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Posted: 10 years ago

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hey guys...I have decided ki main ye story continue tabhi karungi when i get atleast 25 likes and comments. to kanjusi mat karna warna mujhe ye story vory likhna chodna padegaa...and i will again become a silent reader😆

CHAPTER 4 PART I

recap:-

valentines day!!!!

that night both Jalal and Jodha couldn't sleep...

the morning sun arose and all had settled before prof.Mathur

"students, aaj ham treasure hunt khelenge...It will consist of 3 teams as there are only you 12 children under me...

the teams are..(Jodha,Jalal,Moti,Maan), (Sukanya,Surya,Salima,Abdul), (Ruqaiya,Adham,Shivani,Mirza)

to aap logon ko pehle alag alag savaal milenge jiske javaab ke paas aapka dusra savaal hoga.aakhri savaal sabka same hoga aur jisne bhi pehle ye round complete kiya wohi kal marathon me hissa le paayega.and out of 12 only 10 can go...there will be 4 questions and here is you 1st...

Jodha's team:-look straight at me and you will see

something quite familiar to thee

but at an angle you will see

something right beside thee

but up close there will be

the next clue written on me.

Moti"yaar ye kaisa riddle hai"

Jodha"sochne to de..."

"isse acha to main aaine ke saamne jaakar make up kar leti"said moti

"moti..tu genius hai..yahi toh right answer hai aaina..mirror of the main room.."

2nd riddle:-Around this place

we'll gather for vittles and drinks

or bet on some games

or cards if you think...

"arre drinks yaani bar"said Maan

"paagal hai kya??drinks yaani kitchen"replied Jalal

"haan aur cards yaani table...kitchen table"said Jodha

3rd riddle:-we ship out soon

don't be late

and you marching order will come

to the box by the gate

"box by the gate...box by the gate...Mailbox"both maan and moti said...

last riddle"my words number quite many

like ski,skit and skinny

my title you will discover

is explained under my cover...

"words yaani dictionary..."

and the group came 1st

Ruqaiya and Aadham were eliminated as they could not guess any...

part 2 will be updated at midnight...as I have to go out

Please hit likes and comment if you want me to continue😛

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awsm story dear...pls pm me when u update nxt...pls pls pls

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CHAPTER 3 PART II

Next was the marathon...

It was not exactly a marathon but kind of relay race...

There were two teams and five sports.. Swimming, Cycling, Chess, Bike race and mount climbing...

Each member of the team had to do one sport..

The teams were(Jodha, Jalal, Sukanya, Shivani and Abdul), (Surya, Mirza, Salima, Maan, Moti) out of these 10 only 4 had to go to the next round...Jodha and Salima chose chess, Jalal and Surya chose Mount climbing, Sukanya and Moti chose swimming, Shivani and Surya chose cycling while Abdul and Mirza chose Bike race.

It started with swimming...and Sukanya wins the race

then cycling...and Surya won the race

then chess...and Jodha won it

then Bike race Mirza won the race

Then mount climbing and Jalal wins it(as usual😛)

The students who were going to the next round were Jodha, Jalal, Surya and Sukanya.

The next competition was dance...😃

Jalal and Jodha were partners while Surya and Sukanya.And the 2 who win will get the best Partners award...

It started with Jodha and Jalal

They danced on Meherbaan Hua

Dil ki maange

Thodi thi kam

Har dua bhi

Thodi maddham

(Jodha enters and slowly lifts her face)

Tune kaandhe pe sir jhukaya jab

Jaise dargah pe baandhe dhaage tab

Bina maange hi mil gaya hai sab

meherbaan hua hua

meherbaan huaaa

Meherbaan hua rab

meherbaan huaaa

meherbaan hua rab

(Jalal enters and seeing him Jodha blushes and tries to run away but he holds her hand and she hugs him.)

Dua Rang Rangiya
Yun Malang Lal Lal Rang
Rooh Ki Patang
Bandhi Teri Sang
Tabhi To Laga
Meherbaan Hua Rab
Oh Din Yeh Sehere Sa Saja
Meherbaan Hua Rab

(Jalal puts red colour on jodha's face and Jodha again tries to run away but her dress's string gets attached to Jalal's watch and she removes it.Jalal slowly glides his hand near her waist and jodha put her hand on his shoulder)

Haathon Ko Tere Apne
Haathon Mein Le Leti Hoon
Ke Taqderein
Apni Saari Padh Loon

Aankhon Mein Tere Chupte
Armaan Main Dhoondta Hoon
Bas Tu Soche
Aur Poore Main Kar Doon
(Jodha takes Jalal's hand and kisses it.Jalal makes her spin and slightly she falls down, Jalal's hand on her back.)

Abhi Abhi To Hum Adhoore The
Poore Ho Gaye Tere Roobaru

Ooo Yeh Bhi Deekhe Na
Kahaan Main Khatam
Kahaan Tu Shuru

Aankhein Teri
Aankhein Teri

Girti Hain Jab
Girti Hain Jab
Ab Toh Neendein
Aati Hai Tab

(Jalal turns Jodha and hugs her from the back and kisses her cheeks😳. She blushes.

Humko Lagta Hai
Kuch Dino Se Ab
Tu Ibaadat Hai
Tu Hi Hai Mazhab

Bewajah Kaise
Kyu Kahaan Aur Kab

Meherbaan Hua Hua
Meherbaan Hua Hua
Meherbaan Huaa
Meherbaan Hua Rab

Meherbaan Huaa
Meherbaan Hua Rab

(Jodha turns and makes a few steps and complete their dance.)

Part 3 to be updated tomorrow morning😊

And sorry no pms were given they will be after part 3.

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Nice updates, pls pm all ur buddies,

otherwise how we will know u updated dear (its a request 😊)

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Prachi

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Ok ok
chapter 4 part iii is ready will update
in next three hours 😉

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Superbb loved ur chappy please update soon

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CHAPTER 4 PART III Sukanya and surya also complete their dance and as usual Jodha and Jalal win...

Jodha goes back to her room and doesn't comes out till night. Jalal gets worried and goes to her room only to see her angry😡.

"kya hua??tum itne gusse mein kyun ho??"

"Jalal ek baat batao aaj kya hai??"

"Saturday, nahin acha gussa mat ho 14th feb ohh god yaani valentines day..to tum isiliye gussa ho..

"aur nahi to kya hamari pehli valentines day tum bhool kaise gaye?hun"

"are yaar sorry...acha vaise apne aankhe band karo"

"kyun??mujhe nahi karna"

"are karo na"

"thik hai"jodha closes her eyes

Jalal makes her wear a diamond necklace.

Jodha opens her eyes"to tumhe yaad tha😲"

"aur nahi to kya??lekin mera gift?"

"tumhe bhi apni aankhen band karni padegi"

"thik hai"

jodha gives a cute peck on Jalal's cheek😲

Jalal is shocked but before he can say Jodha runs away

They spend the night together...At midnight Jodha wakes up and sees Jalal not there...she rushes to find him and by mistake goes into the jungle...she is about to come back but spots Someone fighting with a werewolf. Out of curiousity she tries to see who it is but it was too dark. as fate had it the moonlight straight fell on that man's face and Jodha was as if she had seen a vampire. yes she had seen long nails sharp and long teeth and the biggest shock that it was Jalal and he was drinking blood..Jodha ran away but before she could disappear Jalal spotted her and cot the biggest shock of his life...he ran behind her and went to her room...for the first time Jodha Singh was feeling scared..."paas mat aana varna maar dungi...and she picked up a knife near her kaun ho tum sachaai jaanna hai mujhe tell me."

"thik hai batata hun but pehle thoda calm down...main ek...va...va...vam...vampire hun"😭

Hey guys...why kanjusi next update I will give but only after 20 likes and 20 comments till that thoda rest to pages bharte jaaiye and a little more whitemail..😛 5th chapter will only be posted on page no 10 to pages bharte jaaiye...remember this is only page no 5😭