Broken Promises ~ Collab Tanya N Sumaiya (Chap 16 n 17 Updtd 18th Apr) - Page 23

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Posted: 10 years ago
wonderful update gulam did not leave his planning evil:( do continue soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg I hate gulam anyways update soon pls Tanya where is she
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome chapter Sumi...
Loved the zaya blush blush moments...
And GHULAM has plans of his own...
Waiting to see what he does...
Continue soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing chapter
vry romantic...
Bt gulam nw wats his plan ...
Waiting 4 d next part
cont soon tanya :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update..
Loved it..
Urgg..ghulam..
Cont soon tanu..
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Posted: 10 years ago
I am sorry for late reply. Tooo cute Sumi. This stupid Ghulam. Hmm let me think abt wht I shud put next. Thank u for pm :) I will update in a day or two. So I am sorry if tht is late. Thank u :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Dhoti kurte se mujhe hamare twitter pain chat yaad agayi if u remember 😆 😆 😆

Anyways great chp !
Arghh Gulam 😡
I hate him!

Thnx for PM
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sumi n Tanu🤗
Finally catch-up with all the parts😆
Story is going amazing😃
Zaya r married now
Urghh Ghulam🤬
Plz continue asap😳
Tnx 4 pm😃
Love Aman❤️

P.S. Sorry 4 being late😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hello all. It's me, Tani. I am back! But this one is a small one. Filled with tragedy kinds. So those who don't want to read the cries and whatever, please wait for the next chapter to be uploaded, which will be by Sumaiya. And she's really good, obviously. So here you go. Sorry for the HUGE delay. :)
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Haider Residence
Aaliya's POV

"Bas chaar din ki chandini hai begum. Yeh kya jaane, ki mei kya kr skta hu. Haan, mujhe pta tha ki Zeeshan ka ek ladki ke saath tha. Name was Sana. Bt I knew that whatever Zeeshan was, he was better than Zain. Woh toh ek number ka-" Abbu was cut off by Ammi's words as she noticed us standing at the entrance.

"Arre Aaliya." She whispered. Abbu stopped and looked up. "Tu yaha?"

"Abbu aapne-" I broke off. I could say anything. Zain laid a assuring arm around my waist as I held his shoulder. I cried into his shoulder. Ammi came by my side to support me but I just pulled back not allowing her to even touch me. "Bas Ammi! Band kre apna drama. Yeh sab nahi shobha deta aapko. Bas hgya!"

"Beta mei toh-" I cut her off.

"Zain, chalo." Holding Zain's hand I walked out of Abbu's house. I had left nothing there. Nothing. My family was finished. I realized, my love never was accepted by Abbu. I never came back. And never will.



5 Months Later
Zain's POV

It has been 5 months! 5 whole months since Aaliya hasn't talked to her Abbu. I miss the smile on her face which came only when she met her Ammi after a long tiring day at college. I miss her joyful voice while she called 'Abbu!'. Most of all I miss the smiling Aaliya. She changed. But she did her best to make me feel she didn't change at all. But I also loved her, how could I not see her sadness?

"ZAIIINNN." I heard a loud scream from the bathroom. I ran off to to the bathroom. What happened to her?

"Kya hua?" I asked worried.

"Dekho kya hua." She handed me a strip. Pregnant! Oh my god. SHE IS PREGNANT. She is gnna be a mother. And me, a father. I thanked Allah a thousand times and that would be less for the gift he has given me.

"Oh my god!" I squealed as I picked her up and twirled her around. "I luv you. I luv you. I luv you so so much!"

"Pls keep me down Zain. Mujhe chakkar aa rhe hai." She said laughing. I immediately put her down and apologized. Then hugged her properly. I was so happy.

"We should inform your parents." I said. She frowned.

"Zain I think-" I cut her off.

"No Aaliya. You tell them or I will. They deserve to know.that they are going to be grandparents! Pls Aaliya. Forget what happened. We are together now, aren't we? So forgive and forget." She hugged me tightly.

"I can't afford to lose you again." She said on the verge of crying.

"Please Aaliya, I just wore that shirt. Plus I have no mood in changing again. Meri shirt mat kharab krna. Ab you rest I am going to college. No, even I am not." I said.

"No. You will go. We both will go." She said.

"But Aaliya-" She cut me off.

"No Zain. Hum jayenge!" She said as she pushed me out saying she had to change. Afterall, she's a part of the Haider family. Of course, she had to be ziddi! Meri ziddi pyaari Aaliya! What would I do without you?


"Zainnn. Chalo. We'll be late." She screamed. "I am driving."

"No." I said.

"Zain pls." She looked at me with puppy eyes.

"Okay." She kissed my cheek. My frown turned into a smile. "Love you."

"I love you too." I pecked her lips lightly as we drove to college.




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Ab next by Sumaiya.
Yayy.. This one wasn't good na?

Ok bye.
I am sure next will be good.

-Tani.
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was quite small indeed
But I loved it

They are pregnant !

Wow

I just hope that aliya s parents don't create more trouble. ...

Continue soon

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