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Posted: 10 years ago
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Inaugurating the thread with the following poetry 😳



Our Top Seven

Kuch tu Gadbad hai, when wrath and credence emulsifies

The right hand rule, the lifting of eyebrow exemplifies

A two-fisted protagonist who for perpetuity fortifies

Taking up cudgels for department, deciphers that mystifies

Pyar tu hum ne bhi kiya hai, innocence and wits knitter

Known for his erudition and ample of grey matter

Infiltrates into mind of delinquents, he is the smarter

Can summon up tough tactics, why called forgetter?

Moun se Piano bajega, when severity mixes with charity

When valour steals a march on frailty

When power becomes Daya's immunity

Mushy with friends and for criminals, asperity

Freddy jab bolta hai tab sab chakra jatey hain, Uproarious yet honest

Has soft spot for his seniors, with solicitude he is blest

For bolstering up his officers in OTT's he is the chariest

It makes no odds how he is baptized, for us he is brainiest

CID se jhoot bolna makhan ki tarah hai, great deal of potential

Where veterans are stanchion of CID, Sachin is equally essential

The deference is becoming more and more exponential

One is enamored of him easily and contrives dreamy palatial

Boss! Raising aloft his voice in forensic lab

A mere look at corpse and cause of death is blab

Can suss out anything, the motive, the time the stab

Well thought of within his department, his nous is fab

Cid officers khatroon se bhaagte nhe, the beauty with brains

The wizard at benevolence, staunchness she contains

Often inculpated for no reason, but all relations she enchains

Flashing winning smile on her face despite all the pains

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Absolutely brilliant! Every single verse is worth appreciation.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely Poem Saman 👏👏

i personally like Abhijeet sir's stanza the most😳


Pyar tu hum ne bhi kiya hai, innocence and wits knitter

Known for his erudition and ample of grey matter

Infiltrates into mind of delinquents, he is the smarter

Can summon up tough tactics, why called forgetter?

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely poem...i love the way u used hindi, followed by english... ⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very very nice poem Saman...😛👏👏

You have amazing skills in poem writing..⭐️⭐️

I liked all the phrases most used by our dear cops...😛

But did'nt understand Sachin's part..😊
In which epi,did he say this...?

CID se jhoot bolna makhan ki tarah hai, great deal of potential

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: _YuviFanatic_

Absolutely brilliant! Every single verse is worth appreciation.


Thanks Shruti 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: anjali_mahajan

Lovely Poem Saman 👏👏

i personally like Abhijeet sir's stanza the most😳


Pyar tu hum ne bhi kiya hai, innocence and wits knitter

Known for his erudition and ample of grey matter

Infiltrates into mind of delinquents, he is the smarter

Can summon up tough tactics, why called forgetter?


Thank you Anjali. That means a lot to me 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for appreciating dear 😳
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Originally posted by: debasree04

Lovely poem...i love the way u used hindi, followed by english... ⭐️


Thanks deba 🤗 I am much obliged 😳

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