his house yet he is very guilty to know that if Natasha is mad at him due to Mr.Khan's misbehavior..but soon when he tried to talk to Natasha , he got really surprised with her positive vibes and she didn't mind..it was very nice and realistic..She is not the type of being upset on such small things.And as far as Shifali and Samir's conversation is concerned ..I really loved their conversation..and loving the way he wanted her to invite at Naina's surprise birthday party and initially she was hesitating but she agreed..she listened to her heart and not mind which is very good..and also loving the conversation between Sahil and Naina..and they to share a lovely fun moments..it was extremely cute..and with his charm she is getting attracted to him.Sahil is really nice guy...so Naina is starting liking him.so it was overall a very well written part..love it a lot!!!..Thanks a lot for the PM..and congratulations of being a Goldie!!..😃😃.thanks alot.Do continue soon..and PM me!😃😃sure dear thanks for lovely comment

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Recap: Sandeep and Shifali share good time with others...and decide to ignore their parents and be like others students...

Secrets du coeur part 5:


We see the cite des pakats...
We zooms into Samir's house
Sahil is sitting with Yash and Naina(Yash between the both)
And Samir and Natasha with Sharmilla and on other side Romilla...
All are eating and chatting
Yash: Sharmilla jii main soch raha tha kyun naa aab hum bachon ki shaadi karwa de
All four's spoon drop and Samir split out the water he just started to drink
Romilla and Sharmilla laughed
Romilla: what are you the saying bhai saab...bache to abhi bohot the young hai...abhi saab parna chahte hai...
Yash: main to baas mazak kar raha tha...acha betta college me kaisa chal raha hai...
Samir: as always papa...baas yeh trimestre bohot mushkil hai aur main concentrate nahi kar pa raha houn..
Naina: thats not good Sam...you should concentrate on working...
Natasha(sarcastly): yeah Sam you should concentrate on work!!
He give her a whatever look
Sahil: and its you who are saying that
Natasha: off course...i am having greatest results than you
Romilla: yes Sahil my the Tashu is more the hardwalking than the you...
Samir: hardwalking???
Natasha: hardworking maman
Romilla: yaa yaa the same...
All laughed..
Natasha: i am done going now...
Samir: me too
Naina: main bhi chalti houn
Sahil: ok lets go...
Four of them leave
Naina went to her room while others three in Samir's
Sahil: lets play something
Samir: what do you wanna play...
Sahil: lets take a pillow turn the music and when it stop the one who is having the pillow will do a gage..
Natasha: okay...go to take Naina's MP3
Sahil: ok
Sahil come to Naina's room and come in without knocking...
He see Naina in towel her hair wet with few curls in her skin too was wet...
Naina: aahh!!! What the hell are you doing here
Sahil closed his eyes
Sahil: sorry sorry sorry...i didnt saw anything..i swear...
Naina: didnt you know that we knock before going in someone's room
Sahil: did i know ke yahan loog towel main phirte hai...
Naina: oh shut up
Sahil: you shut up...how can you take a bath in 10 mins???
Naina: why do you take an hour or what??
Sahil: oh shut up its you girls who takes all their lives to take only a bath...
Naina: shut up and now tell why the hell you come here
Sahil: Tashu and Sam are asking for your MP3...
Naina: why does they need it
Sahil: we are playing a game...it will be cool if you join us...
Naina: ok go i am just coming?
Sahil: ok...and yeah nice towel you look hot...
She open her mouth in shock..
He escaped while laughing...
Sahil come in Samir's room again without knocking and saw Samir on the ground and Natasha lying on him
Sahil: eerm..erm..
She look up and get up
Natasha: Sahil he again insulted me...
Samir get up too
Samir: its her...she is crazy...
Natasha: you are mad...monkey
Samir: you bandari!!
Natasha: shut up!!
Samir(showing his finger): you shut up!!!
She put her hand on her ear
Natasha: shut up!!..shut up!!..shut up!!..
Samir: urgh...Sahil!!
Sahil: i can say only one thing you are both marseillais...
Samir and Natasha(same time): hey shut up you stupid!!!
They both look at each other while Sahil giggled
Sahil: dono ko ek karna ho to dono ke khilaf jana partha hai...
Just when Naina come in
Naina: lets play
Natasha: yeah!!
So they started playing and music stop...pillow was in Samir's hand
Sahil: hey Samir so gage or truth...
Samir: truth..
Natasha: who is the girl you love the most...i know you have million girlfriend but who is the one..
Samir: the lady i love the most in this worl is my mom...
Naina: wow...great awser bro...
They start again and this time it was on Natasha
Samir: hey Tashu!! So gage or truth
Natasha: emm gage i am not scared like you
Samir: whatever...so you have to not touch your phone till tomorow...
Natasha: done...you said only phone i can take my tablet or computer...it was really easy..
Tehy start again this time on Naina
Natasha: Naaiinnaa!!! Your turn gage or truth??
Naina: gage! I am not scared too...
Natasha: then well you have to kiss..not Samir because he is your bro so the only other man here is Sahil!! Kiss Sahil!!
Sahil and Naina: wwwhhaatt???
Samir: kya what its the game and on lip...
Naina: Samir!!!
Sahil: yaar pagal ho kya?
Natasha: dar gaye...
Samir: if you dont do it you ll have 50euros penality...
Naina: ok...
She get close to Sahil and look deeply in his eyes for some seconds...so as he...and then she quickly give him a peck and runs back...
Samir: yeeaahhh!!!
Natasha: you are red like tomato...
She laughed and Samir too
Sahil: main tumhe nahi choroun gha yaar..aur tum Tashu ghar chalo phir batata houn
She get up and face him trying to be tall than him
Natasha: kya karloghe tum??
Sahil: stupid..duffer
Samir: dont insult her!!
Sahil: you stay out of this body guard
Natasha: hey he has a name ok!!
Naina: dont start fighting again now!!
Just when Romilla come in
Romilla: oohh!! You are the playing? Verry the good...but lets the go now...raat bohot ho chuki hai and its the verry the bold...
Naina: bold???
Natasha: cold maman cold...
Romilla: abhi tu mere nukas maat nikal chal..
Sahil and Natasha leave the room
Romilla: bye the have the good right!!
She leave
Samir(screaming): night anty!!! Good night!!!
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Next day
Shifali come towards Natasha who were chatting with her friends
Shifali: hi!
Natasha: hey! Shifali!
She kissed her cheek and Shifali did it back...
Natasha: how are you?
Shifali: i am fine...and you???
Natasha(surprised): yaa i am rocking...
Shifali: woh I wanted to talk to you Tashu..
Natasha again looked at her shcoked
Natasha: emm...yes tell
Shifali: Will you learn me to be like you?
Natasha: what???
Shifali: i dont want to be boloss anymore...
Natasha: okay fine just do as us...we are friends naa already...
Shifali: yes...
Natasha: first we should do something sith your look...dont mind you are beautifull...so why put so much make up...and...next time please wear something...dont come bare legs...its too cold how do you do...and the heals..please wear something else...and also the bag...you are in college not in lycee...
Shifali: oh my god am i that bad...
Natasha: no but you look like a teacher...
Shifali: okay tomorrow i ll do something...
Natasha: great!!
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In class
Natasha was with Samir and eating and chatting and Shifali was in front of them..
Suddenely the proffessor saw them talking
Prof: Samir give me your carnet now!!!
Samir: wwhhaatt??
Natasha: mam he didnt talked...
A friend: he didnt talked..
Shifali: yes mam he didnt talked...
All looked at her shocked even the prof
Prof: if you are saying so Shifali then ok...
She left
Samir looked at Shifali and she smiled
Shifali: what happened why are you looking at me like this...want my pic or what??
He was again shocked by the way she was talking..
He looked at Natasha
She smiled and winked
He purposely make his pen fall and Natasha too as they both bend down the table
Samir: isse kaun sa jadu kya tumne...you chudail
Natasha: faida kis ka hua?
Samir: mera
Natasha: to jo bhi jadu or whatever kiya ho maine...is it good or bad?
Samir: good verry good...
They both sit correctly then...
Shifali: yeh niche kya baat kar rahe the tum dono
Samir: tumse matlab...jahan dekho wahan apni taang arati rehti ho..
She looked at Natasha
Who sign her to give him back
Shifali: oye...tameez se baat kar..tumhare baap ke jaisse main dus naukar rakh sakti houn bada aya...
He got really surprised...
Samir: to apne uss palace me hi raho yahan kya kar rahi ho
Natasha: Sam shut up now...
He give her an angry look and return back to his work...
Other class
Sahil, Naina togheter and Sandeep in back...
Sahil and Naina were becoming free and friends, they were chatting, working...Naina was a quite hardworking girl...she was teaching Sahil and explaining to him...they were getting closer...which was noticed by Sandeep...
Next day it was Naina's birthday at the bowling all friend decided to meet in front of the piscine and go from the verger...Samir and Sahil come first and started waiting...soon Naina and Natasha join them
Samir: wow my dear looking beautifull today...with make up...
Natasha: kaun??
Samir: obiouvsly not you bandari!!
Natasha: hey dont start again now its her birthday yaar please...
As they got busy fighting
Sahil: Samir was right you look really nice...
Naina(blushing): thanks...
Sahil: i really mean it...and off course happy birthday...
He said as he give her a flower...
Naina: thanks thats really sweet...
There Samir was yelling at Natasha so as she when he Suddenely stopped
Natasha: aab kya hua apna bhoot dekh liya kya?
She looked where he was looking and saw Shifali and Sandeep coming
Samir was mezmerised...Shifali was not wearing something like skirt and not hundred kg of make up...
She was dresses simply in white and pink jogging cloths and a hight ponytail...she was wearing no make up...and first time he had seen her so simply...Samir didnt liked at all her previous look...as he thoughts there is so much banavat on her but today she was not even wearing a jewelry...and looking really cute and beautifull...
He just stared at her...today she doesnt has her andgry look she was smiling and while he was thinking all this, the four meet and chat...
Sahil: wow dude you look great...Psg cloths today...rock yaar...
Natasha: looking really nice Shifali...
Sahil: oh my god...its Shifali???
They giggled
Naina: stop teasing her Sahil...
Natasha: hey Samir tum kahan kho gaye...come here!!
Samir come out of his thoughts and join them...
Samir: hi Shifali you look awesome today...
Shifali: thanks but you look duffer as always...
They all laughed
Samir bend down in front of Natasha
Samir: yeh kya kiya yaar tum thori thi ke isse bhi...
Natasha: Samir baby grown up...tumhe kya laga she cant respond you...
Sahil: lets go ke yahan hi sonna hai..
Natasha: chill yaar...
They go through the verger...
It was a place with no much urban things...just gras, flowers lakes...
Samir: I love this place...
Natasha: yeah we have so much yaadein here haina Sam...
Naina: thats true...lets come her tomorow...
Shifali: its Sunday sorry i cant...
Samir: its ok lets go another day...
They arrive to a point where there is a small river and they have to cross it...
Shifali: how we will go from here...
Natasha: i dont wanna sonturn okay we usually cross this
Natasha moved back and Sandeep looked at her weirdly...
She runned and jumped landing on other side...
Natasha: simple!!
Samir: you dont need to be superman Tashu...look
He keep one of his leg on the other side and crossed easily
Naina: i cant do it i am gonna conturn
Sahil: shut up
He pick her up in his arm and crossed
Naina: put me dowwnn!!!
Sahil left her as she fall on her bum...
Naina: ouch!!
Sahil: you said put me down...
Sandeep was little scared
He moved towards the river...and wa hesitant
Natasha hold his arm and tired him towards her as he fall on ground on the other side
Natasha: here you go Sunday!!!
Sandeep(get up): my name is Sandeep...get it..
Natasha: oh shut up!!!come on Shifali!!...
Shifali: emm...okay
She put her feet on a rock but slipped...she closed her eyes but not feeling any pain she felt some hand arround her waist..for a min...she think it was Samir but then
Natasha: hey you are not dead dont worry...
She opened her eyes as she breath out of the fear
Samir: shut up Tashu...(to Shifali) are you okay??
She nods...
Natasha: huh dada if i wasnt there she would have felt in the river...
Shifali(surprised): you saved me?
Samir: yes its my Tashu who saved you
He said putting his arm arround her shoulders proudly...
She smiled but inside didnt knew why she didnt like it...
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LFC Bowling Club:
The six friends come and start reserving the game...
Samir(in her ear): Tashu...busy them..
Natasha: hey guys lets go and sit...
Samir: i ll join you later!
The five go and sit while Samir instructed the waiters what they have to do for the surprise...
Sahil: so lets make two team okay...Natasha team Vs Samir's
Natasha: why are you separating us yaar...you know we rock togheter...
Naina: thats why if we put you togheter the second team is sure to loose...
Sahil: she is absolutely right...
Natasha: yeah so..er..Shifali and Sahil with me and Sandy and Naina with Sam...
Sandeep: my name is Sandeep
Natasha: whatever...So done
All: done
Samir: here i am lets start...
They all start playing..Natasha and Samir were having highest scores followed by Sahil as well...Sandeep and Shifali were not bad...and Naina was used so had also and high score...a while later Samir ordered some cold drinks..
Waiters come and serve them...
Natasha: here is your juice Sandy!! Your soda Shifali...your milkshake Naina..and for us its a Diabolo menthe...
Samir: but there is only two...
Sahil: oh no! These stupids waiters...
Samir: no i think i forgot...
Sahil: not a problem i ll order another one...
Natasha: no leave...you sit...Sam and me will share...
She take another pipe and put in the glass..
Sahil: ok so cheers...
All: cheers!!!
All start drinking but Samir and Natasha were about to take the same pipe so result they kissed each other with lips accidentaly...
Waiter: what a cute couple...
All others four look surprised at the position of both
Natasha(move back): what the hell Samir!!!
Samir: tum bhi naa Tashu arent you seeing i am taking the blue pipe take the pink naa...and you apne kaam se kaam rakh we are not a couple ok
Waiter: ok...
He left
Sahil and Naina were hell laughing with what happened...it end up making Samir and Natasha laugh too...Sandeep also giggled but Shifali didnt knew why she was not feeling nice seeing them so close she brushed her feelings and give a smile...
Natasha: Naina i need to go to the bathroom...please come with me...
Naina: are you joking me...you need someone for going there...
Natasha dragged her
Naina: yeah! Come now...
Samir and Sahil looked at them and the second they were out of sight they return
Samir: waiters!!!
Some waiters start to come
Shifali: oh so surprise time...
Sahil: yes get up hurry help us...
All four along with waiters decorated quickly the area...with ballons and all looking like a birthday table...and a waiter come with a yummy cake in hand and put it on the table...along with others sweets and all...
Samir: come here now...
They all four stand there..adjacent to each other
Soon Natasha come running and stood behind Samir...as Naina come lot of confettis fell on her and all start singing
All: happy birthday to you..happy birthday to you...happy birthday to you dear Naina...happy birthday to you...
Naina was plaisently surprised...she knew how nice was her brother and knew it was his idea...Samir had always made all her birthday awesome...
She come smiling towards him and hugged him
Naina: thanks Samir!!!
Samir: your most welcome sis...
He said smiling to her
Naina then hugged Natasha...
Naina: you!!! I know why he choosed you for making me busy!!!
Natasha giggled so as all...
Natasha: i am Tashu!!! Anyways happy birthday dear..
Naina: thanks...
Sahil: happy birthday!
Naina: thanks alot!
Shifali and Sandeep also greeted her...
Natasha: lets eat the cqke now...look yummy...
All ate the cake,took pictures, and enjoyed themself...
Sandeep and Shifali got more friendly with them..and had a great time...Naina was verry happy...she was a really nice and simple person...and she was aware of the fact that she has the chance to have a wonderfull family and such nice friends...Shifali and Sandeep also give her a gift which other didnt...for them they had the best gift of the word...nice friends...and beloved family...they didnt needed more...
Later in evening...
Sandeep dropped Shifali home...
As Samina oppened the door...
Sandeep: hi anty...hum wo extra class ke liye gaye the to socha isse drop karloun...
Samina: thanks...but you can leave now...
Shifali give him a you know look and went in while he returned back
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It was quite dark night...All olders have also wished Naina and celebrated again at home...
Naina didnt wanted big birthday bash she was quite reserved...
So the four friends were outside ever by that night and cold..admiring the beautifull wiew they had from their cite...
Samir: did you liked the party Naina?
Naina: i loved it thanks a lot Sam...
Samir smiled to his sister as he loved his sister really much...
Natasha: oye! We helped you also!!
Sahil: thats true!!
Naina
Naina: okay guys i am sleepy...i ll go..bye!!!
Natasha: bye dear!!
Sahil: sweet dreams!!
Naina smiled while Samir and Natasha make a face
Natasha: lets go Sahil it will be really late..
Samir who was left behind screamed "thanks its verry nice"
All three turned to look at the poor boy who was alone and laughed
Samir joined them and hugged Natasha and Sahil then all part way to their respective house...

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monikaseth thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
thank you so much-awesome UPDATE
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Promo:
Samir take out a red rose
Samir: I love you Tashu...you had always been my best friend...the one who knows me the most...I love you so much...i didnt realised when this relationship become a need for me...please will you marry me???
Natasha smiled.
Natasha: yes i will...
they both hugged and Naina and Sahil clapped and smiled...


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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
hi
the up is good
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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waao just an amazing part zara...n waiting for da next exciting part😃😃😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Imane..
I really loved today's part..it is really sweet..hehehe..🤣 ..Sahil enters Naina's room to take MP3 from her room ..but he got to see her in the other attire..such a badmaash!!🤣..bechari Naina..could really imagine her situation!!!..And Shifali took tips from Natasha how to dress like her ..and with the new look , Samir gotten mesmerized by her beauty..O hoo..Samir ki to Nikaal paddi..lage raho..😳😳 ..and as per their plan..they have successfully surprised Naina and she was very thrilled..it was very sweet of them..it was also really nice to see Sandeep and Shifali got along with them as they are such an amazing friends..Romilla aunty ki english..😆😆 ..cute and sweet..but somebody should give a sweetener to Samina..uff..itni bitterness aachi nahin hai dear...thoda meetha khaa lijiye..aapke sehet ke liye aacha hoga!!..Thank you so much for the PM dear..please do continue soon!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: monikaseth

thank you so much-awesome UPDATE

ur most welcome and thanks to you for the comment😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi

the up is good
plz cont soon and pm me

thanks for the comment😊

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